Muv-Luv Franchise - FanFiction Discussion

[MrTerrorist]

Originally Posted by Wild Goose

At here. We've been repeatedly telling him he needs to stop and understand the setting first, then continue.

...he actually asked, in innocent ignorance, if it were possible for silicon-based life to exist in the world of Muv-Luv.

Oh God. He's so........ i can't find the word to describe him. The more i read his message the more i wanted to facepalm.

At least he posted a part of the 2nd chapter of Eishi Zero.

Also a new fanfic, Muv-Luv Alternative: Black Sun is out.

[Alastor Mobius Toth]

Originally Posted by Wild Goose

... Somebody has been playing Dead Space 3, amirite?

*continues being genderbent and molested*

/Goose too kinky to torture.

Errr, no actually. I'm just somewhat-versed in Warhammer 40k lore and have a natural propensity for mental abuse.

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Well, those problems happen when people don't know source material. Still, it could always be worse. Nothing that we can't fix, as long as one's willing to learn.


Also;
http://www.fanfiction.net/topic/1293...-Hand#83871813

Be kind, chip in.

[Wild Goose]

Still working on it. Still juggling work and Comet.

And no, not too kinky to torture, just that I have brief moments of lucidity before I slip back into being tortured.

Am needing to do a bit of a rewrite because Yuuya was not sufficiently badass for [REDACTED] in regard to his actions at [REDACTED] during the assault on the Maryland Hive/DC Hive (Technically, it actually landed in Maryland, but everyone calls it the D.C. Hive), as well as paperwork issues regarding [REDACTED].

I can confirm that Yuuya has been awarded the Silver Star for his actions in the Prologue.

Furthermore, [REDACTED] was awarded [REDACTED] due to [REDACTED] during the mission to [REDACTED].

...Jesus, this looks like the SCP wiki.

[Alastor Mobius Toth]

We all know Yuuya was badass; I needed to show other people too!

Bishop for example. At least until [REDACTED] happened. And then [REDACTED] Alice. And before you ask - yes I had perverse fun in going into detail of what happened there.

Honor Harrington books were...strongly inspiring in that.

But yeah, you're free to alter it a bit, if it helps the story overall.

[wavehawk]

Originally Posted by Wild Goose

(Technically, it actually landed in Maryland, but everyone calls it the D.C. Hive)

- ...because Capitol Hill always has to have everything...

[Wild Goose]

Originally Posted by Alastor Mobius Toth

We all know Yuuya was badass; I needed to show other people too!

Bishop for example. At least until [REDACTED] happened. And then [REDACTED] Alice. And before you ask - yes I had perverse fun in going into detail of what happened there.

Honor Harrington books were...strongly inspiring in that.

But yeah, you're free to alter it a bit, if it helps the story overall.

Thanks, although of course I'll send it back to you for final edit. That's how the Carpe Fulgar guys did Recettear - one guy translated, the other guy edited, then they reedited their stuff and inserted Capitalism ho!

XD

Originally Posted by wavehawk

- ...because Capitol Hill always has to have everything...

Lol, yeah, pretty much. Also sorry I didn't say this earlier - liked your snip, even if it was pretty disturbing. XD

[MrTerrorist]

What's the ETA for MuvLuv Comet?

[maxxus0923]

Kinda new on this...

But... oh well...

I think I despaired enough when marimo died... i don't think I can handle it if Any others would follow... Seriously... Alternative has way tooooo much despair that I cant even start reading anymore, and to be honest I was kinda mad at takeru for being bratty I should say, but I do understand him, he was raised in a peaceful environment so his reaction are acceptable but that was just damn! especially when he 'Friendzoned' Meiya, I don't think even I can do that no matter how much I detest being with 3d Girls.


Oh well...


I was thinking of a Cross over between NarutoxMuvLuv Alternative Total Eclipse, something along the lines of 'The Strongest Child Soldier of Asia' (Sounds Sousuke Sagara Right?)

No! Not a dimension Jumper Naruto but rather a semi Immortal Naruto if you know what I mean. I won't go into details here why he is an immortal but It involves sleeping alot.

Anyway there are three scenarios that I am thinking of.

1. Private Military Research Test Pilot
2. Royal Guard
3. Imperial Guard (Foot Soldier)

1.Test pilot-he is a test pilot not because he is the best at piloting or He can push his machine to the limits but because he can survive if anything goes wrong. he also doubles as Mercenary if the need arises. He is a pilot for Boening/Northrock

2.Royal Guard- Originally conscripted for IJM however after a (Staggering) TSF Simulation performance he was quickly transferred to the royal guards. Later on He was chosen pilot of one of the 2 Prototypes of Takemikazuchi, the Type-00X/S. A pilot killing TSF.

3. Imperial Guard- Well... real men fights up close and personal! TSF are for pussies! the true embodiment of the worlds strongest man(Sekai no Saikyou no Otoko). And they eat BETAs for breakfast! 'Death to all who oppose the Shogun!'

Another crossover I think is Girls Und Panzer x MuvLuv
What if they were using TSFs rather than tanks?
What if they are living the practice of Eishi-do(Guardian Arts) rather than Sensha-do(Tanking Arts)

I think this will be a good cross over, just don't send the girls back to MLA verse. I'd rather not see or read them despairing the same thing I had experienced or worse a lunch for a tank class.


There's also a passing ISxML on my mind where Ichika went missing with Silver Gospel after the conclusion of the anime.

And we will probably replace the cast... with IS characters... maybe... But yeah it would be an enticing project to do


There's as well another Idea running on my mind about an 'Esper' Takeru. Yes! An Esper Takeru! but how? To tell you honestly I haven't even got past Dec 14 on VN so I won't be so stupid to write it fully but I just cant stop the idea from coming out and I have to write it out.

Spoiler for Idea:

Have you ever tried an Esper Takeru? No... not the typical ESP mind reading and telekinetic type... A very different Esper Takeru. Developed from more than a million times of repeating 'Failed'(Where someone important to him died) loops he has long buried his emotion in exchange of his buried emotions he has gained a varying Esper ability that allows him to summon things by will. He discovered his ability after his 1 millionth loop.

Esper Takeru has special Esper ability called 'Materialization of Will'. He can materialize any non living things as long as he understands the concept of it. For example he can summon swords at will and make them levitate in the air so as long as he understand the concept of sword or swords for that matter so as long as he understands the concept behind the sword. The more complex the thing is the harder for him to materialize it on the world. He must first understand its concept or at least he knew it personally before he can summon it to the world. However due to 'The Law' all of his Materialized things can only exist for a certain time before 'The Law' breaks them apart or at least slowly fades away. It is because 'The Law' sees those things as 'inconsistencies' and proceeds to 'Erase' their existence. Depending on how complex their 'Concept' is or how it is 'Attached' to Takeru's existence, it will take much more time for it to be 'Erased' by 'The Law' due to the 'binding concept' behind it. For example, the Santa Rabbit that Takeru had, if he decided to Materialize another one of it, The 'Concept' behind the object is reinforced due to the 'Concept' of its construction and Takeru's attachment to it or at least attached to his history from his 'Million Loop'. Another thing to make his Materialize things to last is if he understood it completely, for example if he knows M9 to an extent like a gunsmith, he will be able to manifest it longer than other guns since he understood it completely.

Skills:

Royal Arsenal- By understanding the concept of many TSF weapons and various weapons he had encountered during his 'Million Loop' he has the capability to summon those at will at any quantity he likes. Notably he doesn't have any trouble summoning his Fubuki or his Takemikazuchi that he had used during his loops however it is very straining to a point that he can only materialize one at a time. He can also modify his 'Materialized Will' like a human size Type-74 PB Blade where it is typically TSF size and use. He can also materialize defensive equipments at any quantity and modify it in anyway he likes. He can't summon G-Bombs.
Skill Patterns:
King's Battery
Blue Gate
Infinite Salvo

Takeru: Do you have enough guns? (Lacking Emotion)

Rebels: We have 10 wings of TSF!

Takeru: Good, But I'm afraid that this would be too much of an overkill

*Takeru then summons several Siege Ion Blasters, 3500mm Artilleries, 2200mm Railguns, Orbital Cannons, thousand more TSF Assault Cannons of varying type, Battleship Main Batteries, a thousand more missile containers and a human size Type-74 PB Blade on his hand.

Takeru: Lets get this party started shall we?

Needless to say it was onesided fight.

Royal Banquet-?? Involves his 'Materialized Despair'

*In the middle of Cheorwon Hive

Takeru: Let me make you all realize my despair.

Only a mushroom cloud was seen on the horizon

The start of the story would be above Yukon base.

Yes! Just Above Yukon Base!

While normally he would return back to October 22, this time something has gone wrong, very very wrong... he started the loop one month earlier by September 21, the day of RLF assault.

Something had gone wrong already when he keeps repeating the loops even if Sumika is already dead, so what more could have gone more wrong?

I wrote it already including a 4th Gen. TSF that he got from his past loops which he continually used even after.

I was thinking of posting it or not. >,<

Here's a tidbit

Spoiler for Tidbit:

Quickly, I had the TSF grab me carefully and opened its cockpit hatch. The TSF immediately reached out to me protectively as it brings me closer to the cockpit. As soon as I was inside the . I immediately started up the AT Field the moment I saw the Laser Irradiation warning on my screen. I immediately had my TSF descend fast. It won’t do me good if anyone see my TSF is able to defend from a Lux-class’s Laser with AT Field. I immediately looked below me at the struggling Terminator from its F-16 pursuers. It seems that the pilot is good at dodging but the question is how long can the pilot last.

For a second I stopped and think of what I will do now.

Will I help the SU-37?

or

Will I just ignore it?

Even though I lock up all my emotions I still think of helping others. But when I thought of how will it affect the future I immediately decided that I would leave the Terminator to its fate.

‘KYAAAAAA’

A scream of young girl resounded on my head as I was about to go separate ways from the battle. An esper resonance I noticed. I saw a white haired girl in my mind as she screamed for help. I remembered Yashiro from her. Before I knew I changed my mind

Screw leaving!

I’m helping that girl out!

Screw my lolicon tendencies!!!

I immediately deployed my Rail Cannon loaded with 36mm Thorium charge in the same manner as a PB Blade was deployed from the back of a TSF. I aimed it immediately to the pursuing F-16s... I deployed the Gun-module in my cockpit at the same time and I held it in a sniper like manner as I held it in my hands. I activated the radio and set it to open channel.

“You owe me one for this pilot of Terminator.” I said in a dull manner.

I lined up the Rail Cannon to the leading F-16s, their movement is too much shallow, easily predictable, sloppy and simple. I realized that these are only Slaves, an AI operated remotely controlled TSF or maybe they’re newbies in piloting TSF. I guess there’s no need for me to hold back. The distance between me and my targets is 24 kilometers. An ordinary TSF will need to close in 8 kilometers just to snipe its target. But not me, nor my steed. Wind speed, Wind direction, gravity, rotation of earth, barometric pressure, humidity and target movement prediction were automatically processed by Pseudo 00-unit for more accurate precise shots while I was busy lining up my targets.

“Swerve to the right”

I said to the girl in open channel who immediately swerved to the right. This allowed me to get a clear shot on the lead F-16. I fired my first shot. A gray light was released from my rail cannon and hit the lead F-16 dead on in the cockpit.

It disintegrated into million scrap pieces and exploded after.

Such was the power of Rail Cannon with hybrid charge. Designed to punch through Barrier type BETA in one shot.

Just the way I like it.

Another streak of gray lights hit other 8 F-16s and shared the same fate as their lead flight

Disintegrated into million pieces due to the Thorium atoms suspended plasma state from a Thorium Charge.

The remaining F-16s were visibly change their movement as they wonder what happened. What took out most of their numbers.

All of that happened in 10 seconds

3 more left.

I decided to take things in a much ‘closer’ approach.

I descended rapidly and remounted the Rail cannon on my back pylons.

I deployed the Beam scythe after that while covering the distance between me and my targets in only a span of 10 seconds, such was the acceleration of my steed.

While the remaining F-16s were looking for the culprit of their sudden decrease in numbers, my TSF descended sneakily on their back.

Without saying anything, the beam on the beam scythe flared pink as I raised it in a menacing manner at the back of the hostile TSF without it knowing.

The beam scythe cleaved through the F-16 like a hot knife through butter. It cut through super carbon like nothing.

Without stopping or looking on my kill I immediately closed in on the nearest F-16 who is just above the ridge. Just like the last one, the F-16 was cleaved perfectly in half vertically without any issues. Without any resistance.

The other F-16 attempted to backstab me but it was futile as before it can ever pull the trigger of its assault cannon I was already in front of him with the Beam scythe raised.

I unconsciously licked my lips in anticipation.

My eyes unconsciously glowed eerily red then it reverted back to its brown state.

With trillion of hours of piloting experience.

I cleaved the right arm of the F-16.

Then I cleaved both of its legs with precision akin to an experienced butcher

I cleaved its left arms after I was done with the legs.

Then I severed the head from its neck.

I then proceed to cleave it in half viciously.

It exploded in a magnificent manner. Fabulously if put into words in a European manner.

It all happened in 1 second.

“Terminator, are you all right?”

I had my TSF fly beside the Terminator. It seems that the pilot is still not out of her stupor.

“Why won’t you let them kill me?”

The pilot replied. It seems my earlier hunch was right, she is a young girl. If I am right she is an esper if the earlier mental resonance is an indicator. I wonder when did the world become so screwed that they started to send young people to the battlefield.

“Do you need a reason to save people?”

I replied in a dull manner. She didn’t answer my question.

“Guessed as much. Come on, I’m going to escort you. Lead the way.”

I said to her in the same manner I did earlier.

“Hai!”

She then flew away towards whatever direction she had in mind and I just followed her.

Meanwhile, as we left our previous location, we hadn’t noticed 4 F-22 EMD Raptors recording the whole engagement.

I don’t know why but i’m feeling that UN and America will be screwing me hard in this loop. Not to mention Japan whom my TSF has disntinct look form its latest generation TSF.

By the way here is the Specs of Type-00X/S

Not really an original but a revamped Takemikazuchi on steroids

Spoiler for Type-00X/S Super Takemikazuchi:

Type-00X/S Super Takemikazuchi

3.5th Generation Tactical Surface Fighter

Manufacturer: Empire of Japan

Operators: Royal Guard, ANBU(Independent Special Tactics Squad)

Role: Close Combat Anti-Beta Anti-TSF Fighter

Initial Operation: Battle of Kyoto

Known Pilot(s): Naruto Uzumaki

Color Theme: Black

Power Plant: Experimental Ultracompact Nuclear Reactor, Battery

Height: 19.4 Meters

Armor: Super Carbon Film Plates

Engine: 6x FHI-227 (2 on Hips, 4 on back)

Armaments: Type-87 Support/ Assault Cannon Type-74 PB Blade Type-75X Revolving Brake Sword Type-81X Rail Rifle Cannon Type-92 Supplemental Armor Type-00X Close Combat Oscillation Dagger Type-83X Box Shot Cannon

Special Features: Muscle Framing System, Panoramic View Cockpit, A1 OS, Slave Drive

This unit is the 'Big Bad Brother' of all Type-00 Takemikazuchi except to its sister unit Type-00XR which was also made the same time with the Type-00X/S. Meant to replace the aging Kai Zuikaku of the Royal Guards, intended to be piloted by Elites of the Elites of the Royal Guards can offer, Type-00X/S is by far the strongest single TSF that Imperial Japan can field and their stairway in making a 4th Generation TSF, The Akatsuki and Shinkirou. Only one unit was made due to Man-Machine Limitations not capable of withstanding its overwhelming power of Type-00X/S and specially very high manufacturing and maintenance costs almost triple with Type-00R. With heavy emphasis on close quarters combat, superior maneuverability and superior acceleration than its sister unit Type-00XR. It is very famous for killing its pilots for its acceleration alone due to SIX engines installed on it, if the acceleration doesn't kill the pilot then the stress that the panoramic view cockpit shows would do as well as the A1 OS if their reaction time is slow. No one in current generation of TSFs can stop this monster of a machine disregarding the fact that no one can pilot it, literally no ordinary human can pilot such monster of machine, and as befitting as close quarters unit, a highly resilient machine. Type-00X/S together with its sister unit Type-00XR had its frame weaponized for high speed combat.

Notably the Type-XS has larger back unit than Type-XR to house additional 2 mount pylons, 4 FHI-227 engines attached in pairs in a wing like manner and the experimental ultracompact nuclear reactor. It also has distinguishing Red light opposed to all Takemikazuchi's Yellow or Blue. All later versions of Type-00 Takemikazuchi is based mostly on Type-XR but its frame construction and structural design is based on Type-XS due to its formidable durability and resilience than Type-XR.

[John117xCortana]

YES! ANOTHER GLORIOUS UPDATE FROM PAUL!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7112821/72/

The Cerberus cast make their appearance. And Yuuko's sister is trying to steal Takeru for her own schemes.

[tsunade666]

though it looks like there are only 2 cerberus member that shows up. And here I was hoping to see the 3 girls. By major is present.

It looks like sensei is planning something for the russian girl and they are surely messing up with psychic development too much. They would probably ended up turning those young eishi into vegetables.

[wavehawk]

Take five from writing Muv-Luv fic (Which is ver very dark) and off writing a more humorous fic.

...while drunk. very, very, very much drunk.

[maxxus0923]

writing while drunk... Good stuffs coming out of your head!

[wavehawk]

Originally Posted by maxxus0923

writing while drunk... Good stuffs coming out of your head!

- Not for Muvluv, tho. Wrote somthing for InfinitStratos, may wanna check it out.

[John117xCortana]

It's funny. Usually it's the women who gets a crush on Takeru. Now Takeru has a crush on another woman. How old is Sigel ?

[Alastor Mobius Toth]

To answer about Comet:


It'll be done, when it's done.
That's all that I will say about it.


Meanwhile, since we're reaching the true plot, it's time for side-stories!

Or rather, a prequel shot for the Comet. It's suitably WTF-provoking, I think.
Was too inspired by Ground Zeroes trailer to let go, and it fits with the true story of the Comet that will unfold.

So, while you're waiting, have some of this.

Spoiler for Aurora Borealis:

Muv-Luv Comet: Aurora Borealis

“From the Alternative, two specters were born: Those who wished to save the world no matter the cost; and those who would see it move forward, no matter the cost.”

The snow whipped mercilessly around them, as the heavily armed soldiers made their way across the camp. Dogs howled in the background, while Soviet troops made way for the arrivals. Twin flags: the Red & Gold of the USSR with Black & Blue of the U.N flew somewhere behind them.

The group stopped before a small barrack, tightly guarded by soldiers. They were all clad in standard Soviet winter gear. But that was where similarities ended. Their uniforms underneath the ballistic vests were clear white-and-blue, while their armaments were composed mostly of modified FN FALs. Some also carried the Czech Skorpion submachine guns. All bore Colt Single Action Army revolvers. Their eyes were covered by black glass-like plate that extended from their helmets; black balaclavas covered their faces.

Except for her.

Long, purple hair, tied into elaborate bun gently flew in the wind, past the white fur collar, as in defiance of the wind. Her posture was determined, like that of veteran soldier or an agent.

The trooper before the door cocked his rifle, before putting his hand on the doorknob. He took only a single glace at the woman to confirm that she was ready, before swinging the door open.

…

The single girl did not move from her spartan chair. The simplistic, tattered coat clung around her frail, unnaturally pale body. Her once-vibrant silver-violet eyes were now dull, her lips dry. A pair of almost ancient iron handcuffs hung around her legs, tied to a block of cement. The entire room stank of sweat, fear and urine.

The girl did not look up, nor did she try to run. There was no point anymore. No point in being defiant. No point in being afraid.

There was nothing left after all.

“They've told us everything.” The woman's Russian was flawless. “It matched your story, and that of your brother. No need to worry. They didn't suffer. At least, compared to what your folks would have done to them.”

The girl said nothing...but the small amount of tension in her muscles seemed to evaporate.

“There's no need to be ashamed of this. You've done what you did to survive.”

The woman reached to her pocket and pulled out something. It was an old cassette player – the height of technological consumer electronics before Soviet Union almost ceased to exist.

“Here. Consider it a graduation present. You're a real Human now, Cryska.”

The woman swiftly threw the object at the girl, who was just barely able to catch it. The woman just smiled, as she turned on her heel.

“Tell Sandek, I said Hi”

The soldiers closed the doors behind her.
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The ride to the site was uneventful. Hind-Ds flew above them, as the teams scrambled; groups of Surface Pilots in their reinforced armors made their way to the stationed TSFs – mostly MiG-27 and Su-27s. There were no markings on those crafts, no numbers or flags.

The group disembarked before the last couple of Hinds, their rotors slowly moving as the pilots begun to warm up the engines. The runway was clear, the wind still cold.

The woman made her way towards the craft. A single soldier matched up to her pace, and handed her a device – a box that looked like a cross between a UV-lamp and a tool box.

She stopped before the crafts tail. In bold black lettering, a single phrase was etched onto the otherwise white Hind.

ALT

With a swipe of hand, a flash of the light, the lettering melted into nothing.

The soldiers wordlessly took the hint and begun to rip off the emblems attached to their shoulder. A round plaque, with stylized winged woman, holding a downward-pointing sword.

A single phrase ran underneath and above.

A-00

Phantasm

The soldiers tossed the plagues into a nearby cylinder that also served as an impromptu fireplace. The woman handed back the strange device, before turning to her troops. Her purple hair flowed with her, her ruby eyes bore into their faceless heads.

“Our Dagger was smuggled and is poised to strike. The operation to terminate Alternative III is now a go.”

The soldiers saluted her, before beginning to fill into the Hinds. The woman glanced across the base one more time, as the nearby TSFs begun to ascend.

Wordlessly, she walked after her soldiers, and soon after the Hinds majestically took off, and nothing remained to point that these men were ever at this place.

[Wild Goose]

Spoiler for OMFG:

...OMFG Beatrix sabotaged Alt III? @___@

[maxxus0923]

I am seeing blood here... specially with meiya...

Bloodbath anyone?

[wavehawk]

Originally Posted by Wild Goose

Spoiler for OMFG:

...OMFG Beatrix sabotaged Alt III? @___@

Spoiler:

Sounds like the kind of thing she'd do, actually...

[MrTerrorist]

Muv Luv: DYRL -Snippet Collection-

[maxxus0923]

question how would an IS do against BETA horde, specifically Silver Gospel(second Shift) and Byakushiki Setsura(2nd Shift) and how will they fair against TSF?


Things to be considered
1.To point out, IS are considered super weapons while TSFs are not. I think you know why. No conventional weapons does work against an IS.
2.Byakushiki's Reiraku Byakuya and Shield Mode is effective against optical/energy based weaponry. It nullifies energy nuff said.
3. Silver Gospel's main weapon 'Silver Bell'(Laser Grenades) is very effective for large area bombardment/supression.
4. IS Shield can at least take off brunt of laser attacks.
5. IS provides 360 degrees of vision due to hypersensors


Also how would a Zoid for example Deathsaurer would fair against BETA horde?