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Andarkoshi · 2013-04-24, 06:21

Kireen

So essentially Sakura pulled off Heroic Sacrifice. After he'd learn what kind of life Fate has he would definitely want to save and protect her. Btw. what kind of cover story did they give to Taiga?

What kind of deal he'd make with TSAB? And how would he get involved in the first series plot? He is neither blood-related nor knows Fate very well so maybe he'd help out during the fight with Precia and later through some fast-talking and wish on Fate's side Lindy would allow the girl to become his adopted daughter. How would Fate and Shirou meet? Would he get involved with one of the Jewel Seeds?

[grins] Not for free, this might be fun if Touko appeared at some point and started teasing Shirou about something he did for her.

So he essentially gets PTSD flashbacks to what happened in Archer's Route? Yeah I can see how Dearche could trigger memories of Gilgamesh XD Now that I think of it I wonder what is this Shirou's opinion on Gilgamesh. I mean he never met him because Sakura ate him so the only base he has is Archer's memories. How would that affect his attitude towards Dearche? Would Archer's memories make him hate or dislike her because of the parallel between Gil and Dearche?

Mhm I had something similar in the OC Emilia.

Spoiler for Emilia:

Anyway Shirou Might be affected like that, have times when he is not sure if the memories he has are his or Archer's.

Lhklan

And how does lack of male characters affect that?

Lhklan · 2013-04-24, 06:51

@Andarkoshi
At A level, the supports usually become romantic. And while I have nothing against 2 girls or 2 guys loving one another, I'm pretty sure that a medieval-like world - the usual setting for a Fire Emblem story - doesn't accept that.

Kireen · 2013-04-24, 06:53

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Kireen

So essentially Sakura pulled off Heroic Sacrifice. After he'd learn what kind of life Fate has he would definitely want to save and protect her. Btw. what kind of cover story did they give to Taiga?

Yaeh, that's pretty much it, as for Taiga, I'm still working on that, but I more or less plan to have her know the real story, since Raiga supposedly knew who Kerry was, she would have eventually found out.

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What kind of deal he'd make with TSAB? And how would he get involved in the first series plot? He is neither blood-related nor knows Fate very well so maybe he'd help out during the fight with Precia and later through some fast-talking and wish on Fate's side Lindy would allow the girl to become his adopted daughter. How would Fate and Shirou meet? Would he get involved with one of the Jewel Seeds?

In my prologue, that's set three years prior to the start of the series, Shirou was hired to check on the Tsukimura family, that have demon blood in my story, to see if they are a threat and eventually dspose of them.

Seeing that they are mosty harmelss he decided to leave them be, but eventually get into a fight with Kyouya and Shiro that misunderstood his intentions.

After the question is solved Shirou starts working as a bodyguard thanks to Shiro connections, becoming eventually a family fiend and sparring partner/ teacher of the three swordsmen of the family.

He eventually starts to get involved after returning form one of his works and sensing a magical battle nearby, he decides to go and take a look.

As of the TSAB, I plan to have him give informations about the MA, despite having few friends inside the clock tower, he'll be quite glad to see it crumble since he dislikes most of the magi. He'll also agree to let the TSAB monitor him.

As for Lindy, she's one of the possible woman that I'm considering as a possible lover for Shirou, but the story is still in the planning phase for most part of it.

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[grins] Not for free, this might be fun if Touko appeared at some point and started teasing Shirou about something he did for her.

Let's just say that he always refer to her as the 'Smoking Bitch'.

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So he essentially gets PTSD flashbacks to what happened in Archer's Route? Yeah I can see how Dearche could trigger memories of Gilgamesh XD Now that I think of it I wonder what is this Shirou's opinion on Gilgamesh. I mean he never met him because Sakura ate him so the only base he has is Archer's memories. How would that affect his attitude towards Dearche? Would Archer's memories make him hate or dislike her because of the parallel between Gil and Dearche?

At fist i guesst that he'll be quite keen to let her majesty meet the pointy end of some of his nastier weaposn, but he's not too keen on attacking children. This Shirou is also less hot headed than his younger counterpart, so he won't charge head on into a situation before knowing what is going one, unless someone he cares for is in danger.

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Mhm I had something similar in the OC Emilia.

Spoiler for Emilia:

Anyway Shirou Might be affected like that, have times when he is not sure if the memories he has are his or Archer's.

No, Shirou is aware of what are his memories and what are Archer's.

But this story will take quite a bit of time before I can get something done, making the nasuverse and the nanoha verse work together is not easy, and I also have a couple of ongoing original works that are draining pretty much all of my creativity ATM.

@Lhklan You can either genderbend or add FE characters to the cast.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-04-24, 06:55

@ Lhklan
Well, if you expand the minor characters it would be possible to create a balanced core cast. Griffith and Verossa for example, or have an option for saving Tiida from his doom.

But yeah, the ratio still overwhelming

Lhklan · 2013-04-24, 06:58

@Zero
Dude, I already added Verossa and Griffith. Hmm, adding Tilda would do it...
I'm even thinking of dragging in the original Hegemon and his cloaked friend/rival just to keep it.
@Kireen
Sorry, I'm not suicidal.

Andarkoshi · 2013-04-24, 07:10

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Originally Posted by Lhklan

@Andarkoshi
At A level, the supports usually become romantic. And while I have nothing against 2 girls or 2 guys loving one another, I'm pretty sure that a medieval-like world - the usual setting for a Fire Emblem story - doesn't accept that.

Yeah like that's a problem, a bit of tweaking here and there and voila XD There is a bunch of manga stories set in kinda-sorta middle ages with lots of yuri.

Kireen

Taiga knowing about magic... that is scary... that is very scary... and I feel sorry for Shirou. Taiga will blow her top when she'll realize just What Kind of stuff Shirou was getting up to...

Heh I don't think the Magic Association would just "crumble" while it's true that in overall TSAB has better resources, more firepower and stuff the magi are more... sneaky. Nasu magic is far more tricky and can get you various very complex solutions to problems. Plus Nasu magi are utterly ruthless amoral jerks. TSAB wouldn't be able to steam-roll over them, it would probably result in a very nasty and bloody guerilla warfare.

That's one of the reasons why I don't want those two worlds mixed, it creates an ENORMOUS number of headaches...

Hmm Shirou coupled with Lindy huh... as far as I remember she had Chrono when she was... 17 which would put her at 29 in the first series. Yeah it would work... and Chrono and Fate could be siblings like in canon XD

Smoking HOT Bitch Shirou, don't forget the Hot XD

Well if Materials attack his daughter then I can't really see how he WON'T Charge into the situation. He might really hesitate if he'll be faced with Levi since she is technically Fate's clone.

Well I'm asking all those question because I try to help ^^; Sorry if I appear to be nosy and stuff. From experience I know that the background for the story develops quite nicely if you talk about it with someone and have to come up with answers to the other person's questions.

Kireen · 2013-04-24, 07:30

Nah, I don't mind, I wrote there in the fist palce to get some suggestions, sides, for now, it's only ideas floating in my mind, until I get done with my other things very little is going to be written.

As for the headaches, I'm studying logic with an mad woman as my teacher, come at me bro!

Andarkoshi · 2013-04-24, 07:35

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Originally Posted by Kireen

As for the headaches, I'm studying logic with an mad woman as my teacher, come at me bro!

As long as you don't break any boundaries between dimension it's cool XD

Kireen · 2013-04-24, 11:31

Nah, the only thing that's gonna be broken is my already damaged and contorted mind XD.

Anyway, returning to some more serious matters...

Spoiler for Report 08:

And thanks to our Resident Tentacle Monster for the inspiration.

Craxuan · 2013-04-24, 11:39

I wouldn't exactly say that it's original, and I was hoping for a counter attack against Dearche *wipes drool* but oh well.

Kireen · 2013-04-24, 11:49

Meh, I know, but today I have no better ideas. I'll make up with a couple of WTF ones for the next round.

And not that the other where that original to begin with.

Andarkoshi · 2013-04-24, 12:25

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Originally Posted by Kireen

Nah, the only thing that's gonna be broken is my already damaged and contorted mind XD.

Anyway, returning to some more serious matters...

Spoiler for Report 08:

And thanks to our Resident Tentacle Monster for the inspiration.

[grins] If Shirou could hear and see it XD Poor poor little Yuuno... well she WILL teach him how to enjoy it before long XD

bhl88 · 2013-04-24, 12:54

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Originally Posted by Kireen

Nah, the only thing that's gonna be broken is my already damaged and contorted mind XD.

Anyway, returning to some more serious matters...

Spoiler for Report 08:

And thanks to our Resident Tentacle Monster for the inspiration.

XD lol poor Yuuno... Or lucky (if he wasn't asleep... He would feel their connection). You can do your version of Kyrie xD. I made Yuuno faint xD

And shouldn't Yuuno be moaning and twitching from her performance? Or it's probably because she's been calling him mongrel instead of Yuuno... if Yuuno hears her saying her name while XXX..... she'll definitely punish him....

aka something like... "Haa... ahhh!!" or something.... or "Fahhh.... so good...."

Lhklan · 2013-04-25, 07:41

Well, guess I'll give this a shot.

Spoiler for Fire Emblem: Aces:

Prologue

Long ago, the continent of Al Hazard was united under one banner, that of the powerful Belkan Empire. History indicated that it was a peaceful and prosperous time, where everybody lives with each other in harmony, under the guidance of the Sankt Kaiser.

Alas, everything must come to an end. No one knows how it happened, but one day, a terrible plague spread across the land, killing many in its wake. None of the mages of the court known what happened, and as such, cannot find a way to cure it. Worse, some of those struck by it would return to the land of the living, not as humans, but as flesh eating abominations

For a decade, the war against the undead rages on. It was hopeful at first, what with them continually driving back the undead creatures. But then horror struck: Friends, comrades, families who fought with them side-by-side, who were recently fallen, would soon return as enemies, as monsters.

Desperate for an end, the strongest mages in the land gathered and crafted a spell that would cleanse the undead once and for all. But for it to be cast, a medium is needed. One that can handle all the different styles of magic used in the ritual. And thus, the Tome of the Night Sky was created. With it, the tides of the war changes. Soon, the humans become victorious, and the cycle of life and death returned.

Unfortunately, it also left the land fractured. With the current Sankt Kaiser and the royal Belkan family all but gone, no one was left to lead the empire. Many nobles seized the chance and rose to power, forming their own kingdom. Even though there were no conflicts, the land would never be united under the same banner again.

As for the Tome of the Night Sky... No one knows where it went. Some say that a beautiful fairy had hidden it away, for such a powerful creation can only belongs in the realm of the fae. Some say that it was destroyed after the spell was casted. All but rumors.

More than one millennium and a half had passed since that time. The shaky peace was only disturbed once, though it was resolved relative quickly. But ... how long would it last?

The land of Mid Childa was a peculiar state among the many territory in the land. For it was not ruled by one, but three families: the Crowbels, the Phils and the Kiels. There will always be one member of the Three Great Family - as they were called - sitting in the council.

Even though it has known no conflict for many generations, Mid Childa still maintain one of the most respected army known to the land. However, a shadow of unease had risen when one of its top commanders, Clyde Harlaown, disappeared in the line of duty. His last location was near the land of Ruwella. One month had passed since then, and while many had given up hopes, his son was not among them.

Chrono Harlaown, a rising talent in the army, had officially handed his temporary resignation letter three days ago. His journey begins, one that would be retold for generations to come.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-04-25, 08:24

That plague also, for some reason, killing mostly males

Wait....

Lhklan · 2013-04-25, 08:26

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

That plague also, for some reason, killing mostly males

Wait....

Nope. Males are there, they just don't join the group.
Although I think I might have to use a few characters from other series.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-04-25, 08:29

I knew, just proposing typical handwavium scenario

The prologue seems to be set, nice.

Lhklan · 2013-04-25, 08:38

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

I knew, just proposing typical handwavium scenario

The prologue seems to be set, nice.

Thanks. Based that on Blazing Sword and Sacred Stone storyline.

I'm thinking of having Kyouya T as a recrutable boss (probably a Swordmaster). The reason is either he's working as a mercenary or having Shinobu kidnapped by a group of bad guys. Shinobu can probably join, though I'm not sure what her class should be.

XenahortCharybdis · 2013-04-25, 09:36

I'm guessing Shaman/Dark Mage, granted that that's the closest thing we've got to the usually dark-aligned vampires. Especially with certain tomes like Nosferatu and Aversa's Night giving us the bloodsucking effect. And the rest providing the aura of serious nasty that all good Shamans need.

Imhullu, anyone?

Lhklan · 2013-04-25, 09:41

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Originally Posted by XenahortCharybdis

I'm guessing Shaman/Dark Mage, granted that that's the closest thing we've got to the usually dark-aligned vampires. Especially with certain tomes like Nosferatu and Aversa's Night giving us the bloodsucking effect. And the rest providing the aura of serious nasty that all good Shamans need.

Imhullu, anyone?

Yeah, that's what I thought. But then I briefly entertained the ironic idea of a vampire being a CLERIC of all things and well, ...

2013-04-24, 06:21	Link #38221
Andarkoshi Resident Tentacle Monster Join Date: Apr 2013	Kireen So essentially Sakura pulled off Heroic Sacrifice. After he'd learn what kind of life Fate has he would definitely want to save and protect her. Btw. what kind of cover story did they give to Taiga? What kind of deal he'd make with TSAB? And how would he get involved in the first series plot? He is neither blood-related nor knows Fate very well so maybe he'd help out during the fight with Precia and later through some fast-talking and wish on Fate's side Lindy would allow the girl to become his adopted daughter. How would Fate and Shirou meet? Would he get involved with one of the Jewel Seeds? [grins] Not for free, this might be fun if Touko appeared at some point and started teasing Shirou about something he did for her. So he essentially gets PTSD flashbacks to what happened in Archer's Route? Yeah I can see how Dearche could trigger memories of Gilgamesh XD Now that I think of it I wonder what is this Shirou's opinion on Gilgamesh. I mean he never met him because Sakura ate him so the only base he has is Archer's memories. How would that affect his attitude towards Dearche? Would Archer's memories make him hate or dislike her because of the parallel between Gil and Dearche? Mhm I had something similar in the OC Emilia. Spoiler for Emilia: One of the things done to her was memory transfer. Essentially the group which made her kidnapped several children and made them into cyborgs and as they completed them they sent them after Shirou to field-test them, make adjustments and test Shirou's capabilities (Jail provided them with knowledge and technical help in exchange for all the experiment data and info on Shirou) Anyway Emilia has memories of several people in her head, her creation was hasty, somewhat botched and not very pleasant. The memories All of her "sisters" who died at Shirou's hands were transferred to her... all of them. She is a real mess because she doesn't even know Which memories are hers. Anyway Shirou Might be affected like that, have times when he is not sure if the memories he has are his or Archer's. Lhklan And how does lack of male characters affect that? __________________ Homeless Eldritch Abomination looks for a new home, low upkeep, give it some people to mind rape now and then and it will be happy

2013-04-24, 06:55	Link #38224
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@ Lhklan Well, if you expand the minor characters it would be possible to create a balanced core cast. Griffith and Verossa for example, or have an option for saving Tiida from his doom. But yeah, the ratio still overwhelming __________________

2013-04-24, 07:30	Link #38227
Kireen Uchuu Kaizoku Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: From Italy	Nah, I don't mind, I wrote there in the fist palce to get some suggestions, sides, for now, it's only ideas floating in my mind, until I get done with my other things very little is going to be written. As for the headaches, I'm studying logic with an mad woman as my teacher, come at me bro! __________________

2013-04-24, 11:31	Link #38229
Kireen Uchuu Kaizoku Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: From Italy	Nah, the only thing that's gonna be broken is my already damaged and contorted mind XD. Anyway, returning to some more serious matters... Spoiler for Report 08: Mission Report 08: Hail to the Queen! Upon waking up the next morning Yuuno Scrya was sure that something strange was going on, if his headache, the rhythmic movement of his bed and the moans of pleasure where of any indication. Wait a second... moans of pleasure… “What the…” The confused librarian stared to say as he noticed the grey haired girl riding on top of him. “D-Dearche what are you doing?” “Isn’t that obvious, peasant?” The Queen of the purple sky replied quirking an eyebrow, without stopping her activity. “And who gave you the permission to address US by OUR name mongrel?” She then asked in an irate tone as a loud crack echoed inside the room and a sharp pain erupted from Yuuno’s cheek as the whip in the girl’s hands hit him with chirurgical precision. “Yes…I mean… Yes your majesty…urgh…how did this happen?” The archeologist asked rubbing his hurt cheek and blushing at the sight of the girl’s leather attire that did very little to nothing to cover her minute body, and at the lewd sounds that their activity was producing. “Ah, WE rightfully stole you from the three drunk lowlifes and WE brought you here to have some fun with you peasant, you should be honored.” Dearche replied in a matter of fact tone. “But WE have to admit that WE were expecting a little more enjoyment from such activities, but WE guess that We can’t expect too much from commoners.” “Hey, what do you mean?” Yuuno barked back as he felt a stab in his pride as a male. “You don’t look to dissatisfied from my performance by the looks of things.” “Be quiet Mongrel!” The Hayate clone shouted as she blushed in embarrassment and hit him again with her whip. “Who gave you permission to speak to US in such manner, learn your place peasant!” “Ah...!” The librarian gasped in pain, and because his endurance had hit his limit. “Tsk, who gave you permission to finish before US.” Dearche barked in an irritated tone, standing up to look down on her prey. “It was you fault for surprising me.” The librarian complained. “Tsk, as if it could ever be OUR fault!” Dearche snorted back. “I guess that there is no other choice.” She then added, moving toward a suspicious bag waiting on the ground near their thrown away clothes. “Oh my god, what is that thing?” Yuuno squeaked in fear as he caught sight of the content of said bag. “Why a tool of sex of course.” The grey haired girl replied nonchalantly as she played around with the gigantic thing. “And on a side note, definitely of higher quality if compared to you meager one.” “And what do you intend to do with that precisely?” “Shouldn’t be that obvious commoner?” Dearche replied grinning. “The queen herself shall teach you the proper way to please someone, be grateful peasant.” “B-But… Oh my god…please stay away from me with that thing.” The librarian started to stutter in panic as he watched her grin become wider the closer she moved toward him. “Rejoice mongrel, because from today you shall be MY mongrel.” “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” And thanks to our Resident Tentacle Monster for the inspiration. __________________

2013-04-24, 11:39	Link #38230
Craxuan Crax Author Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: MY	I wouldn't exactly say that it's original, and I was hoping for a counter attack against Dearche wipes drool but oh well. __________________

2013-04-24, 06:51	Link #38222
Lhklan The Unpronounceable Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: Clock Tower	@Andarkoshi At A level, the supports usually become romantic. And while I have nothing against 2 girls or 2 guys loving one another, I'm pretty sure that a medieval-like world - the usual setting for a Fire Emblem story - doesn't accept that.

2013-04-24, 06:58	Link #38225
Lhklan The Unpronounceable Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: Clock Tower	@Zero Dude, I already added Verossa and Griffith. Hmm, adding Tilda would do it... I'm even thinking of dragging in the original Hegemon and his cloaked friend/rival just to keep it. @Kireen Sorry, I'm not suicidal.

2013-04-24, 11:49	Link #38231
Kireen Uchuu Kaizoku Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: From Italy	Meh, I know, but today I have no better ideas. I'll make up with a couple of WTF ones for the next round. And not that the other where that original to begin with. __________________

2013-04-25, 07:41	Link #38234
Lhklan The Unpronounceable Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: Clock Tower	Well, guess I'll give this a shot. Spoiler for Fire Emblem: Aces: Prologue Long ago, the continent of Al Hazard was united under one banner, that of the powerful Belkan Empire. History indicated that it was a peaceful and prosperous time, where everybody lives with each other in harmony, under the guidance of the Sankt Kaiser. Alas, everything must come to an end. No one knows how it happened, but one day, a terrible plague spread across the land, killing many in its wake. None of the mages of the court known what happened, and as such, cannot find a way to cure it. Worse, some of those struck by it would return to the land of the living, not as humans, but as flesh eating abominations For a decade, the war against the undead rages on. It was hopeful at first, what with them continually driving back the undead creatures. But then horror struck: Friends, comrades, families who fought with them side-by-side, who were recently fallen, would soon return as enemies, as monsters. Desperate for an end, the strongest mages in the land gathered and crafted a spell that would cleanse the undead once and for all. But for it to be cast, a medium is needed. One that can handle all the different styles of magic used in the ritual. And thus, the Tome of the Night Sky was created. With it, the tides of the war changes. Soon, the humans become victorious, and the cycle of life and death returned. Unfortunately, it also left the land fractured. With the current Sankt Kaiser and the royal Belkan family all but gone, no one was left to lead the empire. Many nobles seized the chance and rose to power, forming their own kingdom. Even though there were no conflicts, the land would never be united under the same banner again. As for the Tome of the Night Sky... No one knows where it went. Some say that a beautiful fairy had hidden it away, for such a powerful creation can only belongs in the realm of the fae. Some say that it was destroyed after the spell was casted. All but rumors. More than one millennium and a half had passed since that time. The shaky peace was only disturbed once, though it was resolved relative quickly. But ... how long would it last? The land of Mid Childa was a peculiar state among the many territory in the land. For it was not ruled by one, but three families: the Crowbels, the Phils and the Kiels. There will always be one member of the Three Great Family - as they were called - sitting in the council. Even though it has known no conflict for many generations, Mid Childa still maintain one of the most respected army known to the land. However, a shadow of unease had risen when one of its top commanders, Clyde Harlaown, disappeared in the line of duty. His last location was near the land of Ruwella. One month had passed since then, and while many had given up hopes, his son was not among them. Chrono Harlaown, a rising talent in the army, had officially handed his temporary resignation letter three days ago. His journey begins, one that would be retold for generations to come. Last edited by Lhklan; 2013-04-26 at 07:37.

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	That plague also, for some reason, killing mostly males Wait.... __________________

2013-04-25, 08:29	Link #38237
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	I knew, just proposing typical handwavium scenario The prologue seems to be set, nice. __________________

2013-04-25, 09:36	Link #38239
XenahortCharybdis does whatever he wants. Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Atop a hill of words.	I'm guessing Shaman/Dark Mage, granted that that's the closest thing we've got to the usually dark-aligned vampires. Especially with certain tomes like Nosferatu and Aversa's Night giving us the bloodsucking effect. And the rest providing the aura of serious nasty that all good Shamans need. Imhullu, anyone?