Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by toran

Are people still doing the pic challenges?

If so, how about this for a challenge?

Spoiler for Pic:

O_O

*saves for supreme justice*

Got any more of those tasty NanoVita images?

<---- quite possibly the biggest NanoVita supporter on these forums

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by Keroko

O_O

*saves for supreme justice*

Got any more of those tasty NanoVita images?

<---- quite possibly the biggest NanoVita supporter on these forums

I don't think anyone will challenge you...
But I have to say it is a nice image really...

And didn't Satashi-sama have that picture challenge? I did that microfiction challenge but I don't think anyone remembers that

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by toran

Are people still doing the pic challenges?

If so, how about this for a challenge?

Spoiler for Pic:

O.o

How that's cute!

*Makes a note to save when I get home*

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by XenahortCharybdis

*pokes head around*

You have more than one fic?...I write so slowly I can't imagine having more than one at all, ever.

I try to only write one fanfic at a time. The key is I try, but then I get an idea and I have to write the idea or I'll be driven crazy and of course outside of fanfiction I'm writing a million others things also so I get distracted really easily. Oh and welcome to the board.

Originally Posted by Satashi

A few of us juggle fics :3 except me. I'd never dream of doing more than one at a time

Of course you wouldn't. Definitely not.

Originally Posted by Satashi

"Pass the chips please?"

"Subaru, you've eaten so many already!"

"But they're tasty!"

"Hey, slide the cheese dip over here?"

"Ah, here you go Fate-chan."

"No, Friedliche," Caro lightly tapped the top of her dragon. "Don't eat the salsa."

"Erio, try some of this. Say ahhhh."

"Ooooh, feed me too, Tia-Tia!"

"Feed yourself!"

"This is good, try some?"

"Thanks Darling," Amy leaned forward to take the bite. "Oooh, yummy."

"Hey don't run around!" Fate scolded her familiar playing with the twins. "Stay in your seats."

"Wow, Fate-mama scolded someone!"

"Shush, Vivio, that's rude." Nanoha was laughing.

"Hayate, can you pass the chips back this way?"

"Who else needs a refill?"

"Woo, our team scored, free drinks all around!"

"Can I have some beer?" A curious small voice

"NO!"
"No."
"No."
"nuh uh."
"Whoa, she's Nanoha's kid alright."

"What's that supposed to mean!?"

"Quiet down, people are staring."

"Let them!" Subaru waved to strangers.

"I can't take you anywhere."

"I feel your pain."

"That's our dysfunctional family alright..."

I liked that it made me smile and want to go work on MBLZ.

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

No written down work has been done on the next segment but i do have an idea on what it will be about. It shall be tittled "Noodle".

... Noodle well now I'm curious

Originally Posted by toran

Are people still doing the pic challenges?

If so, how about this for a challenge?

Spoiler for Pic:

I like that. I'm not inspired to write anything but I thought of this when I saw it

Nanoha: Be a good girl Vita
Vita: N-nanoha
Nanoha: Be my good girl
Vita: You're drunk aren't you
Nanoha:

[krisslanza]

Well. I got bored And I made myself write something for well... Fun. I dunno maybe I could made this longer, what do you think?

Spoiler for Oneshot-ness:

The clang of steel rang out in the small room; then another and another. Quickly another quick flurry of steel hitting steel then it was suddenly eerily quiet. Vivio let out an annoyed sigh as she stared cross-eyed at the sword point poking her nose. She never did beat Signum in these spars. The blade was withdrawn and Signum offered a hand to help Vivio to her feet; she picked her fallen sword from the floor nearby and wiped the sweat from her brow with the back of her gauntleted hand. The taller swordswoman re-sheathed her sword and placed one hand hovering just above the hilt as the other held the scabbard by her side. Vivio gripped her sword’s hilt with both hands and shifted her feet back into stance; a nod of the head and she had to quickly move to parry a sword stroke aimed for her head. She grunted and pushed back, throwing the pink-haired swordswoman momentarily off balance and lashed out with a slash towards her teacher – instead she felt an impact as her barrier crackled to life to stop a kick aimed for her gut. Although the barrier activated she was still hurled to the side by the impact and quickly hopped to her feet in time to block another slash.
The girl hopped up to avoid a sweeping kick aimed for her feet and slashed downward to strike against Signum’s scabbard. The other swordswoman used her freehand to slash at Vivio, her barrier flaring to life again as the impact hurled her into the air – she quickly regained her control in time to parry another blow. The two swordwomen exchanged a flurry of blows, the sound of steel clashing ringing out in the small room all over again then they broke off. Vivio tightened the grip on her sword and there was a ‘kachink’ sound as a cartridge was hurled out of her sword’s hilt along with a poof of smoke. In a flash Vivio was over by Signum and her blade hit the other’s barrier – at least she thought it was a barrier until she saw the glow around the woman’s body. Lifting her blade high another cartridge raced out of her device as she brought the sword back down, its blade now aglow – there was an explosion as the blade hit the shield and the two were flung apart by the impact.
Sweat rolled down her face again and she didn’t have time to wipe it always this time or rather she couldn’t – the girl sighed again as she struggled against the restraining Laevantine’s whip. Vivio hung her head as the sword uncoiled and returned back into a sword. Signum floated over and patted the girl on the head.
“You’re doing better Vivio.”

[toran]

Originally Posted by Keroko

O_O

*saves for supreme justice*

Got any more of those tasty NanoVita images?

<---- quite possibly the biggest NanoVita supporter on these forums

Unfortunately, no. I wish I did. I'm also a supporter of NanoVita.

Krisslanza: Now that I think back on it. I think it was Satashi. >.<
Are you having her use Excalibur like in that pic by the guy I can't seem to remember?

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by toran

Unfortunately, no. I wish I did. I'm also a supporter of NanoVita.

Krisslanza: Now that I think back on it. I think it was Satashi. >.<
Are you having her use Excalibur like in that pic by the guy I can't seem to remember?

Excalibur or Joyeuse. Can't decide. Both sound cool
Though I want to call her barrier jacket "Southern Cross".

But yes based off that cool Vivio pic

[Krinen]

Originally Posted by Keroko

<---- quite possibly the biggest NanoVita supporter on these forums

To challenge... or not to challenge? THAT. Is the question.

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Excalibur or Joyeuse. Can't decide. Both sound cool
Though I want to call her barrier jacket "Southern Cross".

But yes based off that cool Vivio pic

Considering that Vivio is the Future Saber (as it's meant to be in Rebuilt) you'd better decide on Excalibur Kha won't stop bugging you unless you do

And btw: "Joyeuse" means "Happy" :3

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by toran

Are people still doing the pic challenges?

If so, how about this for a challenge?

Spoiler for Pic:

That was me, "Picture is worth 1,000 words" challenge where people sent me images and I picked one and wrote a story that was around 1,000 words long about it. Mercuian Angel won it because she drew her own picture (That was before we were friends hehe )


But...... I may do it. May not. If I do they'd probably be a little older, sorry.

*Is also a NanoVita shipper*

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

I liked that it made me smile and want to go work on MBLZ.

... Noodle well now I'm curious

XD I inspired? GO ME! *flattered*

Noodle? *sings* I know what's going to happen~ (At least I think I do)

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Considering that Vivio is the Future Saber (as it's meant to be in Rebuilt) you'd better decide on Excalibur Kha won't stop bugging you unless you do

And btw: "Joyeuse" means "Happy" :3

But Arc-en-Ciel is separate from Rebuilt And bah! Kha can't touch me if I hide...
...
Somewhere.

My friend says to use Joyeuse because there is a Durandal The trio of sword made of the same metal - Joyeuse, Durandal, and Cortana.

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Well. I got bored And I made myself write something for well... Fun. I dunno maybe I could made this longer, what do you think?

Spoiler for Oneshot-ness:

The clang of steel rang out in the small room; then another and another. Quickly another quick flurry of steel hitting steel then it was suddenly eerily quiet. Vivio let out an annoyed sigh as she stared cross-eyed at the sword point poking her nose. She never did beat Signum in these spars. The blade was withdrawn and Signum offered a hand to help Vivio to her feet; she picked her fallen sword from the floor nearby and wiped the sweat from her brow with the back of her gauntleted hand. The taller swordswoman re-sheathed her sword and placed one hand hovering just above the hilt as the other held the scabbard by her side. Vivio gripped her sword’s hilt with both hands and shifted her feet back into stance; a nod of the head and she had to quickly move to parry a sword stroke aimed for her head. She grunted and pushed back, throwing the pink-haired swordswoman momentarily off balance and lashed out with a slash towards her teacher – instead she felt an impact as her barrier crackled to life to stop a kick aimed for her gut. Although the barrier activated she was still hurled to the side by the impact and quickly hopped to her feet in time to block another slash.
The girl hopped up to avoid a sweeping kick aimed for her feet and slashed downward to strike against Signum’s scabbard. The other swordswoman used her freehand to slash at Vivio, her barrier flaring to life again as the impact hurled her into the air – she quickly regained her control in time to parry another blow. The two swordwomen exchanged a flurry of blows, the sound of steel clashing ringing out in the small room all over again then they broke off. Vivio tightened the grip on her sword and there was a ‘kachink’ sound as a cartridge was hurled out of her sword’s hilt along with a poof of smoke. In a flash Vivio was over by Signum and her blade hit the other’s barrier – at least she thought it was a barrier until she saw the glow around the woman’s body. Lifting her blade high another cartridge raced out of her device as she brought the sword back down, its blade now aglow – there was an explosion as the blade hit the shield and the two were flung apart by the impact.
Sweat rolled down her face again and she didn’t have time to wipe it always this time or rather she couldn’t – the girl sighed again as she struggled against the restraining Laevantine’s whip. Vivio hung her head as the sword uncoiled and returned back into a sword. Signum floated over and patted the girl on the head.
“You’re doing better Vivio.”

Vivio+ Sword=Auto win

I was inspired by the above

Spoiler for The begining:

Vivio planted her feet, she prepared herself. Then she grabbed the handle of the sword and—“Ugu it’s heavy.”

“Don’t touch that!” the girl’s panicked babysitter dashed forward with the speed of a god, picked her up by the collar and carried her to the other side of the room.

“Signum don’t leave things like that lying around!”

“You’re over reacting Zafira,” the swordswoman chuckled, “It’s good to get children started early.”

“She’s six!” he yelled as he halted Vivio attempt to return to Signum’s weapon.

[krisslanza]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Vivio+ Sword=Auto win

I was inspired by the above

Spoiler for The begining:

Vivio planted her feet, she prepared herself. Then she grabbed the handle of the sword and—“Ugu it’s heavy.”
“Don’t touch that!” the girl’s panicked babysitter dashed forward with the speed of a god, picked her up by the collar and carried her to the other side of the room. “Signum don’t leave things like that lying around!”
“You’re over reacting Zafira,” the swordswoman chuckled, “It’s good to get children started early.”
“She’s six!” he yelled as he halted Vivio attempt to return to Signum’s weapon.

*Gag*
I inspired something!? O_o
Thats a first...

But cute

[USB500]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Well. I got bored And I made myself write something for well... Fun. I dunno maybe I could made this longer, what do you think?

Spoiler for Oneshot-ness:

The clang of steel rang out in the small room; then another and another. Quickly another quick flurry of steel hitting steel then it was suddenly eerily quiet. Vivio let out an annoyed sigh as she stared cross-eyed at the sword point poking her nose. She never did beat Signum in these spars. The blade was withdrawn and Signum offered a hand to help Vivio to her feet; she picked her fallen sword from the floor nearby and wiped the sweat from her brow with the back of her gauntleted hand. The taller swordswoman re-sheathed her sword and placed one hand hovering just above the hilt as the other held the scabbard by her side. Vivio gripped her sword’s hilt with both hands and shifted her feet back into stance; a nod of the head and she had to quickly move to parry a sword stroke aimed for her head. She grunted and pushed back, throwing the pink-haired swordswoman momentarily off balance and lashed out with a slash towards her teacher – instead she felt an impact as her barrier crackled to life to stop a kick aimed for her gut. Although the barrier activated she was still hurled to the side by the impact and quickly hopped to her feet in time to block another slash.
The girl hopped up to avoid a sweeping kick aimed for her feet and slashed downward to strike against Signum’s scabbard. The other swordswoman used her freehand to slash at Vivio, her barrier flaring to life again as the impact hurled her into the air – she quickly regained her control in time to parry another blow. The two swordwomen exchanged a flurry of blows, the sound of steel clashing ringing out in the small room all over again then they broke off. Vivio tightened the grip on her sword and there was a ‘kachink’ sound as a cartridge was hurled out of her sword’s hilt along with a poof of smoke. In a flash Vivio was over by Signum and her blade hit the other’s barrier – at least she thought it was a barrier until she saw the glow around the woman’s body. Lifting her blade high another cartridge raced out of her device as she brought the sword back down, its blade now aglow – there was an explosion as the blade hit the shield and the two were flung apart by the impact.
Sweat rolled down her face again and she didn’t have time to wipe it always this time or rather she couldn’t – the girl sighed again as she struggled against the restraining Laevantine’s whip. Vivio hung her head as the sword uncoiled and returned back into a sword. Signum floated over and patted the girl on the head.
“You’re doing better Vivio.”

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Vivio+ Sword=Auto win

I was inspired by the above

Spoiler for The begining:

Vivio planted her feet, she prepared herself. Then she grabbed the handle of the sword and—“Ugu it’s heavy.”
“Don’t touch that!” the girl’s panicked babysitter dashed forward with the speed of a god, picked her up by the collar and carried her to the other side of the room. “Signum don’t leave things like that lying around!”
“You’re over reacting Zafira,” the swordswoman chuckled, “It’s good to get children started early.”
“She’s six!” he yelled as he halted Vivio attempt to return to Signum’s weapon.

I like these. And Vivio makes everything even better.

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

But Arc-en-Ciel is separate from Rebuilt And bah! Kha can't touch me if I hide...
...
Somewhere.

My friend says to use Joyeuse because there is a Durandal The trio of sword made of the same metal - Joyeuse, Durandal, and Cortana.

It doesn't matter Kha will drag your Vivio and place her into Rebuilt so that she can legitimately be Saber's daughter and inherit Excalibur

And he will find you. He can find us all because......

The Power of Khrack Compels you!
The Power of Khrack Compels you!
The Power of Khrack Compels you!
The Power of Khrack Compels you!
The Power of Khrack Compels you!
The Power of Khrack Compels you!
The Power of Khrack Compels you!

Ahh, if that's the case then proceed Will Cortana appear too? If so then you MUST name it Joyeuse

[Hiddenryuu]

Nice sig USB, <== Is a touhou fanboy...

I really got to continue that fic X_X.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Vivio+ Sword=Auto win

I was inspired by the above

Spoiler for The begining:

Vivio planted her feet, she prepared herself. Then she grabbed the handle of the sword and—“Ugu it’s heavy.”
“Don’t touch that!” the girl’s panicked babysitter dashed forward with the speed of a god, picked her up by the collar and carried her to the other side of the room. “Signum don’t leave things like that lying around!”
“You’re over reacting Zafira,” the swordswoman chuckled, “It’s good to get children started early.”
“She’s six!” he yelled as he halted Vivio attempt to return to Signum’s weapon.

You are going somewere with this. Don't you?

[Krinen]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

You are going somewere with this. Don't you?

God, I hope he is.
I'd LOVE to read that. =3

[Hiddenryuu]

Btw ShinySword, I was just curious , were you still writing that onsen challanege?

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

It doesn't matter Kha will drag your Vivio and place her into Rebuilt so that she can legitimately be Saber's daughter and inherit Excalibur

And he will find you. He can find us all because......

The Power of Khrack Compels you!
The Power of Khrack Compels you!
The Power of Khrack Compels you!
The Power of Khrack Compels you!
The Power of Khrack Compels you!
The Power of Khrack Compels you!
The Power of Khrack Compels you!

Ahh, if that's the case then proceed Will Cortana appear too? If so then you MUST name it Joyeuse

Keikaku Doori...