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2016-08-10, 12:39 | Link #142 | |
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2016-08-10, 13:20 | Link #143 | |
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Okay you stopped reading it, but then why are you still here complaining and whining? Unless annoying other readers is what you intended to do, I see no reason for you to keep being here. Nobody forces you to stay here. If you want to know how many people still reading it, you don't need to be so provocative and demeaning in asking. And no need to act intellectual and scholarly. We are not a patient in your psychiatric session. |
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2016-08-10, 22:13 | Link #144 | ||
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I'm reading because I Like it. why you ask again? you asking same question again and again. oh okay I read it because it's easy read. noo need using your brain. the plot is predictable. I read it because I like it..
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2016-08-10, 23:42 | Link #145 |
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Hahaha. I'm reading it because it's relaxing and just plain fun to read without the need to think too much. There are also stories that require a lot of thinking and I enjoyed those as well. It just depends on my mood which one I want to read.
What I'm curious is what's the story like with an actual editor. The released volumes of 1 and 2 should be quite different compared to the web novel version. Either way, I enjoyed it enough that I ended up buying all the released volumes. Now I just need to save up to buy the batches for Madan no Ou to Vanadis and Haken no Kouki Altina. Those were a a fun read too.
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2016-08-11, 02:22 | Link #146 | ||
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2016-08-11, 02:59 | Link #147 | |
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It might get better later, or not. Or it might get worse. That's up to individual readers to decide. Okay so you think the story is crappy. That the characters are flat, That the plot is too predictable. That the writing is bad. There is lack of character development Duly noted. Any other complain about the story that you want to whine about? That you want readers that visit this thread to know? |
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2016-08-11, 03:46 | Link #148 |
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whoa man...! even i already forgot i read this once.....
@Moe Connection too lazy to make username and membership.... :P but i try to bookmark and looky lo~ lurk around before made one. had too many account lazy to remember them la! i already got email, animesuki, fanfiction.net and fictionpress... me so damn la to remember them all, my memory no good, no good. Thanks btw. @Prongs well, if you want complain.... a medieval based setting story without rape and female abuse is a big BS. but i would settle for rape. do we have the possibility of rape in the future? i never expect Game of Throne politics from this wn :P but having rape is welcomed i guess, make it more subtly realistic for this story. or... "Tell them to eat Brioche, mon ami~!" :P @pervypig my reason to keep reading these (though i tad forgotten about this :P) ? to expand my knowledge on any material that have great potential for Netorare, Rape, Blackmail, Cheating doujin. I always tell myself to "Learn without satiety and Teach without weary"
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2016-08-11, 13:30 | Link #149 | |
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Anyways, from what I can tell, the time period the story seems to take place more modern than medieval though. Probably at least the 17th century though at times it feels closer to the 18th. Naw. I rather say that it's different than poorly written. It's more similar to Akagami no Shirayuki. Basically a fantasy setting in quite a romanticized and mostly ideal kingdom. Very different than stuff like Nejimaki Seirei Senki - Tenkyou no Alderamin, Berserk, or Madan no Ou to Vanadis. It isn't meant to be realistic in terms of the settings. I mean, the fact that this kingdom is the same exact kingdom in the otome game she played before she died should tell you. And that specifically to me is something I also quite like from the more usual dark medieval stuff I read. And from my opinion, it's well written from that point since it knows what it wants to be from the getgo.
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2016-08-12, 00:26 | Link #150 | |
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2016-08-12, 08:48 | Link #151 | |
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It's like Entrenal said, the story is too ... ideal - but yeah, i could still enjoy the story despite some of it's flaw. |
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2016-08-12, 09:13 | Link #152 | ||
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medieval story with rape? go read re'monster oukouku e tsuzuku michi Chikyuu Tenseisha no Koroshikata himekishi ga classmate etc instead reading this story.
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2016-08-12, 17:18 | Link #153 |
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The biggest issue I had with the story was the making schooling for kids compulsory. That should have caused huge ripples since in that kind of era kids of those ages would have all been working for their families as basically unpaid labor. But there was no problem whatsoever. Iris said do it and it was done.
I enjoy the story too but the author really simplifies over some topics way too much.
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2016-08-12, 21:01 | Link #154 |
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Because different value.
At that point of history peasant have less working hour but their children are put under apprenticeship for their future career, making being literate not that important. It pretty consistent so far in my opinion, if you want all your subject are able to read. |
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2016-08-13, 01:47 | Link #156 | |
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And this kind of reform need to be forced if the population dont know its value. Just like how potato introduced to europe at gun point. So in short she want the kids to have free time for school, she reduce the tax. She also have the power to do so as the highest governing body of her land. My only problem is 2 years of time skip which the writer probably dont want to go full detail about the reform. |
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2016-08-13, 02:30 | Link #157 |
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And so the replies to my pseudo-academic question end up riling up again how unrealistic the story really is... *sigh* There you go, I never did insulted anyone's intelligence once in my threads, even if they did find an ideal shoujo story entertaining. Looks like I really should read it if only to see what keeps em coming...
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2016-08-13, 02:43 | Link #159 |
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^pervytiger, I won't and I can't stop pple from reading wat they like. And if u followed the threads, you'd realise I was the one that got shuddup shoved on my face 1st, never once did I insult anyone except to tell em to chill. Besides, telling pple to stop reading is more counterproductive than telling them to start reading, if 10yrs of compulsory education told me anything.
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