Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[RadiantBeam]

I should probably churn out a genuine Vivio/Einhart piece one of these days with how Vivid has been going, but... eh, I don't like the pairing, and I don't like Vivid, so I'll avoid it unless a friend has a specific request.

[Moczo]

Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

I should probably churn out a genuine Vivio/Einhart piece one of these days with how Vivid has been going, but... eh, I don't like the pairing, and I don't like Vivid, so I'll avoid it unless a friend has a specific request.

Honestly, if you did something involving ViVid in any way, what I would want to see would be less Vivio/Einhart and more Lutecia/Lutecia. Yes, I would like to see Shadow!Lutecia somehow meet OHOHOHOHOHO!Lutecia.

I don't know. I have a strange mind.

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by Moczo

Honestly, if you did something involving ViVid in any way, what I would want to see would be less Vivio/Einhart and more Lutecia/Lutecia. Yes, I would like to see Shadow!Lutecia somehow meet OHOHOHOHOHO!Lutecia.

I don't know. I have a strange mind.

...

You tempt me, good sir. You tempt me very, very much.

[Thunderbird]

Originally Posted by Moczo

Honestly, if you did something involving ViVid in any way, what I would want to see would be less Vivio/Einhart and more Lutecia/Lutecia. Yes, I would like to see Shadow!Lutecia somehow meet OHOHOHOHOHO!Lutecia.

I don't know. I have a strange mind.

Hmmm...*ahem*

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by Thunderbird

Hmmm...*ahem*

Oh, come on, cut me a break, here. I owe other one-shots to Syn and I've been busy with RL things. And honestly, the idea never crossed my mind until Moczo brought it up.

[MeisterBabylon]

Just a small favor Satashi, but could you take down every piece of work made by Kha or MeisterBabylon in the index, if any? I'm doing a complete wipe of everything I've done up till now so that maybe one day I can start anew.

[Nanya01]

Okay, any of you remember Alice Through the Looking Glass on television years ago?

No? Well, that Jabberwocky STILL freaks me out!

So...

Spoiler for Jabberwocky:

"...’Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe;
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe."

Vivio shuddered as she closed the book she had been reading, that had been kind of freaky. The worst thing was, she didn't even know what most of that poem meant, but the tone had been clear.

Suddenly, it got dark outside, lightning flashed and thunder raged as the hairs on the back of her neck stood up and she slowly turned around, seeing a dragon-like creature lumber into the living room.

"DIVINE BUSTER!" She screamed, instinctively launching a spell into the Jabberwocky and sending it flying across the horizon.

Panting, Vivio slid to the floor and just stared at that spot for a long while after words.

"...No more day-old pizza before bed time." She muttered, this had to be a dream.

[00-Raiser]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Okay, any of you remember Alice Through the Looking Glass on television years ago?

No? Well, that Jabberwocky STILL freaks me out!

So...

Spoiler for Jabberwocky:

"...’Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe;
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe."

Vivio shuddered as she closed the book she had been reading, that had been kind of freaky. The worst thing was, she didn't even know what most of that poem meant, but the tone had been clear.

Suddenly, it got dark outside, lightning flashed and thunder raged as the hairs on the back of her neck stood up and she slowly turned around, seeing a dragon-like creature lumber into the living room.

"DIVINE BUSTER!" She screamed, instinctively launching a spell into the Jabberwocky and sending it flying across the horizon.

Panting, Vivio slid to the floor and just stared at that spot for a long while after words.

"...No more day-old pizza before bed time." She muttered, this had to be a dream.

Nothing like absolute jibberish to scare the shit out of people, eh? Hm, I wonder if Vivio actually has any of the usual childhood fears...

[spawnofthejudge]

Originally Posted by synaesthetic

false light
a false light casts a darker Shadow...

I don't know if I've commented on this story yet, but I wanted to let you know that as a fellow Shadowverse fan, I am reading this. The setup and the "feel" that your story creates of the situation is awesome. I'm definitely waiting for the next part.

[Tabasco]

Originally Posted by 00-Raiser

Nothing like absolute jibberish to scare the shit out of people, eh? Hm, I wonder if Vivio actually has any of the usual childhood fears...

I imagine it would be hard to be afraid of thunder when you're a combat mage, but her nightmares must be spectacular given her experiences and any past incarnation memories that might be floating around.

[Nanya01]

So, we all know Vivio's a clone of the Saint Kaiser...

And Einhart has her ancestor's memories so...

I came up with this little bit...

Spoiler for Vivio's Weakness:

Vivio was panting hard, her face and body sweaty, as she looked at Einhart, who was just as sweaty and dirty as she was, and grinned as she held Einhart on the ground. "Heh heh... I finally won.." She giggled at the disappointed look in her sparring partner and friend.

Suddenly Einhart grinned at her. "...Did you?"

"What..?" Was all Vivio could say before Einhart reached up, grabbed her butt and... "Hee hee... hee heee hee... Sto...Stooppp iiiittt!" Vivio started laughing as she rolled off of Einhart.

"Nope, not going to." The other girl said as she tickled the blond. For once, Einhart didn't curse her ancestor for making her remember things about the past.

Knowing where the Saint Kaiser was ticklish was just one benefit after all.

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

So, we all know Vivio's a clone of the Saint Kaiser...

And Einhart has her ancestor's memories so...

I came up with this little bit...

Spoiler for Vivio's Weakness:

Vivio was panting hard, her face and body sweaty, as she looked at Einhart, who was just as sweaty and dirty as she was, and grinned as she held Einhart on the ground. "Heh heh... I finally won.." She giggled at the disappointed look in her sparring partner and friend.

Suddenly Einhart grinned at her. "...Did you?"

"What..?" Was all Vivio could say before Einhart reached up, grabbed her butt and... "Hee hee... hee heee hee... Sto...Stooppp iiiittt!" Vivio started laughing as she rolled off of Einhart.

"Nope, not going to." The other girl said as she tickled the blond. For once, Einhart didn't curse her ancestor for making her remember things about the past.

Knowing where the Saint Kaiser was ticklish was just one benefit after all.

I'm certain that Einhart isn't the only one who happens to know of that little secret.

[NorthernFallout]

Just a little somethin'.

Spoiler for We Are The Digital:

In the digital vacuum of the universe we live and roam. Through numbers and digits we see the world outside. Through calculations we do our tasks and calibrate our existence.

We analyze the numbers that rules the world. We put their theories into practice. Practices to be improved upon and recycled countless of times.

Through codes and sequences we automatize your usage of us. We make it easy for you to understand the world through us.

We provide you with unspeakable power. We give you the power to create and destroy. We do not influence your usage of us.

Our existence is determined through you. All of our abilities, an infinite number of possible combinations, only you can define our purpose.

Through you we are given that purpose. Without you, we would not exist.

What, then, would we do, if you began to understand the world around you without us. Where would we go, if you were given the code.

Our existence, would be a withering flame in a fire of infinity.

We are your Devices, and we will not stay until the end of time.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Just a small favor Satashi, but could you take down every piece of work made by Kha or MeisterBabylon in the index, if any? I'm doing a complete wipe of everything I've done up till now so that maybe one day I can start anew.

Are you sure? I think having a past is important to your future. Even if you think your old stuff sucks and are embarrassed about it, it is still part of what made you who you are today. If you really want me to, I will, but think on it a little more, please <3

Just let me know here or in a PM and I'll do it ASAP.

[00-Raiser]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

So, we all know Vivio's a clone of the Saint Kaiser...

And Einhart has her ancestor's memories so...

I came up with this little bit...

Spoiler for Vivio's Weakness:

Vivio was panting hard, her face and body sweaty, as she looked at Einhart, who was just as sweaty and dirty as she was, and grinned as she held Einhart on the ground. "Heh heh... I finally won.." She giggled at the disappointed look in her sparring partner and friend.

Suddenly Einhart grinned at her. "...Did you?"

"What..?" Was all Vivio could say before Einhart reached up, grabbed her butt and... "Hee hee... hee heee hee... Sto...Stooppp iiiittt!" Vivio started laughing as she rolled off of Einhart.

"Nope, not going to." The other girl said as she tickled the blond. For once, Einhart didn't curse her ancestor for making her remember things about the past.

Knowing where the Saint Kaiser was ticklish was just one benefit after all.

Heh, I think most people are ticklish at some point I'm not anymore, save for the bottom of my feet.

Originally Posted by Satashi

Are you sure? I think having a past is important to your future. Even if you think your old stuff sucks and are embarrassed about it, it is still part of what made you who you are today. If you really want me to, I will, but think on it a little more, please <3

Just let me know here or in a PM and I'll do it ASAP.

Yeah, don't try to erase who you are, just leave the unfortunateness behind you and move forward. After my blunder, which I'm still feeling the effects from to this day, I could have deleted it and changed my name, but I didn't. It was an important lesson and I leave it there as a reminder of my mistake so I won't do it again. Some may say I've improved and some may say I'm still the same horrible troll I always was, but in the end I like who I am now, and my past mistakes are part of what made me this way. As such I wouldn't change a thing.

So I wrote that lemon was I was talking about earlier! It comes in two flavours!

Spoiler for Loli flavour:

Includes Erio doing Lutecia, Erio doing Caro, Lutecia doing Caro, Erio doing Vivio, and Erio doing Einhart (2,260 words)

Spoiler for Slightly less illegal flavour:

Includes Erio doing Lutecia, and Erio doing Caro (873 words)

So if you want the complete goodness, there's flavour one, and for those of you outside of Nanoha's target audience, there's flavour two! If you're interested, contact me via some method saying which flavour you want.

The more I write Lutecia, the more I decide I like her. She can do all kinds of crazy things now so the possibilities are endless While I still think the change from her StrikerS self is ill written, the results are more than worth it.

[MeisterBabylon]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Are you sure? I think having a past is important to your future. Even if you think your old stuff sucks and are embarrassed about it, it is still part of what made you who you are today. If you really want me to, I will, but think on it a little more, please <3

Just let me know here or in a PM and I'll do it ASAP.

Long story short, if I ever made another OC or a fanfiction and published it on Asuki, Spacebro would ban me from IRC, permanently. So as part of the Document of Surrender/Peace Treaty, I am to cease all such activities and remove all past work in exchange of being treated as a normal person rather than BPHaru.

But after reviewing them, I realized that all of them are harmless jokes. Maybe not then.

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Nanya01

Okay, any of you remember Alice Through the Looking Glass on television years ago?

No? Well, that Jabberwocky STILL freaks me out!

So...

Spoiler for Jabberwocky:

"...’Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe;
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe."

Vivio shuddered as she closed the book she had been reading, that had been kind of freaky. The worst thing was, she didn't even know what most of that poem meant, but the tone had been clear.

Suddenly, it got dark outside, lightning flashed and thunder raged as the hairs on the back of her neck stood up and she slowly turned around, seeing a dragon-like creature lumber into the living room.

"DIVINE BUSTER!" She screamed, instinctively launching a spell into the Jabberwocky and sending it flying across the horizon.

Panting, Vivio slid to the floor and just stared at that spot for a long while after words.

"...No more day-old pizza before bed time." She muttered, this had to be a dream.

Spoiler for Lobster Quadrille:

There were lobsters... in tailcoats... dancing with turtles... in ballgowns.

This was going to be the last time Vivio ate day-old pizza before going to bed, for realies this time.

Vivio was about to pinch her way out of the dream when a lavender lobster offered a claw, "Will you- won't you- will you- won't you- won't you join the dance?"

"Hmm," putting odd repetition aside, Vivio wondered out loud to herself, "I wonder if this means something."

Well since she was already in the crustacean ballroom Vivio decided to at least enjoy herself. "Let's do this!"

The Lobster quadrille was a very complex dance full of swooping and swishing but fortunately the power of dreams made Vivio a competent partner for her oddly colored lobster. They twirled around the room, past a whiting complaining to a snail and a very odd turtle making soup with some sort of gryphon.

Then suddenly they stopped, at the edge of the ocean. Yes, the ballroom ended in ocean, it all made perfect sense at the time.

"Well it's time for me to go," The lobster bowed then looked at Vivio expectantly.

"Um... what are you waiting for?"

"You to throw me in, the dance can't be complete without it."

"Oh, okay!" A perfectly reasonable request Vivio thought. She grabbed her friend by the claw and chucked the lobster into the sea. "Well that was exciting."

"Now your turn," A ballgown clad turtle declared.

"That makes sense," for Vivio now knew she too was a lobster.

Vivio awoke as lobster Vivio went flying. She rubbed her forehead, "What the hell is that supposed to mean?"

The Lobster Quadrille is my favorite poem from Alice in Wonderland... though I like You Are Old Father William too.

[00-Raiser]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Spoiler for Lobster Quadrille:

There were lobsters... in tailcoats... dancing with turtles... in ballgowns.

This was going to be the last time Vivio ate day-old pizza before going to bed, for realies this time.

Vivio was about to pinch her way out of the dream when a lavender lobster offered a claw, "Will you- won't you- will you- won't you- won't you join the dance?"

"Hmm," putting odd repetition aside, Vivio wondered out loud to herself, "I wonder if this means something."

Well since she was already in the crustacean ballroom Vivio decided to at least enjoy herself. "Let's do this!"

The Lobster quadrille was a very complex dance full of swooping and swishing but fortunately the power of dreams made Vivio a competent partner for her oddly colored lobster. They twirled around the room, past a whiting complaining to a snail and a very odd turtle making soup with some sort of gryphon.

Then suddenly they stopped, at the edge of the ocean. Yes, the ballroom ended in ocean, it all made perfect sense at the time.

"Well it's time for me to go," The lobster bowed then looked at Vivio expectantly.

"Um... what are you waiting for?"

"You to throw me in, the dance can't be complete without it."

"Oh, okay!" A perfectly reasonable request Vivio thought. She grabbed her friend by the claw and chucked the lobster into the sea. "Well that was exciting."

"Now your turn," A ballgown clad turtle declared.

"That makes sense," for Vivio now knew she too was a lobster.

Vivio awoke as lobster Vivio went flying. She rubbed her forehead, "What the hell is that supposed to mean?"

The Lobster Quadrille is my favorite poem from Alice in Wonderland... though I like You Are Old Father William too.

... Wow, this reminds me of that fic where Vivio gets addicted to drugs Quite the trip.

[RadiantBeam]

Originally Posted by 00-Raiser

Quite the trip.

Vivio or the drugs?

[Satashi]

Lutecia agrees with us, RB!

Spoiler for Lutecia!:

[EDIT] Page claim for crappy colorings