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demino_hellsin · 2013-05-22, 20:42

I think her charm and at the same time the thing that turns me off to her is that she a "my pace" type of girl. But Unlike Honne, Nagisako's pace is always fast XD

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-22, 21:44

So that's why you're obsessed with her....

DarkJak2050 · 2013-05-22, 22:11

Zero, is it possible to sear a wound shut?

If so, then how is it done?

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-22, 22:22

Nope, you can't

Sci fi is bulshitting us about this, there IS a method to stop bleeding but it won't shut the wound.

DarkJak2050 · 2013-05-22, 22:27

Stopping the bleeding is better than nothing...

How can it be done?

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-22, 22:31

Cauterization, basically you weld the open arteries shut with heated metal pricks/pin

Problem is it's bad in the long run for many reason that using lots of cloth and bandages just better by magnitude

because of following reason

> Raise the chance of infection
> Slowing down regeneration and possibility of permanent damage
> Not done properly, more harm than good

blitz1/2 · 2013-05-23, 00:24

Looking at chapter 14, so yes, I do need an explanation on some stuff, who is Mari again? And I sent u a short email.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-23, 00:25

Should've knew it, Mari is more or less one-shot OC representing the former Class rep Rin kicked out of her position.

I'll read the mail then

blitz1/2 · 2013-05-23, 00:26

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Should've knew it, Mari is more or less one-shot OC representing the former Class rep Rin kicked out of her position.

I'll read the mail then

We definitely have to include that, otherwise the readers will become confused at who this Mari is.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-23, 00:29

As for the transition, the event before timeskip is happened directly after the event of chapter 13, thus basically the aftermath. The abrupt failure in storytelling, apparently

OTOH the Rin + Laura event happened one day before the tournament. My bad, I hope you have solution for this.

Also, should we separate the Rin's share and give it so someone? I feel it's too long and dragged out without POV change.

blitz1/2 · 2013-05-23, 00:34

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

As for the transition, the event before timeskip is happened directly after the event of chapter 13, thus basically the aftermath. The abrupt failure in storytelling, apparently

OTOH the Rin + Laura event happened one day before the tournament. My bad, I hope you have solution for this.

Also, should we separate the Rin's share and give it so someone? I feel it's too long and dragged out without POV change.

Well, HOW important is Rin's part in this chapter? (note I haven't read the whole chapter) yet, if her part is not that important, then there's no need to emphasise her parts strongly.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-23, 00:47

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Originally Posted by blitz1/2

Well, HOW important is Rin's part in this chapter? (note I haven't read the whole chapter) yet, if her part is not that important, then there's no need to emphasise her parts strongly.

Basically she's important only during dialogue with Ichika up to where the battle start... from there, it's a mess, but I can say she's only important at the start of battle and after Chifuyu called her and Laura into the office

Oh god I really botched this chapter didn't I...not to mention chapter 15 ...

Eratas123 · 2013-05-23, 01:13

Man, so bored....

StratoSpear · 2013-05-23, 01:15

Ah... good to know I'm not the first to include an OC that's formerly Class Two's rep.

Eratas123 · 2013-05-23, 01:30

I feel sorry for Class Two's rep: Got her spot stolen from her by the new transfer student

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-23, 01:46

Yep, reap what you sow, Rin

Eratas123 · 2013-05-23, 01:48

Hey, Rin's the only one not in his class :/ She's never going to win.

Silver-Throne · 2013-05-23, 01:54

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Hey, Rin's the only one not in his class :/ She's never going to win.

Maybe or maybe not

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-23, 01:56

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Hey, Rin's the only one not in his class :/ She's never going to win.

That and she still alienated by the rest of 1-2 as of ch 15

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Silver-Throne · 2013-05-23, 02:04

^^(Zero)

You sure are a sadist *puts on sadistic grin* Anyone saw a good IS crossover? Because there`s this new anime Valvrave the Liberator and in my view, it`s a good anime. I wonder what would be look like once you do a crossover IS with this?

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Cauterization, basically you weld the open arteries shut with heated metal pricks/pin Problem is it's bad in the long run for many reason that using lots of cloth and bandages just better by magnitude because of following reason > Raise the chance of infection > Slowing down regeneration and possibility of permanent damage > Not done properly, more harm than good __________________

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blitz1/2 Tenshi's Defense Squadron Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Fighting against those who oppress the system	Looking at chapter 14, so yes, I do need an explanation on some stuff, who is Mari again? And I sent u a short email. __________________ hai, hai. Onii-chan has his work cut out for him.

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Should've knew it, Mari is more or less one-shot OC representing the former Class rep Rin kicked out of her position. I'll read the mail then __________________

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demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	I think her charm and at the same time the thing that turns me off to her is that she a "my pace" type of girl. But Unlike Honne, Nagisako's pace is always fast XD

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DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Zero, is it possible to sear a wound shut? If so, then how is it done?

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DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Stopping the bleeding is better than nothing... How can it be done?

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	As for the transition, the event before timeskip is happened directly after the event of chapter 13, thus basically the aftermath. The abrupt failure in storytelling, apparently OTOH the Rin + Laura event happened one day before the tournament. My bad, I hope you have solution for this. Also, should we separate the Rin's share and give it so someone? I feel it's too long and dragged out without POV change. __________________ Last edited by ZeroXSEED; 2013-05-23 at 00:45.

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Silver-Throne Big Game Author Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Exclusively Inside Your Mind.	^^(Zero) You sure are a sadist puts on sadistic grin Anyone saw a good IS crossover? Because there`s this new anime Valvrave the Liberator and in my view, it`s a good anime. I wonder what would be look like once you do a crossover IS with this? __________________ Deviant Art Fanfiction.net Profile WOT SEA