2007-05-08, 16:02 | Link #1 |
Lost in my dreams...
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Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion (second reincarnation)
Welcome to MGLN Character Creation and Discussion thread.
This thread is a place where you can discuss the already existing characters of Nanoha-verse, as well as your own Original characters, created by taking the principles known about Nanoha-verse into consideration. As most other threads, this is a discussion thread, thus you are expected to comment on other people's creations in case you submit your own character. Do not simply drop by to submit your creation. Posts that serve only to submit a character without contributing anything to the discussion will be deleted. If you happen to come across such posts, feel free to use the Report button , so we can keep the discussion going. Discussion means that people will disagree with you. Try to listen to them before ignoring them for trying to ‘kill your darlings’ Remember: when creating a character it is important to give as much specific information as you can come up with. This will keep things more interesting for every one. Some basic things are:
Please avoid DBZ-like characters. Unstoppable gods with enough power to blow up a planet by accidentally sneezing doesn't make for a very interesting discussion, and is not faithful to Nanoha-verse Try to have the character as realistic as possible in term of ability and magic usage (example: she might get easily tired after casting a powerful area-affect spell). If possible, try not posting too many characters in one post. How detailed you describe everything is up to you, but the more details - the more things to discuss. Have fun! Here is a link to a post that contains a compilation of all the original characters created at this point of time. TEH LINK
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This is a compilation of all the Original Characters created in this thread, with links to their original posts, made to make it easier for newcomers and everyone else to find other people's works.
IF THERE IS ANYTHING THAT IS OUT OF DATE, MESSAGE ME WITH THE APPROPRIATE LINKS, AND THE NAMES ATTACHED TO THE PROFILES Requirements: 1: Link to the profiles of course 2: If it's a new profile, it requires to have been approved by Keroko, Liingo, or by majority ~~~ Timelines Official Nanoha Timeline, translation courtesy of Nightengale. OC Thread's Fanon Timeline, compiled by Kha. ~~~ The OC List Created by -Fate- (Complete OC List) Created by Aaron008R (Complete OC List) Created by Admiral Tigerclaw Created by AImost Pure
Created by An Hero in Disguise
Created by AtomicoX (Complete OC List) Created by azuma-blade Created by Chaos2Frozen Created by dkellis (Complete OC List)
Created by Dream_Traveller (Complete OC List)
Created by EnigmaticThief Created by Erio
Created by Evangelion Xgouki (Complete OC List) Created by FieryAeon (Complete OC List)
Created by FlameSparkZ (Complete OC List) Created by Fuyu no Sora
Created by ghazghkull (Complete OC List)
Created by haiz123321 Created by johnishida Created by Kagerou (Complete OC List)
Created by KBTKaiser (Complete OC List) Created by Keroko (Complete OC List)
Created by Kha (Complete OC List)
Created by Kyral (Complete OC List) Created by Lelouch Created by Liingo (Complete OC List)
Created by LimitedEternal (Complete OC List) Created by Loner Created by LoweGear (Complete OC List)
Created by Melodius Trueheart (Complete OC List)
Created by Meophist
Created by Mow Yun Created by Nightengale (Complete OC List)
Created by Pheonixfyre Created by PhoenixFlare (Complete OC List) Created by Ratler
Created by Reiji Tabibito
Created by Riddly Created by Ryand-Smith (Complete OC List) Created by Saint X (Complete OC List)
Created by Satty
Created by Serenity85
Created by Shadow Angel Created by Sheba (Complete OC List) Characters:
Created by SpaceBrotha (Complete OC List)
Created by stormturmoil Created by Tempest Dynasty (Complete OC List) Created by Timeless Enigma Created by TheShinySword Created by Tk3997 (Complete OC List)
Created by Tormenk (Complete OC List)
Created by tshouryuu (Complete OC List)
Created by USB500 (Complete OC List)
Created by Wibbles
Created by Wild Goose (Complete OC List)
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Satte ... In a bid to oust Aaron out of his seat ...
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The Wizard Spells make Julie the Ninja of Ninjas indeed. Strike Balls made me cringe at first, but luckily the spell's effect wasn't what I had in mind. And thumbs up for the creative Infinite Effects Studio! It'd be a great distraction indeed when suddenly a sword is on fire but no heat is felt ("GHOST FIRE!"). Quote:
Anyway, this profile is LOVE and WIN! Cannonball Shoot is a neat move (I was sort of imagining a trampoline ), Iron Blizzard is most painful from the description (and using three rings is scary, the speed must be hypersonic ), Sturm Bolt is quirky as it is effective (anti-stupid ), Buster Homerun is most nicely thought out , and OMNI Blade is scary (*sends a prayer for whoever gets hit by that for invoking the persona Trisha out into the battlefield, including Sven* ). Julie's interpersonal relationship is very much understandable (but Trisha is just plain scary! ), but hopefully, Gilliam Aker can help resolve that once and for all. And this calls for MUCH WANT NAO! Quote:
Anyway, Eppy-chan is made of sweet love and niceness . Despite her shattered self (apt name, by the way), she finds herself an optimistic girl and happy-go-lucky (well, practically, unless Anger, Sadness, and/or Fear gets agitated) under the care of the Belkarangers. I originally thought she'd be more attached to Julie because of the similarity in their personality, but Mayura seems to take the role of her mother very nicely. Working in a museum sounds like a fitting job for Eppy (and she can filch multiple entry fees to boot ). Quote:
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Definitely nice save as Mayura has said! And no doubt, in a newly-wed bridal position ... *cries tears of joy for Julie* *runs* This made me go and at the same time. It's a nice opening to Kaylin and Glock's meeting. Though it started out with bad blood, I'm sure the improvement is underway for the eventual *static*. Nice going with Glock manhandling Kaylin () and getting access to her private storage. I wonder, what does she keep in there ... maybe *static* and *static* or *static*? *flees* Quote:
It's not everytime that we see a world is described in detail, the only one I've read so far is TK's Planine. This presents yet another bloody conflict instigated by the Book of Darkness back before it went to Earth, and TSAB's darker side in employing the Arc against the Logia. Is Kaylin simply prejudiced against the Bureau after what Glock did to her? Quote:
The scene builds up very nicely, and I can certainly understand the indirect kiss-u. I went "Awww~" when Mai went for more. Nice Wesson-Julie combo double team to make the scene possible! (And thanks for the clarification for that ) MOAR! P/S: Are you sure you don't want to change the title to "Lust" instead? *flees at ludicrous speed* ========== Quote:
The sheer number of Kerokos is ... The Rebuild of Uomo certainly features some nice (and quite flawless) integration of this combat cyborg into canon storyline. I thought she's a he, but I was proven wrong at the outset (it's the other way around). I like the trait about his deceptive capability, makes him a very efficient spy indeed . I was wondering about the part where he gets personal growth from Subaru and Ginga, and then him doing infiltration that goes against these two. Wouldn't he be suffering from ... say, some sort of guilt? Being a double-faced member of both TSAB and NOD can be difficult most of the time. His skills and spells are wonderful and certainly complement his role as spy and infiltrator and assassin . I personally think that if Kratos and/or Leona ever faces Uomo, an interesting battle of intelligence and counterintelligence is going to happen. Quote:
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I was kind of worried that it might have led to Tesla being shafted in some scenes and that's kind of bad of me to do so <_<. Frankly, I have no idea how a tactician is supposed to function in frontline, except executing some moves that complement their allies', thereby boosting their battle prowess and chance of victory. All in all, the thinking cap managed that, somewhat, though I'm still feeling bad that Tesla isn't getting enough screen-time. Signum seems to be dwarfing Tesla in her shadow. Sorry. >_< ========== Quote:
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Mucho surprises indeed, especially Treize's condition. I didn't know the sleepiness and blur personality is a direct effect of her genes. Well, let's not get her grow up so fast . And Koji's Heart Waver is a greater surprise, and an apt name for the skill. Guess Koji realizes that everyone likes him not because he's likable, but because of his power, and that's quite a blow to his psyche. The part on Relic #11, though, had me going , because it seems to go against canon. Then again, Jail might be conning Lutecia to believe that the Relic is needed to revive Alpino when it isn't really the case. :3 Very nice chapter, we need MOAR! Quote:
Maren and Koji are sharing a closer relationship, it seems, after the meeting with Jail, which is a very good thing. Maren's female instinct is perking in the right wavelength, though, especially about Koji liking the "long-haired" females . And to unshaft the Shielding Beast Zafira is a must! Zafira: *growl* Finally, my own scene! ========== Daisy is certainly an interesting one. And her past-times made me go . Praying on Alan's "defective dating gene" had me laughing silly. Nobody messes with this girl and gets away unscathed. Maximum firepower indeed . I like Rose! Daisy is mean for shoving her to the front to tank fire, but that's what Rose is good at . Her spells would make head aches for the enemy, no doubt. This is a nice dish to let us have an overview of Kou and Shin, and my, aren't their tempers explosive? (I think this applies to most in the series, though .) Nicely written aerial battle, but Vita and Felix botched this capture in a most unlikely and funny way . Nice save on the boy, and even nicer remark by Felix. I love "red-headed little shrew" a lot! And the drive-through scene is funny like hell! Zubov is a tricky guy, all right. No wonder Felix got a bit miffed at his reappearance. I have to love the "interview" between Felix and the captive. Well done on the part! Pixy's mention of the good steak Felix cooks certainly is a nice addition to his already rich personality. Mm, and the everpresent Vita x Felix vibes feel doubly awesome! And response team, go, go, go! Quote:
Anyway, Planine certainly is an interesting world. It's medieval and modern at the same time, combining elements of both the Eastern and Western worlds. I like it that they use conventionals coupled with magic, especially when they launch bullets and arrows and magically amplify the speed for greater impact (reminds me of Lowe's Wizard Ring ), and it even allows them to circumvent TSAB's policies . Very good thought in this. Ah, Kou's partner-in-crime . Quite the antagonist of Kou's more explosive temper, but that's what make them click, no doubt . Cracking jokes in the middle of combat is a plus point for his carefree personality . I see that this style focuses on speed and stealth, as compared to the power of the Belkan style. And Shin makes the first character to ever use a kusarigama, I think. Very good! Quote:
The school of Whispering Death being targeted as evil and slaughter-on-sight surprised me, but understandable. Assassins tend to get bad ratings even if they did a good job. Kou's number of arrows is amusingly handwaivium (), but his spells are good and practical. One question though, what's the difference between Obstructing Fog and Concealing Haze? They sound and work similar effects to my understanding. Quote:
This delicious profile I can put to good use. The background is short and sweet (glad he's a purist ). And ranged specialist, roger on that account. I must say his icy arsenal is going to prove very useful in the scenario I have. Expect a few Arctic Blasts and/or Breakers . North Wind had me laughing a bit, though . "Subject to change" if you think up something wicked cool caught me off-guard there. Don't do anything drastic, or I'll hunt ye down! Quote:
The history is rich and well-written, I certainly like the part where he retorts to his superior ("My dear Excellency, I have not gone to war to collect cheese and eggs ...") to get a reassignment, but his combat ability certainly shines during the battles he participated. His meeting with the Garm squadron is quite expected . I'm surprised that being an antagonist, he's has a good sense of modicum and respect for his foes. Nice touch on him working with the lower classes despite being a higher-class. The fated battle (if any) between him and the company is much anticipated. Quote:
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I had a good amount of laughter reading Makoto, Kou, and Shin's mental conversation on what they learnt about Felix and Pixy's "brighter" nature . Very well done, there! Pixy has some honed housecleaning skills, there. And poor Kou, working the larger portion of the assignment meant for the team. Practical Felix is practical, even considering to take tissues for DNA analysis . And great shot with the interrogation, sleek and sly . And here comes Atuwe, one of the most hailed hacker of all! Then, the shafting begins ... and rather intense ones, too . First by Felix, and then by Irene . I have to give Irene two thumbs-up on her effortless action to set Atuwe on the right direction. Guess she's meaner than Felix is. Quote:
Felix seems to have inherited some of O'Neill's manipulative habits, seen in his ability to basically shove a reluctant Kou into line . I wonder who the "four" guys are ... And does Atuwe always ramble to himself? Do write faster, or I'll have to clamp your rear to the computer ... permanently. Quote:
Felix certainly lives up to his reputation depicted in your current fic, being sarcastic whenever he can (which seems to be almost always). A good smattering of sarcasm always livens up the atmosphere . His juvenile record was a little unexpected, but I guess everyone does have a mean streak in their life at one point or another. Glad he found his path after all those years. The spells are as practical as the person is. Pixy gives me a little bit of a creep initially, what with annihilating his enemies single-handedly. Even more terrible is his early years where he's somewhat of a mean terrorist. Luckily, he manages to see things in perspective and leaves his past behind, which no doubt leads to the improvement in his mood and attitude . Some habits die hard (he's still spoiling for a fight, it seems, and now taking Vita with him!), in any case, but at least he's much better than he was previously . Nice quote, by the way. Pending spell list just spoils this wonderful profile . Quote:
Uh, huh? *looks around* Er ... No, I didn't fall asleep, honestly I didn't! (Only napping, yep, it's napping!) Rebecca-san wakes me up with her big *static*! *runs* Good going with the spiel, skimmed through and detected some things that I can use for Kratos/Leona . Rebecca is as good for an ECM as she is in looks (*ahem*). Her spell arrays are definitely designed to jam and confuse Device functions and spells, and that makes her an excellent support . Let's see if Kratos can learn a trick or two from her ... even if his field involves little in this area (he's more into detection, surveillance, illusion-breaking, counterintelligence, and hacking), but hey, improvements are always welcome. Quote:
Anyway, this is why I say Izumi blows me away! Excellent driving coupled with excellent attitude, and she's a badass in her own right! Firsthand experience with her driving skills is bound to upset the stomach and kill the appetite, not to mention the possibility of making motion sickness an infectious disease with her being the main causative agent! Poor Rico, Alice, and Alan, and luckily Rico was quick enough to cut off her protest. ========== Quote:
Serena is lovely as she is effective. Thumbs up for the "not-an-elitist" Serena, because I think we've had enough of those in the stereotypical anime, but she's also "not-a-socialist" Serena, which is a nice combo. Siegerion sounds like a good device (would've loved to hear the butler-ish speeches ). And yes, over-thinking is bad. Kha, out with the Rebuilt already, we need this gal in action! Quote:
Looks like Grandis is a magnet even though he doesn't want to be, and this isn't helped by the fact that Nanoha and Fate takes every opportunity to amplify the effect. Settling down seems easier for Grandis now that he's gotten over his past. MOAR HAYANDIS NAO! Quote:
You've gone through him with me before, so I don't think there's anything else to add. He looks better than the previous profile, though I'm interested in Carim's admirer, Zamzeed. And also ... HAYANDIS! HAYANDIS! HAYANDIS! *runs at ludicrous speed* =========== Quote:
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"Environmentalist" pirates is very original in concept, and Morgan certainly lives up to it. Attacking TSAB, though, is going to be worrying for Morgan . If he's not careful, he might have the Arc aimed at his ship Nice set of water-based abilities here, and she uses a whip to boot ! And using her well-endowed assets for public relations, even better ! Walk on Water is a nifty movement spell, she basically glides on water streams, eh? Supportive of Hayate's sekuhara antics? NIC-- *feels an evil aura of dreadfulness at the back* Aaron: KISAMA! =========== Quote:
I'm still wondering who the green-cloaked woman is ... Yuunoko ! Why am I getting the feeling that by the end of the series, the two will hav-- No, erase that thought! But, Keroko having the hots for Yuuno and her awkwardness is delicious . And uhm, nearing the end, since the Spawn is kind of immune to magic, the mages won't be rendered to using conventionals, are they? Pirate-y Erick is a nice touch for his personality! Not to mention the description of the previous hostility between the OFM and TSAB. I snicker at Kha's annoyance and protective nature, but never thought he'd be that protective of his waifu. Gravemind took the centerstage, though, with his tentacles-and-Spawn rampage. Guess Nanoha and company should start playing Starcraft and Halo to know their foes better . Quote:
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Jac certainly fits his Akabane Kurodo personality, though he's less scarier. And wonder, wonder, the leader cooks instead of the underlings. Nice touch! The spells are good and complements his fighting style (luckily there's no energy daggers and Bloody Rain ), but I don't really understand what Warding Swarm does. By "magical construct", does it mean things like barriers and the like, or things like devices, summoned creatures, etc.? Quote:
I don't particularly see the use of drugs in his combat style, actually. Ravage seems quite capable to bring out the best in him. The wind magic is certainly put to good use by Jac. And picture association with Grimmjow fits very well. ... Gen Ealin is certainly one of the best written profiles (other than Katrina) ever. And it speaks of the darker side of the TSAB that's being exploited widely by us in the OC thread in a new light. The conflicts of attitude he suffered is a very good touch, especially since his involvement with the incident of the Book of Darkness and his finding out about the cover-up. The TSAB will have a tough time dealing with a rogue who knows of how they operate. Gen liking silence and nature is something I did not expect (I thought he'll be liking cold murder of TSAB members more ). Avatar certainly is an interesting Device with the capability to store Mana like spell cards. And the spell list is certainly nice to boot. Nothing in the region of HAXX, as far as I can tell. Overall, an extremely good character. TSAB should look out for their rears being kicked, now. By the way, he's not the leader of the Prize, right ...? Quote:
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Her partnership with Jail and involvement with Alpino and Quint is meshed appropriately. Her parting smile for Lutecia does warm the heart, somewhat, despite the cool and deadly exterior she often exudes. Quote:
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Her history is sad, especially about the lost of her family. Her life is a roller-coaster ride, it seems, what with her being on the wrong side of law, and then integrated into the Bureau (why do I have a feeling that Project ZECT is a pet project of Jail Scaglietti? Fortunately it isn't ). Luckily, her newfound friendship with Melissa provides her with a new perspective . The Rider reference is ... . Quote:
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I think I should stop placing cliffhangers already, FieryAeon is mad at me. Then again, I can't reveal everything now. Everything will come in time. Patience, patience. Quote:
Seeing the references to Jail and the Grimoire (oh damn, the Lost Logia there isn't this one, right? Katrina will be there ...) and the Prize, I take it this is a collaborative writing between you and Tormenk? I wish the two of you the very best of luck for some awesome epicness . And I guess Katrina isn't forgiving to being referred with affectionate names . Quote:
My battle scripts are average, I think. It drains a lot of brain power to write them, and so production was stalled for a long time >_<. Guess a lot of us aren't set to write intense battle drama. Your short on Evangeline fits just nicely, so no need to be jealous. And the fifth one being dead was actually mentioned indirectly several times in the course of the story, just that it isn't as specific. Let's see if anyone can spot it. Quote:
PF: Eto ... nice to meet you, Lich Queen ... Lich Queen: *rattling breath* Nice to meet you, too ... You'll be my partner ... *Lich Queen rushes to embrace PF* At the end of the day, the hollow winds of the blizzard whispered tales of the magnificent bird trapped in a crystalline prison of ice, never to be seen in the world again. Quote:
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Looks like this is getting darker every chapter. All the good guys seem to have fallen to their foes. And Satoshi ... found out about his true self . Last edited by PhoenixFlare; 2008-05-21 at 06:09. |
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... Character limit is prohibiting a single-post backlog breaker .
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Davram sure upped his ante as one of the master wizards in the world, though he was eventually being overwhelmed by the Order of Light. And that Sealing Logia seems to be doing its job nicely ... until it reappeared in the world again, deep underground . Nice opening chapter . Quote:
Davram's nonchalance is certainly a great work, though his image as a lich is getting worrisome. He's so kind ! And a mean streak of giving surprises when you least expect it. Guess Iris still has much to learn about her master. Rule #1: Don't assume that he's asleep if he seems like it. Quote:
Iris's ursophilia impulse is a nice touch, but poor teddy that got punched! And lo and behold, another bear joins the rank, and one that gets off rather well with Iris, in this case. Ursus should be advised caution with Iris, she bites. A nice title for this, as Tormenk put it, would be The Lich, the Tower, and the Bear! =========== Quote:
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The question was actually meant to ask the reader what they think caused so many scars on Grandia, actually . It didn't work out well, but never mind. The Templars were trained together and much of their histories were known to each other. It's like they had been companions for a very long time that everyone knew everyone else from the inside out, except if they were hiding something. And yeah, the roses aren't always blooming for the villains . Sometimes they get poison ivy instead. Quote:
Vivio grows up to be quite a rascal in this fic, but she's still a responsible girl under Nanoha's guidance. Yuuno gives his share of "parentage" also, as you've noticed . Joint inquisition ... Leona: *eyes glinting coldly* Don't even think about it. Defection? The probability is rather low. Quote:
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The second prophecy seems dire enough, seeing as it involves even the age of the Saint King three hundred years ago. Nanoha receiving the second Linker Core sounds a bit strange for me, but I don't mind it very much. It will be interesting development to watch out for. For OCs, I think I've mentioned it already that most of mine wouldn't fit, except for Gabriel who's working in Intelligence. See if you need another Intelligence other than Acous, and we'll discuss this out. If your story revolves heavily around the ancient age, then it's all right. Good luck with this! ========== Quote:
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Ah, wait, before that, we'll tackle this little bit here: Spoiler for “Duel of the Century”:
If Juste won the duel, why is Zarakiya made the leader and not him? =3 To my understanding, this would follow a similar rule as Tracing (in your case, the Artifacts of the God), wouldn't it? If you don't mind me pointing out, your characters (two of the three) have a lot of special abilities that are mitigated very little for the huge benefits they gain. Well, they're antagonists, you've mentioned them earlier, but it remains difficult to see how the Aces are able to handle them. For starters, Veneficus Terminus doesn't sound like a powerful limitation in any case, given that the Zarakiya's threshold is quite high. I believe you'll be exercising author limitation here. For Inritus Presencia, from what I understand, it means that they're no longer immortal, so ... what's the consequence here other than they becoming human? Does that mean that the average Aerternis who doesn't practice actually do not die normally, and that if struck a lethal blow, they can be regenerate very rapidly? What I mean is, what's so crippling about this effect to Zarakiya's unnatural ability? Quote:
Uhm, right, a lance that can "cut through anything". By virtue of description, I'm assuming it means the lance can cut anything including space, universe, time, and the like. Proficiency, like casting time and power, is pretty much subjective and author limited, so if he really needs to use it, then he will use it. Now, can you describe a way in which the lance can be effectively blocked? ... I dread to think what Cronus Flax can do ... Quote:
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There's the sense of mystery over who Alemantas's true identity (and the one who spoke in her dream), and then the person who called her ... mother? Nice biking scene between Snake and Acous, though I'm still wondering who did Acous meet in the office (doesn't sound like Regius). A lot of codenames are being used, it seems. And the mastermind is already revealed . Why, you saying you weren't in love with it until now? I'm hurt! Thanks! Quote:
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The response is so strong ... I didn't get the reference about Sora and Nike (though I know it's from Kingdom Hearts ), but I'm amazed that your favorite Templar is Trystahn of the four being detailed so far. He has the least amount of exposure at current time, but I guess he makes people feel for him (perhaps more so after this ... ). Thanks! ========== Quote:
Maid Guy Sight? Everything's see through? The girls aren't safe anymore with this stalker in town! I wonder if Noland sees even through Nanoha, Fate, and Hayate ... what a lucky maid. Quote:
I prefer this profile, it's much revised and is more balanced than the previous one. And no Maid Guy Sight ability, I see. Good work with this! Quote:
Now, the story begins with one learned man searching for the truth ... Yuuno Scrya, with his lifelong partner Nanoha Takamachi. History is about to be remade ... *flees* ========== Quote:
This is serious stuff, a dark future where Nanoha is lost, Vivio is battling against foes who are previous allies, and new characters rallying behind her. EPIC! And don't tell me Hel is ... HAYATE?! Gosh, this is heart-gripping, Kyral, you need to write faster! Rinya's ID and the little poster are EPIC pics in their own right! Great work, wish I have this photoshopping ability. Just a little bit, though. I remember the last entry you written was about Elric wanting to apologize to Rinya, now how did this crop up so suddenly? Time jump? Quote:
And ... who killed Nanoha offscreen? Oh, you ... BASTARD! Thank you, I appreciate your reading it. Hopefully, it's not too tiresome for the eyes. Quote:
I literally filched Wyrd's warning from dictionary, I'll edit that, thanks! Frozen Shackles, however, come from manga translation, so I'll just leave it be. Thanks for the pointers, though! Quote:
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I've been wanting to use the theme for quite some time now. And thanks! The place is literally a wasteland already, so more damage wouldn't matter much. ========== I think I miss a few along the way, going through 200+ pages isn't exactly easy. Sorry about that. Do give me a nudge if I accidentally miss them. Now, let me disappear somewhere and meditate to regain my lost energy ... *faints* |
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: In the XV-8A Spartan "00"
Age: 38
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Now that you've seen the index, let's get down to the basics.
Welcome to the HOTTEST place on Animesuki, and the 2nd Incarnation of the Original Character Creation and Discussion Thead. The home of BURNING MANLY SENTAI SPIRITS OF EPIC PASSION & KHRACK of the Dai-Klerik Dan. :3 Welcome to... Outer Cadia Please leave your sanity at the door. [Cadian Tutorials Construction: 5%]
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2008-05-18, 22:00 | Link #7 | |
The Dang-meister
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Okay....................that's all I have to say......................... : uhoh::twi tch:
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2008-05-18, 22:02 | Link #8 | |
~ I Do ~
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: In the XV-8A Spartan "00"
Age: 38
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*FLIES AT EPIC SPEED* PS: You know, other people would just do a Kha Breaker... :3
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2008-05-18, 22:21 | Link #9 | |
Σ(。д°(o--(ಠ益ಠ )
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: Hotsprings Resort
Age: 38
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*clears throat* Spoiler for Breaker!:
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2008-05-18, 22:34 | Link #11 | |
does whatever he wants.
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Atop a hill of words.
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... *eyes Ghaz's horrendous mutilation of our own Klerik of Khrack* Now that was...quite useless, Masked Rider G.H.A.Z., actually, he'll be back anyway. And my hangover's gone. That's reason to celebrate *back to the drawing board* |
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2008-05-18, 22:46 | Link #12 | |
The Resurrector
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Join Date: Sep 2007
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... and what madness is this with massive spammage before the thread's closure? @Skyfall: We're not able to edit posts in locked threads, I just tried it. But, I suppose it isn't really that big a matter. |
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2008-05-18, 23:41 | Link #14 |
~ I Do ~
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: In the XV-8A Spartan "00"
Age: 38
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This thread is pretty much my baby, along with Keroko, Nighty, Lowe and several of the vets, so this spammage is kinda because I'm gonna miss it...
Then again, I'm glad I'd get to start again, this time with my Khrack refined and honed to potency. :3 We can link to the old index page via the new one, so we can link to the old profiles and still save space. @Mamott: Looking forward to him/her in the new thread. GTA FTW :3
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2008-05-18, 23:48 | Link #15 |
Nuclear Fusion
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Sky of stone, floor of flame.
Age: 37
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Guess I better get in some parting words before the main event...
I'm actually kinda glad we're starting over. What with the meltdown recently and the spiritual fresh start, it feels like a new Cadia. Cracky still, but still new. Looking forward to the new thread, and may it grow as vast as this one @Kha: I can't believe you forgot me...T_T
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2008-05-19, 00:13 | Link #16 | |
物語は、もう、おしまい……?
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: In the Horizon
Age: 43
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I would suggest using either this: ... or this: .... if you want all three Aces together. Alternatively we can also use this: ... for a cool Fate pic. But then again, this is the Nanoha OC thread. Who better to represent it than the White Devil herself? If so, I would suggest this: .. or this: .... as our new welcomer. Thus ends my two cents. But before I return to that empty void called Lurk-Space, allow me to present my personal choice in this matter: ONWARDS! TO THE NEW CADIA!
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2008-05-19, 00:25 | Link #17 |
The Dang-meister
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Personally, I'd like to see an image that can actually be compressed so that it looks like a banner, rather that these poster images :3
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2008-05-19, 00:43 | Link #18 |
Secret Society BLANKET
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Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: 3 times the passion of normal flamenco
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Would we still be able to quote from a locked thread? And just when I finally decided to do some breaking too ^^;
Anyways, not like we didn't expect this, but kinda sad moving out. Hopefully we can make the new thread prosper like this one did
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