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blitz1/2 · 2011-10-15, 10:34

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Originally Posted by agetreme

Trust me, she has more character developement than Ichika because she has a darker past than Ichika.

She live under her sister shadow
Inspire to be like her (aloof cool woman who is always in top form)
But she end up being a loner
Being bullied by other girls and end up being a hikikomori.

If the bullying can make somebody turn into a hikikomori, you don't even need to imagine how serious it is.

Lol, so she's like Jun Sakurada from RM.

I think ALL of our Ichikas are practically more developed than the canon Ichika.

That's why our stories are the FUTURE OF INFINITE STRATOS!!

Eratas123 · 2011-10-15, 10:41

@ Agetreme- Sweet! Hikikomoris are always fun to prtraty in stories.

@ StratoSpear- How goes the fight scene? And how will his childhood friend react to seeing him in a state of crossdress?

By the way, to anyone who's interested I'm gonna do an epilogue of sorts like this for SWC.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q9VW9KVj0jo

Might even do a kings game after this one.

StratoSpear · 2011-10-15, 11:25

Not sure if this is too long

But here's what I chalked up for Inami, it continues from the part where he jumps out of the classroom window.

Spoiler for Scene:

agetreme · 2011-10-15, 11:55

Spoiler for Prologue?:

blitz1/2 · 2011-10-15, 12:45

Just to ask you guys, for Red Rain, should I turn it into something like a visual novel format? AKA I will list out several choices for you guys to pick, and continue it from there, or just a single path storyline?

DarkJak2050 · 2011-10-15, 13:33

If there's one thing I noticed on Fanfic.net, it's that IS: Secrets the Fire has Revealed is gone.

Spoiler for Silverback combat armor:

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-15, 18:06

Quote:

Originally Posted by agetreme

Trust me, she has more character developement than Ichika because she has a darker past than Ichika.

She live under her sister shadow
Inspire to be like her (aloof cool woman who is always in top form)
But she end up being a loner
Being bullied by other girls and end up being a hikikomori.

If the bullying can make somebody turn into a hikikomori, you don't even need to imagine how serious it is.

Ummm....

Madoka from Sacred Twins? (well, she's practically female-half of Ichika anyway) except for point 4.... and that BECAUSE she still had her (beloved) brother Ichika...

Without Ichika she'll fall into despair, and being Hikkikomori isn't that far fetched..

Quote:

Originally Posted by DarkJak2050

If there's one thing I noticed on Fanfic.net, it's that IS: Secrets the Fire has Revealed is gone.

Spoiler for Silverback combat armor:

LOL so Silverback is the name of their armor huh? NICE!

Quote:

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

Just to ask you guys, for Red Rain, should I turn it into something like a visual novel format? AKA I will list out several choices for you guys to pick, and continue it from there, or just a single path storyline?

You mean Choose-your-Adventure type? Interesting, but doing it would take a lot of time (and you have to type 3 times faster).

DarkJak2050 · 2011-10-15, 18:14

Yeah, and that hences the name of my FanFic. And if you guys got any feedback or reviews, I'd appreciate that you post them on Fanfic.net, okay?

Eratas123 · 2011-10-15, 18:35

@Jak- As I said don't worry about reviews, all of us here read each others stories so you'll always have our support.

@Stratos- I'll add it later, thanks a bunch!

@Zero- Maximillians chapter has been written and it's on the previous page, please read and review if you can.

DarkJak2050 · 2011-10-15, 18:43

What I'm more concerned right not are about those guys on the run. And if I can write Ch. 4 for Project Silverback.

Although, I have to say; you should post it on Fanfic.net, just make a few notes about the guys and what Fanfic the came from and you should be good.

Eratas123 · 2011-10-15, 18:52

Quote:

Originally Posted by DarkJak2050

What I'm more concerned right not are about those guys on the run. And if I can write Ch. 4 for Project Silverback.

Although, I have to say; you should post it on Fanfic.net, just make a few notes about the guys and what Fanfic the came from and you should be good.

Good luck writing ch. 4 of PS, we're here if you need help.

I'm not sure if I should. This story does have spoilers such as the fact that Irish will go to IS academy and Maximillian will be involved with Karons squad so I don't know if I can get away with posting it.

DarkJak2050 · 2011-10-15, 18:53

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

Good luck writing ch. 4 of PS, we're here if you need help.

I'm not sure if I should. This story does have spoilers such as the fact that Irish will go to IS academy and Maximillian will be involved with Karons squad so I don't know if I can get away with posting it.

Post it after those events happen in their Fanfics.

Eratas123 · 2011-10-15, 18:58

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Originally Posted by DarkJak2050

Post it after those events happen in their Fanfics.

Which will probably be a LONG time at the rate we're going

wavehawk · 2011-10-15, 18:59

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Originally Posted by blitz1/2

I think ALL of our Ichikas are practically more developed than the canon Ichika.

- "By all our Ichikas combined..."

Ichika: "CHOTTO~~!!!"

...actually, that would be an interesting and crazy fic idea...one wherein we realize that Ichika is a male-type clone of Chifuyu...and somewhere, someone messed up and produced a dozen of them...

Eratas123 · 2011-10-15, 19:00

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Originally Posted by wavehawk

- "By all our Ichikas combined..."

Ichika: "CHOTTO~~!!!"

...actually, that would be an interesting and crazy fic idea...one wherein we realize that Ichika is a male-type clone of Chifuyu...and somewhere, someone messed up and produced a dozen of them...

One for every girl in the harem! Now that's what you call a harem ending

wavehawk · 2011-10-15, 19:06

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Originally Posted by Detective-san

Seriously, will you eventually put this
stuff up on FF.net? This teasing is
pilling up too much.

- It's Meister and Zero's idea, I think, Class 1-2.

@Eratas: And if each Ichika has a particular =facet of his personality that the girls like--say the one paired with Cecillia is a hotheaded and manly type...

Eratas123 · 2011-10-15, 19:09

Quote:

Originally Posted by wavehawk

- It's Meister and Zero's idea, I think, Class 1-2.

@Eratas: And if each Ichika has a particular =facet of his personality that the girls like--say the one paired with Cecillia is a hotheaded and manly type...

I'm tempted to do another story/draft based on that but I'm resisting the urge to do so

Damn you old man

You and your plot bunnies are killing us all

MeisterBabylon · 2011-10-15, 19:26

*is being dragged around by his own plot bunnies*

Here's one teaser:

It is said that Metropolis-3 is a world in a gourd.

"Art thou Mankind?"

People travel there to find their dream, and many eventually stay.

"I... wish to save her."

In this land where magic and science is indistinguishable...

"Phantom Books...?"

An age-old mystery is about to unfold.

Eratas123 · 2011-10-15, 19:32

Quote:

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

*is being dragged around by his own plot bunnies*

Here's one teaser:

It is said that Metropolis-3 is a world in a gourd.

"Art thou Mankind?"

People travel there to find their dream, and many eventually stay.

"I... wish to save her."

In this land where magic and science is indistinguishable...

"Phantom Books...?"

An age-old mystery is about to unfold.

Sounds like something out of Index

What unit does that biker girl in the hangar bay use? I'm writing the next draft for Irish and they're going to have a fight.

blitz1/2 · 2011-10-15, 19:44

You know, since he is (at least vol 7) is concerned, he is part of the student council, he SHOULD REALLY watch Seitokai no Ichizon and learn to be like Sugisaki Ken.

2011-10-15, 11:25	Link #3023
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	Not sure if this is too long But here's what I chalked up for Inami, it continues from the part where he jumps out of the classroom window. Spoiler for Scene: Inami breaks out of the classroom window, calling out to the cloaked Minerva directly below him. “Minerva! Disengage active camo!” The Minerva decloaks as Inami falls onto the flowerbed behind it. He rolls forward upon landing, minimizing the impact force on his legs then quickly hops into the Minerva. As the armor folds up, Inami snickers at his seemingly successful escape plan. “Hah! Didn’t see that one coming, did ya?” he calls out to the girls overlooking from the broken windows above. Just then, he hears a loud humming from behind him. Turning back, he sees a couple of Uchigane IS units hovering before him, the pilots grin as they draw out their katanas. “…maybe you did…” he mumbles, slightly surprised by the girls’ persistence to capture him. “Surrender, boy! I want you as our personal maid tomorrow!” The girls disclose their intentions which send chills down Inami’s spine. Acknowledging their persistence, he knows deep down that no amount of talk will stop them. “Not even Tsurugi have gone this far… Maybe it’s because she doesn’t have an IS ye---” He thinks as the PA system sounds. A familiar voice emanates from the speakers. “Inami-kun!” “…and not even the PA system is spared from her stubbornness…” “Inami-kun! I wanna see you dressed in traditional Chinese female costume… please?” Mildly vexed at the odds stacked against him, he activates the energy armblades on the Minerva’s forearms, slowly looking up at the Uchigane pilots with a seemingly sincere smile. “First one who grounds me gets a free massage…” Somehow hearing his words, Tsurugi exclaims through the system. “You heard him girls, he’s a professional masseur~!” “Mine!!” exclaims one of the female pilots. The trio immediately engages in melee combat, with the Uchiganes simultaneously swinging their katanas while Inami keeps parrying them. Another voice speaks through the PA system. “Action behind Block D!!” Within moments, hordes of girls gather around the trio as they continue their battle. As Inami effortlessly parry the attacks, one of the Uchiganes engages him in a blade lock while the other pulls back and fires a grapple hook, which then catches one of his arms. “Got him!” the pilots yell as she pulls his arm away from the blade lock. He attempts to cut the line with his other armblade, only to have it caught by the other Uchigane’s grapple hook. “Not…done…yet!” He exclaims with effort, pulling his right arm to the left. The burst of strength from the Minerva’s hydraulic augmentation pulls the IS and sends it crashing into the other, momentarily knocking out the pilots. “That was quick.” He smiles, disengaging the Minerva’s armblades. “INAMI-KUN!!!” Tsurugi yells out as she runs towards him from behind. “Tsurugi-ch---” Inami immediately recognizes the voice and quickly turns around, only to see Tsurugi swinging a kendo stick at him. *PAAAAANG* The surprisingly sturdy kendo stick strikes the Minerva’s helmet, instantly grounding Inami with its immense impact force. “AAUUUUGH!” Tsurugi then steps on the grounded Minerva’s chestplate, pointing her kendo stick at his face. “Didn’t see that one coming, did ya?” she exclaims, grinning at her success as the Uchigane IS pilots wakes up from their temporary knockout. They sigh in disappointment upon seeing Tsurugi, knowing that she’s won the free massage reward. Inami then lifts up his arm, admitting his loss. “Free massages….for the three of you..” He utters in a defeated tone. The IS pilots beam at his generosity, promptly heading towards him to help him up. “You’re always so kind, Inami-kun.” Tsurugi remarks as she helps the IS pilots get Inami back on his feet. He then spots Lingyin walking towards them with an inauspicious smile. “Bring him to the dressing room, girls! I got just the right size for him.” She says, followed by an evil giggle. __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2011-10-15, 11:55	Link #3024
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	Spoiler for Prologue?: In a dark room with the curtains drawn, only leaving a little gap of light pouring through, a girl with long black hair, watched the monitor of her computer intensively. Tap Tap Click Tap Click With a few simple clicks, she moved her character across the screen and active a spell to slaughter those blasted monsters that kept killing her when she is still a newbie in the game. After a while, she got tired of the grinding. She decides to take a break and watch the discussion which her guild members were having at the movement. “Congratulation to the winner of Mondo Grosso...” Does not concern me....It's not mine problem.... [Woah! That winner of that IS game is so sexy... I think she is D cup] Shut up...... [I like that mean machine of her better….] Argh..... [No IS topic here, this is a game for the male only! MALE RULES!] A girl typed and her fellow guild members soon agree and switch topic to their latest loot. Orimura Haruna, Occupation: Hikkirimori. A poor girl who could not handle the pressure of the school and choose fantasy to escape from the harsh reality. It was a day just like another but a drastic change is about to happen in her life….. ----- Boom A loud sound followed by a sudden shaking of the house jolted her away from her computer. She drive under her table and waited. {AN EARTHQUAKE!? } Although the shaking had stopped long time ago, she remained under her table, wondering what happened. After a while, she decided to investigate. With careful steps, she slowly moved out of her room to look around the house. Thankfully nothing is broken. Her sister would have killed her if something happened to her beloved trophies. Heaving a sigh of relief, she sat on the sofa and looked out of the window. She froze. Right outside the house, was a silvery white machine. She recognized the machine…she had seen it before. An Infinite Stratos. Over-spec space exploration exo-suit now used in sport game. She walked out of her house, scratching her head wondering how the machine got here and what she should do about it. She wanted to leave the machine and go back to her MMORPG but her curiosity got better of her. She wondered how the machine work and how does it fly in matter that seemly defy the laws of physics. She wore the suit, a strange sensation filled her. She tried out a few step with the machine, despite of wearing such heavy machinery on her, she did not feel anything weird. Everything just feels natural… as if she is just wearing a jacket over her clothes. The girl looked up. To the faces of two shocked IS pilots in their IS suit. __________________ Ara Han

2011-10-15, 12:45	Link #3025
blitz1/2 Tenshi's Defense Squadron Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Fighting against those who oppress the system	Just to ask you guys, for Red Rain, should I turn it into something like a visual novel format? AKA I will list out several choices for you guys to pick, and continue it from there, or just a single path storyline? __________________ hai, hai. Onii-chan has his work cut out for him.

2011-10-15, 13:33	Link #3026
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	If there's one thing I noticed on Fanfic.net, it's that IS: Secrets the Fire has Revealed is gone. Spoiler for Silverback combat armor: "There you go, the Silverback combat armor." Ratchet projects a holographic image of an armored human figure. "No pictures, but plenty of data and specs. Knock yourself out." "It's a full body combat armor. How the hell can that be a match up to the Infinite Stratos?" Sideswipe looks closer at the hologram. Another image pops up next to the armored figure. "There, I think that's how. But what the hell's a 'Silverback Spark'?" I asked. "Seems to be the power source." Ratchet looks more into the disc. "Wow, it's actually the very core of the armor. Hey, who would've thought that Magnus had a taste for the whole 'crazy-cyborg technology'? I almost admire that. But according to the disc, the Silverback's location is where we least expect it..." Last edited by DarkJak2050; 2011-10-15 at 18:17.

2011-10-15, 19:26	Link #3038
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	is being dragged around by his own plot bunnies Here's one teaser: It is said that Metropolis-3 is a world in a gourd. "Art thou Mankind?" People travel there to find their dream, and many eventually stay. "I... wish to save her." In this land where magic and science is indistinguishable... "Phantom Books...?" An age-old mystery is about to unfold. __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2011-10-15, 10:41	Link #3022
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Agetreme- Sweet! Hikikomoris are always fun to prtraty in stories. @ StratoSpear- How goes the fight scene? And how will his childhood friend react to seeing him in a state of crossdress? By the way, to anyone who's interested I'm gonna do an epilogue of sorts like this for SWC. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q9VW9KVj0jo Might even do a kings game after this one.

2011-10-15, 18:14	Link #3028
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Yeah, and that hences the name of my FanFic. And if you guys got any feedback or reviews, I'd appreciate that you post them on Fanfic.net, okay?

2011-10-15, 18:35	Link #3029
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@Jak- As I said don't worry about reviews, all of us here read each others stories so you'll always have our support. @Stratos- I'll add it later, thanks a bunch! @Zero- Maximillians chapter has been written and it's on the previous page, please read and review if you can.

2011-10-15, 18:43	Link #3030
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	What I'm more concerned right not are about those guys on the run. And if I can write Ch. 4 for Project Silverback. Although, I have to say; you should post it on Fanfic.net, just make a few notes about the guys and what Fanfic the came from and you should be good.

2011-10-15, 19:44	Link #3040
blitz1/2 Tenshi's Defense Squadron Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Fighting against those who oppress the system	You know, since he is (at least vol 7) is concerned, he is part of the student council, he SHOULD REALLY watch Seitokai no Ichizon and learn to be like Sugisaki Ken. __________________ hai, hai. Onii-chan has his work cut out for him.