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Eratas123 · 2011-11-20, 05:28

@ Zero - Ichika doesn't really talk much in canon either. Most of his monologue is wither describing who he's talking to or how he feels about a situation.

He pretty much talks in short phrases and quick to the point sentences. I've never seen him talk for more than two sentences, at most.

HasuMasu · 2011-11-20, 05:30

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Zero - Ichika doesn't really talk much in canon either. Most of his monologue is wither describing who he's talking to or how he feels about a situation.

He pretty much talks in short phrases and quick to the point sentences. I've never seen him talk for more than two sentences, at most.

Let's not forget that most of what he says is giving food commentary.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-20, 05:34

To recap: His monologues tend to be long and have unnecessary comments while his talking is short and to the point.

EDIT - @ Meister - When will you write Vandam-tan? I'm waiting for the "Uruchai's"

MeisterBabylon · 2011-11-20, 06:15

I need to finish Vandam I before even considering Vandam-tan.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-20, 06:18

@ Meister - Won't you put it as an omake?

MeisterBabylon · 2011-11-20, 06:21

The omake wouldn't make any sense if the audience doesn't know what I'm parodying.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-20, 06:28

A character gets turnes into a chibi when an experiment goes wrong and proceeds to live on her friends head while constantly causing trouble along the way for everyone around her. Hilarity ensues.

What's there to get?

HasuMasu · 2011-11-20, 06:29

Shana-tan, is that you?

MeisterBabylon · 2011-11-20, 06:45

I think its funnier if the premise was that during the course of the events in Vandam I then Shooting St@r, Karon is replaced with Chibi Karon, and everyone else has their characterizations butchered.

I could make it a standalone, but that would only be a useless plot bunny.

And slow Box-kun is slow.

HasuMasu · 2011-11-20, 06:49

A box does not move, grasshopper. :wisemanfacewhichwedon'thaveasanemoticonbutweshoul d:

MeisterBabylon · 2011-11-20, 06:50

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Originally Posted by Detective-san

A box does not move, grasshopper. :wisemanfacewhichwedon'thaveasanemoticonbutweshoul d:

I am imagining a box with a Mameshiba face.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-20, 06:51

@ Meister - The only difference is the fact that Karon isn't confined to her friends head and can move around since her Vandam shrunk with her

In the omake I'm making, the three are basically stuck not only because they can't fly, but because of the way they act (Ichika's an idiot, Irish doesn't say anything and Kyuukai keeps reading weapon magazines). They'll have three dead chibi's by the end of the day if they don't keep a constant eye on them.

Eratas123 · 2011-11-20, 07:21

@ Jak - Looks good

Just make sure to limit the silverback's power levels. Also, you might want to change Tezla's dialogue to say that the Silverback isn't as strong as the IS or something to to that effect. Readers don't like it when stories mention a machine that can rival/surpass an IS.

Saint X · 2011-11-20, 07:25

Attention: The OC index will be kept open until tomorrow.

===================

As for an introduction.

Here's one of my supporting characters of the Blue Side.

Spoiler for C'rnadyne's Boss:

Name: L’lin P’jilner.
Nickname/s: Doc.
Age: Unknown
Home Country: Unknown, Living in somewhere in Japan.
Affiliation: C’rnadyne Industries

Mysterious as her ears and tail, Doctor L’lin P’jilner is the mysterious Founder, CEO, COO and overall Tech Head of C’rnadyne (some say it as Cirna-dyne, some say it as Carna-dyne) Industries, a company of unknown founding and incorporation but registered in the Japanese SEC. The Company specializes in IS Technologies that compared to even the latest advances by governments and other research and development bodies, seem “too advanced”.

Though she is a Doctor, she is seen rarely practicing her profession, instead delving into the Engineering Disciplines that her Company specializes in- though she can attend to the medical needs of her employees. Much is unknown about her, and what is known is generally from witnesses that get to see her. Asides from her obviously feline features, another point of notice is her incessant licking of lollipops, yes lollipops- the only time that you can see her not consume the confection is when she tosses the empty stick/s to the trash and take out a fresh confection.

Despite her laid-back attitude, she is very serious person and is extremely wily, often manging to coerce even the most hardheaded of fools into her bidding. She has used this capability time and time again, acquiring myriads of smaller IS-based companies, with the latest being ProtoTech LLC (makers of the Metatron), and even managed to form a partnership with STRATOMAG’s Gerard Archangel.

No one truly knows what she is doing, or planning- but the more she churns out IS-linked technology that seemed “impossible”, one wonders...

Spoiler for C’rnadyne/L’lin P’jilner Products:

I wanted to do a sample script but heck i am trying to revive my FFN passion.

StratoSpear · 2011-11-20, 07:41

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

Readers don't like it when stories mention a machine that can rival/surpass an IS.

How does the Minerva fair for that matter?

Granted, it went down twice from situations that a genuine IS would see through with minimal issues but still, I wanna hear people's opinions about it.

Yachiyo · 2011-11-20, 08:10

I love to play Angel Jam

SaintessHeart · 2011-11-20, 08:52

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

A character gets turnes into a chibi when an experiment goes wrong and proceeds to live on her friends head while constantly causing trouble along the way for everyone around her. Hilarity ensues.

What's there to get?

Chibi-Karon : *sniffs* Now I am small, everyone's chest is bigger than m- FINALLY SOMEONE WITH THE SAME SIZE AS MINE! *jumps on Riselle*

Riselle : OI! GET OFF ME! NO! Stop grabbing my......my chest!

demino_hellsin · 2011-11-20, 09:14

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2ITcB9ohCnw

T_T

Eratas123 · 2011-11-20, 10:00

Quote:

Originally Posted by SaintessHeart

Chibi-Karon : *sniffs* Now I am small, everyone's chest is bigger than m- FINALLY SOMEONE WITH THE SAME SIZE AS MINE! *jumps on Riselle*

Riselle : OI! GET OFF ME! NO! Stop grabbing my......my chest!

@ Meister and Saintess - Karon's probably about the same size as Riselle's chest at her height

Did Karon turn perverted when she went chibi or something?

@ Stratos - The only problem you had was already mentioned before: You took the canon cast's moment of glory with the Silverio Gospel. You already re-wrote the part so I'd say it's fixed.

You mentioned why this was the case before (The fact that Inami's already been involved in their affairs), that gives an in-story explanation. However, from a meta point of view, it makes Inami look like a spotlight stealing squad.

There's my two cents.

demino_hellsin · 2011-11-20, 10:51

How long does a human last without social contact?

2011-11-20, 05:28	Link #8561
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Zero - Ichika doesn't really talk much in canon either. Most of his monologue is wither describing who he's talking to or how he feels about a situation. He pretty much talks in short phrases and quick to the point sentences. I've never seen him talk for more than two sentences, at most. __________________

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	To recap: His monologues tend to be long and have unnecessary comments while his talking is short and to the point. EDIT - @ Meister - When will you write Vandam-tan? I'm waiting for the "Uruchai's" __________________ Last edited by Eratas123; 2011-11-20 at 05:52.

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MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	I need to finish Vandam I before even considering Vandam-tan. __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Meister - Won't you put it as an omake? __________________

2011-11-20, 06:21	Link #8566
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	The omake wouldn't make any sense if the audience doesn't know what I'm parodying. __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	A character gets turnes into a chibi when an experiment goes wrong and proceeds to live on her friends head while constantly causing trouble along the way for everyone around her. Hilarity ensues. What's there to get? __________________

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HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	Shana-tan, is that you? __________________

2011-11-20, 06:45	Link #8569
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	I think its funnier if the premise was that during the course of the events in Vandam I then Shooting St@r, Karon is replaced with Chibi Karon, and everyone else has their characterizations butchered. I could make it a standalone, but that would only be a useless plot bunny. And slow Box-kun is slow. __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2011-11-20, 06:49	Link #8570
HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	A box does not move, grasshopper. :wisemanfacewhichwedon'thaveasanemoticonbutweshoul d: __________________

2011-11-20, 06:51	Link #8572
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Meister - The only difference is the fact that Karon isn't confined to her friends head and can move around since her Vandam shrunk with her In the omake I'm making, the three are basically stuck not only because they can't fly, but because of the way they act (Ichika's an idiot, Irish doesn't say anything and Kyuukai keeps reading weapon magazines). They'll have three dead chibi's by the end of the day if they don't keep a constant eye on them. __________________

2011-11-20, 07:21	Link #8573
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Jak - Looks good Just make sure to limit the silverback's power levels. Also, you might want to change Tezla's dialogue to say that the Silverback isn't as strong as the IS or something to to that effect. Readers don't like it when stories mention a machine that can rival/surpass an IS. __________________

2011-11-20, 07:25	Link #8574
Saint X VxR Productions IT Support Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Philippines	Attention: The OC index will be kept open until tomorrow. =================== As for an introduction. Here's one of my supporting characters of the Blue Side. Spoiler for C'rnadyne's Boss: Name: L’lin P’jilner. Nickname/s: Doc. Age: Unknown Home Country: Unknown, Living in somewhere in Japan. Affiliation: C’rnadyne Industries Mysterious as her ears and tail, Doctor L’lin P’jilner is the mysterious Founder, CEO, COO and overall Tech Head of C’rnadyne (some say it as Cirna-dyne, some say it as Carna-dyne) Industries, a company of unknown founding and incorporation but registered in the Japanese SEC. The Company specializes in IS Technologies that compared to even the latest advances by governments and other research and development bodies, seem “too advanced”. Though she is a Doctor, she is seen rarely practicing her profession, instead delving into the Engineering Disciplines that her Company specializes in- though she can attend to the medical needs of her employees. Much is unknown about her, and what is known is generally from witnesses that get to see her. Asides from her obviously feline features, another point of notice is her incessant licking of lollipops, yes lollipops- the only time that you can see her not consume the confection is when she tosses the empty stick/s to the trash and take out a fresh confection. Despite her laid-back attitude, she is very serious person and is extremely wily, often manging to coerce even the most hardheaded of fools into her bidding. She has used this capability time and time again, acquiring myriads of smaller IS-based companies, with the latest being ProtoTech LLC (makers of the Metatron), and even managed to form a partnership with STRATOMAG’s Gerard Archangel. No one truly knows what she is doing, or planning- but the more she churns out IS-linked technology that seemed “impossible”, one wonders... Spoiler for C’rnadyne/L’lin P’jilner Products: IS Units: - Adarna (Upgrade 3 onwards) - Metatron (Carried over from ProtoTech) - Revatlos - Unknown MP Project Metatron Subsystems and Addons: - Pulsed Emission Capacitor Subsystem - Far Sight Projector Subsystem - Jump Drive Carrier Subsystem - Buffered Absorber Subsystem - Manipulative Energy Interface Subsystem - Siege Kit Add-on General IS Equipments: - Particle Beam Weapons - Hybrid Cartridge Weapons - IS Firearms - IS Missiles and Launchers - IS Equippable/Controllable Drones and equipment. - IS Benefit Modules - IS Hindrance Modules (EWar, ECM, etc.) IS Derived Items: - Far Sight Sensor System - P.O.S. (Personal Over-Shield) Area Defense System - Holoscreen Projectors - Micro-PCs I wanted to do a sample script but heck i am trying to revive my FFN passion.

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Yachiyo ~`Seito Kaichō`~ Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: ~`Afterlife`~	I love to play Angel Jam __________________

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demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2ITcB9ohCnw T_T

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demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	How long does a human last without social contact?