Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[Eratas123]

Why don't you try using google translate? I used it for Shadow.

@ Senpai - DOes Charlotte really count all things considered?

[ZeroXSEED]

Well, you did say lineage, but even that is questionable...

[Eratas123]

Fanon question: Do you think Mr. Dunoa just 'got around' a lot or did he really love Charlotte's mom.

[agetreme]

I believe he really did.....

May be the reason for being neglected is because she look too much like her mother?

And her step-mother is jealous?

[Eratas123]

Then why does he treat Charlotte like shit?

[agetreme]

To de-associate her from her mother?

or other extremely complex reason?

I prefer it to be that way.

More emotional touching stuff things to write about than: he just like to fool around.

[Eratas123]

Meh, he's the main antagonist of Synchronicity. The others say that he 'got around' a lot when he was younger. Yuri's frank about it and says he was, and still is, a man-whore.

[wavehawk]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Then why does he treat Charlotte like shit?

The way Mr. Dunios is described in the LN and how much interaction he has with Charlotte (all of two hours?) I think it can be left pretty much vague as to whether he is evil, or if he actually does care for his daughter but can't act as he is limited by other members of the Dunois family/conglomerate.

Hell, a Michael Crichton-esque take on Dunois' backdoor dealings and corporate espionage would be an awesome fic to work with. It's just that nobody here (myself included) has that high caliber of writing to pull it off without being silly.

"You can't un-ring the bell."

[Eratas123]

Uh.....sending your daughter to a foreign country and telling her if she get's caught she's done for is not very father-like.

[demino_hellsin]

In a way it is. When she's sent to ISA, she's out of the reach of the Dunois family. When she's caught, she can permanently cut ties and save herself from her abusers.

[Eratas123]

That is a completely BS way to cut herself off:/ There are literally dozens of other ways to help her other than sending her somewhere where the least punishment she'll get is like 10 years in prison.

[demino_hellsin]

*shrug* that's if ISA lets her be tried in such a manner. Remember that ISA is considered an independent nation. I doubt it was kept a secret from people so sending her in knowing she'll have some form of immunity from standard laws is a bet. If she's smuggled out any other way, it might not be too far from logic that she'll be hunted by the Dunois family because of what she knows personally about the family and how the innerworkings are. She's aware of the true state of Dunois company which is trying to put up a strong front.

[Eratas123]

Once she graduates, she's a citizen of France again. ......Unless Ichika marries her

[wavehawk]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Once she graduates, she's a citizen of France again. ......Unless Ichika marries her

- Or she becomes an instructor at ISA, which is highly likely given her skill and her ability to teach IS techniques.

Again, the Dunois family at this stage is very vague so it could go either way. Hell, for all we know sending charlotte to ISa was an indy ploy to get her away from the Illuminati...

[ZeroXSEED]

@ Eras
It could be either one, there's no clear depiction, only his name is mentioned and that is.

No, he might neglect Charlotte, but at the same time he never abuse her in any form, physically or mentally. In fact, he DOES protect her from his legal wive by relocating her form the main house to industrial facility.

While ST Dunois is complete monster, TLR Dunois is a weakling behind stone-cold face, but even Charles can't really hate him THAT much like he hated the rest of Dunois.

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - He's a huge anti-climax boss in synchro He's built up as a Machiavellian genius and a bull of a man who's actually stronger than his guards.

.....Then he punched Ichika and Chifuyu found out:/

[wavehawk]

Okay, even crazier idea: The reason Charlotte has never seen her father face to face except those few times, and thta he acts do cold and distant?

Because Charlotte's real father is dead. It's just some other member of the Dunois family taking his place in order to keep the company image. And they would have gotten rid of Charlotte years back too, if not for her abilities with the IS.

[Eratas123]

Man, I wish Charlotte's mom didn't die:/

[demino_hellsin]

Spoiler for fanfic idea:

What if ISA were an intergalactic colony spaceship?

Spoiler for fanfic synopsis:

It has been a decade since the true unveiling of the IS, the White Knight incident. The war that followed as people made grabs for IS and machines reverse engineered from them. That war had become known as the Reclamation War. At present, the IS have been mass-produced via False Numbers which are only imitation IS which use continually advancing conventional technologies to replicate some of the IS capabilities. The war had easily led to a disaster which left a gaping scar upon the Earth's surface, serving as a reminder of the power humanity has gained and the need for responsibility in its use. The space exploration program that initially spawned the IS is soon finished and a colonization ship named Wonderland was built in accordance to plans by professor Shinonono Tabane.

The original 467 units created by Tabane became known as the True Numbers or Originals as most dubbed them. of these 467 units, 100 were allotted to the long term exploration mission along with innumerable false numbers, which is to find a new homeworld for earthlings. This mission being established by ISA or the International Sojourners Alliance.

Spoiler for fanfic character list:

Orimura Ichika: Initially entering highschool, he is drafted as a trainee food engineer aboard the Wonderland. This is by the influence of Orimura Chifuyu who had been assigned as an instructor for on-board IS pilots.

Shinonono Houki: The younger sister of Shinonono Tabane who disappeared off the face of the Earth five years after the White Knight incident and shortly after the Reclamation War.Currently serves as a trainee IS pilot on-board the Wonderland in search of her sister whose last words were "I will wait for you in that place amongst the stars."

Cecilia Alcott: Heiress of the Alcott fortune and business ventures. She is England's top IS trainee and also the assigned pilot of an Original Number the Blue Tears. Cecilia was forced into the exploration mission as per the government's order in order to protect her family name and legacy. The businesses are currently under stewardship of her loyal maid Chelsea.

Huang Ling Yin: One of China's representative in the ISA plan. Pilot of the Original number Shen Long. She initially refused the plan but relented once doing a once over of the crew list. A childhood friend of Orimura Ichika's she finds joy in teasing him and enjoys a guy friend relationship with him, though she wants to change this GF status to another kind of GF.

Charlotte Dunois: The France representative who was dispatched as a spy on the technological advances of other countries in their IS research, both true and false numbers. Eventually she gains additional directives to gain information on Orimura Ichika and his True Number IS, the Byakushiki. She pilots the Original IS Rafael Revive.

Laura Bodewig: Originally part of the supersoldier group Schwarzer Hase designated to split from the original mission, she was reassigned to the Wonderland as representative of Germany. Her IS unit is the True number Schwarzer Regen. She has a prior acquaintanceship with Orimura Chifuyu and looks up to her much like a big sister. She abhors Ichika whom she feels is a waste of Chifuyu's attention.

Sarashiki Tatenashi: A mysterious IS pilot with ties to no country. There is practically no data on her within the database of the ISA mission however she holds substantial authority within the ship's chain of command. She seems to be the leader of an organization that assists the ISA exploration mission. She pilots an Original IS she fittingly dubbed the Mysterious Lady.

Sarashiki Kanzashi: A withdrawn girl with equally little amount of data on her within the ISA database. She seems to be a bit of an anime otaku. Her unit is currently a refitted True Number Uchigane. She bears a good bit of inferiority complex against people in general. This is due to her experiences of being overshadowed in skill and achievements by her sister, and importance once by Ichika, who was assigned the frame that should have been assigned to Kanzashi: Byakushiki.

[Eratas123]

Shouldn't you be dealing with your other fics? Getting too many idea's without even beginning to write pretty much guarantees nothing gets accomplished.