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The Servant, with it's command of forces beyond science and deep into mysticism, history and legend would make an IS pilot have a very little chance of winning. well that's my quick thought for me. |
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2011-12-09, 12:09 | Link #12022 |
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Depends on the Servant. Caster, Rider, Archer, and Gilgamesh will probably have a decent chance of fighting while Servants like Berserker and Saber will have a harder time due to short range. Assassin will depend on whether he's like the Fake Assassin or the Real Hashashin and Lancer depends on the type of I.S unit.
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2011-12-09, 12:53 | Link #12023 | |
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In short, depending on who you summon.
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2011-12-09, 16:58 | Link #12025 |
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Power went out yesterday of course -.- @Eratas what happened was i was just in a depressed mood for a long time and just wasn't motivated to really do anything. no more OC characters or any fanfiction.
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2011-12-09, 18:03 | Link #12026 | ||||||
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Rather than Tatenashi-bashing, this serves as medium to show that Madoka is heavily flawed department, but so does Tatenashi. I actually remember that I told you her weakness is that she tend to drag people in her pace and not realized it's hurting them sometimes until it's too late (Kanzashi, Saki, and this time Madoka). And this is not only about power level issue, it's applies to social interaction as well (where Tatenashi dominates everything). When Tatenashi told Ichika "Be a man I can fall in love with", she mean manly enough to carry the pants in their relationship. It's just that Madoka who's overreacting (indeed, she is NOT a clingy jealous girl... until her tank of patience literally BLOWS) and Madoka goes "Why the hell bitch like you even exist?", punched a computer screen and left. And mind you this is not on first time, Madoka caught her in such kinds of act plenty times (played for laughs), no wonder her fuse is overloaded and she snap. as as I told you earlier, Madoka tends to be irrational when emotionally broken. As for monorail... well... it IS a weekend and Ichika is supposed to take Madoka for a date (the reason Ichika grooming himself finely). One more reason Madoka is pissed as fuck. Of course Tatenashi being Tatenahsi, she'll hide her guilt, keeping an optimistic face, and spending a lot of effort to save Madoka. Ichika himself didn't blame Tatenashi, instead blaming it for his incompetence and indecisiveness, this is the reason he act cold and struck-up (basically revert to his old personality, but less fierce). And there's also Kanzashi's problem, AND there's also Chifuyu being usual herself, prompting another rift between the siblings... basically V6 arc is the cast' moment of despair, especially for Ichika and Tatenashi. Quote:
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2011-12-09, 20:06 | Link #12027 | ||||
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My emphasis is about pushing story forward, so right now I'm not so focused on the ongoing changes apart from "hey you look different". I'll deal with it when I get there. Quote:
This is why Louise waited till this moment to break off (unwillingly), when there is least resistance. She didn't count on Karon returning early, and that leads to the penultimate fight which has the Copernicus damaged and their teacher spending time in a medical bed. The other Stars in spite of using stratospheric boosters return only after Louise retreats. S2's ending fight is even more darker than S1's is! (And what's with Max getting his love interests in big fights before he wins them over? Well, at least it shows that he works for them instead of pheramones. )
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2011-12-09, 20:54 | Link #12028 |
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@ Kazuma - Back in the mood again?
@ Senpai - How did Chifuyu react to this? I'm assuming she heard her little bro and her best friend getting into a crapload of trouble in school and nearlyg getting expelled. Also, I only assumed you were bashing Tatenashi because you wrote about her negatively and I was wrong. You did the same thing when I made a segment of Irish calling Tabane out in Shadow and said you said I was just bashing or her letting my dislike of her influence my writing. Sorry if I offended you, I guess I was wrong. So Tatenashi goes too far in her teasing and Madoka gets pissed off? What exactly did she do? Madoka doesn't seem to mind it too much when the other harem members try to get him. Granted, most of them don't go to the same length as Tatenashi Side note - What dk you think someone should say to her to make her realize she's hurting people too much by dragging them along at their own pace? I'll need it for Shadow. Also, what do you think Ichika will do/say when he's finally had enough abuse? @ Meistah - So he doesn't get abused near the levels Ichika is? That's good, I was wondering why the hell a teacher gets mistreated. The Idols being missing reminds me of how friends separate after College gets nearer. It's depressing, but it's inevitable. Don't worry, Nakama never truly separate
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2011-12-09, 21:19 | Link #12031 | ||||
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But of course, it doesn't detract much from her canon self compared to how I butchered Madoka. Therefore, readers would still get their favorite character unharmed (better than having me killed her, not featuring her, or destroy her characterization). Quote:
EDIT: And oh forcing him to go into such situation ON PURPOSE is... well. EDIT2: Tatenahsi just do the usual, sexually teasing Ichika just after he's out of the bath. Quote:
Irish: "You think I care for those ideas you shoved into my face? yes, I am, and boy I really loved it...as if" (hostile sarcasm) Kyuukai: "Not everyone can be like you, and you are not everyone else, just remember that fact" (friendly advice)
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2011-12-09, 21:30 | Link #12033 |
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@ Senpai - So Chifuyu took a gamble and it paid off? Is she failed, the consequences would have been massive.
Just don't let it affect your writing too much I don't like Tabane, but I'm presenting Irish's hatred of her as irrational and prejudiced. Be unbiased when writing a story Also, do you think I should have a bit of a kick the dog moment there? For example: She tells Irish about her worries about her sister not liking her and that she's wondering what to do. Irish's response? Irish: Do you honestly expect me to care? Those are your problems, not mine. Of course, he'll end up helping her anyway at some point. @ Rain - I'm wondering whether I should make it a joint play or a separate play for everyone. What do you think?
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2011-12-09, 21:38 | Link #12034 | |||
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2011-12-09, 21:42 | Link #12035 |
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@ Eratas: A joint play would be better if you're looking for comedy, smaller skits would be better for character development.
Comedy-wise, if a joint play would happen, Kyuukai and Irish would argue on what to do best, the rest of them would fight over roles, work would be all disorganized, and when the curtains are finally drawn, they realize they have no script. Cue ad lib, the background cast directing Kyuukai on what to narrate as everything but the kitchen sink happens on stage. Development-wise, there should be an individual play centering around each of them or monologue that should fit the characters. Kyuukai could pull Edgar Allen Poe on the Academy while everyone else does their own thing. That or they all can do Shakesphere, maybe with each other or try to do a short monologue. Kyuukai would fit in Anthony and Cleopatra. Three guesses on who Cleopatra is. Ichika would be best in Romeo and Juliet. And Irish can probably pull a good Hamlet. |
2011-12-09, 21:43 | Link #12036 |
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@ Senpai - Not half assedly?
Chifuyu: If you want to intimidate someone, make sure to break BOTH their arms instead of one. Don't leave a job half-done. Good luck writing, Senpai Ironically enough, Irish is the one who ends up begging Ichika for help in order to help them get along. Granted, his reasoning is because he says her performance might drop if she can't focus (or so he says). I wonder how I make him gradually less of a jerkass, though. Also, I don'r know when I have him call others by first name. @ Rain - I was hoping for more of a Comedy play Did you play final fantasy 7? The Golden Saucer play is a good example of this. I can so see people juggling roles like Kyuukai being both the lancer and the narattor while Ichika is the hero and the distressed dude and Irish is both the Anti-hero/villain and the Damsel in distress (dressed up in a gown).
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2011-12-09, 21:55 | Link #12038 | ||
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"In this barren and perverse world, the best choice would have never had been the correct one" -Sacred Twins chapter 8 "If you want to be a monster or a saint, don't do it half-assedly, if you want to be human, then compromise" -on Human Quote:
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2011-12-09, 22:07 | Link #12040 |
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@ Senpai - Chifuyu seems to be cynical to the world at large. Also, her advice on being human might be ironic since Ichika's a clone.
Not really a jerk? Really? Should I turn up his jackassery then? Also, what do you mean he developed in the drafts? He seems the same. @ Rain - No way is he dressing as some, in his opinion, "girly guy who's gay for an emo guy with spiky hair and is using the sword to compensate for something". Of course, everyone else would say he fits the role perfectly What do you want the play to be? Christmas or romance like "The three heroes venture forth to save the kingdom and it's 3 princesses". Of course, they actually fight in the play for some reason and they look ridiculous pulling of maneuvers since they're dressed as medieval adventurers @ Box - Most of the girls are taller than him
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