Madoka Magica - FanFiction Discussion

[MartianMage]

Please post Homura x Mami fics :3

[Hagoshod]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7zaybWlXVdI

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xSYiS52LsOM

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6791403/...on_the_Mamihod

Spoiler:

"Get back here, Witch!"

Snake was sitting in the sidecar of Eva's motorcycle when he looked over his shoulder toward the oddly-dressed, blonde-haired figure shouting at him. He had a dumbfounded expression as he watched his pursuer chase him, and he eventually turned his head toward his motorcyclist companion.

"What the hell is that girl's problem?"

Eva replied as her eyes remained fixed on the stretch of road in front of her.

"I don't know! Let's just worry about getting to the bridge!"

Mami continued to chase her two fleeing targets with full determination, having no idea of the trap she was being led into. When she eventually began crossing the aforementioned steel and concrete bridge, Eva and Snake were still several hundred meters ahead of her and had already reached the opposite side. Eva then suddenly parked her motorcycle, allowing Snake to leap out of his sidecar and quickly aim his sniper rifle toward the base of the bridge. When Mami had passed over roughly half of the bridge, Snake shot at a row of dynamite that Eva had carefully planted earlier that day. The structure soon exploded into a vibrant fireball and began collapsing with Mami still standing on it.

Snake and Eva observed the chaos in uncertainty, as they were both worried the psychotic female that had been chasing them might find the strength to climb up the twisted remains of the bridge's steel frame. However, they both sighed in relief when they could barely make out the shape of a human figure plummeting off the sunken edge of the bridge and into the ravine below.

Snake and Eva's quiet celebration was soon interrupted by a loud grinding sound coming from the section of the bridge where Mami had fallen. When the smoke cleared, they could see ever-determined Puella Magi had intentionally detached her own head to dispose of her extra weight, and her spiral-shaped pigtails were horizontally pointed outward and frantically spinning against a cracked portion of concrete. When she had built up enough friction, Mami used the drooping surface she was still clinging to as a ramp to propel herself into the air and toward the solid ground where her enemies were standing.

Snake's expression changed back to one of bafflement when Mami flew past his shoulder in a yellow streak. He could barely gather the senses to speak his next words.

"Is that a... screw-propelled yukkuri?"

Eva only answered coldly, as if she had somehow been expecting an event of this ridiculous magnitude to occur.

"Abicion wrote this."

Snake grunted in response.

"Oh."

The two comrades then turned around to see Mami's head had landed behind them. She soon spun around on her hair braids so she could face her rivals, and she cried out as the rage of battle sparked in her eyes.

"I'm not finished yet!"

Eva instinctively hopped back onto the seat of her motorcycle. Snake paused for a moment to look into the sky and address some unknown celestial entity.

"This is a joke, right?"

After receiving no response, he shook his head and jumped back into Eva's sidecar. Eva revved her motorcycle's engine as Mami spun her hair-drills a few times intimidatingly. When the two parties finally dashed toward each other, the final battle had begun.

[DJLowrider]

Just a little something I whipped up here on a whim.
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Spoiler for Can't believe no one else has thought to do something like this yet.:

Universal Anti-Entropy Force

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Observational Report
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Magical Girl #: 000666
Subject: Kaname Madoka
Operational Notes:

This was a triumph.
I'm making a note here: HUGE SUCCESS.
It's hard to overstate my satisfaction.
We Incubators
We do what we must
because we can.
For the good of all of us.
Except the ones who are dead.
But there's no sense crying over every dead girl.
You just keep on trying till you destroy the world.
And the wishes get made.
The power you generate…
Keeps the whole universe still alive.

I'm not even angry.
I'm being so sincere right now.
Even though you shot me up.
And killed me.
And tore me to pieces.
And threw every piece into a fire.
As they burned it hurt because I was so happy for you!
Here come Walpurgis again, you’re all gonna die.
Unless Madoka kills her
Which she can do fine.
But she’ll turn into a witch
And throw the world into pitch
But the universe will be still alive.

Go ahead and hate me.
It’s not like you can kill me anyway.
Maybe you'll find someone else to help you.
Maybe Sayaka.
THAT WAS A JOKE.
HAHA. FAT CHANCE.
Anyway, my fur is great.
It's so adorably soft.
Look at me still talking
when there's wishing to do.
When I look out there, it makes me glad I'm not you.
I've girls’ wishes to grant.
And Grief Seeds I must plant.
So the universe stays still alive.

And believe me I am still alive.

I'm granting wishes and I'm still alive.

I feel FANTASTIC and I'm still alive.

While you're dying I'll be still alive.

And when you're dead I will be still alive.

STILL ALIVE

STILL ALIVE

[sa547]

That was damn wicked. Can set that to a metal track.

[Hagoshod]

Oh look, an alternate interpretation of the Timeline 3 scenario that (I'm pretty sure) doesn't violate any of the principles carried into Timelines 4 and 5.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6814603/1/Last_Requests

[Midonin]

Some people make off hand jokes and leave them be. I make off hand jokes and turn them into stories. It helps that I'm sticking very close to the structure of something previously released. That was in neither of the fandoms this story involves. Written and published in the course of...this afternoon.


"We're the legendary warriors."

[Hagoshod]

Originally Posted by Midonin

Some people make off hand jokes and leave them be. I make off hand jokes and turn them into stories. It helps that I'm sticking very close to the structure of something previously released. That was in neither of the fandoms this story involves. Written and published in the course of...this afternoon.


"We're the legendary warriors."

So much Pretty Cure.

[Midonin]

And yet the story itself is based on a completely different fandom. And even then, it's based on a DVD produced largely for crossover fanservice and jokes. Never let it be said that I don't stick to my lack of standards.

[Hagoshod]

Hello Animesuki.

Are you having FUN today?

Are you feeling HAPPY right now?

Then please allow me to emotionally crush you again with the following Madoka x Homura story:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6816395/1/Everyone_Dies

[Hagoshod]

I killed Cure Pine again.

I really should stop doing that.

[kaigan]

my one-shot fanfic. no offense to mr. max ehrmann. i just can't get hold of myself.

Spoiler for QB's Desiderata:

Go placidly amidst the noise and the haste,
and remember what evil lurks in silence.

As many as possible, without restraint,
be on good terms with all pubescent girls.
Speak your truth vaguely and deceptively;
or elude it completely,
even middle school lolis;
they too know entropy.
Avoid tall and dark stalking bishoujos;
they are thorns in your ass.

If you compare yourself with salarymen,
you may become vain or bitter,
for always there will be greater and lesser familiars than yourself.
Enjoy your cuteness as well as your adoring fans.
Keep interested in your own commission, during inflation;
it is a real gem in these energy depressing times.

Exercise caution in your monkey business,
for the universe is full of trickery.
But don’t be fooled what human virtue there is;
many persons strive for selfish wishes,
and everywhere life is full of grievances.
Reproduce yourself covertly. Do not show emotion.
Neither be cynical about keeping reserves,
in case you can’t dodge bullets and magic attacks,
you can rise up as perennial as the grass.

Take seriously the Night of the Witches,
you could harvest an amazing youth.
Always proofread the contract to shield you in sudden misfortune.
But do not distress yourself with slice-of-life imaginings.
Many surprises are born of lies and misdirections.

Beyond a mischievous cat-face smile,
be gentle with yourself.
You are an alien race of the universe
superior than humans and the stars;
you have a right to be here.
And whether or not it is clear to you,
no doubt the universe is collapsing as it shouldn't.

Therefore be at peace with Homura,
whatever you conceive Her to be.
And whatever your trials and errors,
in the repetitive confusion of time,
collect Madoka’s soul.

With all its deconstruction, tragedy, and Brocken spectre,
it is never a perfect world.
Be a bitch. Strive to prevent entropy.

i hope you enjoy ^-^

[Laevatein]

Nice version of "Still Alive", DJLowrider. Actually, speaking of song parodies, I've got an idea stuck in my head for a Kyuubei version of "Poor Unfortunate Souls" from The Little Mermaid.

[NeoEevee]

Hello all. Would anyone like to help me out with these fan-witches? xD; I mostly need names, but other feedback is helpful...

Witch #1: The witch of sunsets. This witch was originally a magical boy who used his wish to protect the ones he loved; but the pressure of the keeping them, and the world(s), safe was too much, and he became a witch (er, warlock?).

This witch has a selfish nature, and will draw anything that comes near into his barrier. However, he will not attack. He only sits and stares at the perfect sunset he has created. If an unfortunate person gets too close, however, they will be enveloped by [s]carnivorous marshmellow flesh[s] the witch and sent to the inner-most part of his labyrinth. You can distract him by giving him a particular flavor of ice cream.

This witch's barrier places all who enter on top of buildings and skyscrapers, with the witch clearly visible at the end of the maze; now the challenge is getting over to him without falling. If/when you fall, since witch barriers seem to be a large middle finger to physics and whatnot, you don't die or be injured from the impact, but you will be preyed upon by his familiars, as the bottom-most layer of his barrier is the darkest and most dangerous.

The witch himself is made of carnivorous marshmellow fluff replicated the form of the Twilight Thorn from Kingdom Hearts 2, with some more brightly colored armor a la the final boss of Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days; but the form that appears in his inner labyrinth is a chalk-white copy of his human form. His familiars... I'm torn between a whole-sale rip-off of the Samurai Nobodies and a Suspisciously Similar Substitute.

Witch #2: The witch of doorways. This witch is the brother of Witch #1; they share a heart and soul. So when one became a witch, the other went with him. Like his brother, Witch #2 draws all who come near into his barrier; but unlike his brother, it is out of a deep desire to make friends. Unfortunately, this often leads to him smothering his "new friends" with blobs of carnivorous marshmellow fluff.

I don't have any ideas for the Witch's design or familiars, but his barrier is made of doors; doors everywhere. Each room they lead to is different, and they frequently shift around.

Witches #3 and 4: Born from a common heart and supernaturally linked to Witches #1 and 2, these two are referred to as the X-witches ("x" being pronounced as "key" or "kai", for the record), and theirs is a dual nature. They share a barrier whose design is derived from the Bad Apple!!! Shadow Art PV: #3 appears as a white silhouette, and #4 appears as a black silhouette. The labyrinth itself is either a black or white background, and frequently features no scenery at all. While these witches only have the special abilities they had as humans (hey, wait a minute...), the way they appear can easily disorientate a person.

Witch #3 is the milder personality. He tries to only appear when the background is black, so you may see him easy. He will fight fair, will not use familiars, and will be careful to cast a conspicuous shadow when the background is white. However, while he fights fair in this regard, his attacks are merciless. Though he has less physical strength, he lands blows very fast, and he is the more resilient of the two.

Witch #4 is the opposite. He will hide in a black background so you never see him coming. He'll mob you with familiars and sneak up on you however he can. To make matters worse, his attacks are stronger and equally fast. However, one hit will send him sprawling.

Their familiars are creatures that change with the scenery, much like in the Shadow Art PV. Unlike the witches, their shade will change in either background so you may easily see them. Their shapeshifting may make them difficult to beat.

Witch #5: Sister witch to the above, Witch #5 is the malleable witch, with a curious nature. An able mind may shift reality however they see fit in her realm. She will let you do this, and will then take advantage of the new terrain. The only point where reality is fixed in her barrier is a small, grassy spot with a folding metal chair in it. Expect to be sitting in this seat surrounded by people congratulating you when you defeat the witch.

Most of the time, however, the barrier is blank white, and it is easy to find the witch if you believe she will appear. Her appearance, while it always looks like barely-animated sketches that've been colored with markers (maybe she ran out of ink?), is different depending upon who sees her.

Also, if she hugs you, you melt into Morning Rescue.


Okay, again, I mostly need names (and remember that Witch #5 is the only girl! xD, but other ideas are most certainly welcome! ^^;

...should I be having this much fun creating monsters?

[kaigan]

Originally Posted by NeoEevee

Spoiler:

Hello all. Would anyone like to help me out with these fan-witches? xD; I mostly need names, but other feedback is helpful...

Witch #1: The witch of sunsets. This witch was originally a magical boy who used his wish to protect the ones he loved; but the pressure of the keeping them, and the world(s), safe was too much, and he became a witch (er, warlock?).

This witch has a selfish nature, and will draw anything that comes near into his barrier. However, he will not attack. He only sits and stares at the perfect sunset he has created. If an unfortunate person gets too close, however, they will be enveloped by [s]carnivorous marshmellow flesh[s] the witch and sent to the inner-most part of his labyrinth. You can distract him by giving him a particular flavor of ice cream.

This witch's barrier places all who enter on top of buildings and skyscrapers, with the witch clearly visible at the end of the maze; now the challenge is getting over to him without falling. If/when you fall, since witch barriers seem to be a large middle finger to physics and whatnot, you don't die or be injured from the impact, but you will be preyed upon by his familiars, as the bottom-most layer of his barrier is the darkest and most dangerous.

The witch himself is made of carnivorous marshmellow fluff replicated the form of the Twilight Thorn from Kingdom Hearts 2, with some more brightly colored armor a la the final boss of Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days; but the form that appears in his inner labyrinth is a chalk-white copy of his human form. His familiars... I'm torn between a whole-sale rip-off of the Samurai Nobodies and a Suspisciously Similar Substitute.

Witch #2: The witch of doorways. This witch is the brother of Witch #1; they share a heart and soul. So when one became a witch, the other went with him. Like his brother, Witch #2 draws all who come near into his barrier; but unlike his brother, it is out of a deep desire to make friends. Unfortunately, this often leads to him smothering his "new friends" with blobs of carnivorous marshmellow fluff.

I don't have any ideas for the Witch's design or familiars, but his barrier is made of doors; doors everywhere. Each room they lead to is different, and they frequently shift around.

Witches #3 and 4: Born from a common heart and supernaturally linked to Witches #1 and 2, these two are referred to as the X-witches ("x" being pronounced as "key" or "kai", for the record), and theirs is a dual nature. They share a barrier whose design is derived from the Bad Apple!!! Shadow Art PV: #3 appears as a white silhouette, and #4 appears as a black silhouette. The labyrinth itself is either a black or white background, and frequently features no scenery at all. While these witches only have the special abilities they had as humans (hey, wait a minute...), the way they appear can easily disorientate a person.

Witch #3 is the milder personality. He tries to only appear when the background is black, so you may see him easy. He will fight fair, will not use familiars, and will be careful to cast a conspicuous shadow when the background is white. However, while he fights fair in this regard, his attacks are merciless. Though he has less physical strength, he lands blows very fast, and he is the more resilient of the two.

Witch #4 is the opposite. He will hide in a black background so you never see him coming. He'll mob you with familiars and sneak up on you however he can. To make matters worse, his attacks are stronger and equally fast. However, one hit will send him sprawling.

Their familiars are creatures that change with the scenery, much like in the Shadow Art PV. Unlike the witches, their shade will change in either background so you may easily see them. Their shapeshifting may make them difficult to beat.

Witch #5: Sister witch to the above, Witch #5 is the malleable witch, with a curious nature. An able mind may shift reality however they see fit in her realm. She will let you do this, and will then take advantage of the new terrain. The only point where reality is fixed in her barrier is a small, grassy spot with a folding metal chair in it. Expect to be sitting in this seat surrounded by people congratulating you when you defeat the witch.

Most of the time, however, the barrier is blank white, and it is easy to find the witch if you believe she will appear. Her appearance, while it always looks like barely-animated sketches that've been colored with markers (maybe she ran out of ink?), is different depending upon who sees her.

Also, if she hugs you, you melt into Morning Rescue.


Okay, again, I mostly need names (and remember that Witch #5 is the only girl! xD, but other ideas are most certainly welcome! ^^;

...should I be having this much fun creating monsters?

name suggestions, though no relations to the warlock/witch descriptions:

w1: Godfrey
w2: Gottlieb
w3: Grendel Konstantin
w4: Franz Wulfstan
w5: Astrid

[omimon]

Originally Posted by NeoEevee

Hello all. Would anyone like to help me out with these fan-witches? xD; I mostly need names, but other feedback is helpful...

Witches #3 and 4: Born from a common heart and supernaturally linked to Witches #1 and 2, these two are referred to as the X-witches ("x" being pronounced as "key" or "kai", for the record), and theirs is a dual nature. They share a barrier whose design is derived from the Bad Apple!!! Shadow Art PV: #3 appears as a white silhouette, and #4 appears as a black silhouette. The labyrinth itself is either a black or white background, and frequently features no scenery at all. While these witches only have the special abilities they had as humans (hey, wait a minute...), the way they appear can easily disorientate a person.

Witch #3 is the milder personality. He tries to only appear when the background is black, so you may see him easy. He will fight fair, will not use familiars, and will be careful to cast a conspicuous shadow when the background is white. However, while he fights fair in this regard, his attacks are merciless. Though he has less physical strength, he lands blows very fast, and he is the more resilient of the two.


...should I be having this much fun creating monsters?

You play Kingdom Hearts don't you?

[Triple_R]

I'd be interested in reading a good Kyouko/Sayaka yuri fanfic.

Anybody here know where I could find one? Anybody here up to writing one?

[NeoEevee]

Originally Posted by omimon

You play Kingdom Hearts don't you?

Yes. Far too much to be healthy.

[Snork]

I'd be interested in reading a good Kyouko/Sayaka yuri fanfic.

Fanfiction.net has a bunch of those already, mostly bittersweet romantic decadence revolving around the events of ep 8/9. I personally liked Matchmaker the most, it's touching and decent (despite being in M section, although I really can't see why it was put there, something like T would be enough).

[Akashin]

Originally Posted by Snork

Fanfiction.net has a bunch of those already, mostly bittersweet romantic decadence revolving around the events of ep 8/9. I personally liked Matchmaker the most, it's touching and decent (despite being in M section, although I really can't see why it was put there, something like T would be enough).

Its 'cause ff.net staff are fickle at the best of times; thousands upon thousands of easily NC-17 yaoi go untouched, but I've seen T-rated stories with little more than a hint of anything M-rated (I don't consider depictions of blood to be M-rated, but apparently they do; go figure) get taken down for less. Just better to err on the safe side if you're uncertain, and Matchmaker did have a hint of sexual content somewhere in there.

Edit: It isn't Kyoko/Sayaka, but Anything Worth Doing is Worth Doing Badly by ZipCode is arguably the best PMMM fic on the site. The rarity of the pairing (Homura/Kyoko) makes it that much better, though the style of writing is a bit jarring and the way it ends up leaving small details you wish were there out can get a tad annoying. Nonetheless, its definitely got the best depiction of Homura I've yet seen, and its depiction of just about every other character is just as good.

[Riga92]

^ I just read that fanfic and wow, it is amazing.

The author depicted every character perfectly. Its so amazing that I imagined the whole story as I read in my head, as if I was watching an actual episode of Madoka.