2012-12-08, 03:05 | Link #544 |
The Lovable SuBiTA
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Sleeping in Yokohama base, Section 9.
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If I write more perhaps, I would write about the usage of the XL-99 Electromagnetic Catapult... and how they sent the Hobbit to Hive Isangrad...
In any case, even Angry Eishins respect incoming lasers... they just hate the shit out of them... they are angry, not stupid...
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2012-12-09, 04:25 | Link #547 | |
Some say I'm the Reverse
Join Date: Jul 2006
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Would love to write something for Muv-Luv (Or Total Eclipse), but not that comfortable with the world/tech/characters to start. The thing that interests me with it: If you can create OCs that aren't overpowered Mary Sues, they would be welcome in the Muv-Luv Universe (mainly because anyone can be eaten).
I'll just leave you with something I worked out in my head. EDIT: Just realized there are no nukes in this universe. ninja'd. Quote:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Enrico_Fermi http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fermi_paradox
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2012-12-09, 08:18 | Link #549 | |
The Lovable SuBiTA
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Sleeping in Yokohama base, Section 9.
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Muv luv does leave the way open for write ups of historical characters, and what if scenarios, from WW2 to 2004. You can refer to the wikia Alternative Timeline here for a listing of events related to the MLA world for your materials. http://muvluv.wikia.com/wiki/Alternative_Timeline I wish you luck in your writings!
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2012-12-13, 08:35 | Link #554 |
A random-man
Join Date: Aug 2009
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This is a still-in-progress work for chapter 2 of my still unnamed crossover fic.Many things and errors might be gone when I started writing for real.Also take note that some part of chapter 1 will also be reworked.
Spoiler for Chapter 2(FOR REAL THIS TIME):
This is just part of chapter 2.and I think I will continue writing part of other chapter to train my skill before writing the fanfic for real. |
2012-12-13, 11:02 | Link #555 | |
Takao Tsundere Cruiser
Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Classified
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2012-12-20, 23:20 | Link #557 |
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Hi Animesuki.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8314408/3/A-Cadet-s-Account Would you say the Smile Precure quote I just added to the beginning of this fanfic adds or subtracts from the overall chapter? inb4 ur fanfic sux because you didn't include the part about the doors. |
2012-12-21, 01:56 | Link #558 |
Truth Martyr
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Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Doing Anzu's paperwork.
Age: 38
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Frankly speaking, the quotes tend to detract massively. They're very jarring.
There's a certain difference between having quotes (canon or otherwise) from in-universe sources, and quotes for outside-universe sources. I direct you to Peptuck's Tiberium Wars or the quotes preceding practically every chapter in the Robotech novelisations. Also, as with your image posts, you've gone a bit overboard on the quotes. There's really far too many there, which makes them on the whole quite jarring, and breaks the flow. tl;dr: The quotes aren't helping any.
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2012-12-21, 12:05 | Link #560 |
Truth Martyr
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Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Doing Anzu's paperwork.
Age: 38
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That Smile Precure quote is still jarring and doesn't fit because Smile Precure =/= Muv-Luv Alternative, and that whole "Happy Barrier is invincible!" makes absolutely zero sense outside it's own context.
It gives off a jarring sense of deranged suicidal overconfidence. Again, whatever you're quoting has practically zero in-universe relationship to the chapter. As such, I will say again that it creates a feel that is very jarring and does not fit in. It's like you're playing a J-Pop song and then suddenly a Rohan horn kicks in.
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