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Where did you get that idea from?! Jag's no sis-con at all! *sics Jag on Aaron again* As for the character changes, I was kinda uninspired while revamping the first two profiles so they did come out abit bland. I did try to steer him away from the berserker outline and change the addiction of drugs to usage instead, and to make him a character who's defined by his desire to survive. Guess it didn't work out too well in the end. Quote:
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As for the dere-dere-dere side, Jas really isn't much of an tsundere so that will be hard to come by. I'll touch on her Hyper Happy mode instead when I can. Her future road is pretty tough though. Then again, I'm a mean creator. The more I favor an character, the nastier I'm to them. Quote:
As for the reason why the Prize favors her so much, Jec stands as an keystone in their future plans, as well as her device. (Have fun guessing. ) I can safely say her future is the next clearly developed, and somehow tying into Nanoha and Vivio in different ways. =3 I'm going ;_; at the thought of it though. Quote:
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And that's because C.C. is a wonderful image basis to draw on. Just finished the Negima manga. As said by Lowe a long time ago, Katrina and Evangeline share so many similarities it's pure >_<. Speaking of which where's Aniki. :/ Quote:
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What? That's all? Yeah cause I took half an hour to plow through replying Aaron's breaker so I'm shortchanging Tk in return. Edit: Oh yeah. Page claim for Aaron. XDD
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2008-04-27, 09:57 | Link #23942 | |
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2008-04-27, 10:09 | Link #23943 | ||
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2008-04-27, 11:00 | Link #23944 |
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Just a progress update:
Almost done with Sunset Encounter and the Episode 3 scene rewrite. Will be done when done. Next project title is confirmed as BelkaRed vs AbareHunter.
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2008-04-27, 11:33 | Link #23945 | |
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Right, not too many references...not too many... But since I have dedicated myself to being your caretaker, and if necessary your undertaker, here goes nothing: Complaint 1: A prison that keeps things in and not out...quite a pathetic prison, especially for two hyper-powered beings. Complaint 2: There seem to be, disturbingly, only 2 Kaisers. This has been touched on before, but I'll provide you a solution as well: Make Khaine's thing a more gradual process, with minor sparks here and there but no flame. After all, all conflicts seem to be puzzles and putty in the hands of characters like Kane (I know it's based on him, that's obvious. He's called Khaine, but he's really Kane with a lot more power.) Complaint 3: Somehow I'm not sure if Vivio has as much output as Vivian. Ergo, I'm not sure if Vivio can output enough power to unseal Khaine like Vivian could (need for details. WAY more.) Complaint 4: Couldn't you have been a wee bit more original? I prefer referencing more subtly, and not so much of direct grab and stash. It irritates me a little, although with time I have become tolerant enough for it not to bother me too much, although my preference is still the indirect one. Anagrams, roles? Mutter 1: Somehow given the power of your OCs, that task shouldn't be a problem Mutter 2: It wasn't a crippling, really. The TSAB were good to go in a jiffy. In fact, it wasn't too bad for damage. Only Section 6 was whacked badly, and their Navy was still pretty much intact, too. I don't see that as "crippling". That's called "minor skirmish, not much gained in the big picture." In military terms, the JS attack was of little worth in the big picture. At best, it smarted, but didn't hamstring anyone. Mutter 3: Okay, I rest my case. Go fix it if you like, and even if you don't, rest assured I will be your faithful dream catcher and death avatar for a long time yet. Yours Sincerely Xena ---------------------------------- My own brand of madness...is still cookin'. |
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2008-04-27, 12:22 | Link #23946 |
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If anything, the crippling of Bureau forces that takes place happens during the Cradle Ascent - and even then, the GF still has a good number of people deployed as canon fodder, despite how they and RF6 got pwnt in Episodes 16 and 17...
*remembers his cracked AU where the OFM intervened during the Raid on GFHQ* Nevermind.
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2008-04-27, 12:29 | Link #23947 | |
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So that's why I said Jail won the battle, but he lost the war, overall, because he was on the bad side of it anyway, not to mention because he's the BAD GUY. In shows like Nanoha, he's like Rosencrantz and Guilderstern in "(insert their names) are Dead" - already doomed to lose. Tactically speaking, though, Jail was racing against time as much as the TSAB was, imho. It's the TSAB's deus-ex-machina versus Jail's, and the TSAB has more resources, it's an uphill battle still. |
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2008-04-27, 12:47 | Link #23948 | |
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And that's not counting the rest of Cadia as well - who all, sadly, were forced to play limited roles Ironically, while the presence of the OCs would have ended up in a stronger position for the TSAB in StrikerS, if they were around in A's it'd have ended up in a Bad End. Most of the OCs would have killed the Knights - in self-defence or... aggressive self-defense - and would have Arc'ed Uminari and the book, seeing no alternative...
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2008-04-27, 12:50 | Link #23949 | |
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While in As, Reinforce Eins might have gotten killed, I swear it. Just get a diversion, and have Chief sneak up under Active Camo... *snaps fingers* you know the drill. And then...poor Kha, he wouldn't exist like we know him. And one of my OCs would be pretty heartbroken too, if an insane person could be heartbroken Aggressive Self Defence, you might as well call that a Counterattack, saves you the trouble of thinking up a euphemism |
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2008-04-27, 12:52 | Link #23950 | ||
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2008-04-27, 12:57 | Link #23951 | ||
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Just a possibly pertinent piece of pie: Don't promise too much h4xx if it'll end up hard to pull off in the end, it's not good for your health, although it's amusing to watch. It takes tactical genius, or godh4xx, to wipe the floor with a whole damn fleet. And I disagree with the term "plot device", that's not entirely doing plot devices any justice: They are the deus-ex-machina, the ultimately senseless stupidity which is a sorry excuse for a plot device, powerful to unknown and unexplored degrees. Quote:
*picks it up* *puts it on* Xena gains new rare skill: Scary White Eyes *Xena lolls his eyes, showing the whites as it rains* TOMBSTONE- *static and garbled screams. A loud slam is heard, and crunching of bone* |
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And Shou Tucker or otherwise, it's still DIE, SHOU! Mm, given certain adjustments here and there in the genetic materials, it's possible to slow down aging, but nothing to the extent suggested by Comartemis (200+ years). And by conserving certain information, it's also possible to create Vivians throughout the timeline. It's rather impossible, though, given the technology level at that time. This technology also exploits biological limits to their extremes, something which I don't think anyone would want to tamper for their King. Quote:
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You've set a standard of backlog busting no one's ever done (apart from those who did a tremendous backlog buster of 400+ pages before)! *gives Aaron Almaria, Hayate, and Hayaurion plushies (:3)* I will also attempt a stupendous backlog buster ... after this week ends. Yep, I did. Quote:
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I'm glad you like it, because I didn't expected her to grow up like this myself. I took a few spoonfuls of ideas learned from classes and observations of current children behaviors to come up with this Vivio. Leraphiel nee-chan will also be a surprise later. Quote:
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Revelation from Chrono imminent! ... In Chapter 11. Small note on the Pentateuch Archive, in any case (kind of forgotten to explain this): Spoiler for Pentateuch Archive:
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You'd notice that, in the period between Weil Clearwater's psychic calling and Vivian's death, there is a gap of 1782 years where the bloodline is no longer of the original Sankt Kaiser, be it Vivian's or Horus's. Even if we were to assume that the selected bloodline is still powerful enough an influence, that bloodline is no longer the true one, and as such cannot have an effect on Cradle activation during the Jail Scaglietti Incident later. This argument has been around, but a thousand years would have caused serious degradation of Vivian's (or Horus's) genetic structure that even any left intact would be truly a wonder. A clone of Vivio from this historical makeup is therefore not possible in the future, if the blood isolated from the Holy Shroud had undergone a total of 1848 years of decomposition. You can either fix it by introducing more royal children of Vivian (whoever the consort is, you never mentioned, and no virgin birth, thank you) that somehow one eventually managed to sit at the throne 300 years before the empire collapsed, or make it so that Khaine or Xelloss were nonexistent for the chaos and eventual extinction of bloodline. On the question of divinity, make her normal. "Actually it’s just her linker core pumping out so much energy that it’s saturating her body and slowing her cellular decay and thus her body’s aging processes" is erroneous at best, since a body that is energy saturated will have a more rapid aging process. |
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That oughta teach 'em to put some decent weapons on those flying bathtubs they call ships! Muahahahahahahaha! *EDIT* Just realized how much that sounds like a Star Wars reference.... Quote:
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Here's a new competitor for overreactions here! *waves* Quote:
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WHAT THE BLEEDIN' HELL?!!!! How could I have been so blind to this alternative route...I need to see his profile. Now where is it... Quote:
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2008-04-27, 13:16 | Link #23955 | |
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魔導師の食事 - A mage’s diet For mages, Mana in the atmosphere is linked together in an organ, the “Linker core”, and stored within their body. For quick replenishment, a balanced diet consisting of sugars, carbohydrates and proteins is essential, as are a variety of vitamins and minerals to maintain a healthy body. Therefore out of necessity, mages undergoing hard training during their early growth period eat a much larger diet compared to an ordinary person. Furthermore, pasta and other noodle-type foods are easily digested, so these types of food, known as 「Loading Foods」, are loved by many mages, since they allow for quick energy and Mana replenishment. You'd notice that Mana is generated within the Linker Core, and replenishment comes primarily from food and rest. While Vivian may not be a glutton, Mana is a form of energy that has its source from food, which exemplifies the fact that it's a form of physical energy that can be changed to power normal metabolism (law of energy conservation and the first law of thermodynamics). And such energies are consumed by the cells to do work; the more you have it, the more they work, and eventually they either become resistant or die. If Vivian has "delayed aging" simply because she's brimming with Mana, Hayate is a potential candidate for such "divine manifestation", because her mana pool is large enough (SS). Yet, Hayate is not, so your argument is invalid. And really, if Mana can be used to do everything, one wonders why there is no supra-godlike mage characters (SSS+) in entire Mid-childa. It can even be that they perish faster because of too much Mana. Last edited by PhoenixFlare; 2008-04-27 at 13:36. |
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Epic battle! Burning spirits seeking the maiden's pure heart! The epic of the month! Aurion vs Grandis, in the battle for Hayate's heart, soul and door! ^_______________^ Quote:
Nobody takes you seriously until you're at least 35 or 40 People look at you and go, "Meh, just a kid." Are you sure you want Vivian to have that happen to her, Comar? I'm also personally not keen on the name Vivian because it reminds me of my onee-chan.
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Dang. That was quite the epic Backlog Breaker. I come back from work and this is what I see? Glorious.
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Thank you everyone who responded about Noland and his spell list. Alright guys. I present to you all now an updated and modified spell list. Spoiler for Spell List Ver. 2.0:
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HELLO CADIA!!!
How's it been? Commencing Return... [Radiation Wave Arm: 100%] Be Blown Away, Backlog!!! Quote:
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HMMM.... Fascinating...think of the possibilities... Interesting...though I could have sworn I've seen that picture somewhere before... And this looks like it has potential...yet another frozen relic of the Velkan Empire...reminds me of Code Geass: Lost Colors... Quote:
Thanks Kha! Vivio Meido GETTO?! You're guessing right...and this isn't a spell list as much as it is an ability list...reminds me of the stuff for the F/SN Servants... Is Sophiarcas fluff acceptable...? I can do that... <breaks down laughing> Oh, gods! My friend, you have just inspired me to give Maid Guy a try...! This is interesting...good work so far from me...keep it up! NOTE TO ALL CADIANS: Ep. 4 currently in works - expect within 72 hours, give or take. |
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