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Old 2007-11-09, 16:01   Link #15401
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KARA CLEARED IN 1 NIGHT! We finally have it on farm!
Grats!!
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Old 2007-11-09, 18:54   Link #15402
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I have the rough draft, though. If you'd like, I can send it.
Well, Keroko's presence isn't really necessary
Beside, I'm almost done with that scene

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Yume-chan... <faints>


Just a while I got in the mood of drawing Koji and Maren's 'moment'
Very cute and safe too, so no worries...but they won't be seen until 'the time' comes
*hides pictures in a vault*

All that's left is write 'the scene'...safe version of course


And...even though I shouldn't think about this yet...I already got a name ready for their daughter.
Hint: It's the same name a girl in Clannad has.

*runs*
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Old 2007-11-09, 19:52   Link #15403
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Well, Keroko's presence isn't really necessary
Beside, I'm almost done with that scene




Just a while I got in the mood of drawing Koji and Maren's 'moment'
Very cute and safe too, so no worries...but they won't be seen until 'the time' comes
*hides pictures in a vault*

All that's left is write 'the scene'...safe version of course


And...even though I shouldn't think about this yet...I already got a name ready for their daughter.
Hint: It's the same name a girl in Clannad has.

*runs*
Should I bring my hazard suit? Y'know, blood loss and all that.
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Old 2007-11-09, 20:11   Link #15404
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Well, Keroko's presence isn't really necessary
Beside, I'm almost done with that scene
If its not needed, then don't force it. Its not my style to force my OCs on other people.

If you still need the draft for one reason or the other, just give me a sign.
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Old 2007-11-09, 20:35   Link #15405
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*Breaking the 4th wall here*

Jeno: "It's been several weeks since she was introduced, and after all those images, nobody tried anything funny "
Wouldn't that be months? The last four words are suspect.

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Am I good? Or Am I great ?


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And you think he's gonna regret ?
He might not live to do so.

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Jeno: "Not now."

*Scratch scratch*
Katrina:"Not this time."

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Jeno: "...Ano na..."
Told ya.

You did drop hints along the way so can't blame me.

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Haha!

You mean you didn't notice ?

Mah, you're still young I guess...
PF might not have read Satashi's works yet so who knows. *shrugs*

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...I'm not kidding, you have my permission.
And arrangements are done.



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Because it IS epic. Well, on a subdued level. But considering the depth you're going at this level, it's amazing.

And anti-Satashi as in character interaction that is more in tone to the military-ish tone of things that delivers with a relative subdued level, as opposed to the more *FLAILS* Satashi style of chirpy bunnies.


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TEXT TAIMU! No bluecheese though.

It's closer to a prototype prologue for DestinyS.

Spoiler:
Jail shows up in the most unexpected places and form.


Not exactly related but 4koma Jail's wish to have so many copies of him probably because he consider his younger self to be great shoutas.

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RRRRRRAAAAAAAWWWWWWWRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!
Watch and learn people.

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Keroko would be most affected I guess.

Would be interesting to look inside Nanoha's head... To see if she's really that much of a 'blur-cock' when it comes to romance, or that she's faking it... >.>
Probably. Sharp in battle and blunt in life.

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Just simply put, his CCs, feels close enough like the real thing
Quoted For Great Truth.


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Anything like what, exactly?

Only you know what the image is


*runs from Jeno*


Though I can't find the image I wanted.

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Good.

*points to the Aces*

Now hold off that.
Mage versus Mecha. Aces versus Exia no less.

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*scratches head* right, so anyway, yes Keroko has people she likes, but even I'm not sure how and what its going to turn into *cough*Yuuno*cough*
Just a humble suggestion but was Yuuno ever by Keroko's side for long periods of time? Childhood, teens maybe work? Or simply take it from the point of 'the pillar of support after a traumatizing incident'.

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Well, Keroko's presence isn't really necessary
Beside, I'm almost done with that scene




Just a while I got in the mood of drawing Koji and Maren's 'moment'
Very cute and safe too, so no worries...but they won't be seen until 'the time' comes
*hides pictures in a vault*

All that's left is write 'the scene'...safe version of course


And...even though I shouldn't think about this yet...I already got a name ready for their daughter.
Hint: It's the same name a girl in Clannad has.

*runs*
Fast.
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Old 2007-11-09, 21:29   Link #15406
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Finished part 3, unfortunately no Altea yet

Spoiler for Knight's Ordeal - Part 3:
ZOMG!!! NAIIISU

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Before going off to my exam... Please let everyone be reminded that the OC thread is not anti-NXF. -_-

I will not stand for this kind of prejudice as it only seems to reciprocate what the FF thread seems to be doing to nonNXF-ers. Remember the member Caro uses that pairing and there's nothing stopping her unless it goes against a timeline rule it's in. And that would apply for anyone else. If an OC-maker wants NXF in their own timeline in the OC Thread, then fine.

I'd appreciate it if this anti-NXF War remains just a member campaign instead of a Thread campaign.

[OOC]I HAVE SPOKEN!!![/OOC]


And before anyone starts blasting me, I support Yuunoha.

*runs at lightspeed*
QFPW

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Well...now to work on part 4
How about Lust for the next trial
*runs*
Hmm, that's good or maybe something like Vengeance or something for the one after Lust, bad qualities that Knights have to surpass would be good too

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Old 2007-11-09, 22:01   Link #15407
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Anything like what, exactly?

Only you know what the image is


*runs from Jeno*
I know the first one... But the second one...

Nevermind, the point is, NOBODY could/would touch/take her I'm sure of it.

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Huh... now what got you to that conclusion?
It's just a feeling... But it's disturbing to catch myself thinking-

"Oh wait, this one's a guy..."

As Shania Twain says it...

"...Feel like a woman!"


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*scratches head* right, so anyway, yes Keroko has people she likes, but even I'm not sure how and what its going to turn into *cough*Yuuno*cough*
Nah, all that matters is the she does have one


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<Throws up hands> Believe what you like. I know myself.
There is you, how you see yourself, and how others see you

Which is the real you I wonder...


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MEN, WE HAVE FOUND HIS WEAKNESS!!!
It's not really a weakness... Just a distraction...


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Indeed you have.
Not me, them.


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Arcas: Lowe, are you fantasizing about MY LITTLE SISTER?!
My disciple has done well...

Jeno: "But I still think Keroko looks better as Sayane... >.>"


The H-scenes look great as well.

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Thank you for that absolutely WONDERFUL image - excuse me while I go stand under a waterfall for the next hour...
Aircraft engine... They're a man's romance


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Maybe everybody's really THAT scared of you...










...NOT!
IT's the only reason I could think of


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Wouldn't that be months? The last four words are suspect.
I wanted to put months, but I'm not sure if it's really that long

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He might not live to do so.
Idiots don't die easily.

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Katrina:"Not this time."
*Tickle her chin*


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Told ya.

You did drop hints along the way so can't blame me.
Jeno: "She the one who keeps coming to my room -_- And it's not all the times... >.>"

Spica: "Yes *blush* but sometimes, he a- mmph!!"

*Covers her mouth and drags away*


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PF might not have read Satashi's works yet so who knows. *shrugs*
I doubt it.


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And arrangements are done.
Hit me.


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Watch and learn people.
Don't even think about it


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Probably. Sharp in battle and blunt in life.
Who knows


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Quoted For Great Truth.
Well, it's not that hard anyway to see...

...IF you have a clear mind

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Just a humble suggestion but was Yuuno ever by Keroko's side for long periods of time? Childhood, teens maybe work? Or simply take it from the point of 'the pillar of support after a traumatizing incident'.
*Shrugged*

He saved her life.

fangirl for the win

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Fast.
Too fast for his own good
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Old 2007-11-09, 22:32   Link #15408
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So... do we get naughty presents for being good, or being naughty?
Being good still merits you naughty presents, that's Chaos's style.

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As we learn in Aerospace engineering...


-=[Suck-> Squeeze -> Bang -> Blow]=-
I wonder exactly what people think if the first line of the sentence isn't there.

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Y-Yeah
I guess Koji is like Hyaweh, but without the pervert/slacker parts
Plus, the VA is the same

Finished drawing Altea v2, and this one is soooo her
The original looked too serious to be a tsundere
Also, the new one reminds me of Vita

Oh, and I'm currently writing the Temptation/Lust trial part
Here's an example of what's it about...
Spoiler for OMG:

Would be fun to add Keroko-chan, but...I don't even know what happened to her during the attack to the Cradle Did I miss that chapter?
Besides, there's already seven girls in that room
*runs*


Temptation and Lust indeed!

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Yup, that's the correct word
Ah, yes, thanks!

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As long as you keep rolling them out, it'll be fine
It might meet a huge stumbling block somewhere ...

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Wrong Mai
WHAT?! There's another MAI?!

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[Dota] HOLY SHIT [/Dota]



*plugs nostrils*


Exactly what I thought when I saw that image.

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Must be the image subconsciously making it's way into your writing since I'll assume you have watched NGE.
NGE? Don't think I've ever watched it.

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Converting a criminal mage to her side certainly is a feat, though considering it's Leona, that's no surprise. I'm almost certain her charisma worked its magic on Chrono as well.
For Xeno, it might have been her charisma.

*cough* For Chrono, it's a special case. *cough*

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Don't blow up on us then.
Dangerous level of Bluecheesium is dangerous, blowing up might just be around the corner.

Though, if it gives me eternal youth like Armstrong-san, I don't really mind ...

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I smell strong opposition.
Those are the other creatures that will attack soon, though Executioners and Minions won't hold up to Aurion's devastating powers.

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I doubt we can get rid of him that easily. Besides, he's been spreading his seeds far and wide in this place.
Really? We need weed-control!

*takes out weed-spray*

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The High Council was not in direct command of the Bureau at the time they were killed. They had already stepped aside around MC0000. In the current era, they seemed more like influential advisors with their own agenda. Other than them, we don't even know if TSAB-Administered Worlds have a civilian government (and in what form) or does the Bureau run them directly like a benevolent military junta. On the bright side, I don't think your fic needs official interaction on that level. Anything your characters need can be referred to as "Bureau resources" one way or another.
Phew, luckily, I don't need to use another round of fabrication magic. It's dangerous and exhausting.

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If by Navy HQ you mean where the TSAB Navy docks its' ships, yes. That's the main HQ of the entire Bureau.
Ah, that clarifies a lot. So, the main HQ is the Navy HQ as well. Will do the editing later.

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Yup, you used the right words. You're welcome. Though I wouldn't call myself a prolific writer just yet.
Thanks!

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I consider her an 'Ace' already! She'd very well be the latest addition to his 'nieces.' Though Leona should be prepared for a lot of head-patting.
Oh, Leona wouldn't mind being pampered once in a while. She misses it a lot.

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And also, maybe I'll do a side-story piece in Aurion's perspective in GuardianS. It'll be a Aurion/Hayate reunion scenario after four years of not meeting (including a "I'm glad we can finally work together in the same unit, Oji-chan." line). As well as maybe some inner thoughts about Leona's case.
Classic!

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Because you and your work is inspirational?
I didn't really think it'd be going in that direction when I wrote it.

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Don't forget the 'playboy' attitude.
Noted.

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I'll work on them, then. For that final fight, provided the enemy isn't as durable as Reinforce 1, Aurion should be able to fight normally. If the enemy would be incredibly tough but not very speedy, then using H.A.V.A. would work.

But as for now, I'm planning on him revealing H.A.V.A. during an emergency situation with hordes of enemies. If you want, you can have him reveal it earlier and have some people help him test it out in the training grounds. Agito shouldn't know yet that Aurion can fight at Ace-level, right? Though it might be just clutter your schedule...
Oh, the enemy would be a powerful mage that's bulky at the same time, preferring to launch attacks at his leisure without moving much. Though, his destructive power would almost be on par with Aurion. I might just be able to insert a side-battle story of him destroying battalions of Minions and Executioners, but that'll break H.A.V.A quickly.

And ... what the, using H.A.V.A on Agito?! Does not compute!

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No. I just made that crack line since the others were thinking that H.A.V.A.'s explosion would break Reishiki.
Thankfully, it doesn't, or else Aurion will be handicapped in the fight.

[QUOTE=Chaos2Frozen;1246301]Am I good? Or Am I great ?

I wonder why isn't there a negative choice.

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Haha!

You mean you didn't notice ?

Mah, you're still young I guess...
I really don't.

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No silly, it means that you'll be seeing less of me... No matter, I have made arrangments
Who's the accomplice?!

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No problem, go ahead.

...I'm not kidding, you have my permission.
There must be a catch somewhere for you to give it so freely ...

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You mean you didn't know about Jeno's rare skill?
Nope, until you showed it in the scans.

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Because it IS epic. Well, on a subdued level. But considering the depth you're going at this level, it's amazing.

And anti-Satashi as in character interaction that is more in tone to the military-ish tone of things that delivers with a relative subdued level, as opposed to the more *FLAILS* Satashi style of chirpy bunnies.
Bunnies are still dangerous, nonetheless.

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Wha-? Must've forgotten.
It's all right, I'll send you another one.

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TEXT TAIMU! No bluecheese though.

It's closer to a prototype prologue for DestinyS.

Spoiler:
I see the name of several cars characters that sound interesting.

And Jail, in a capsule?!

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Uh... You'll find that only Kha is completed; and the rest is...
Information can always be supplied later.

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Tessa is very very smart, considering that she will derive Albert Einstern's linear equation by her next birthday, and grow up to be the desiger and commander of the legendary ship Tuatha de Danaan...

Watch out for Leonard though...

Yes I drop the S on purpose, but other than that it is a nod to the maker of the Boxter, to keep with the naming method of Nanoha.


Einstein's linear equation at FOUR?!

Ah, yes, I see the point in the name.

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PF might not have read Satashi's works yet so who knows. *shrugs*
The highschool days? Read some, and some are quite hilarious.

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Just simply put, his CCs, feels close enough like the real thing
Wha-? CC?

I'm still learning.

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Old 2007-11-09, 22:40   Link #15409
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Anyway, Keroko's given the green light, so here's the final part of Chapter Four.

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha GuardianS

Chapter Four—Escutcheon

Spoiler for Scene VI:


Spoiler for Scene VII:


Spoiler for Scene VIII:


Hopefully, in an attempt to un-shaft Hayate, it hasn't led to her being more shafted.

Spoiler for Translations:


Kyral, I might need your help to verify those.

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Old 2007-11-09, 22:44   Link #15410
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No, not card games anyway, but I guess you call magic battles a duel.
*still trying to imagine YuGiOh magic style*

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*scratches head* right, so anyway, yes Keroko has people she likes, but even I'm not sure how and what its going to turn into *cough*Yuuno*cough*
Ooooooooh....

*nod*

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Speaking of OCs...the revised charecter concept for Franz Jaeger.

Spoiler for Charecter Concept:


I think that's pretty much it. Apologies on the pic, will try and find a better one...
Unlimited.... Paper Works?

X FREAKING DEE



I am the ink of my pen
Tired is my body, and high is my blood
I have processed over a thousand reports
Unknown to hunger
Nor known to fatigue
Have withstood pain to stamp many forms
Waiting for break time
Yet, those hands will never hold salary.
So as I sign
Unlimited Paper Works


I'm kinda intrigued on Naomi though, kinda like to see how she and Franz gets along

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Actually this looks like she's older, in her loli-stage.

It IS gonna be a little hard, but I'll take it nonetheless! Thanks!
No prob, would've wanted to use someone younger

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Arcas: Lowe, are you fantasizing about MY LITTLE SISTER?!
Like any other male would

*runs*


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Thank you for that absolutely WONDERFUL image - excuse me while I go stand under a waterfall for the next hour...
Chap doesn't know about Jet Propulsion Technology?

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Just a while I got in the mood of drawing Koji and Maren's 'moment'
Very cute and safe too, so no worries...but they won't be seen until 'the time' comes
*hides pictures in a vault*

All that's left is write 'the scene'...safe version of course


And...even though I shouldn't think about this yet...I already got a name ready for their daughter.
Hint: It's the same name a girl in Clannad has.

*runs*


HAYAI!!!



So... when can we see... it soon?

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I know the first one... But the second one...

Nevermind, the point is, NOBODY could/would touch/take her I'm sure of it.
The second one is the first... without the straps

I dunno about could, but I'm sure alot of people would want to

*runs*


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Aircraft engine... They're a man's romance
Ooooh yeah

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Jeno: "She the one who keeps coming to my room -_- And it's not all the times... >.>"

Spica: "Yes *blush* but sometimes, he a- mmph!!"

*Covers her mouth and drags away*
*strokes chin*

He... what?

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Old 2007-11-09, 22:52   Link #15411
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I was missing for a few days and nobody noticed?
*pat pat*


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I know the first one... But the second one...

Nevermind, the point is, NOBODY could/would touch/take her I'm sure of it.
Hmm. Lack of interest perhaps?

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It's just a feeling... But it's disturbing to catch myself thinking-

"Oh wait, this one's a guy..."

As Shania Twain says it...

"...Feel like a woman!"
Probably has to do with his avatar. Each time I see Keroko, I think that Keroko's female.

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There is you, how you see yourself, and how others see you

Which is the real you I wonder...
The self that perceives, the self that perceives self and the self that is perceived.

All part of yourself.

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My disciple has done well...

Jeno: "But I still think Keroko looks better as Sayane... >.>"


The H-scenes look great as well.
Jeno plays eroges?

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Idiots don't die easily.
Like cockroaches.

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*Tickle her chin*
Beware the silver..

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Jeno: "She the one who keeps coming to my room -_- And it's not all the times... >.>"

Spica: "Yes *blush* but sometimes, he a- mmph!!"

*Covers her mouth and drags away*


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Hit me.
I'll pass.

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Well, it's not that hard anyway to see...

...IF you have a clear mind
Paranoia, Doubt and Cynicism.

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*Shrugged*

He saved her life.

fangirl for the win
Yuuno's first if that ever happens.

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Too fast for his own good
Well it's a just name but FlameZ certainly has his plans thought-out.

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WHAT?! There's another MAI?!
Hikki's wife.

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NGE? Don't think I've ever watched it.
All the more that Gendou fits the image in your mind.

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For Xeno, it might have been her charisma.

*cough* For Chrono, it's a special case. *cough*
No less for the man himself.

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Dangerous level of Bluecheesium is dangerous, blowing up might just be around the corner.

Though, if it gives me eternal youth like Armstrong-san, I don't really mind ...
When did Bluecheesium grant eternal youth?

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Those are the other creatures that will attack soon, though Executioners and Minions won't hold up to Aurion's devastating powers.
They must have a whole bestiary of them then.

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Oh, Leona wouldn't mind being pampered once in a while. She misses it a lot.
Two years of isolation from any real human contact. She's strong.

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Oh, the enemy would be a powerful mage that's bulky at the same time, preferring to launch attacks at his leisure without moving much. Though, his destructive power would almost be on par with Aurion. I might just be able to insert a side-battle story of him destroying battalions of Minions and Executioners, but that'll break H.A.V.A quickly.

And ... what the, using H.A.V.A on Agito?! Does not compute!
Aaron means Aurion sparring with Signum since she's Agito's partner.

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There must be a catch somewhere for you to give it so freely ...
No doubt but Spica will be in good hands under you.

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Wha-? CC?

I'm still learning.
CC= Canon Characters
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"Best way to kill a man, is to leave him alone."

"Until you come, until we close our eyes."

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Well the backlog isn’t terrible… looks like my gamble to power level in COD:4 online during the weekend (well most poster weekends anyway) paid off. (Did 25 levels today and totally unlocked I think it was 4 guns.)

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Well I was going to let Keroko-tan blast him back in character, but since PhoenixFlare's post, he's saved of that grizzly fate.
Chrono need's to start sucking up to Phoenix big time he's about the only guy(or girl) in here that seems to want to do anything besides abuse him.

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H4XXgun! Though its just a very powerfull gun now, really.

And while Keroko's not there, she sure is wishing she has that thing, concidering the reason she can't join forces in GuardianS:

Spoiler for A game of shadows:


As for the chiming scene:

Spoiler:
Well the other criminals aren't going to let up just becasue someone threatening the capital after all...

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Somehow... I think some people might use this example as an analogous scenario for a pairing they like here in the OC thread... >_<
Well why do you think I never had an issue with the idea to start with?


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BTW, I already got my ideas for the new stuff Aurion would be using for GuardianS.

Spoiler for H.A.V.A. Type: X-555 /Heavy Assault Convertible Armament Type: X-555:


The third pic was kinda small, so here is a small demo of what the 'Sword' mode can do.
And of course, the A.I. won't be a problem since Almaria will be attached to this.

The video.

Before anybody screams "HAXX!", compared to what Tyrfing is capable of, this is quite tame. Plus, it has some drawbacks, namely cutting down Aurion's spell-control area and speed.

*runs*
Na that ain't hax not even close, particularly with the later clarifications.

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Y-Yeah
I guess Koji is like Hyaweh, but without the pervert/slacker parts
Plus, the VA is the same

Finished drawing Altea v2, and this one is soooo her
The original looked too serious to be a tsundere
Also, the new one reminds me of Vita

Oh, and I'm currently writing the Temptation/Lust trial part
Here's an example of what's it about...
Spoiler for OMG:

Would be fun to add Keroko-chan, but...I don't even know what happened to her during the attack to the Cradle Did I miss that chapter?
Besides, there's already seven girls in that room
*runs*
Ho-boy...

*Starts sharpening and loading Leviathan in anticipation of needing to to do nose amputations and corpse incineration.*


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That's something that really bugged me as well; I also remember reading somewhere needing to be A-rank in order to fly? Can't remember where I read it, so it's probably not an official source.
That seems unlikely most of the mooks we see flying around sure as hell don't seem A rank.


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That's pretty slow, isn't it? *frowns* StrikerS episode 5 rather implied that Fate broke the sound barrier on takeoff, given that sonic boom... unless it was an afterburner shockwave... maybe I'd better rewatch that.
They aren’t even close they’ve never shown speeds like that, the fact helicopters seem to be used to deploy into combat areas acutally seems to indicate they might have a higher sustained speed. I acutally consider anything over about 250 to be attainable only by boost spells. Also the human body would NOT stand up to wind forces incurred at super sonic speeds… at least not as low as mages fly. Pilots ejecting from a supersonic aircraft for instance can break bones due to the wind blast impacting them.

If they were wearing heavy duty full body power armor then maybe but they’re sporting exposed skin and lightweight jackets. There’s no way in hell they’d survive super sonic flight. Any “magical shielding” arguments can also be thrown out as we see wind whipping their hair around so it’s clearly hitting them.

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Still, if they're flying at that speed... it WOULD make in-city dogfights more challenging, because then the Erusians would have to be wary of the buildings and such, and the TSAB mages could fly about and turn with impunity. Plus, if you need to evade and set an ambush, all you need to do is to fly into a window and setup, unless the enemy VTOL fighters/helos have IR sensors tracking you, like what USMC Harrier II Pluses do in Iraq now...
Na you wouldn't "Dogfight" a mage you'd park at 40,000 feet WAY above where they can go without passing and dying and just lob missiles down at them from 30 miles away when you get a chance.

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Anyway, Keroko's given the green light, so here's the final part of Chapter Four.

Spoiler for Chapter Four—Escutcheon (Part Three):


Hopefully, in an attempt to un-shaft Hayate, it hasn't led to her being more shafted.

Spoiler for Translations:


Kyral, I might need your help to verify those.
This would be a good place to mention that I read the first two parts of this chapter, no quality drop noted I'm not one for big "raw-raw" speeches so I'll just say good work and keep up your not sucking streak, I'm awaiting more, and I'll read this now.

Though I've noted Vita is absent... *Sticks up a big sign claiming the rights to her side story and patrols his plot with a shotgun* "This haer be mine!"

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Probably has to do with his avatar. Each time I see Keroko, I think that Keroko's female.
I’ll admit I also thought he was a woman at first… Sorry man apparently your very effeminate.
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Old 2007-11-09, 23:25   Link #15413
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Grats!!
Now, onward to Gruul!!
We've only got Mulgar on farm. Gruul is like a nightmare!Nanoha DPS practice session where we'll ultimately start getting 1-shotted at Limiter Release #14.

(explained in Nanohaverse terms for non-WoWers... )
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T3H MILLENIUM PUZZLE
It all started when I discovered that Tausend Kreuz sounds like the Millenium Cross.

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Anyway, Keroko's given the green light, so here's the final part of Chapter Four.

Spoiler for Chapter Four—Escutcheon (Part Three):


Hopefully, in an attempt to un-shaft Hayate, it hasn't led to her being more shafted.

Spoiler for Translations:


Kyral, I might need your help to verify those.
My jaw just dropped...

...because, even though you may not intend it, the Aces were defeated in the a similar manner as that time when I introduced a character named... er... He-Who-Shall-Not-Be-Mentioned, who defeated all but Fate at the same time with a speed that none of them could match! And this time they were visibly shakened... A scary memory?

Probably just me and my ability to join the dots of 2 unrelated things together.

(runs round h4xxbuster fire frantically)

Other than that, good little chappie. As you mentioned earlier, Leona is very smart, but I last expected her win-at-all-costs to mirror one of Tessa's quirks. Looks like they will get along very nicely.

Earlier, I like it that the background staff had FINALLY appeared in the canteen. I've been wondering why the Officer's Lounge had to be so friggin' big. This makes much more sense.

Notices that Keroko-chan is also missing.

Hmm... I guess she decided to work at Honor's Hold this time around... Well, having a crack troop to call on is a much better policy than just getting their CO involved. Also, my OC seniors (Kha and company) won't be the focus of the junior Knights' (just Celestial Being actually) POVs, you are free to use them, in case you are wondering.

Also, since you are writing the main work, it is me that has to adapt to yours, so plow ahead and don't look back. I'll follow your lead.

*supresses Unlimited Crack Works*



Looks like we're gonna love the next chapter!

@Tk: I don't know why, but recently I've been getting Vita-vibes from you...
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Quick posts before going home for village.

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Excellent finale! Mai certainly made her presence known this time.

But... ARMSTRONG IS NOW ETERNALLY-29?!?!
ZOMG HAXX!
1:

2: hush.
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Glock: The side effects of controlled amounts of Belkanite radiation exposure, including the retardation of natural cellular decay and aging processes. Judging from its observed effects on Frieda Johannsen and Jackson Armstrong, that'd mean...

*imagines*

...

*blinks*

Hawt Damn... Kay's gonna look eternally 25?
Lucky Glock.

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Jigoku Santa Mai you say?

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I'd take that present anytime.

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SHOP FU TIME!!!!!!!!

Pending Kha's approval, here's my rendition of baby Tessa Testarossa in Ground Forces uniform:

Spoiler for Tessa Testarossa:


And baby Tessa trying to fool some poor newbs as "Warrant Officer Reinforce Zwei":

Spoiler for >.>:


Lovely!

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Why have Ms Claus when you can have two Santas? Twice the presents received as well
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So... do we get naughty presents for being good, or being naughty?



*runs*
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Naughty of course. This sounds like it would fit perfectly in a scenario. Someone convince the Dark God of Fanservice to write this.

Not forgetting Keroko-chan in a Santa suit as well.

*joins Lowe*
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Yes, very naughty indeed...

And Keroko-chan in a Santa suit? Bah.

Gimme Keroko-chan as a present wrapped in ribbons...

And ONLY ribbons...

*runs at lightspeed*
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Well I do have that Fate picture lying aroun-

*beams of pink, red, yellow and silver impact on Keroko-kun, a badly charred Keroko-kun crawls from the resulting crater*

...Of course you realize this means war.


PRIORITY NUMBER ONE:
WRITE THIS SCENARIO DOWN FOR THE SAKE OF THIS THREAD!!!!

And throw in Gemini Sisters/Galatea/Frieda/Gwen/Iris Christmas service, too.

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Fitting ending. What's next? Christmas?


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So Glock would have an eternally 25 girlfriend. Perfect.


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Actually its the voodoo doll inside!!
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The Jigoku Tsuushin, holiday style?

Ai: This is for you.

I'd take that.

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All women in Ordered Space should be exposed to Belkanite radiation for great Justice!!!


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Sounds like a health drink catchphrase

Yes... health drinks...

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HAXX! Eternal youth is HAXX!

And seeing Mai's other side is ... heart-warming indeed, with none of those chainsaw revving stuff. And the detainees dancing with the Sisters are refreshing, and, with Armstrong x Keroko, make it a ...

WIN!


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Y-Yeah
I guess Koji is like Hyaweh, but without the pervert/slacker parts
Plus, the VA is the same

Finished drawing Altea v2, and this one is soooo her
The original looked too serious to be a tsundere
Also, the new one reminds me of Vita

Oh, and I'm currently writing the Temptation/Lust trial part
Here's an example of what's it about...
Spoiler for OMG:

Would be fun to add Keroko-chan, but...I don't even know what happened to her during the attack to the Cradle Did I miss that chapter?
Besides, there's already seven girls in that room
*runs*
You know, I'd have those girls changed to the Gemini Sisters and Yutaro as the guy in the middle....



*runs*
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Being good still merits you naughty presents, that's Chaos's style.


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WHAT?! There's another MAI?!
Hikki's wife, Mai Kawasumi

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Dangerous level of Bluecheesium is dangerous, blowing up might just be around the corner.

Though, if it gives me eternal youth like Armstrong-san, I don't really mind ...
That's Belkanite, not Bluecheesium

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Probably has to do with his avatar. Each time I see Keroko, I think that Keroko's female.
Even I sometimes forget that Keroko's male

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Anyway, Keroko's given the green light, so here's the final part of Chapter Four.

Spoiler for Chapter Four—Escutcheon (Part Three):


Hopefully, in an attempt to un-shaft Hayate, it hasn't led to her being more shafted.

Spoiler for Translations:


Kyral, I might need your help to verify those.
Not quite as EPIC as your last chapter, but still AWESOME Good banter with the Aces in the canteen, and Rein/Agito is

Also, that's quite the nice display of Leona's frightening combat abilities there ( ), and the description of her role makes her the Strike Gundam of her team But Hayate using Black Impact?!?!?! MOST AWESOME

And to top it off, more nice introspection on Leona's thoughts, and an alert cliffhanger, nice

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Lucky Glock.
Yeah, lucky indeed

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PRIORITY NUMBER ONE:
WRITE THIS SCENARIO DOWN FOR THE SAKE OF THIS THREAD!!!!

And throw in Gemini Sisters/Galatea/Frieda/Gwen/Iris Christmas service, too.


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You know, I'd have those girls changed to the Gemini Sisters and Yutaro as the guy in the middle....



*runs*


Lucky bastard...
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Being good still merits you naughty presents, that's Chaos's style.
Naughty presents aren't rewarded base on behaviour...

...But whether a not you have the stones for it

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I wonder exactly what people think if the first line of the sentence isn't there.
Probably the same thing that me and my friend was laughting at

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For Xeno, it might have been her charisma.

*cough* For Chrono, it's a special case. *cough*
OH HO ?

Keep it up and you'll be my new best friend...


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Really? We need weed-control!

*takes out weed-spray*
That's not how I spread...

"I've seen the heart of men..."


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I wonder why isn't there a negative choice.
Because it doesn't logically exist


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I really don't.
Seriously? Not even a wrong feeling?

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Who's the accomplice?!
He walks among you...


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There must be a catch somewhere for you to give it so freely ...
I only ask of you to attempt to keep her in character.

Other than that, go ahead and have fun.... If you can


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Nope, until you showed it in the scans.
It's not completely mind reading in his case.

He can only see the dark thoughts and desires.

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Bunnies are still dangerous, nonetheless.
Bunnies are to be eaten by wolves like us.

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Wha-? CC?

I'm still learning.

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Canon Character.

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Ooooooooh....

*nod*
You what this means...


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Like any other male would

*runs*

Sipher: "Don't mind him, Arcas is only hidding behind the veil of sibling-hood "


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Chap doesn't know about Jet Propulsion Technology?
I doubt alot of people do


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I dunno about could, but I'm sure alot of people would want to

*runs*
You give them too much credit

Mark my words, NOBODY will ever try anything on Spica

They don't have the gahonies to do it


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*strokes chin*

He... what?

Jeno: "He nothing."

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Hmm. Lack of interest perhaps?
Lack of stones

And it's going to be awhile before they grow them

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Probably has to do with his avatar. Each time I see Keroko, I think that Keroko's female.
Well there's that, but his speech and all reminds me of... Well, a woman.

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The self that perceives, the self that perceives self and the self that is perceived.

All part of yourself.
And that's that


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Jeno plays eroges?
...No.


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Beware the silver..
Meh.

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Paranoia, Doubt and Cynicism.
Though seriously, it's just wrong... There's not Nanoha, and that's definitely not Fate.


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Yuuno's first if that ever happens.
You could count Nanoha as a subtle one as well.

Both of them would act girly in front of him


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Well it's a just name but FlameZ certainly has his plans thought-out.
It's dangerous BECAUSE it () has a name.


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Hikki's wife.
Nani nani ??

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No doubt but Spica will be in good hands under you.
Hmm? PhoenixFlare huh...

Wonder if he's interested in the dark arts...
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Naughty presents aren't rewarded base on behaviour...

...But whether a not you have the stones for it
Wise words

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Sipher: "Don't mind him, Arcas is only hidding behind the veil of sibling-hood "
Most true. It is a most convenient way to deny one's feelings

*looks at Gimmy*

*ehem*


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I doubt alot of people do
True And they're missing out on all the awesomeness


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You give them too much credit

Mark my words, NOBODY will ever try anything on Spica

They don't have the gahonies to do it
If you say so


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Jeno: "He nothing."
*whistles*

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Hmm? PhoenixFlare huh...

Wonder if he's interested in the dark arts...
[Vader] If he can be turned, he shall become a powerful ally [/Vader]

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I doubt alot of people do .
I know a bit, aircraft have always been one of my favorite machines my personal favorite engine has to be the NUCLEAR RAMJET though… Overkill? What is this "overkill" you speak off?
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I know a bit, aircraft have always been one of my favorite machines my personal favorite engine has to be the NUCLEAR RAMJET though… Overkill? What is this "overkill" you speak off?


HOLY...

So simple and so awesome in concept this Nuclear Ramjet is... too bad all the flaws and problems make it impractical barring future technological developments
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