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Old 2004-02-14, 16:17   Link #1
Namiko
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V-D - Characer Design

Here's a little something I did some time ago. She's Ayame, a little character design for further projects. The ears, don't ask... Basically like from chobits. It has a little valentines in it too.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/5269511/

there is a colored version, but not going to post that for a while.
C&C if you must. rip it apart and examine all you want. it isnt really special because it's only a character design, so... yeah.
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Old 2004-02-14, 16:51   Link #2
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i like it. Why not show the colored version?
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Old 2004-02-14, 16:56   Link #3
Namiko
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my scanner is fighting with me...and its pretty much winning. it's not scaning colours the right way for some reason. it changes the colours and pixelates them for some reason.
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Old 2004-02-14, 17:44   Link #4
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Nice.

Really cool.
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Old 2004-02-15, 03:11   Link #5
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Finally something different. I'm kinda getting bored of kawaii-bubblegum style drawings. Therefore, I give this pic a 9/10.
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Old 2004-02-15, 04:30   Link #6
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I must admit thats a good pic..

about teh only thing that really stands out is teh fact that her shoulders are to thin...
other than that its just small things taht would makeit look more profesional

KEEP UP TH GOOD WORK..

also try using photoshop i know its a pain but it works great,...
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Old 2004-02-16, 19:38   Link #7
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shoulders too thin? i'll have to do something about that.
lol, photoshop is a real pain, never figured it out.

thanks everyone for the C&C
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Old 2004-02-16, 20:16   Link #8
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Hmmm I think the shoulders are pretty proportional, it goes with your style. I really like the overall feel of the piece, esp. the flow of the hair. If you detailed the clothes and her eyes more, the picture would look more balanced and consistent since the hair, body, and lips are very detailed already compared to the rest of her.
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Old 2004-02-17, 02:01   Link #9
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Oh man... I really like those crystal blue eyes. Simply enchanting.

Only complain is that she has a rather high forehead IMO.
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