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Old 2011-08-27, 23:08   Link #34001
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Short fic from me. The (The Way) at the beginning of the title is because fanfiction.net's 40-character limit means I had to shorten it, so that part's going to get chopped off when I post the chapter there...

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Oh, poor Shamal. Even when a guy takes her side with things, she can't completely win. The small Zaffy/Shamal hints were sweet, and Zafira is certainly a very intelligent man, knowing when to keep his mouth shut!

Just because I'm curious, does this one-shot apply to your Steel Queen Chronicles? Or is it a general sort of thing that can be applied to any specific canon?

EDIT: Pageclaim for Shamal's cooking!
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Old 2011-08-27, 23:13   Link #34002
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So I know I'm almost a week late for my next release but I just lack the motivation and find myself wanting to do different things.

I think we can conclude that release speed is directly related to amount of interest. I got new Daemon Kaiser and Materials no Jikan posted fairly quickly because a good number of people expressed their desire to see them. But now with my latest one, which is going on 2 weeks, I only have 2 people saying they want to see it while everyone else is saying they want Three's Company instead.

Of course this leads to Three's Company keep getting pushed back until I finish the other one Well I'm done work now and I don't start school until the 8th so I'll have more time... That I'm sure I'll inevitably waste
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Old 2011-08-28, 05:38   Link #34003
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While I have been dying for a new chapter of Three's Company, I've waited a year and am more than willing to wait longer if more Jikan comes out of it. There's just too much good stuff out there to pick from and I can't help but want it all.

And on another note... After rereading my reworked 'I Stand Alone', I have realized that the new additions really don't help it at all. In fact, it seems more like I strung together two separate stories with a horrible Ass Pull via Jail.

So I'm going to try for something I've never considered trying before, crack fics. Maybe that'll clear out the cobwebs in the attic a bit. Readers beware.
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Old 2011-08-28, 09:13   Link #34004
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Oooh right, Yui is a girl. I forget details when work is burying me with paperwork!
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Short fic from me. The (The Way) at the beginning of the title is because fanfiction.net's 40-character limit means I had to shorten it, so that part's going to get chopped off when I post the chapter there...

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Cute When i read the title I thought that food would literally go through someone's stomach... much along the lines of Vita's imagination...

Is Shamal the oldest in canon?
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Old 2011-08-28, 09:15   Link #34005
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Is Shamal the oldest in canon?
Well, more or less, she's the oldest if we go by the ages officially given to them by the TSAB. And because we don't have info on how old they really are that's all we have for now.
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Old 2011-08-28, 09:16   Link #34006
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Is Shamal the oldest in canon?
Yes.

In A's: Shamal was legally 22. Signum was legally 19. Vita was legally 8.
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Old 2011-08-28, 09:19   Link #34007
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Signum was legally 19.
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That woman does not look 19, is all I'll say.
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Old 2011-08-28, 09:29   Link #34008
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That woman does not look 19, is all I'll say.
Curiously, Signum do look younger in A's than in StrikerS, but i guess we can attribute that to a change in the art-style(back then she looked a bit less tall, have bigger eyes and less angular face lines).

Don't believe me? Just take an compare any two official Signum images/screencaps from the two seasons and put them back-to-back xD.
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Old 2011-08-28, 10:07   Link #34009
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Wow, I hadn't expected such a review. I hadn't even thought about that last part being a meta-statement and thinking about it that makes the ending seem rather... surreal? I think.

I've done some reworking to fix a few things and tried to expand on the story so that some of the actions make more sense and to flesh out why Yuuno feels the way he does. I hope so, at least.

It'll also let me try to work in other short stories following the events and possibly parallel to the events. Certainly Hayate and Vivio's reaction is something I should cover at some point. Assuming my muse doesn't suddenly fall apart due to lack of prior use.

I've split it into two parts so that there isn't a sudden massive text bomb. Though it is still fairly long... So without further blathering:

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And on another note... After rereading my reworked 'I Stand Alone', I have realized that the new additions really don't help it at all. In fact, it seems more like I strung together two separate stories with a horrible Ass Pull via Jail.

So I'm going to try for something I've never considered trying before, crack fics. Maybe that'll clear out the cobwebs in the attic a bit. Readers beware.
Sorry to took so long for me to read this.

Anyways, there are no major problems with the additions. It may seem like two separate stories to you, but that's because you wrote them at different times. I've felt the same way using an older passage with a newer one. The readers won't get that feeling, though.

The Jail thing is fine, because that's not the focus. The focus is how Yuuno deals with it. Since you're only focusing in that area, the details of Jail's plan aren't important. Plus, suddenly coming out like that is the idea of a surprise attack

Also, maybe I'm just being concieted but was that a reference to Volvo in there?

Now for problems: start a new paragraph when a new person speaks. I'm honestly surprised by how many authors I see not doing this. You do this a few times, with Hayate and Yuuno's dialouge in the same paragraph, as well as Yuuno and Vivio's.

I wouldn't have Vivio call him 'Yuuno-papa'. Seeing as how a major part of the fic is that he's not had time to be with his friends in a non work related context, then Yuuno wouldn't have a close enough role in Vivio's family to warrant the 'papa' suffix.

Other than that, I think you did a good job.
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Old 2011-08-28, 10:26   Link #34010
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Yes.

In A's: Shamal was legally 22. Signum was legally 19. Vita was legally 8.
There's nothing legal about Vita being 8. :V
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Old 2011-08-28, 12:28   Link #34011
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There's nothing legal about Vita being 8. :V
Not until StrikerS at least.

Anyway...

Spoiler for Material Days Part 90:
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Old 2011-08-28, 13:55   Link #34012
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Not until StrikerS at least.

Anyway...

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Garyuu really doesn't have much Kamen Rider-ish about him... except the insect theme, I guess.

Well, the fight isn't going too well for the 'good guys', is it? Wonder what'll put a stop to it in the end.
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Old 2011-08-28, 13:57   Link #34013
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Bug + Scarf pretty much IS a Kamen Rider, at least if you're talking Showa-era.
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Old 2011-08-28, 14:53   Link #34014
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Plus, Material L is nuttier than squirrel shit.

Still waiting for Voltaire to show up.
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Old 2011-08-28, 16:23   Link #34015
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Not until StrikerS at least.

Anyway...

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Well, judging that Materials supposed to be stronger than their counterparts, it`s natural, that their familiars also stronger. I wouldn`t put my money on poor Arf if she will e forced to face the Cerberus.
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Old 2011-08-28, 16:41   Link #34016
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Well, judging that Materials supposed to be stronger than their counterparts, it`s natural, that their familiars also stronger. I wouldn`t put my money on poor Arf if she will e forced to face the Cerberus.
Cerberus isn't a Familiar, though, he's a summon.
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Old 2011-08-28, 17:14   Link #34017
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Trash talk was super effective after all.

As for Voltaire.... it will probably be stopped by Sette or by the 2 Materials and their pet.
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Old 2011-08-28, 21:21   Link #34018
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Old 2011-08-28, 21:31   Link #34019
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Not until StrikerS at least.

Anyway...

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Nice chapter, Nanya. It's always sad to see Poor Communication Kills in action, I hope that things get better.
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Old 2011-08-28, 21:40   Link #34020
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While the chapter is awesome, I question the competency of the TSAB at this stage.

Fate: Um guys, we sent Caro and Erio some time ago, shouldn't we check on them?

Staff: Nah...They'll be fine! I mean, it's just pop in, take ferret-boy and then leave, how hard would it be?

Nanoha: But, if he is held hostage, then I don't think those 2 can break through...

Staff: Such worryworts, have faith in your companions.

Fate/Nanoha: I guess so, I mean if they ran in trouble they would contact us right?

Erio (in his mind): WHY AREN'T THEY RESPONDING TO MY MESSAGES AND MY REQUESTS FOR BACKUP?!!!

*urgent message, 4 unread messages*

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