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[MeisterBabylon]

Something tells me I should've just kept on writing for this thread... I'd be much more appreciated.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Kyon, meet kha; kha meet kyon.

You two will get along just fine... kha is somewhat the sempai in crack before you kyon, in many ways- you are already a junior-kha..

As for me, I continue write all the normal kinds of story....＞.＞ you know, christmas, valentines...

[Mr.Kyon]

Originally Posted by chaos2frozen

oh no you don't! You're not going to try to pin this on me! I'm guilty of alot of terrible, horrific and heinous crimes in my life, but i never written a crack fic!!

Besides, i don't even like any yuriko pairing.

You're the one who started it all with the Awaki/Accelerator angrysex you bastaaaard! Take responsibility for defiling my soul!!

[Chaos2Frozen]

It's not my fault you've decided to interpret Awaki/Accelerator as crack =_=

[Miraluka]

Just acept it, Chaos started the corruption on Mr. Kyon's mind.

[Flere821]

Alright everyone, remember when I said I'll write a fanfic for Touma and Shokuhou (in the LN thread)? I've started it, and I'd like some feedback before I put this up on fanfic net. Namely, how plausible is this scenario? (I'm assuming everyone have looked at Railgun chapter 41 and/or know what's happened in it)

Title: Minds, Memories and Misfortune

Spoiler for Synopsis:

AU ToaruVerse. The ‘Queen of Tokiwadai’, Shokuhou Misaki, meets Kamijou Touma. Mikoto gets jealous and things get worse (better?) from there. Expect trouble, or should I say ‘Misfortune’?

Spoiler for Prologue:

“Again with those rumours…” Shokuhou Misaki murmured.

The 5th ranked Level 5 of Academy City, ‘Queen of Tokiwadai’, and ruler of the largest clique inside the most prodigious middle school in Academy City sighed in annoyance. The ‘rumours’ she is referring to in this instance is one that has already raised its head once earlier, before she personally put a stop to it herself.

The rumour Misaka Mikoto, 3rd ranked Level 5 and ‘Ace of Tokiwadai’ is starting her own clique. While Misaki knew the rumours are most likely false, knowing how the 'Railgun' is not really interested in politics and such of the school and Misaki have already warned Mikoto once not to infringe upon her own territory.

Nonetheless, the rumours are getting more persistent day by day. Even knowing that these are ultimately baseless mutterings from those who doesn’t know better, it is bothersome to listen to her own subordinates bring up the topic time and again. While it is true based on rankings alone, the 3rd level 5 can amass a great amount of support but it is unlikely she can maintain the same influence the ‘Queen’ can – and this isn’t about Mental Out’s own ability to convince others either. Merely the fact Shokuhou’s own clique has been around longer meant the connections between their members, and to other organisations that cooperate with them, is at a level that no newly made clique can match. Something her own followers seem unable to grasp, as they continue to harp on how much of a threat Misaka Mikoto can be if she puts her mind to it.

Really, why can’t the Railgun do something about these rumours herself? Like making it 100% clear she’s not interested in such things so these rumours can just die down?

Very well, Misaki thought, if I have to put up with baseless rumours she can deal with the same. Let her suffer as well. Maybe then she’ll take a more active approach to stop rumours before they get out of hand. I’d stop rumours about me becoming an annoyance to her if our position is switched.

Now what to use that will annoy her to no end…?

Aha.

Now wasn’t there something about Misaka Mikoto having a boyfriend? On August 31st, they had a rendezvous right outside the Tokiwadai dorm, no less. The rumours were afire from that meeting, and the Shirai girl that follows Misaka around went into a state of shock if Shokuhou’s sources are correct.

Yes, what Misaki’s about to do is petty, but she does that sometimes. Just as important as her calculating part that allows her to grasp control over Tokiwadai’s students, is the mischievous part of her that plays around and completely disregards how other people feel about being involved in her schemes.

And thus begins another school-life romance(?) comedy with possibly disastrous results.

[Master Assassin]

Originally Posted by Flere821

Alright everyone, remember when I said I'll write a fanfic for Touma and Shokuhou (in the LN thread)? I've started it, and I'd like some feedback before I put this up on fanfic net. Namely, how plausible is this scenario? (I'm assuming everyone have looked at Railgun chapter 41 and/or know what's happened in it)

<snip>

I love you man. :3

Well, I think this will be enough for a start. We will have to see the story as it unfolds for a better review, as I think I can't give enough for insights based on these alone.

[Drifting Wolf]

Originally Posted by Flere821

Alright everyone, remember when I said I'll write a fanfic for Touma and Shokuhou (in the LN thread)? I've started it, and I'd like some feedback before I put this up on fanfic net. Namely, how plausible is this scenario? (I'm assuming everyone have looked at Railgun chapter 41 and/or know what's happened in it)

Title: Minds, Memories and Misfortune

Spoiler for Synopsis:

AU ToaruVerse. The ‘Queen of Tokiwadai’, Shokuhou Misaki, meets Kamijou Touma. Mikoto gets jealous and things get worse (better?) from there. Expect trouble, or should I say ‘Misfortune’?

Spoiler for Prologue:

“Again with those rumours…” Shokuhou Misaki murmured.

The 5th ranked Level 5 of Academy City, ‘Queen of Tokiwadai’, and ruler of the largest clique inside the most prodigious middle school in Academy City sighed in annoyance. The ‘rumours’ she is referring to in this instance is one that has already raised its head once earlier, before she personally put a stop to it herself.

The rumour Misaka Mikoto, 3rd ranked Level 5 and ‘Ace of Tokiwadai’ is starting her own clique. While Misaki knew the rumours are most likely false, knowing how the 'Railgun' is not really interested in politics and such of the school and Misaki have already warned Mikoto once not to infringe upon her own territory.

Nonetheless, the rumours are getting more persistent day by day. Even knowing that these are ultimately baseless mutterings from those who doesn’t know better, it is bothersome to listen to her own subordinates bring up the topic time and again. While it is true based on rankings alone, the 3rd level 5 can amass a great amount of support but it is unlikely she can maintain the same influence the ‘Queen’ can – and this isn’t about Mental Out’s own ability to convince others either. Merely the fact Shokuhou’s own clique has been around longer meant the connections between their members, and to other organisations that cooperate with them, is at a level that no newly made clique can match. Something her own followers seem unable to grasp, as they continue to harp on how much of a threat Misaka Mikoto can be if she puts her mind to it.

Really, why can’t the Railgun do something about these rumours herself? Like making it 100% clear she’s not interested in such things so these rumours can just die down?

Very well, Misaki thought, if I have to put up with baseless rumours she can deal with the same. Let her suffer as well. Maybe then she’ll take a more active approach to stop rumours before they get out of hand. I’d stop rumours about me becoming an annoyance to her if our position is switched.

Now what to use that will annoy her to no end…?

Aha.

Now wasn’t there something about Misaka Mikoto having a boyfriend? On August 31st, they had a rendezvous right outside the Tokiwadai dorm, no less. The rumours were afire from that meeting, and the Shirai girl that follows Misaka around went into a state of shock if Shokuhou’s sources are correct.

Yes, what Misaki’s about to do is petty, but she does that sometimes. Just as important as her calculating part that allows her to grasp control over Tokiwadai’s students, is the mischievous part of her that plays around and completely disregards how other people feel about being involved in her schemes.

And thus begins another school-life romance(?) comedy with possibly disastrous results.

I like this. I think it has a lot of potential, especially when I feel that Misaki doesn't really have a lot of experience regarding males. I think.

I really feel you should go ahead with this, it's awesome. Hopefully, even Misaki will not be immune to the Kami-yan disease and we can have a threesome!
Fufufu...

[Ashaman]

Nah, she probably has some experience with males. She probably just doesn't have experience with males her mind control wont work on.

[blitz1/2]

is that the Queen's official name or is that something Flere made up?

[Ashaman]

Offcial as of Railgun chap 41

Unless we get a curve ball and that isn't the queen but one of her agents posing as the Queen under the Queen's orders.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Ashaman

Offcial as of Railgun chap 41

Unless we get a curve ball and that isn't the queen but one of her agents posing as the Queen under the Queen's orders.

Unlikely, Mikoto recognized her.

[Drifting Wolf]

Misaki touches Touma triumphantly. "Aha! With this... eh!?" She couldn't feel anything. Nothing at all. It was as if her powers could not work on Touma at all.

Touma stared blankly at the strange Ojou-chan that had latched on to his arm like an octopus. "Erm, Miss? What are you doing?"

"What do you think you're doing to MY idiot!" Mikoto roared indignantly.

"Oi, when did I become 'your' idiot!?"

Oh my, I can just see that happening now.

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by Drifting Wolf

Misaki touches Touma triumphantly. "Aha! With this... eh!?" She couldn't feel anything. Nothing at all. It was as if her powers could not work on Touma at all.

Touma stared blankly at the strange Ojou-chan that had latched on to his arm like an octopus. "Erm, Miss? What are you doing?"

"What do you think you're doing to MY idiot!" Mikoto roared indignantly.

"Oi, when did I become 'your' idiot!?"

Oh my, I can just see that happening now.

Ready the Lulz cannons!

[Mr.Kyon]

Originally Posted by Flere821

Alright everyone, remember when I said I'll write a fanfic for Touma and Shokuhou (in the LN thread)? I've started it, and I'd like some feedback before I put this up on fanfic net. Namely, how plausible is this scenario? (I'm assuming everyone have looked at Railgun chapter 41 and/or know what's happened in it)

Title: Minds, Memories and Misfortune

Spoiler for Synopsis:

AU ToaruVerse. The ‘Queen of Tokiwadai’, Shokuhou Misaki, meets Kamijou Touma. Mikoto gets jealous and things get worse (better?) from there. Expect trouble, or should I say ‘Misfortune’?

Spoiler for Prologue:

“Again with those rumours…” Shokuhou Misaki murmured.

The 5th ranked Level 5 of Academy City, ‘Queen of Tokiwadai’, and ruler of the largest clique inside the most prodigious middle school in Academy City sighed in annoyance. The ‘rumours’ she is referring to in this instance is one that has already raised its head once earlier, before she personally put a stop to it herself.

The rumour Misaka Mikoto, 3rd ranked Level 5 and ‘Ace of Tokiwadai’ is starting her own clique. While Misaki knew the rumours are most likely false, knowing how the 'Railgun' is not really interested in politics and such of the school and Misaki have already warned Mikoto once not to infringe upon her own territory.

Nonetheless, the rumours are getting more persistent day by day. Even knowing that these are ultimately baseless mutterings from those who doesn’t know better, it is bothersome to listen to her own subordinates bring up the topic time and again. While it is true based on rankings alone, the 3rd level 5 can amass a great amount of support but it is unlikely she can maintain the same influence the ‘Queen’ can – and this isn’t about Mental Out’s own ability to convince others either. Merely the fact Shokuhou’s own clique has been around longer meant the connections between their members, and to other organisations that cooperate with them, is at a level that no newly made clique can match. Something her own followers seem unable to grasp, as they continue to harp on how much of a threat Misaka Mikoto can be if she puts her mind to it.

Really, why can’t the Railgun do something about these rumours herself? Like making it 100% clear she’s not interested in such things so these rumours can just die down?

Very well, Misaki thought, if I have to put up with baseless rumours she can deal with the same. Let her suffer as well. Maybe then she’ll take a more active approach to stop rumours before they get out of hand. I’d stop rumours about me becoming an annoyance to her if our position is switched.

Now what to use that will annoy her to no end…?

Aha.

Now wasn’t there something about Misaka Mikoto having a boyfriend? On August 31st, they had a rendezvous right outside the Tokiwadai dorm, no less. The rumours were afire from that meeting, and the Shirai girl that follows Misaka around went into a state of shock if Shokuhou’s sources are correct.

Yes, what Misaki’s about to do is petty, but she does that sometimes. Just as important as her calculating part that allows her to grasp control over Tokiwadai’s students, is the mischievous part of her that plays around and completely disregards how other people feel about being involved in her schemes.

And thus begins another school-life romance(?) comedy with possibly disastrous results.

I APPROVE! [Crack King Seal of Approval]

W-Wait, why are you burning down your harddrive Flere?! Did I say something?! Is my go-ahead that misfortunate?!

Anyways, tiny mistake I spotted

Originally Posted by Flere821

Spoiler for Prologue:

[...]Even knowing that these are ultimately baseless mutterings from those who doesn’t know better[...]

That should be don't

[Flere821]

Originally Posted by Mr.Kyon

Anyways, tiny mistake I spotted

Thanks fixing my mistake. I'll post both the prologue and the 1st chapter up on fanfic net within the next 2-3 days hopefully, I've already written out half the chapter.

[Flere821]

Sorry for the double post, My Shokuhou fanfic is now up on fanfic net with a chapter past the prologue.

Link here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/...and_Misfortune

Enjoy

[Master Assassin]

Originally Posted by Flere821

Sorry for the double post, My Shokuhou fanfic is now up on fanfic net with a chapter past the prologue.

Link here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/...and_Misfortune

Enjoy

Gotta say... the start is quite... um, explosive.

I like how Misaki is reacting to the horror that is in Touma's memories, and I'm still reading through the chapter.

[MrTerrorist]

Originally Posted by Flere821

Sorry for the double post, My Shokuhou fanfic is now up on fanfic net with a chapter past the prologue.

Link here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/...and_Misfortune

Enjoy

I'm loving it. The way you describe Misaki is how i imagine she would be. Can't wait for the next chapter.

[tsunade666]

Originally Posted by Flere821

Sorry for the double post, My Shokuhou fanfic is now up on fanfic net with a chapter past the prologue.

Link here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/...and_Misfortune

Enjoy

Awesome read but not the expected impression from Misaki after looking into Touma. Well she did see the memory.

Now onto the mind thing. Isn't ars magna a field type of spell? like field ritual spell? it did distorts your view of reality by making the thoughts of the user true but isn't that diffeernt from what Misaki is doing? plus if mind attacks or mind reading works on Touma then the telepathy girl in vol 6 should be able to go through to him by telephathy.