2012-01-22, 07:47 | Link #19081 | |
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Keeping a lot of details in check knowing that alot of people are keeping an eye out for them isn't really my ideal way to start out my fanfic hobby. Then again, aside from reviews, there's always the traffic log. Seeing Bouclier clocking up 3K+ hits with Saber at 900 really surprised me since those two stories are pratically my first attempts at fanfiction. As I mention in my fics, I always appreciate reviews, be it good or bad ones... unless they're flat out trolls. ^^
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2012-01-22, 07:48 | Link #19082 | |
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If what I'm writing about the Kingdom of Ea, Ichika being an ISper, the nature of IS in general, and the plans of the one named Byakushiki are anything to go by, I think I have enough to make everyone go "wait, that makes sense, but still, what?!"
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2012-01-22, 07:49 | Link #19083 |
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I've got 12k so far in Daydreams Really wasn't expecting that for a fic where I did it while I was losing sleep and generally sucked at romance
@ Senpai - Remember that just becuase they're holding the POV doesn't meant they're good. The good guys could be the bad guys for all we know. What if the story didn't focus on Lelouch during code geass but Suzaku instead? You can bet Lelouch wouldn't be the Good guy in that case. Same goes for your fic. Maybe Ichika's doing the right thing and the St@rs are the one's in wrong. maybe they're not. It's the beauty of POV shifting
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2012-01-22, 07:59 | Link #19086 | |
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This is going to be so FUN! But first, I need to progress Karon out of the pillow-chewing stage of her life. *writes furiously*
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2012-01-22, 08:04 | Link #19088 |
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@ Meistah - Woohps, typo on who I sent the message to Anyway, your series reminds me of a light hearted version of metal gear. The games start out Black and white, till you see the character's backstories, motivations, and who exactly you're fighting for. By the end, it's unknown if you winning is the good or bad thing and if your player dying is actually the good thing for the world at large.
@ Senpai - What kind of kid do you think Ichika will get along with the most? Side note - So, what? He'll be forced to marry the person he had a kid with? @ Stratos - Any plans of timeskipping to the future like most fics do?
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2012-01-22, 08:09 | Link #19089 |
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Never mind the rant, I am just tired because I had been working on the enemies, the plan/time table to do both the male and female story (chronological order).....until 4am in the morning (that post about working on it for four hours is basically this happening in the background) and my family woke me up at 8am for spring cleaning (I just woke up from a nap btw).
@Eratas: Sorry, Your advice is good but I actually need a bit of Criticism (ensuring Gray stu level stay at certain range) but never mind, new direction is still working out fine. No restriction fit my style better anyway. But I would still need help on the story though (this time, not concept or idea but the actual full draft will be prepared ). Writing report (My own personal analysis on my own story since nobody commented on my story *sigh* I had to do my own self-analysis. Sorry for being a sorry-being who had to comment on his own story.): Spoiler for Cutted for length:
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2012-01-22, 08:10 | Link #19090 |
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1. Thew kid is adopted by a proper family (in short, Ichika is being irresponsible and thrown his own kid away) 2. the child will be kept by Ichika's parental figure (in Ichika's case: Chifuyu) Until Ichika is fully matured and able to support the child in all aspect.
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2012-01-22, 08:14 | Link #19091 |
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@ Treme - Fire doesn't have to be shown outwardly through energy. Kyon is actually a very determined individual despite being deadpan and lazy most of the time. Tsukune Aono is this as well despite being a nice guy most of the time. It's your actions that determine your fire.
@ Senpai - Will this apply in something like Future Imperfect? Also, will the government interfere once they realize his male kids can also pilot an IS?
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2012-01-22, 08:16 | Link #19092 | |
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Also, how are the first years classes numbered? As in for Class One, is it something like Class 1-1 followed by 1-2 for Class two?
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2012-01-22, 08:20 | Link #19094 | |
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2012-01-22, 08:23 | Link #19096 |
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Cool!
Part of the scene I'm currently working on Spoiler for Shit hits the fan... cont'd:
A rare case where Inami doesn't wait for details. The idea that students are in danger are good enough of a reason for him to sortie.
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2012-01-22, 08:24 | Link #19097 | |
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2) Already have. But its a distraction so far.
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2012-01-22, 08:28 | Link #19098 |
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SO, 7 season and sthere's still sequel, oh man....
@ Eras It is possible, but really, they won't try to keep the kids in this era, instead, they WILL ensure that in nthe next decades, Orimura offspring has to born safely and grown properly. Worst case, they're manipulated for interbreeding, squick as it sounded, it's the best way to preserve the mysterious orimura genes. Side note - The hell, My drawing of ShiroKishi overshadowed Setsura in terms of size! Gary Stu Alert!
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2012-01-22, 08:28 | Link #19099 | |
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If he start from Blue flame first, it means I failed on writing him. Isn't it a little too late for this... after all I am working on the new character.
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2012-01-22, 08:28 | Link #19100 |
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@ Meistah - Also laughing at the fact that you took Karon's LI's and gave them to the others. Now she's mostly stuck by her lonesome and her flatter chest
@ Stratos - Shouldn't the teachers be helping as well? They are equipped to deal with threats, after all. @ Senpai - Hm, I'm wondering if I should have he kids disappear at the end of the story back to their own time or choose to stay behind since now they have a new family there. Any idea? @ Treme - How could someone who's lazy be a red fire? Anyway, both fires have their merits.
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