2013-09-05, 06:06 | Link #45684 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Get hype!
Cannonball Fast is underway! “GO!” That was the only word they needed to hear. The hums, thrums and purrs of engines quickly turned to deafening roars. The starting line once filled now left only with the gusts of afterburners and slightly singed earth. The racers were neck and neck. Huang Ling Yin's heavy Shenlong leading the pack by a small margin on some odd chance. Right behind was Cecilia Alcott in her Strike Gunner packet Blue Tears. The ones behind her were Charlotte, Laura, Houki and Ichika with Laura somehow keeping a noselength lead over them. It was cathartic, the speed so overwhelming that if the IS' didn't have shields, all of them would be suffering friction burn from the wind. Subsonic or no, the speeds were just too breakneck. Not only that, each racer was trying their best to outmaneuver the rest without moving too far away. Ichika, who was the most inexperienced in IS, losing out to even Houki, learned the hard way why everyone didn't dare to move too far away. To put it simply, he couldn't break away. He had supreme confidence he could make a clean break from the pack if only he had the space but the others were really sticking it to him. No matter if he nudged left or nudged right, he would touch elbows with either Houki or Charlotte. It was nightmarish in a claustrophobic way. Add that to the highspeed induced adrenaline and Ichika found himself thinking pretty irrationally. “A chance. Just one. That's all I need!” BANG! The ground just beside Houki exploded right as she passed. It dealt no damage and shrapnel was negligible to her shield, but the blast nearly threw her off balance. Judging from the angle of the explosion, the shot came from the front. “Haha! How do you like that? My Shenlong impact engine pulse!” Ichika stared hard at the violet unit before him. The HUD of his own Infinite Stratos, Byakushiki already preoccupied with feeding precision data on his surroundings that his eyes couldn't quite follow was quick to scan the current bulky Shenlong. “So that's why it's so fast.”, Ichika barely breathed out. The past weeks, Rin had been busy working on her IS in preparation for Cannonball Fast, as per the Chinese government's instructions. But when he or any of the other girls asked about it, she just said that it was a secret. She trained on her own and compulsary class practices were done with her usual settings. Even before the race, she made sure to keep her IS secret. Now though, it was all out in the open. The current Shenlong was set with eight impact cannons, Twice the number of even the Avalanche packet used during the Gospel incident. The bulk was shocking at first sight and it would make anyone wonder if it was race worthy at all. But closer analysis would prover naysayers wrong. That thing was made to blast through the competition, whether by speed or just plain brute force. The great mass could be used to build momentum and anchor the unit during tight turns. Rounded armor ensured that impact would be elastic resulting in minimal momentum loss in case of collisions. What's more the eight impact cannons which were initially considered a liability in this competition where you can't directly attack your opponent suddenly became a strength. The principle of the impact cannon was to compress bullet of air and fire them at the opponent. But now, that compression was focused as a stream, and that stream of compressed air made for some very powerful boosters, all eight of them. About for of them had swivel joints meaning they could face other directions for instantaneous direction shifts. The greatest advantage to them was that they had not lost their capacity as weapons at all if that potshot at Houki was any indication. ------------- uh some things I really want feedback on. Top part is me trying to use those lines you see at the start of manga chapters to get the reader hyped. Tell me if it's creepy I really fell in love with that and consider it a way to give myself some inspiration and hype to write the chapter as much as a way to stimulate the reader's literary appetite Also I plan to make custom packets for the girls in this race. Check out Lingyin's and show me what you got. Last edited by demino_hellsin; 2013-09-05 at 07:09. |
2013-09-05, 07:45 | Link #45688 |
Lumine Passio
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Join Date: Jul 2013
Location: Hanoi, Vietnam
Age: 18
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Nope! I think something like DxD would be much more appropriate with Blade (although I am not a fan of the former). Just thinking of a xover fic with Hellsing, which Ichika play card with Alucard. He could learn something from that Vampir.
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2013-09-05, 08:25 | Link #45694 | ||
Big Game
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Join Date: Apr 2011
Location: Exclusively Inside Your Mind.
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Because they`re pulled by Icihika`s density magnitue x1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 0. There`s no way in hell he`ll end up with someone from his harem, no? I think it`s time to rise from the empty throne because I`m fired up again!. Quote:
One weapon is good enough for me, so I`m trying something out so...
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2013-09-05, 08:42 | Link #45696 | |
Titans Test Team Pilot
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: The Elysium
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"CANNONBALL FAST-O, REAADY~ GO!!!" Original packets, not ones that would improve one's speed in a race... at least not written into words yet. I only made an original package that is the "Aegis Package", which is an Equalizer Package meant for the Academy's security team as they are (in Athena at least) using Raphael Revive Basics. Now... onto the OC Profiles + Backstories:: Spoiler for OC5 Profile:
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Spoiler for OC6 Profile:
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2013-09-05, 09:04 | Link #45700 | |
Titans Test Team Pilot
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: The Elysium
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Granted, Inami and Tsurugi recognized each other's voices, Kirin had no idea who he is, Aries was wearing a helmet-type hypervisor and only came by because Kirin was there.
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fanfic ideas, fanfiction, ff.net, harem, is fanfic, warning fanfic spoilers, wincest |
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