Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[agetreme]

Edited: FOR GREAT JUSTICE!!!

Originally a post on Original Characters

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Side Story to the Oc Fic... featuring Canon Characters (Olivie, Claus ).

However the OC will not be mentioned or featured because of POV (they are technically nobodies....).

[Lycodrake]

We have an entire thread for original/fan characters. Just to let you know.

[MeisterBabylon]

I think its because of traffic that's why he posted here instead. When profiles were rife and rampant, they went there, now, the necessity of posting in the OCT just depends on how anti-original are fanfic readers in the FFT are.

Anyway, my profiles are all done so any posts I make will be in here, as fic chapters.

[Filraen]

Originally Posted by Old_Iron (Santo): Plight

The bizarre sight caused the hairy abominations to step back, giving the two humans a moment of reprieve.

While the creatures deliberated on how to proceed, the two humans chose to take the decision from them.

The difference between the two humans and the creatures would be evident to any who looked.

The vile smelling things fought in a horde, milling and pushing each other to and fro in their attempts to reach the two humans.

The two humans fought in what looked to be a coordinated dance, exchanging the lead back and forth between them.

Not only "human" is used too often to sound repetitive, its use is wrong as Signum isn't human. As for searching some replacement, I'm not sure if it's really important to note in-story Signum is a sentient/sapient human-shpaed magical program (and for all intents and purposes, a person) if the main audience are Nasuvese fans.

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by Lycodrake

We have an entire thread for original/fan characters. Just to let you know.

I know....

This is just to give a brief overview of what to expect.

To be honest, those are not even the full profile....

Edit: Will change that post to real fanfic stuff as soon as I done with planning.

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

I think its because of traffic that's why he posted here instead. When profiles were rife and rampant, they went there, now, the necessity of posting in the OCT just depends on how anti-original are fanfic readers in the FFT are.

Traffic... or rather the lack of it. I am saving my last post for the full profile...

[bhl88]

Lol on Vita, more like.

Materials/Kyrie for maximum hijinks

[Lhklan]

Originally Posted by bhl88

Lol on Vita, more like.

Materials/Kyrie for maximum hijinks

But they don't live in Yuuno's time, remember? They live in Etrian a ccouple of hundred years later (if I'm not mistaken).
... Though Yuuno trying to give the Materials The Talk is a hilarious image.

[bhl88]

Yeah I know... But in a fic, any excuse is done

[Lhklan]

GoD's divergence then? The time machine they used is broken and need a couple of years to repair, so they're living on Mid for the moment.

[bhl88]

Yeah and they can choose to live or stay

Thoth: nights of steamy and hot passion with your king...
Dearche: Shut up, you tin can! O///O
Yuuno: Shut up... Thoth... -///-

[Lhklan]

Thoth is BTF's only. I'd rather not use him.

[Rising Dragon]

About every female in existence would be grateful for that, too.

[agetreme]

Here is a personal question:

Do you believe Einhart is a clone of Claus or is she really the descendant of Claus?

If she is a Descendant of Claus.....
That will give us some interesting hindsight:

Being the Descendant of Claus means that Claus actually have children (not adopted but biological children)
> Which means that Claus actually have a wife (/mother of the children).
> However, since Claus' memory doesn't feature the said wife
> Which leads to the possible conclusion that...
> Claus doesn't love his wife at all.... as far as he is concern, her existence is only to bear his children...
> This may be due to their marriage is a political one. (things like that do happens)

From the "Wife's" point of view:
Even though your marriage is due to political reason... He is still your husband
How would you feel if your husband is being a little too friendly with another woman?

Edit:
Might have the possibility of holding Grudge against Olivie so strong that it transcend time.....

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I am going from that angle.... (since the clone backstory has been used by Vivio)

[ZeroXSEED]

Quite possibly he got married AFTER Olivie's sacrifice

Otherwise, that might actually work.

[Lhklan]

Originally Posted by agetreme

Here is a personal question:

Do you believe Einhart is a clone of Claus or is she really the descendant of Claus?

If she is a Descendant of Claus.....
That will give us some interesting hindsight:

Being the Descendant of Claus means that Claus actually have children (not adopted but biological children)
> Which means that Claus actually have a wife (/mother of the children).
> However, since Claus' memory doesn't feature the said wife
> Which leads to the possible conclusion that...
> Claus doesn't love his wife at all.... as far as he is concern, her existence is only to bear his children...
> This may be due to their marriage is a political one. (things like that do happens)

From the "Wife's" point of view:
Even though your marriage is due to political reason... He is still your husband
How would you feel if your husband is being a little too friendly with another woman?

Edit:
Might have the possibility of holding Grudge against Olivie so strong that it transcend time.....

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I am going from that angle.... (since the clone backstory has been used by Vivio)

Hmmm... So that mean that one side of the family will hold Olivie in the highest regard, while another would hate and despise her.

[Lycodrake]

Canon ViVid states that Einhart is a descendant of Claus, though.

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by Lhklan

Hmmm... So that mean that one side of the family will hold Olivie in the highest regard, while another would hate and despise her.

Exactly! Which means one of Einhart relative (or distance Relative) will do the same as Einhart(trying to perfect Kaiser Art due to Claus' blood) but with negative intention...

Extremely strong desire to win.... due to the character's motivation being fueled by envy and jealousy: wanting to be better so as to be loved.... (inherited from Claus' wife)

Edit: The Character would probably have both Claus' and his wife's(being a Belkan Royalty(if you didn't forget: transform their body into weapon...and the ability can be inherited)) ability... which make her more dangerous than Einhart.

Second Edit: Ability probably doesn't help in Marital Art? The lack of attention might be due to lack of common interest...
Moar Edit: Might have Useful Ability can result in creating powerful off-spring when combined with Claus' bloodline?

Third Edit: Probably Hate Vivio because she hog attention? Being the Clone of the Saint Kaiser.... (kind of like Clone of Jesus) and having two Well-known high-level TSAB mages as mother? The Character probably do not know that she descended from another Belkan Ruler (Due to Fragmented memory: Inherited Muscle Memory but not the actual memory)

Originally Posted by Lycodrake

Canon ViVid states that Einhart is a descendant of Claus, though.

which make my point a little more plausible

[Rising Dragon]

Claus died shortly after Olivie died, though, and given his grief at the loss of Olivie, it's highly unlikely that he got married and had a child afterwards. If anything, Claus was married and had a child before his fateful showdown with Olivie for control of the Cradle. That said, it's been remarked upon in-universe that Claus and Olivie had a sibling-like relationship with one another.

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by Rising Dragon

Claus died shortly after Olivie died, though, and given his grief at the loss of Olivie, it's highly unlikely that he got married and had a child afterwards. If anything, Claus was married and had a child before his fateful showdown with Olivie for control of the Cradle. That said, it's been remarked upon in-universe that Claus and Olivie had a sibling-like relationship with one another.

Well, it happened before Claus even meet Olivie.

Wife out of scene due to pregnancy or may be recuperating after giving birth?

As for the Sibling-like relationship..... May be she see it a little differently from others? Her spouse is spending way more time with another person after all....

Edit: And probably becoming a little obsessed about Olivie after her death....

[Rising Dragon]

Entirely plausible for the wife. Love and jealousy aren't exactly rational emotions.

That said, the way I interpreted it, what Claus wanted (or at least how Einhart's interpreting it) is the strength to protect those he loves because he failed to protect Olivie by defeating her. I.E., she's the trigger, not the goal.