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falcolobo · 2013-11-15, 10:39

Chapter 2 of my story is up!

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9815304...-UnlimitedFATE

blitz1/2 · 2013-11-15, 17:05

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

I always wonder what would happened if Shirou summoned Lelouch vi Brittania as a Ruler?

Doubt that would work well. And besides, Lelouch with his lousy stats? That would be hilarious.

Fireminer · 2013-11-15, 17:58

Forgot to mention, but it's not canon-Lelouch per se, but the version of him in my Code Geass fic (https://fanfiction.net/s/9346083/1/L...the-Black-King). After the end of it, there will be 2 branching roads: A crossover with Muv-Luv, and another with Fate like I said above. Basically, think Lelouch with Kamen Rider Knight's armor.

Fireminer · 2013-11-16, 09:52

Also, that remind me of another weird idea: Shirou as the incarnation of Gilgamesh.

blitz1/2 · 2013-11-16, 14:38

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

Also, that remind me of another weird idea: Shirou as the incarnation of Gilgamesh.

But...Shirou is a faker....Rather maybe Shirou should be the reincarnation of Enkidu.

Fireminer · 2013-11-16, 20:36

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Originally Posted by blitz1/2

But...Shirou is a faker....Rather maybe Shirou should be the reincarnation of Enkidu.

That is not a bad idea! Maybe I would mix it in my Code Geass crossover.

falcolobo · 2013-11-17, 15:28

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Originally Posted by blitz1/2

But...Shirou is a faker....Rather maybe Shirou should be the reincarnation of Enkidu.

Not entirely accurate. Enkidu was best friends with Gilgamesh and Enkidu was an animal-man.

demino_hellsin · 2013-11-18, 04:31

Does this seem viable in any way?

Name: Shirushi Shouko
Age: 14
Gender: female
Magic circuit count: 100,000+
Prana count per circuit: 25 units
Description: a young girl with long black hair and pale skin. Her hair is actually white, but dyed black. Her eyes are red as she is an albino. She was born with a weak body and is expected to die young.

History: The Shirushi clan is an abnormal clan that practices inbreeding. The cause is not for any reason of bloodline purity. It is generally because their practices are not normal. Despite only existing for 100 years, they are already at their 7th generation. That's because the Shirushi clan generally births at ages of anywhere between 12 and 16. They generally never live past 20 due to their bodies being composed entirely of magic circuits. This gives them a vast prana source but also extremely short lifespans. Their thaumaturgy is of a higher class than most magi but they experience great pains when practicing the craft. Shouko partakes in the holy grail war despite the sealing designations on her clan she wants to escape her fate. She is estimated to die before her 16th birthday.

Personality: she is normally calm and kind. But she's like any other teen-aged girl in her situation. She is distraught and desperate. She has no care for the indirect consequences of her actions as she joins the holy grail war. She hopes to win and gain an extension to her life. She feels it is unfair that she has to suffer for being born this way.

Fireminer · 2013-11-18, 06:56

Not bad! Try to write a paragraph of her.

demino_hellsin · 2013-11-18, 07:48

She was silent as she watched them burn. They were screaming, they were clawing at her, begging for help, begging to be saved. They were begging for her mercy. Mercy she was not willing to give. Why should she give them mercy? Why should she care whether they died? Close, she was so close to death, but she wasn't going to give in to that. She was going to live through this.

"What... are you? That magic- that power- I hadn't even felt the leylines move."

And yet all around lay destruction. The cheap little three-storey motel was nothing more than a smoldering monument of destruction. Powerlines were cut, even streetlights rendered useless under the vast sea of flames that consumed all.

"Where does that power come from?"

She bit back a scream. She bit back pain. Her skin began to riddle itself with patterned lines of light. It was like the flames themselves were burning her as her nerves registered nothing but mind numbing pain. She stood, despite that suffering she stood. The man before her and herself were on equal grounds.

"It can't be... So it was true. Those crazed experiment of you Japanese magi proved fruitful. You monst-"

BANG!

and silence.

She stood there. Her hand outstretched. Her skin no longer glowed as smoke rosed from the pyre beneath her hand, on the spot where the man's upper torso used to exist with the remaining legs and pelvis. The innerds and viscera refused to spill out from the instantaneous cauterization that occurred from the blast. She felt no guilt from what she did. All she felt was pain, and hate, and frustration. They were on equal ground, nay. The man was at an advantage. They were both in pain but he lived well over twice the age when she was expected to die.

She felt no guilt. She would live. This God-forsaken blood in her would not deny her the kiss of life, nor would any other inane wish. She would have the grail.

Fireminer · 2013-11-18, 08:07

Interesting! But what timeline? And any plan for a full-lenght story?

demino_hellsin · 2013-11-18, 08:13

If I had to pick a timeline... either FZ or FSN. Nothing else really. SHe's an original master that I thought up when I remembered Shiro's UBW bad end. I never really imagined her in a story.

Fireminer · 2013-11-18, 08:28

Well, I'm actually thinking about Extra and Prototype with that character. Just pair her up with Lancer of Black (A Demon), or Saber of Black (Almost indestructable).

Hmm... Giving Lelouck KR Blade armor, Shirou/Archer with Chalice. Then who would get Garren and Leangle?

demino_hellsin · 2013-11-18, 10:56

Gilgamesh and Lancer respectively?

So a saber or a lancer? I was mostly conflicted on who her servant should be. I want someone who can act as her foil or mirrors her hardships.

Fireminer · 2013-11-18, 17:36

Probally a Lancer. Or a Assassin wouldn't be a bad idea.

blitz1/2 · 2013-11-18, 19:28

Quote:

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

Does this seem viable in any way?

Name: Shirushi Shouko
Age: 14
Gender: female
Magic circuit count: 100,000+
Prana count per circuit: 25 units
Description: a young girl with long black hair and pale skin. Her hair is actually white, but dyed black. Her eyes are red as she is an albino. She was born with a weak body and is expected to die young.

History: The Shirushi clan is an abnormal clan that practices inbreeding. The cause is not for any reason of bloodline purity. It is generally because their practices are not normal. Despite only existing for 100 years, they are already at their 7th generation. That's because the Shirushi clan generally births at ages of anywhere between 12 and 16. They generally never live past 20 due to their bodies being composed entirely of magic circuits. This gives them a vast prana source but also extremely short lifespans. Their thaumaturgy is of a higher class than most magi but they experience great pains when practicing the craft. Shouko partakes in the holy grail war despite the sealing designations on her clan she wants to escape her fate. She is estimated to die before her 16th birthday.

Personality: she is normally calm and kind. But she's like any other teen-aged girl in her situation. She is distraught and desperate. She has no care for the indirect consequences of her actions as she joins the holy grail war. She hopes to win and gain an extension to her life. She feels it is unfair that she has to suffer for being born this way.

100,000 circuits?! What is she? A grail vessel?!

allfictions · 2013-11-18, 19:42

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

That is not a bad idea! Maybe I would mix it in my Code Geass crossover.

I would suggest against it. It's...never a really good idea to mix too many radical concepts in a crossover. Better to stick to your original idea

Fireminer · 2013-11-18, 20:04

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Originally Posted by allfictions

I would suggest against it. It's...never a really good idea to mix too many radical concepts in a crossover. Better to stick to your original idea

Correct, but again, I'm a man of the Unthinkable. Mixing up everything I could find is what I good at!

Say, would these weapon suit for Shirou/Archer?

blitz1/2 · 2013-11-18, 21:09

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

Correct, but again, I'm a man of the Unthinkable. Mixing up everything I could find is what I good at!

Say, would these weapon suit for Shirou/Archer?

Part of it looks like Archer-ko's bow.

Fireminer · 2013-11-18, 21:36

Yes, it suits Archer's taste perfectly!

Also, if I made C.C as the source of the Grail (provide the mean), and it happen about 10 years after the end of Code Geass, then when would the 5th War occur (in A.T.B)?

2013-11-15, 10:39	Link #1021
falcolobo The Third Runner Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: In my house	Chapter 2 of my story is up! https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9815304...-UnlimitedFATE __________________

2013-11-15, 17:58	Link #1023
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Forgot to mention, but it's not canon-Lelouch per se, but the version of him in my Code Geass fic (https://fanfiction.net/s/9346083/1/L...the-Black-King). After the end of it, there will be 2 branching roads: A crossover with Muv-Luv, and another with Fate like I said above. Basically, think Lelouch with Kamen Rider Knight's armor.

2013-11-16, 09:52	Link #1024
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Also, that remind me of another weird idea: Shirou as the incarnation of Gilgamesh.

2013-11-18, 04:31	Link #1028
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Does this seem viable in any way? Name: Shirushi Shouko Age: 14 Gender: female Magic circuit count: 100,000+ Prana count per circuit: 25 units Description: a young girl with long black hair and pale skin. Her hair is actually white, but dyed black. Her eyes are red as she is an albino. She was born with a weak body and is expected to die young. History: The Shirushi clan is an abnormal clan that practices inbreeding. The cause is not for any reason of bloodline purity. It is generally because their practices are not normal. Despite only existing for 100 years, they are already at their 7th generation. That's because the Shirushi clan generally births at ages of anywhere between 12 and 16. They generally never live past 20 due to their bodies being composed entirely of magic circuits. This gives them a vast prana source but also extremely short lifespans. Their thaumaturgy is of a higher class than most magi but they experience great pains when practicing the craft. Shouko partakes in the holy grail war despite the sealing designations on her clan she wants to escape her fate. She is estimated to die before her 16th birthday. Personality: she is normally calm and kind. But she's like any other teen-aged girl in her situation. She is distraught and desperate. She has no care for the indirect consequences of her actions as she joins the holy grail war. She hopes to win and gain an extension to her life. She feels it is unfair that she has to suffer for being born this way.

2013-11-18, 06:56	Link #1029
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Not bad! Try to write a paragraph of her.

2013-11-18, 07:48	Link #1030
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	She was silent as she watched them burn. They were screaming, they were clawing at her, begging for help, begging to be saved. They were begging for her mercy. Mercy she was not willing to give. Why should she give them mercy? Why should she care whether they died? Close, she was so close to death, but she wasn't going to give in to that. She was going to live through this. "What... are you? That magic- that power- I hadn't even felt the leylines move." And yet all around lay destruction. The cheap little three-storey motel was nothing more than a smoldering monument of destruction. Powerlines were cut, even streetlights rendered useless under the vast sea of flames that consumed all. "Where does that power come from?" She bit back a scream. She bit back pain. Her skin began to riddle itself with patterned lines of light. It was like the flames themselves were burning her as her nerves registered nothing but mind numbing pain. She stood, despite that suffering she stood. The man before her and herself were on equal grounds. "It can't be... So it was true. Those crazed experiment of you Japanese magi proved fruitful. You monst-" BANG! and silence. She stood there. Her hand outstretched. Her skin no longer glowed as smoke rosed from the pyre beneath her hand, on the spot where the man's upper torso used to exist with the remaining legs and pelvis. The innerds and viscera refused to spill out from the instantaneous cauterization that occurred from the blast. She felt no guilt from what she did. All she felt was pain, and hate, and frustration. They were on equal ground, nay. The man was at an advantage. They were both in pain but he lived well over twice the age when she was expected to die. She felt no guilt. She would live. This God-forsaken blood in her would not deny her the kiss of life, nor would any other inane wish. She would have the grail.

2013-11-18, 08:07	Link #1031
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Interesting! But what timeline? And any plan for a full-lenght story?

2013-11-18, 08:13	Link #1032
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	If I had to pick a timeline... either FZ or FSN. Nothing else really. SHe's an original master that I thought up when I remembered Shiro's UBW bad end. I never really imagined her in a story.

2013-11-18, 08:28	Link #1033
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Well, I'm actually thinking about Extra and Prototype with that character. Just pair her up with Lancer of Black (A Demon), or Saber of Black (Almost indestructable). Hmm... Giving Lelouck KR Blade armor, Shirou/Archer with Chalice. Then who would get Garren and Leangle?

2013-11-18, 10:56	Link #1034
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Gilgamesh and Lancer respectively? So a saber or a lancer? I was mostly conflicted on who her servant should be. I want someone who can act as her foil or mirrors her hardships.

2013-11-18, 17:36	Link #1035
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Probally a Lancer. Or a Assassin wouldn't be a bad idea.

2013-11-18, 21:36	Link #1040
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Yes, it suits Archer's taste perfectly! Also, if I made C.C as the source of the Grail (provide the mean), and it happen about 10 years after the end of Code Geass, then when would the 5th War occur (in A.T.B)?