2011-11-04, 07:32 | Link #6061 |
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I just realized that throughout all the drafts I never once put any of the characters in marshmallow hell........I should fix that. *Goes off to think for a draft*
EDIT: @ Meister - What's Rachel's chest size? It's for purely scientific and wholesome purposes.
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2011-11-04, 07:45 | Link #6062 | |
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But most of all, I try to make it interesting. There's a bit of problem with the pacing I guess. Also, this is my first major dogfight since Strike Witches, but I somehow can't find the right flow of the battle in spite of History Channel on youtube.
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2011-11-04, 07:47 | Link #6064 | |
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She's flattish. Not completely, but nothing much either.
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*sees the scene of Karon, Browning and Ziqin firing at something huge with BUster Cannon* Ffffffff--
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2011-11-04, 07:50 | Link #6065 | |
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Side note - She flat! There goes that draft! Anybody in his harem who can actually have him experience MH except Maya? @ Stratos - My internet is slow right now. What's in the video?
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2011-11-04, 07:55 | Link #6066 | |
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But for a brief explanation: Spoiler for Scene:
Talk about flying through different AUs.
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2011-11-04, 08:03 | Link #6070 | |
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*goes back to writing Chapter 8* Also Zero, in what way does Inami/Minerva is similar to the Reborns?
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2011-11-04, 08:11 | Link #6072 |
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- I think that by adding too many new characters (Van Maark, The contessa, Jo, and a lot of other charas) All I've done was clutter the fic. And frankly, it's getting too diffcult and moving far away fromw hat I originally wanted to do, so I'm scrapping it because -i- am not happy with it.
I've written fics before that I'd gotten stuck on and found it wasn't worth tryign to finish it because it ended up just beign messy and annoying to me--and unreadable to readers. so best I chuck it otu at this point and restart from scratch.
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2011-11-04, 08:13 | Link #6073 | ||
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Writing a draft where Dan wiped the ass of obnoxious National IS/VS Champions in the new game Quote:
Ichika: "This is closer to a combat simulator than Video game, so our mind, reflex and other capabilities is considered." Dan: "Which mean those fatty ass is not going to win against me?" Ichika: "Simply because they're too cocky, if not, I don't know." Dan: "Thank you very much"
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2011-11-04, 08:24 | Link #6074 | |
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Side note - Please read the draft when you can. I also need to decide if I should write the next daydreams chapter like it or the same as usual.
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2011-11-04, 08:26 | Link #6075 | |
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Ah, I forgot, I'll read it now. EDIT: Just read it and I'd say Aria is QUITE a chessmaster, besides being a Tsundere bratty girl... seriously, is she really 7 years old?
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2011-11-04, 08:35 | Link #6076 | |
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Besides, she grew up with KYUUKAI AND LAURA as her parents. Did you really expect her to be like a normal kid? Growing up with Auntie Clarissa also gave her a taste for Bishonen EDIT: Should I use that writing style for Daydreams instead of the one I've been using so far.
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