Fate/ Series FanFiction Discussion

[wavehawk]

Originally Posted by Takeshi senpai

Rider is replaced with Genghis Khan

- Who could also qualify for Archer, considering that the Mongols were excellent archers on horseback. So one possibility is to have a Noble Phantasm functionally similar to UBW--eg a hail of arrows. Or maybe just call it "Silk Road" and invent something.

Caster is now King Solomon(easier to think of, considering the demons he contracted with)

- He woudl be a very interesting character study. Solomon in Judaic/Biblical terms was blessed by God (Judaic/Christian but was not faithful to God. Yet because of the pact (and my memory is spotty since I haven't been to Sunday School in decades) God still blesses Solomon with luck and plenty.

Lancer with Honda Tadakatsu

- The only passing disagreement I have with this is that usually Lancers have the worst Luck stat of the Servants. Honda was ridiculously lucky in terms of combat and if you believe the stories, has never been injured in combat That could be his Noble Phantasm actually--no one can actually injure him in a fight.

Berserker with Diomedes and Assassin with Locusta the poisonor(obviously poison, but still can't think of a Noble Phantasm).

- Isn't Locusta already an Assassin feaured in one of the light novels? Or am I misrememberign again?

[Takeshi senpai]

Can't find Locusta on the wiki, so I doubt she was used. After consideration, I've decided to change it to an alternate universe with all original characters, except Saber, Shirou and Rin. Saber will not be a servant summoned for the Holy Grail war but due to other sources.

[Takeshi senpai]

I also decide to use Sun wukong as Berserker and Babarika as Archer.

[Takeshi senpai]

For Genghis Khan's Noble Phantasms:
Ustgalaas aikh aidas: An anti-mind Noble Phantasm that forces the opponents to witness and experience the atrocities done by the mongol hordes
Kharash: Genghis Khan will offer the choice for the enemy to surrender. If they do, they will be forced to obey all commands of Genghis Khan, regardless of being human or a heroic spirit, which can only be stopped by a command spell.
khamag tsergüüd: Similar to ioniol Hetaroi, will create the Mongolian Steppes during the harah winter. A near unlimited amount of arrows, giant rocks and bombs rain from the sky as the Mongol hordes attack. A portion of the hordes are illusions to make the army appear bigger. The army will use siege weapons and cannons that can be replaced if destroyed. Small groups will appear out of nowhere to ambush the enemy and surround them. Humans that entered the reality marble will be inflicted with a more lethal and fast acting plague that is incurable through normal methods. Genghis Khan will be able to use any Noble Phantasm of people defeated by this.

[wavehawk]

Originally Posted by Takeshi senpai

For Genghis Khan's Noble Phantasms:
Ustgalaas aikh aidas: An anti-mind Noble Phantasm that forces the opponents to witness and experience the atrocities done by the mongol hordes

- so it's kind of like a reverse Penance Stare?

[Takeshi senpai]

Yes, since the mongols did those atrocities to scare other people to surrender rather than fight.

[wavehawk]

That'd work.

I once joked to friends that turning Altair or Ezio Auditore into an Assassin Servant would be an interesting story. they threatened to cut off body parts if I ever mentioned it again.

[Takeshi senpai]

May I ask why they threatened to do so?

[wavehawk]

Diehard Assassin's Creed fans. They were severely offended that Ezio or Altair would be a servant to a teenage japanese mage. :P

[Takeshi senpai]

For Honda Tadakatsu:
Shi o koeta senshi: Honda Tadakatsu can never be injured in battle, meaning he can only be killed when he is not engaged in combat.
Tonbogiri: A-rank Noble Phantasm. Is able to slice through any object and Noble Phantasm that is lower or equal in rank.
Nakatsuka Masamune: A sword made by Masamune, the legendary swordsmith. A sword made by Masamune is said to be able to cut anything the user chose to cut and won't cut through anything that he doesn't. Before swinging, Honda will choose what he doesn't want to cut, then anything that he didn't chose will be sliced apart.

[Twi]

Path of the King updated: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7657235...th-of-the-King

[wavehawk]

I wonder if this bit of news will give Gil fic writers ideas...
http://www.smithsonianmag.com/smart-...956844/?no-ist

[Brother Coa]

Chapter 4 of Fate Requiem is out.

[Brother Coa]

New chapter is out, this time it's little Intermission.

( once you enter click on Chapter 1 and select Intermission 1, that's the latest one )

[Yu Ominae]

https://forums.spacebattles.com/thre...uverse.373678/

Created "Lost Memories". It's basically FS/N, but with some paranormal detective stuff mixed in from the perspective of outsiders investigating Fuyuki City after the 4th HGW.

[Twi]

Kariya's Legacy has updated.

[Twi]

Hey guys, I'm working on trying to plan out a Psyren x Fate Stay Night crossover and if anyone wants to chime in on its development:

Side-characters from Fate Stay Night are attempting to prevent a hellish scenario in the near future which turns out to be because of the Holy Grail War, as Angra Mayu has given birth to enough curses that it wiped out the majority of humanity barring select organizations—Atlas, Clock Tower, and so on with protection against curses. With their prey in such short supply, vampires (who didn't fall under the purview of the curse) stalk the lands and stray curses exist as well. Alaya has empowered a single psychic with the ability to perform time travel, pulling individuals from the past into the future (see: Time Travel), an act that also bestows them with psychic abilities (read: engrave specialized circuits to realize supernatural phemonia).

These Drifters have gone through the hellish world of the near future and now, as the Holy Grail War nears, they team up with different Masters in hopes of avoiding that future.


Time Travel

Nemesis Q sends the souls of the drifters to the future while their real bodies stay in the present through a contract made when the cards are called. So technically it would be a form of really vivid remote viewing, or future sight ESP, with the soul’s manifestation in the future being something akin to a Servant’s Materialization. Plus body reflects the soul, if the spiritual body of someone in the future that is Psyren is hurt, the damage will be transmitted to the body in the present explaining why someone can get killed or grow stronger there.


Drifters

The drifters are psychiers that were pulled in because of their proximity to the events of the Holy Grail War and thus being in a position to prevent it. Numerous people from Fuyuki were pulled in, but died and went missing in the modern time. At the time of the Holy Grail War, all of their cards have been reduced to 0. All drifters are bound by something akin to a Geas to Nemesis Q to prevent them from spreading the future knowledge they have. This is done because certain elements (Kotomine and Gilgamesh) would no doubt hasten the effect. This Geas can be broken by Rule Breaker.


Ayako

A drifter that has grown distant from her family due to her constantly being called into Psyren , she still goes to the archery club because it allows her to get away from everything and is something she relishes. When Lancer attacks the school because she is staying late with Emiya, she ends up allowing the two of them to escape and they go to his home where Saber is summoned, bringing her into the Holy Grail War as an ally of Emiya and Rin Tohsaka.

Ayako borrows from Psyren's Sakurako Amamiya and Seven Deadly Sins Gowther:

• Rise (Strength and Endurance): Ayako is capable of all-around Rise, but specializes in raising her Strength and Endurance to a level that reaches above human-limits (I.e She would have a Servant Strength ranking to match around Lancer in strength at her peak).
• Trance (Monster) - Ayako excels at trance, allowing her to perform abilities similar to Mental Interference. She can read minds (Mind Jack), implant thoughts (Rewrite Light/Basic Mental Inference), link thoughts (Broadcast), create arrows that cause illusions and or crystallize an illusion (Mind Jack Insanity Size) in the form of a wrist-mounted crossbow.
• Burst (Basic): Ayako can create arrows that contain explosive burst energy.

Shinji


A drifter that is cowardly and hedonistic, enjoying the pleasures in modern life because he figures that they’re screwed anyway. Zouken has tried to puzzle out his constant disappearances, but because of the Geas and Shinji’s Trance, he’s mostly avoided the threats of death and turned it on Zouken once by accident—leaving Zouken curious enough to leave him by as he decides whether or not to involve himself in the war. On the plus side, he’s much nicer to Sakura. He’s siding with Sakura, Rider, and his grandfather during the course of the war. Between his Trance and Rider’s speed, it enables them to outmaneuver other competitors.

Shinju borrows from Psyren's Kabuto:

• Rise (Sense Type): His cowardice has led to his sense rising to the point where he can sense others greatly, allowing him to avoid danger.
• Trance (Menace Vision) - He has visions, a form of precognition, allowing him to perceive the danger he or others are in and then avoid it. He later comprehends it enough to manipulate it, able to turn danger back on itself.
• Burst (Yoyo) – He develops a form of Burst that essentially allows him to manipulate things combining telekinesis with Sense and Menace to grab ‘Fate’ and turn it against whatever did so.

Issei

A drifter who has got involved and upon seeing an image of hell on earth became dedicated to ending it. Caster, upon moving to the temple, tried to use mental manipulation on him, but he caught on. Curious and realizing he was under a geas, she used Rule Breaker after paralyzing him and thus he was allowed to explain the situation. He is working with her and Kakuzu under the belief that Caster can avoid the situation and thus sees her more monstrous actions as a necessary evil.

Issei borrows from Psyren’s Van and Oboro:

• Rise (All Around): He has all-around Rise, but lacks the strength of Ayako and Perception of Shinji.
• Trance (Basic) - He has basic trance, allowing him to know and counter Mental Interference to a limited extent. It was enough that he managed to undo Caster’s attempt and draw her interest.
• Burst (Cure) – He is the sole Cure Psychier of the group.

Prologue Outline


It begins in the morning with Ayako in the archer club with Shinji and Sakura when Issei arrives and says he would like to speak with them both about something. Shinji immediately refuses, saying that he’s not involved anymore, while Ayako says she’ll meet him there

During Lunch, they go to the room and meet with Issei explaining his theory that the events that lead to that hellish future must be close to coming now. Ayako muses on that they don’t have any clue on preventing it. Issei asks if he had a method of stopping it but would require an immense cost to human life, would she agree to it. Ayako wants to do so without any unnecessary deaths, but Issei says that the needs outweigh the many and asks her to contemplate it. She thinks on it while doing archery until Shirou starts cleaning and decides to help, stating she isn’t getting along with her parents right now and this sort of thing gives her a purpose of sorts for the present.

The two get caught inside when the battle between Servants kick off and end up running together when Lancer strikes, trying to kill Shirou as in canon. Ayako, having activated Sense and Rise, blocks it with a kick before using her trance-crossbow to give him an illusion while they jump out of the window and run off. Shirou tells her to drop him off at his place for privacy.

There, Shirou asks her since when she was a magus, but that term doesn’t make sense to her when Lancer attacks again and Shirou uses reinforcement until Lancer kicks him out of the house and when the fighting spills out into the yard hits him hard enough that he goes into the shed and ends up summoning Saber while hearing Ayako fighting outside and she gets stabbed in the arm.

Saber fends off Lancer and then Rin approaches, having decided to track him down, when Saber goes after Archer. Shirou calls her off and they all go inside so that they can discuss things, with Rin healing Ayako using her pendant. Ayako obviously can’t tell them (and when tries to use mental interference) Ayako tells her not to do it, but Saber gives them a basic explanation into the holy grail war and Ayako asks Shirou if he would wish to save the world and he says of course, then she tells them that she’ll help him.

[Brother Coa]

New Chapter of Fate/Requiem is out.

Grammar is much better now.

[Brother Coa]

New Chapter of Fate/Requiem is out.

Spoiler for Plot spoilers:

The primordial son returns.

[Twi]

The first chapter of Calling Card is out.