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wuhugm · 2017-10-11, 11:57

Original Title :荒ぶる魔将の逆行と贖罪～まさか俺が言うとは「くっころ」と～ (Araburu Mashou no Gyakkou to Shokuzai ~Masaka Ore ga Iu to wa [Kukkoro] to~) <The Retrogression and Atonemen of Savage Demon General ~I can't believe I'm saying [Kuh, Kill Me!]~>
Author : Kimete Jouhinna Anikki (Anikki Brother's Lewd Brother)
Status : 32 WN chapters
Length : 0.2 Million Japanese Characters

Webnovel : Nocturne

Spoiler for Synopsis:

Spoiler for FAQ:

Nagaikoto Alter

darkofficer · 2017-10-11, 12:11

so... lovers after rape ?

Ruki0089 · 2017-10-11, 13:34

Oooo~~ I will read this!!

Rasty · 2017-10-11, 15:10

Lately you keep posting novels I read/have read. Are you stalking me?

But more seriously, how does the H/plot ratio change in long run? I read only few chapters, but it feels a tad high (still low for a nocturne novel though) so if it increase it might get annoying.

Rinvelt · 2017-10-11, 18:01

^Personally, I don't find it erotic, it's more like gag sex? So I'm fine with it.

H/plot ratio can't be decided for now I think. There was basically nothing until chapter 16, then like 8(?) chapters of H, then back to comedy/plot. (and gag ero)

I personally love Anikki's humour, and even if I don't usually like ero in novels, his is so ridiculous that it doesn't really feel like reading H.

Garn · 2017-10-11, 20:00

The plot caught me from the beginning and how the general always self-despises, but then everything goes crazy, there, it was when I realized who was the author, partly wanted a serious story but I do not complain about the current, Yuzuha best waifu.

Rinvelt · 2017-10-15, 10:43

Quote:

『タンショウ村』の男たち

I'm fucking dead. lmao

wuhugm · 2017-10-15, 10:56

^Gyahahahahaha!!! Anikki's sense of humor

Is the name implies the actual condition though?

Rinvelt · 2017-10-15, 10:57

^Maybe? It's a fact they're all hetare, so might as well be the case too.

wuhugm · 2017-11-10, 11:33

New chapter

Haven't read

Rinvelt · 2017-11-10, 19:57

^Then go read it, it's amazing. Author's genius, as usual.

Kirihara_R · 2017-11-11, 09:50

Im still only at the first few chapters but Lol .. base on the sypnosis , I never thought that he is not the only one who will change the past so I didnt expect this,

Anyway this one looks interesting .. I just hope that in will not suffer the same fate as some noc novels that I read in the past

Rinvelt · 2017-11-11, 10:54

^Just turn you brain off and enjoy the most unpredictable, stupid and ridiculous comedy there is on Nocturne. (Probably, the only Nocturne works I read are the ones from this author, so...)

Kirihara_R · 2017-11-11, 11:35

^ yeah its only a few chapters but I already did a "facepalm" there which i rarely do but of course not in a bad way , i mean its hilarious and its been a while since I read these kinds of ridiculous(misunderstanding) plot

wuhugm · 2017-11-25, 10:19

Love & Peace appears

Rinvelt · 2017-11-25, 20:56

ハメリカ.......

To be honest, while totally wtf, it started to be boring with how long the sex scene lasted. Hope the story will move on now.

wuhugm · 2017-11-25, 22:52

Me I hope anikki would just drop all these nocturne shites and continue Nagaikoto

Rinvelt · 2017-11-25, 23:00

^Same, that's why I remind him about Nagaikoto in almost each comment.

Thing is, as he said, he didn't touch the novel for too long and is a little lost on what to do... He did say he'll try to get back to it before the end of the year, so let's hope it won't just be a few chapters.

wuhugm · 2017-11-25, 23:08

Anikki should just realize that he's bad in writing actual porn
His greatest strength is writing situations surrounding porn
But I can't say this to him coz he might lose all will to write altogether

Rinvelt · 2017-11-26, 00:00

To be honest, if Araburu doesn't move and stays in this stade of WTF sex every few chapters, I might says it straight to him that as much as I like him for Nagaikoto, I just can't continue with that.

I'm just hoping he will focus more on the story from now on.

2017-10-11, 11:57	Link #1
wuhugm Confused Shark Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Atlantis	Araburu Mashou no Gyakkou to Shokuzai ~Masaka Ore ga Iu to wa [Kukkoro] to~ Original Title :荒ぶる魔将の逆行と贖罪～まさか俺が言うとは「くっころ」と～ (Araburu Mashou no Gyakkou to Shokuzai ~Masaka Ore ga Iu to wa [Kukkoro] to~) <The Retrogression and Atonemen of Savage Demon General ~I can't believe I'm saying [Kuh, Kill Me!]~> Author : Kimete Jouhinna Anikki (Anikki Brother's Lewd Brother) Status : 32 WN chapters Length : 0.2 Million Japanese Characters Webnovel : Nocturne Spoiler for Synopsis: In the war between Demons and Humans which is assisted by The Divines, Demon General Velma captured War Goddess Elshia and made her his plaything for a long time. Eventually he truly fell in love with her, but many emotions conflicting inside him and he could only just left her alone. Humans and Divines retaliated and stormed Demon World in full force. Elshia was rescued and they cornered The Demon King. Velma only observed from the shadow, planning to surrender when Demon King is defeated. But then he saw Elshia almost got killed by Demon King and he sacrificed himself to protect her. In his dying breath, he apologized to Elshia many times and then died. .....But a mysterious existence told him to rewrite the future and sent him back in time to the day he first raped her. Spoiler for FAQ: 1. Is the MC OP? Somewhat 2. Is this a harem? Yes 3. Is there snusnu in this novel? This nocturne Nagaikoto Alter __________________ ------------------------------------------ [SPOILER] Manga, Anime, & LN Where The Girl MC Ended Up With Is Not The Main Heroine All My Threads

2017-10-11, 12:11	Link #2
darkofficer just a devil Join Date: Jun 2012 Location: hell	so... lovers after rape ? __________________ "..This is my honest opinion, but I feel it is much easier to teach cows how to walk on their hind legs than to find rationality in humans." favorite novel: Rokujouma no Shinryakusha!?

2017-10-11, 13:34	Link #3
Ruki0089 Yandere Otoko Ruki-tan Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: Earth 616	Oooo~~ I will read this!! __________________

2017-10-15, 10:56	Link #8
wuhugm Confused Shark Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Atlantis	^Gyahahahahaha!!! Anikki's sense of humor Is the name implies the actual condition though? __________________ ------------------------------------------ [SPOILER] Manga, Anime, & LN Where The Girl MC Ended Up With Is Not The Main Heroine All My Threads

2017-11-10, 11:33	Link #10
wuhugm Confused Shark Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Atlantis	New chapter Haven't read __________________ ------------------------------------------ [SPOILER] Manga, Anime, & LN Where The Girl MC Ended Up With Is Not The Main Heroine All My Threads

2017-10-11, 15:10	Link #4
Rasty Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015	Lately you keep posting novels I read/have read. Are you stalking me? But more seriously, how does the H/plot ratio change in long run? I read only few chapters, but it feels a tad high (still low for a nocturne novel though) so if it increase it might get annoying.

2017-10-11, 18:01	Link #5
Rinvelt 駄目人間 Join Date: Jul 2016 Location: France	^Personally, I don't find it erotic, it's more like gag sex? So I'm fine with it. H/plot ratio can't be decided for now I think. There was basically nothing until chapter 16, then like 8(?) chapters of H, then back to comedy/plot. (and gag ero) I personally love Anikki's humour, and even if I don't usually like ero in novels, his is so ridiculous that it doesn't really feel like reading H.

2017-10-11, 20:00	Link #6
Garn Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2016	The plot caught me from the beginning and how the general always self-despises, but then everything goes crazy, there, it was when I realized who was the author, partly wanted a serious story but I do not complain about the current, Yuzuha best waifu.

2017-10-15, 10:57	Link #9
Rinvelt 駄目人間 Join Date: Jul 2016 Location: France	^Maybe? It's a fact they're all hetare, so might as well be the case too.

2017-11-10, 19:57	Link #11
Rinvelt 駄目人間 Join Date: Jul 2016 Location: France	^Then go read it, it's amazing. Author's genius, as usual.

2017-11-11, 09:50	Link #12
Kirihara_R Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2012	Im still only at the first few chapters but Lol .. base on the sypnosis , I never thought that he is not the only one who will change the past so I didnt expect this, Anyway this one looks interesting .. I just hope that in will not suffer the same fate as some noc novels that I read in the past

2017-11-11, 10:54	Link #13
Rinvelt 駄目人間 Join Date: Jul 2016 Location: France	^Just turn you brain off and enjoy the most unpredictable, stupid and ridiculous comedy there is on Nocturne. (Probably, the only Nocturne works I read are the ones from this author, so...)

2017-11-11, 11:35	Link #14
Kirihara_R Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2012	^ yeah its only a few chapters but I already did a "facepalm" there which i rarely do but of course not in a bad way , i mean its hilarious and its been a while since I read these kinds of ridiculous(misunderstanding) plot Last edited by Kirihara_R; 2017-11-11 at 12:56.

2017-11-25, 10:19	Link #15
wuhugm Confused Shark Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Atlantis	Love & Peace appears __________________ ------------------------------------------ [SPOILER] Manga, Anime, & LN Where The Girl MC Ended Up With Is Not The Main Heroine All My Threads

2017-11-25, 20:56	Link #16
Rinvelt 駄目人間 Join Date: Jul 2016 Location: France	ハメリカ....... To be honest, while totally wtf, it started to be boring with how long the sex scene lasted. Hope the story will move on now.

2017-11-25, 22:52	Link #17
wuhugm Confused Shark Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Atlantis	Me I hope anikki would just drop all these nocturne shites and continue Nagaikoto __________________ ------------------------------------------ [SPOILER] Manga, Anime, & LN Where The Girl MC Ended Up With Is Not The Main Heroine All My Threads

2017-11-25, 23:00	Link #18
Rinvelt 駄目人間 Join Date: Jul 2016 Location: France	^Same, that's why I remind him about Nagaikoto in almost each comment. Thing is, as he said, he didn't touch the novel for too long and is a little lost on what to do... He did say he'll try to get back to it before the end of the year, so let's hope it won't just be a few chapters.

2017-11-25, 23:08	Link #19
wuhugm Confused Shark Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Atlantis	Anikki should just realize that he's bad in writing actual porn His greatest strength is writing situations surrounding porn But I can't say this to him coz he might lose all will to write altogether __________________ ------------------------------------------ [SPOILER] Manga, Anime, & LN Where The Girl MC Ended Up With Is Not The Main Heroine All My Threads

2017-11-26, 00:00	Link #20
Rinvelt 駄目人間 Join Date: Jul 2016 Location: France	To be honest, if Araburu doesn't move and stays in this stade of WTF sex every few chapters, I might says it straight to him that as much as I like him for Nagaikoto, I just can't continue with that. I'm just hoping he will focus more on the story from now on.