Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[Reiji Tabibito]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

I fail to see how reading about her Barrier Jacket and Fighting style would remind you about your fiance... Unless she dances like Almaria...

Wouldn't know... she refuses to dance.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

You make it sound like it happens all the everytime Aurion interacts with females... C'mon! It was like this!

Hayate = Mind Game.
Almaria & Signum = Mock Battle. To win.
Reinforce 1 = She was trying to nuke him to oblivion. Naturally, that should stop her from going on and on.
Satty's female OC's = "Don't disturb me while I use some serious mindf**k on Vincent."

Though I am curious about what do you mean by this helpless MOE bit. I know helplessness can be considered MOE by itself, but is what you mentioned some sort of upgrade? Can you explain?

Still, you can't deny the trend...

And re:Helpless MOE

I guess you could call it an upgrade.


Basically, Mel would take the whole "binding" thing and make it as MOE and INNOCENT as possible.

Originally Posted by Keroko

You mean....

Spoiler for something like this?:

*runs*

<drools> Takamachi-kyoudai... suge...

Arcas: Creator-san, are you ogling my little sisters?

Reiji: Saynosaynosaynosaynosaynosaynosayno

YES!!!

<claps hands over mouth>

<runs like hell>

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Ok, I though of this a while ago, it's quite funny...
Maren can sometimes be very innocent

Spoiler for Eh!?:

Koji waited in the living room, sitting on the couch, with his hands resting on his knees.
"They sure are taking a lot of time..." He said as he tapped his finger on his knee.

Then the sound of steps were heard on the stairs near the living room.
"We're ready~" Yui said cheerfully.
"Oh..." Koji stood up speechless, as he looked at Yui, Maren and Treize wearing yukata for the festival.
"H-How does it look, Koji-sama?" Maren asked, embarrassed.

"A-Ah..." He snaped out, "It suits you...a lot."
Maren smiled softly, "Thank you."
"Onii-chan, how about me~" She spun around once.
"Cute as always." He replied. "And Treize too." He looked at her.
Treize nodded, "...Thank you."

"Shall we go?" Koji asked them.
"Yes~" Yui replied for everyone.
"Then let's go!" He threw a fist upwards.
"...go~" Treize copied Koji.


And so, they left the house and met up with everyone else to go to the festival.
They were having a lot of fun, but Koji couldn't help notice that Maren's behavior was unusual.
Maren was avoiding moving too much and her face was red.

As they returned from the festival, Koji approached Maren.
"Maren, is something wrong? Your face is red, do you have a cold?" Koji asked.
"No...it's these clothes..." She said shyly.
"Oh, you're not used to wearing a yukata, is that it?"

"W-well...it's a bit embarrassing..."
"Embarrassing, why?" Koji blinked.
Maren's face got redder and she fidgeted, "B-Because...you can't wear underwear with it..."
"...eh?...EH????" Koji shouted in surprise.

When Koji shouted, the group stopped walking and turned to them.
"Koji-kun, is something wrong?" Nanoha asked.
"N-Nothing! Nothing at all!!" Koji waved his hands.
"Okay..." She said and continued to walk, along with everyone else.

Koji got closer to Maren, "W-who told you that?"
"Yui did...when we were trying them on." She replied.
He sighed, "As I thought..."
"But it was confirmed by Hayate-san and Shamal-san, so I thought it was true..." She explained.
"And they were involved as well..." Koji sighed again.

Grabbing Maren by her hand, they caught up with Yui and Treize.
"Yui!" He called her.
"acha...Onii-chan found out..." She said playfully.
"Yui don't pull such pranks on Maren!" He said with a red face.
"It wasn't just Maren-chan, Trei-chan isn't using them either..." She said, then turned to Treize, "ne?"
"un..." She nodded.

"Eh?" Koji's eye twitched, "Y-Yui!"
"datte~ That's the way it's worn." She smiled innocently.
"Y-Yui, d-don't tell me..." Koji stepped back.
"Hmm...I'll leave that to Onii-chan's imagination~" She stroke a pose and winked at him.
Koji couldn't even reply, his eye just twitched at the mere thought of it...

*runs*

Whoa... you read my mind...

And THIS Persona 3 clip...

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

... And in other news, DO IT NOW KOJI! NOTHING INSIDE = LESS RESISTANT! AND IT'S EVEN NIGHT TIME FOR HEAVEN'S SAKE!! THE ADDED BONUS IS THAT MAREN IS ALSO FEELING VULNERABLE!!

And exactly what do you base such a presumption on?


THIS????

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Spoiler for Dynames, sniping the target!:

The gun's bigger than the Mobile Suit!!!

How can such a thing exist?!

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

@Reiji: Slightly NSFW indeed. Nice scenario, nontheless. The future talk and the devotion parts were good.

Thanks!


BTW, got some ideas for LegendS that I'm sending your way... let me know on their plausibility.

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

<drools> Takamachi-kyoudai... suge...

Arcas: Creator-san, are you ogling my little sisters?

Reiji: Saynosaynosaynosaynosaynosaynosayno

YES!!!

<claps hands over mouth>

<runs like hell>

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

And exactly what do you base such a presumption on?


THIS????

Sou, Masa-san and drying legs FTW

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

The gun's bigger than the Mobile Suit!!!

How can such a thing exist?!

They'e not Celestial Being for nothing

Besides, there's much bigger guns in Gundam before

[USB500]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

So they're officially OC's now

And... YAKUMO-NEESAN CROSSING OVER!!!!!! Though even Tenma's crossing over?

So Asakura can only read the minds of those who like her?

DO FREAKING WANT

Also, more priestess wet in the rain please

*runs*

You got the point there.

Image time?

Spoiler for Matilda:

Spoiler for various pics:

Spoiler for combat mode; you don't want to mess with her, do you?:

Where are the glasses? They're gone, because Matilda usually takes them off before entering combat.

Note that her hair changes colour.

Spoiler for Asakura:

No Priestess Yakumo picture, though but this is the best I can do to depict Asakura as a Belkan priestess

Sorry, Lowe, no "priestess in rain" pictures for now.

That reminds me: if Freya is San & Aura is Runa, then should there be a Shiranui-san?

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by USB500

You got the point there.

Image time?

Spoiler for Matilda:

Spoiler for various pics:

Spoiler for combat mode; you don't want to mess with her, do you?:

Where are the glasses? They're gone, because Matilda usually takes them off before entering combat.

Note that her hair changes colour.

Spoiler for Asakura:

No Priestess Yakumo picture, though but this is the best I can do to depict Asakura as a Belkan priestess

Sorry, Lowe, no "priestess in rain" pictures for now.

That reminds me: if Freya is San & Aura is Runa, then should there be a Shiranui-san?

AWESOME Armor for Matilda there

No priestess Yakumo? That's a shame... Though who says a priestess has to dress like a nun?

Spoiler for Now THIS is more like it...:

*ehem*

And of course we need Akeno-sama!!!!!!!!

[USB500]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

AWESOME Armor for Matilda there

No priestess Yakumo? That's a shame... Though who says a priestess has to dress like a nun?

Spoiler for Now THIS is more like it...:

*ehem*

And of course we need Akeno-sama!!!!!!!!

*stares at picture*


Of course we need more of Akeno-sama

But does that mean....

Spoiler:

"Oneesama... ah, dame..."

"Don't worry, I'll only wet you a bit..."

I'll leave the rest to your wild fantasy.

Oh, yeah, San Freya will refer to Akeno-sama her as "oneesama"

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by USB500

*stares at picture*


Of course we need more of Akeno-sama

But does that mean....

Spoiler:

"Oneesama... ah, dame..."

"Don't worry, I'll only wet you a bit..."

I'll leave the rest to your wild fantasy.

Oh, yeah, San Freya will refer to Akeno-sama her as "oneesama"

OH GAWD.... THAT GREATEST OF SCENES!!!!!!

DO WANT

But... Freya's real onee-sama?

[Kha]

<<Shadowstep>>

<<Sap>>

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

How come any sort of Canon seems to work for you?!?!

And because it works for me too.

<<Vanish>>

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

VERY NICE PICK FOR A SONG!
I remember that movie... Though I never got to watch the Japanese version...

Same here

But I did catch the Japanese version 4th movie with Paladin mode, the 5th and 6th movie with the Tamers... And a bit of the 7th movie about the Frontiers...

In my opinion, Tamers and Zero Two are the best of the lot... I especially like Tamers for it's dark theme near the end... Not crappy presudo-dark, but deep dark stuff, for kids anyway.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Just being a gentleman I know, your possessiveness is borne out of your devotion for her

Jeno: "I'm not possessive !! I just... I just..."

(Yes, they can be possessive)

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Too bad

They're BOTH dark !

I mean pick the sub group!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Nice carrot then

But, I still have the sig!!!!!

Fine fine, it's in your mail... But you better do good with Spica !

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Mada mada... >->

You know... you can try just looking at the profiles which have pictures to them. >_>

LAAAAAAAAZZZZZZZZZZZZZYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY ......... >.>

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Jeno: "I'm not possessive !! I just... I just..."

(Yes, they can be possessive)

Ah, so if you're not possessive... let's call it... love then?

*runs*

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

They're BOTH dark !

I mean pick the sub group!

Damn choices

Bikini please

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Fine fine, it's in your mail... But you better do good with Spica !

Good good

So what else did you want me to do with the sig?

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Ah, so if you're not possessive... let's call it... love then?

*runs*

Jeno: "...Possessive it is then...>.>"


P.S - You've made your choice, I'll save Dere-Dark-Spica for next time


@Nightengale


It just occured to me, that you didn't seem to push for Null

I assumed she has a Full-to-Over sized mode ?

[USB500]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

OH GAWD.... THAT GREATEST OF SCENES!!!!!!

DO WANT

But... Freya's real onee-sama?

No, my friend. Freya & Aura's oneesama is more of "spirit sister". Think of Latooni/Ouka sisterly relationship.

And yeah, Oneesama is quite.... physically intimate, if not dead serious.

Spoiler:

Oneesama: *pins Freya on the floor* are you ready, Freya?

Freya: Oneesama..... *blushes* please be gentle....

but she easily melts whenever she meets MANLY MAN *hint: Yutaro drinking T3H POTION*

Spoiler:

Oneesama: *unties her hair* I have been defeated. You can do whatever you want....

Yutaro:

[LimitedEternal]

Originally Posted by USB500

No, my friend. Freya & Aura's oneesama is more of "spirit sister". Think of Latooni/Ouka sisterly relationship.

And yeah, Oneesama is quite.... physically intimate, if not dead serious.

Spoiler:

Oneesama: *pins Freya on the floor* are you ready, Freya?

Freya: Oneesama..... *blushes* please be gentle....

but she easily melts whenever she meets MANLY MAN *hint: Yutaro drinking T3H POTION*

Spoiler:

Oneesama: *unties her hair* I have been defeated. You can do whatever you want....

Yutaro:

Again with the "hair-down dere-dere" mode? T3H potion is that powerful?

Too much backlog to hack through tonight...but I couldn't resist that one.

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Jeno: "...Possessive it is then...>.>"

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

P.S - You've made your choice, I'll save Dere-Dark-Spica for next time

Until the next... contract then

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

@Nightengale


It just occured to me, that you didn't seem to push for Null

I assumed she has a Full-to-Over sized mode ?

...

I smell SagaxNull ...

Originally Posted by USB500

No, my friend. Freya & Aura's oneesama is more of "spirit sister". Think of Latooni/Ouka sisterly relationship.

And yeah, Oneesama is quite.... physically intimate, if not dead serious.

Spoiler:

Oneesama: *pins Freya on the floor* are you ready, Freya?

Freya: Oneesama..... *blushes* please be gentle....

but she easily melts whenever she meets MANLY MAN *hint: Yutaro drinking T3H POTION*

Spoiler:

Oneesama: *unties her hair* I have been defeated. You can do whatever you want....

Yutaro:

*ehem*

Sou ka

And Yutaro really is NaGARsumi...Show your Chivalry boy!!!

So who'll be 'Akeno'-sama here then?

Also, you wanted a priestess?

Spoiler for How about this one?:

[USB500]

Originally Posted by LimitedEternal

Again with the "hair-down dere-dere" mode? T3H potion is that powerful?

Too much backlog to hack through tonight...but I couldn't resist that one.

It is.

===============

Originally Posted by LoweGear

*ehem*

Sou ka

And Yutaro really is NaGARsumi...Show your Chivalry boy!!!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

So who'll be 'Akeno'-sama here then?

leave it to me. I have works on the Gemini Sisters to follow.

And expect fanservice.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Also, you wanted a priestess?

Spoiler for How about this one?:

I don't have Photoshop here, or I'd have the hair recoloured

Hope Frieda doesn't force Matilda to cosplay as one, though

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Jeno: *Mumbles grumbles*


Spica:

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Until the next... contract then

Of course, of course...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

...

I smell SagaxNull ...

Ah well... As long as there's passion... >.>

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Also, you wanted a priestess?

Spoiler for How about this one?:

Depending on what kind of Priestess

Spoiler:

Or maybe...

Spoiler:

You know, she could look like Ginga...

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by USB500

leave it to me. I have works on the Gemini Sisters to follow.

And expect fanservice.

YES DARK GOD!!!!!!

Originally Posted by USB500

I don't have Photoshop here, or I'd have the hair recoloured

Hope Frieda doesn't force Matilda to cosplay as one, though

Recoloured? That'll be easy, seeing as how the girl's hair was originally white

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Jeno: *Mumbles grumbles*


Spica:

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Ah well... As long as there's passion... >.>

Ah yes, jyounetsu. The foundation of all crack

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Depending on what kind of Priestess

Spoiler:

Or maybe...

Spoiler:

You know, she could look like Ginga...

HOLY SHI-

* @ 2nd Pic*

See-thru...

*runs*

[USB500]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Depending on what kind of Priestess

Spoiler:

Or maybe...

Spoiler:

You know, she could look like Ginga...

Ginga in see-through? HOLY SHI-



*dies*

*had played the game and watched the anime >_> *

Chaos, got the full-sized version of both pics?

=====================

Originally Posted by LoweGear

YES DARK GOD!!!!!!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Recoloured? That'll be easy, seeing as how the girl's hair was originally white

Originally Posted by LoweGear

HOLY SHI-

* @ 2nd Pic*

See-thru...

*runs*

I agree. both pictures.

You know, somewhat, the girl can be a perfect template for Widuri. <_< >_> >_< <_>

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by USB500

I agree. both pictures.

You know, somewhat, the girl can be a perfect template for Widuri. <_< >_> >_< <_>

Hmmm you're right.

Lucky Big Daddy Yo...

[Kagerou]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Spoiler:

You know, she could look like Ginga...

That is...
...is...

WHY IS THERE BLOOD COMING OUTTA MY NOSE?!

[USB500]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Hmmm you're right.

Lucky Big Daddy Yo...

Yeah,

----------------------------

Alright, then, to complete the Gemini Sisters' Seto no Hanayome vibe, I present to you...

Spoiler for oneesama?:

Name: Galatea (real name unknown)
Age: appears to be 19; actual creation date unknown
Birthday: unknown
Origin: 42nd Administered World -- Narulia
Affiliation: Lawful Good
Position/rank in TSAB: none
Height: 168cm
Weight: 42kg
Affiliation: The School
Rank: Class-A Senior Officer
Relationship: Aura (sister); Freya (sister); Poseidon (partner); Takeru (rival); Frieda Johansen (rival); Yutaro Wakamoto (former name: Phantom 21) (rival).
Eye colour: ruby
Hair colour: jet black
Magic system: Mid-Childa
Magic symbol: circle
Device name: Sao
Device type: Lost Logia - Unison Device
Device appearance:

• (normal form) humanoid (height: 16cm; weight: 45kg; eye colour: purple)
• (Combat Mode) Oxtongue Rifle
• (Full Mode) Unison Armour

Other devices: Roger (Automata, panda plush doll)
Appearance: see picture (left: Sao; right: Galatea)
Personalities: Galatea is often described by her opponents as ‘a cold-blooded woman who enjoys nothing more than the excitement of battle’ and her moniker “Black Witch” seems to suggest this. Despite her cold demeanours and her reputations, Galatea is in reality a warm-hearted woman who cares very much of her sisters. The reason she chooses not to display her emotion is to show people that unnecessary emotional breakdown can -- and will -- be very dangerous to one’s survival, although she admits “there is nothing wrong for a girl to cry”. She can tolerate alcohol and loves rice wine, even having the special talent to identify each product she takes.
Combat style: Galatea is exceptionally trained for long-range, hit-and-run combat style. She employs Sao’s full capability in its Combat Mode and uses her exceptionally accurate sniping technique to take out enemies from far away. Whenever possible, she will use Sao’s Unison Armour Mode to further take advantage of the Lost Logia’s firepower.
Possible voice actors:

• (Galatea) Kitamura Eri (Shiranui Akeno, Seto no Hanayome)
• (Sao) Kuwashima Houko (Clare, Claymore)
• (Roger) Ueda Yuji (Mugi-maru, Nurse Witch Komugi-chan)

Notes:

• Galatea has weak spot against MANLY man. This fact has been exploited a lot by Sao and Roger “to cheer up their somewhat cold master.”
• Galatea spends her pastime making pottery and reading classical poetry.
• Galatea’s conservative speech and mannerism suggest her (and probably the Gemini Sisters’) origin as a noble family member, although she doesn’t mind talking to people in casual language.
• Sao is among a few Devices to have Unison Armour mode. The other Devices are Baron’s Bamidman, Maxim’s Trombe Dei and the Linebackers. It is believed that Armstrong’s device, Forneus, also possesses its own Unison Armour mode but it cannot be confirmed as no evidence of its usage exists.
• Galatea’s name comes from the sea-nymph of the same name in Greek story ‘Acis and Galatea’.

No background detail is available ATM, but I bet everyone wants more of Freya's oneesama, right?

*dodges Sao's Oxtongue Rifle B-Mode*