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Rinvelt · 2017-09-18, 02:44

Chapters from Papa Sou POV finished! Next is about a mysterious Oni rampaging in another country!

wuhugm · 2017-09-18, 02:56

^Mysterious Oni, huh?

Ittai Dare Nandaa?

CNine · 2017-09-18, 08:31

I'm a bit confused in how to translate the title chapter of first 10 chapter. Is it "regarding my ………" or "about my………"? But, somehow it doesn't fit

Rinvelt · 2017-09-18, 08:49

^ "Concerning..."?

Like: Chapter 1 - Concerning How My Father is The Worst
Chapter 2 - Concerning How My Son is The Best

etc...

CNine · 2017-09-18, 09:23

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rinvelt

^ "Concerning..."?

Like: Chapter 1 - Concerning How My Father is The Worst
Chapter 2 - Concerning How My Son is The Best

etc...

That's it！！！！！！！！

CNine · 2017-09-21, 16:52

Help, me Toraemon!!!
そう自分を必死に納得させようとするが、たとえ仮想世界であろうとも味方を――それも親友に誤射をしたというどうしようもない事実が俺の心を爪を立て掻き毟る

Rinvelt · 2017-09-23, 18:37

^Sorry, was kinda busy. If you still need help:

Quote:

I desperately tried to make myself understand that but, even if it was in a virtual world, the undeniable truth that I accidentally shot an ally, what's more my best friend, felt like a nail was thrust in my heart.

Changed a few words but I think it's fine. Also, next time you need help, give the lines before it. Already read the novel so I can find where the line was, but it'd be quicker if you gave them.

wuhugm · 2017-09-23, 22:29

^What he said

CNine · 2017-09-27, 17:12

^^Help, this words is confusing. is this means he's shooting blablabla or shooting blablabla which involved with double bulletX2.

そりゃそうだろ、同時に撃ってんだから。
2挺拳銃を持ってるのにわざわざ交互に撃つなんて非効率な真似する訳ないだろ？

Rinvelt · 2017-09-27, 18:05

^You still forgot to post the context... Anyway:

"Of course you would, I shot them at the same time after all. I got two guns, why would I go out of my way to do something as inefficient as using them separately?"

CNine · 2017-10-09, 17:37

Help again for confirmation :
Act 1 [Okinawa Disembarkation Act]
第1章オキナワ上陸編

Chapter 11　[【Good news】My Family, I Can Have Real Friend]
11話　【朗報】俺氏、リアフレが出来る

Is my translation version correct, I get a bit of confusion to how to translate the chapter but it should be around that by the content of the chapter?

Rinvelt · 2017-10-09, 18:07

^https://detail.chiebukuro.yahoo.co.j...l/q13116527733

It's a first person pronoun coming from 2chan, but in English you would need to tweak it a little, so perhaps: Chapter 11 - 【Good news】 Hey, I Can Make Real Friends

Same for all the other titles of this volume, start with "Hey".

But wuhugm might have a better idea.

wuhugm · 2017-10-09, 19:51

^My humble self, can make a real friend

CNine · 2017-10-09, 22:13

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rinvelt

^https://detail.chiebukuro.yahoo.co.j...l/q13116527733

It's a first person pronoun coming from 2chan, but in English you would need to tweak it a little, so perhaps: Chapter 11 - 【Good news】 Hey, I Can Make Real Friends

Same for all the other titles of this volume, start with "Hey".

But wuhugm might have a better idea.

Quote:

Originally Posted by wuhugm

^My humble self, can make a real friend

Wow, thank you for the fast reply.
wuhugm version is the correct one but, Rinvelt version sound more like So[in his inner voice]

Rinvelt · 2017-10-10, 04:33

^Actually, 'Hey' doesn't go well with the other titles. But 'My humble self' is too much. It's just a meme, so it's like a normal pronoun, not a humble one, so it's difficult to transcribe in English...

So worst case, you can just remove it, as in the end it's just a reference to Japanese BBS (2chan), so it's not like people who read translations would understand.

Ruki0089 · 2017-10-10, 05:52

Quote:

Originally Posted by wuhugm

^My humble self, can make a real friend

.....you didn't have friends in real life??

Edit... Sorry, my bad... you talking about translation...

CNine · 2017-10-10, 07:37

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rinvelt

^Actually, 'Hey' doesn't go well with the other titles. But 'My humble self' is too much. It's just a meme, so it's like a normal pronoun, not a humble one, so it's difficult to transcribe in English...

So worst case, you can just remove it, as in the end it's just a reference to Japanese BBS (2chan), so it's not like people who read translations would understand.

Yeah, many title are like this, and I have to try different approach for the next one.
"My humble self" most likely unsuited since So's using "ore", it's sound better if he's using "oresama" instead.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ruki0089

.....you didn't have friends in real life??

Edit... Sorry, my bad... you talking about translation...

He have many friends in the internet

This been in my mind but, is So actually popular amongst girls?［both RL and VR? Seeing that Shinji can use envy/entranced Look on his surrounding to find So］

Rinvelt · 2017-10-10, 07:54

^First, please use Sou.

Also, like I said, it's a meme, nothing to do with what pronoun you use. So the best action would be either to find a 4chan equivalent, or nothing.

Sou is an ikemen. IRL there are rumors about him and he's blond, so DQN looking. In the game they just see an ikemen, so he's more popular in the game.

wuhugm · 2017-10-10, 08:37

Please use Sou

^^xx-shi is how weaboos call each other
ore-sama is of completely different meaning and nuance
There's not really english equivalent of that, I just pick the closest think I could think of

Yea, Sou is an Ikemen
But in real world people are afraid of him as well so his popularity offsetted

CNine · 2017-10-10, 10:05

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rinvelt

^First, please use Sou.

Also, like I said, it's a meme, nothing to do with what pronoun you use. So the best action would be either to find a 4chan equivalent, or nothing.

Sou is an ikemen. IRL there are rumors about him and he's blond, so DQN looking. In the game they just see an ikemen, so he's more popular in the game.

He's popular in RL too, till people learning about the rumor about him, that is.

Quote:

Originally Posted by wuhugm

Please use Sou

^^xx-shi is how weaboos call each other
ore-sama is of completely different meaning and nuance
There's not really english equivalent of that, I just pick the closest think I could think of

Yea, Sou is an Ikemen
But in real world people are afraid of him as well so his popularity offsetted

I just imagining Sou using "Ore-sama"........... It should be fit beter to papa.

Damn, so many change from so to Sou. I should use Sou since the beginning

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wuhugm Confused Shark Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Atlantis	Please use Sou ^^xx-shi is how weaboos call each other ore-sama is of completely different meaning and nuance There's not really english equivalent of that, I just pick the closest think I could think of Yea, Sou is an Ikemen But in real world people are afraid of him as well so his popularity offsetted __________________ ------------------------------------------ [SPOILER] Manga, Anime, & LN Where The Girl MC Ended Up With Is Not The Main Heroine All My Threads

2017-09-18, 02:44	Link #81
Rinvelt 駄目人間 Join Date: Jul 2016 Location: France	Chapters from Papa Sou POV finished! Next is about a mysterious Oni rampaging in another country!

2017-09-18, 08:31	Link #83
CNine Inactive Member Join Date: Jan 2012	I'm a bit confused in how to translate the title chapter of first 10 chapter. Is it "regarding my ………" or "about my………"? But, somehow it doesn't fit

2017-09-18, 08:49	Link #84
Rinvelt 駄目人間 Join Date: Jul 2016 Location: France	^ "Concerning..."? Like: Chapter 1 - Concerning How My Father is The Worst Chapter 2 - Concerning How My Son is The Best etc...

2017-09-21, 16:52	Link #86
CNine Inactive Member Join Date: Jan 2012	Help, me Toraemon!!! そう自分を必死に納得させようとするが、たとえ仮想世界であろうとも味方を――それも親友に誤射をしたというどうしようもない事実が俺の心を爪を立て掻き毟る

2017-09-27, 17:12	Link #89
CNine Inactive Member Join Date: Jan 2012	^^Help, this words is confusing. is this means he's shooting blablabla or shooting blablabla which involved with double bulletX2. そりゃそうだろ、同時に撃ってんだから。 2挺拳銃を持ってるのにわざわざ交互に撃つなんて非効率な真似する訳ないだろ？

2017-09-27, 18:05	Link #90
Rinvelt 駄目人間 Join Date: Jul 2016 Location: France	^You still forgot to post the context... Anyway: "Of course you would, I shot them at the same time after all. I got two guns, why would I go out of my way to do something as inefficient as using them separately?"

2017-10-09, 17:37	Link #91
CNine Inactive Member Join Date: Jan 2012	Help again for confirmation : Act 1 [Okinawa Disembarkation Act] 第1章オキナワ上陸編 Chapter 11　[【Good news】My Family, I Can Have Real Friend] 11話　【朗報】俺氏、リアフレが出来る Is my translation version correct, I get a bit of confusion to how to translate the chapter but it should be around that by the content of the chapter?

2017-10-09, 18:07	Link #92
Rinvelt 駄目人間 Join Date: Jul 2016 Location: France	^https://detail.chiebukuro.yahoo.co.j...l/q13116527733 It's a first person pronoun coming from 2chan, but in English you would need to tweak it a little, so perhaps: Chapter 11 - 【Good news】 Hey, I Can Make Real Friends Same for all the other titles of this volume, start with "Hey". But wuhugm might have a better idea.

2017-10-10, 04:33	Link #95
Rinvelt 駄目人間 Join Date: Jul 2016 Location: France	^Actually, 'Hey' doesn't go well with the other titles. But 'My humble self' is too much. It's just a meme, so it's like a normal pronoun, not a humble one, so it's difficult to transcribe in English... So worst case, you can just remove it, as in the end it's just a reference to Japanese BBS (2chan), so it's not like people who read translations would understand.

2017-10-10, 07:54	Link #98
Rinvelt 駄目人間 Join Date: Jul 2016 Location: France	^First, please use Sou. Also, like I said, it's a meme, nothing to do with what pronoun you use. So the best action would be either to find a 4chan equivalent, or nothing. Sou is an ikemen. IRL there are rumors about him and he's blond, so DQN looking. In the game they just see an ikemen, so he's more popular in the game.