2011-11-20, 05:28 | Link #8561 |
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@ Zero - Ichika doesn't really talk much in canon either. Most of his monologue is wither describing who he's talking to or how he feels about a situation.
He pretty much talks in short phrases and quick to the point sentences. I've never seen him talk for more than two sentences, at most.
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2011-11-20, 05:34 | Link #8563 |
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To recap: His monologues tend to be long and have unnecessary comments while his talking is short and to the point.
EDIT - @ Meister - When will you write Vandam-tan? I'm waiting for the "Uruchai's"
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2011-11-20, 06:45 | Link #8569 |
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I think its funnier if the premise was that during the course of the events in Vandam I then Shooting St@r, Karon is replaced with Chibi Karon, and everyone else has their characterizations butchered.
I could make it a standalone, but that would only be a useless plot bunny. And slow Box-kun is slow.
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2011-11-20, 06:51 | Link #8572 |
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@ Meister - The only difference is the fact that Karon isn't confined to her friends head and can move around since her Vandam shrunk with her In the omake I'm making, the three are basically stuck not only because they can't fly, but because of the way they act (Ichika's an idiot, Irish doesn't say anything and Kyuukai keeps reading weapon magazines). They'll have three dead chibi's by the end of the day if they don't keep a constant eye on them.
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2011-11-20, 07:21 | Link #8573 |
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@ Jak - Looks good Just make sure to limit the silverback's power levels. Also, you might want to change Tezla's dialogue to say that the Silverback isn't as strong as the IS or something to to that effect. Readers don't like it when stories mention a machine that can rival/surpass an IS.
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2011-11-20, 07:25 | Link #8574 |
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Attention: The OC index will be kept open until tomorrow.
=================== As for an introduction. Here's one of my supporting characters of the Blue Side. Spoiler for C'rnadyne's Boss:
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Granted, it went down twice from situations that a genuine IS would see through with minimal issues but still, I wanna hear people's opinions about it.
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2011-11-20, 08:52 | Link #8577 | |
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Riselle : OI! GET OFF ME! NO! Stop grabbing my......my chest!
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2011-11-20, 10:00 | Link #8579 | |
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@ Stratos - The only problem you had was already mentioned before: You took the canon cast's moment of glory with the Silverio Gospel. You already re-wrote the part so I'd say it's fixed. You mentioned why this was the case before (The fact that Inami's already been involved in their affairs), that gives an in-story explanation. However, from a meta point of view, it makes Inami look like a spotlight stealing squad. There's my two cents.
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