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123Hamster · 2004-06-09, 01:28

I try to start a art thread for myself.......... I wonder how long would it take before I can't keep it updated anymore. Okay let me start off with this

AND REMEMBER TO C&C

http://www.geocities.com/deadman1031/rugalb.html (Rugal B 6/27)

http://www.geocities.com/deadman1031/ninja.html (NINJA 6/26)

http://www.geocities.com/deadman1031/girl5.html (some devil girl 6/26)

http://www.geocities.com/deadman1031/man1.html (don't know what this is 6/26)

http://www.geocities.com/deadman1031/aliennine.html (ALIEN NINE FANART, NYAA!!! 6/24)

http://www.geocities.com/deadman1031/girl2.html (panties)

Asura · 2004-06-09, 04:14

kyoote.. well, it's a sketch, so i can't c&c much on it.. idk, but looks like the butt can be flatened a bit more where it touch base..to give some weight and hip width..otherwise, neat sketch.. panties...*Yumm

Yama_Le_Rouge · 2004-06-09, 19:36

The hands!!! ^^ plus she looks kinda flat, but with color it may look better.

anime-otaku · 2004-06-10, 22:22

Quote:

Originally Posted by 123Hamster

I try to start a art thread for myself.......... I wonder how long would it take before I can't keep it updated anymore. Okay let me start off with this

AND REMEMBER TO C&C

http://www.geocities.com/deadman1031/girl2.html (panties)

Hey man, You know I always like you stuff. And thats good going with you new style.

A little nit pick is that her mouth makes her face look flat, maybe a bit more curve to the edges of her mouth.

.gaara · 2004-06-10, 23:22

Panties!!!! Woooooooo

123Hamster · 2004-06-23, 02:07

Wee I finally got off my lazy butt and draw something....... And thanks for the helps and suggestions. I was rather amaze that my post didn't get deleted by now :P

Asura · 2004-06-23, 02:18

why should it be deleted?

123Hamster · 2004-06-23, 02:29

if the post is just dead for too long it goes to the last page then gets deleted... At least that happened to my first art thread

Asura · 2004-06-23, 02:44

hmm...i thought it's an accident that happened when the forum last crashed...

ettubrute · 2004-06-23, 03:13

oooh nice sketches! I like the girl especially, she has that semi-dazed, thinking-of-something-far-away look which is cool. the girl's hands look a lil too "skeletal", maybe you can smooth it out. And it'd be cool if you applied color too, but thats up to you, since it is a sketch after all. GJob

Serendipity · 2004-06-25, 06:30

They are very good, not too much shadowing and stuff, but perfect!

By the way... are you ready for a stupid question... What does C & C mean?

Asura · 2004-06-25, 17:58

C & C comment and criticize...in a constructive way, of course..

123Hamster · 2004-06-26, 01:19

wow I draw so much more than usual recently I am amaze of myself............ Yea another update

wao · 2004-06-26, 08:17

Not bad, but I think sometimes it gets a little stiff in some places. I suppose it's part of the style, but the faces are also a little off... how do I say, they're a bit flat.

In the first one she looks a bit like one eye is looking one way and one eye another.... wandering eye sort of syndrome. In this one the stiffish-looking legs work fine because she's young... and it reminds me of the moe-ish style where they draw young girls like that too... the legs at least.

In the second, the backhand looks awkward because it looks like it's stretching out too much (or that it's too long). Perhaps if you didn't make it so high up and changed the angle.. Otherwise looks fine.

In the third, the lines are pretty nice. Dammit, why don't you have bumpy lines? Whenever I draw ith my tablet, I can't do straight lines, even though I KNOW how to it just won't come out. Maybe it's my tablet?! No, it has to be me... Pretty cool, except you made a (embarrassing? Nah) booboo with "kowai yo" - you mixed up "ne" and "wa" and it reads "konei yo" o.o There shouldn't be a little curl there. UNLESS that's what she says/means, in which case I have just utterly made an ass out of my self

(Like my wonderful history teacher says, don't assume - it makes an ass out of you and me (ass u me)!)

In the fourth, she looks exactly like that drawing of Ninamori from FLCL in another thread... I suppose its the style? I do enjoy looking at it though, it's calming and reassuring.. not overly cute or unnaturally beautiful, but very pleasant. Still looking good, but now I think the legs are a bit stiff looking. Perhaps because she is an older girl. But that's not really the point, I'm just thinking that exposed thigh next to the panties, it looks a bit flat. Does she not have a butt? Then I'm jealous of her T_T Ask her to take some butt from me!

123Hamster · 2004-06-27, 01:15

Wow wao that's a lot of thoughtful C&Cs. Thanks a lot for the reply, I will try to keep those things in mind.

well from the show Yuri (the girl on pic 3) always say she's scare, or kowai yo, or I could have gotten it wrong too.... but she's suppose to say she's scare.

2004-06-09, 01:28	Link #1
123Hamster Hamster Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: MAO	123Hamster's sketches (UPDATED 6/26) I try to start a art thread for myself.......... I wonder how long would it take before I can't keep it updated anymore. Okay let me start off with this AND REMEMBER TO C&C http://www.geocities.com/deadman1031/rugalb.html (Rugal B 6/27) http://www.geocities.com/deadman1031/ninja.html (NINJA 6/26) http://www.geocities.com/deadman1031/girl5.html (some devil girl 6/26) http://www.geocities.com/deadman1031/man1.html (don't know what this is 6/26) http://www.geocities.com/deadman1031/aliennine.html (ALIEN NINE FANART, NYAA!!! 6/24) http://www.geocities.com/deadman1031/girl2.html (panties) Last edited by 123Hamster; 2004-06-27 at 01:10. Reason: Updated

2004-06-26, 08:17	Link #14
wao OK. Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: The Fields of High Attus Age: 34	Not bad, but I think sometimes it gets a little stiff in some places. I suppose it's part of the style, but the faces are also a little off... how do I say, they're a bit flat. In the first one she looks a bit like one eye is looking one way and one eye another.... wandering eye sort of syndrome. In this one the stiffish-looking legs work fine because she's young... and it reminds me of the moe-ish style where they draw young girls like that too... the legs at least. In the second, the backhand looks awkward because it looks like it's stretching out too much (or that it's too long). Perhaps if you didn't make it so high up and changed the angle.. Otherwise looks fine. In the third, the lines are pretty nice. Dammit, why don't you have bumpy lines? Whenever I draw ith my tablet, I can't do straight lines, even though I KNOW how to it just won't come out. Maybe it's my tablet?! No, it has to be me... Pretty cool, except you made a (embarrassing? Nah) booboo with "kowai yo" - you mixed up "ne" and "wa" and it reads "konei yo" o.o There shouldn't be a little curl there. UNLESS that's what she says/means, in which case I have just utterly made an ass out of my self (Like my wonderful history teacher says, don't assume - it makes an ass out of you and me (ass u me)!) In the fourth, she looks exactly like that drawing of Ninamori from FLCL in another thread... I suppose its the style? I do enjoy looking at it though, it's calming and reassuring.. not overly cute or unnaturally beautiful, but very pleasant. Still looking good, but now I think the legs are a bit stiff looking. Perhaps because she is an older girl. But that's not really the point, I'm just thinking that exposed thigh next to the panties, it looks a bit flat. Does she not have a butt? Then I'm jealous of her T_T Ask her to take some butt from me! __________________ Thanks for the fish

2004-06-09, 04:14	Link #2
Asura should i stay longer? Join Date: May 2003 Location: Hong Kong until May 6 2006.... it's paradise ;)	kyoote.. well, it's a sketch, so i can't c&c much on it.. idk, but looks like the butt can be flatened a bit more where it touch base..to give some weight and hip width..otherwise, neat sketch.. panties...*Yumm

2004-06-09, 19:36	Link #3
Yama_Le_Rouge I'm branded, I'm doomed Join Date: Feb 2004	The hands!!! ^^ plus she looks kinda flat, but with color it may look better.

2004-06-10, 23:22	Link #5
.gaara i'm in love --- :O Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: L o n d o n Age: 39	Panties!!!! Woooooooo

2004-06-23, 02:07	Link #6
123Hamster Hamster Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: MAO	Wee I finally got off my lazy butt and draw something....... And thanks for the helps and suggestions. I was rather amaze that my post didn't get deleted by now :P

2004-06-23, 02:18	Link #7
Asura should i stay longer? Join Date: May 2003 Location: Hong Kong until May 6 2006.... it's paradise ;)	why should it be deleted?

2004-06-23, 02:29	Link #8
123Hamster Hamster Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: MAO	if the post is just dead for too long it goes to the last page then gets deleted... At least that happened to my first art thread

2004-06-23, 02:44	Link #9
Asura should i stay longer? Join Date: May 2003 Location: Hong Kong until May 6 2006.... it's paradise ;)	hmm...i thought it's an accident that happened when the forum last crashed...

2004-06-23, 03:13	Link #10
ettubrute Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2004	oooh nice sketches! I like the girl especially, she has that semi-dazed, thinking-of-something-far-away look which is cool. the girl's hands look a lil too "skeletal", maybe you can smooth it out. And it'd be cool if you applied color too, but thats up to you, since it is a sketch after all. GJob

2004-06-25, 06:30	Link #11
Serendipity Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Konoha Village Age: 37	They are very good, not too much shadowing and stuff, but perfect! By the way... are you ready for a stupid question... What does C & C mean?

2004-06-25, 17:58	Link #12
Asura should i stay longer? Join Date: May 2003 Location: Hong Kong until May 6 2006.... it's paradise ;)	C & C comment and criticize...in a constructive way, of course..

2004-06-26, 01:19	Link #13
123Hamster Hamster Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: MAO	wow I draw so much more than usual recently I am amaze of myself............ Yea another update

2004-06-27, 01:15	Link #15
123Hamster Hamster Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: MAO	Wow wao that's a lot of thoughtful C&Cs. Thanks a lot for the reply, I will try to keep those things in mind. well from the show Yuri (the girl on pic 3) always say she's scare, or kowai yo, or I could have gotten it wrong too.... but she's suppose to say she's scare.