Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[agetreme]

Spoiler for Spoiler:

Queen Code will eventually render Daylight(Robot pet) useless forcing Imber to take control of the situation.

Because of this, he is seen and forced into ISA.

Yes, it is meant to be ironic, Imber (rain/storm) is the creator of Daylight.... Sunshine after the rain?

Also, scanning is useful, but boring most of the time.

Which is why Imber has it.... His machine specialized in skill which other Male OC don't bother with.

[ZeroXSEED]

Too much fat burned = dangerous, there's also some issues about loose skin and stuff. Also, messing with hormone can be fatal sometimes.

Side note - dunno, because what happened to Irish is beyond normal medical recognition, other than his organ messed up, I don't know (and frankly him becoming bishie in the process is... well, how? )

Going to sleep. see ya.

[Eratas123]

@ Treme - ISA wouldn't buy "fix a robot dog" as an excuse to let a guy come to ISA. Unless he's being put there by an org, nothing can happen.

@ Senpai - That sounds nasty I wonder if people were desperate enough to do that.

The bishieness was already natural since his family is shown to be not bad looking. However, the reason he looks like that even now is due to his body getting less hormones, i.e less physically mature even if he ages. To be frank, people get less bishie as they age (This is true, you know that). The only reason he looks like that is because his body isn't aging correctly, so he retains most of his looks from being a child into adolescence. The thinness and paleness is a sign that his body's dying. Body's turn paler and grow thinner as they lose blood flow so his skin tone gradually became paler to show that his body can't cope with the effects and that he's not going to last much longer if he keeps going.

[kaizerknight01]

guys some need advice, i can picture the plot and images on my head having a hard time doing the dialog. but when i comes to fight scene for some reason i have a lot easier time writing

I might be used to writing in third person view point

[agetreme]

Actually It has nothing to do with fixing.

Spoiler for Spoiler:

He is forced into ISA because he has been seen using a machine similar to IS.... because people thought he could pilot IS and they desperately need to neutralize Ichika's charm(remember Ichika = Japanese. If too many girls with IS attracted to Ichika = Japan gaining too much power).... they need as many male IS pilot they can find as possible.

[Eratas123]

@ Treme - I'm surprised they don't just kill Ichika straight out.

@ Kaizer - What do you need help with?

[agetreme]

Note: They can't. Too much attention is on him, if he die suddenly, people will knew something is wrong. Plus, Ichika's death means one less male IS pilot sample for them to work on.... Data from Male IS pilot is precious to unlock the ability for males to pilot IS.

Note: the spoiler is also the reason why Imber is pissed off and trolling most of the time.... It's like Saving somebody's life and end up being late for work and your paid get deduced for being late...

Anybody would be pissed in that situation.

Edit: Now the problem I had to deal with is the timeline...... oh well, back to the drafting board....

[Eratas123]

What's wrong with the timeline?

[agetreme]

Nah, I will go to sleep first. I will plan out the whole things.....when I wake up.

(Well, at least all this plan made a legitimate claim that the fanfic is in Development Hell for a while )

[kaizerknight01]

@Eratas

having trouble with the dialogue part. i'll to get some inspiration by watch the the IS / or reading the novel.

Please bear with my gammar ( Mildly dyslectic I them to skip some words )

@eratas can i pm you my ideas or post it on this from??

[Eratas123]

@ Kaizer - Just post it here and I'll give you some tips.

[kaizerknight01]

@ eratas thx

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - THought you were going to sleep?

@ Kaizer - Alright, please hurry since I may sleep soon.

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Too much fat burned = dangerous, there's also some issues about loose skin and stuff. Also, messing with hormone can be fatal sometimes.

Side note - dunno, because what happened to Irish is beyond normal medical recognition, other than his organ messed up, I don't know (and frankly him becoming bishie in the process is... well, how? )

Going to sleep. see ya.

You also forgot that too much fat burned = ketoacidosis, which is fatal.

[Yachiyo]

I just wanted to say good morning, it's 5:51am here, so I gotta run for school.

See ya later ^^

[Eratas123]

Updated Future Imperfect! Man, I didn't sleep to update that damn thing. Ah well, it was months overdue.

[agetreme]

Reworking on the male lead again....

Spoiler for Long post due to Brain storm:

Brainstorming

The title of the story is Forbidden Cores

Spoiler for the Four Forbidden Cores:

Comprises of:
Prototype IS core: Forbidden due to having free will
Pandora's Box/Music box (Emotion Connect system): Forbidden due to gamebreaking nature. (extreme power but unstable).
Queen Code infected IS core: (Valkyrie Trace System version 2. Enuff said)
Imber's Core: (Forbidden due to certain reason.)

======Girl's side===========
Begin after the Silver Gospel incident but before the males enter ISA.

Female Lead: Yuya Harumiya

Spoiler for Hail the Queen:

Yuya Harumiya
"Where am I?"
>Due to Queen's code, loss her memory.
>Skilled AI programmer
> A klutz
> Optimist
> As mentioned A gamer who use Game terminology at times
>Too dense for love
>Rich girl....(oujo-sama type)
> Get along well with Kanzashi....
>Interested in Ichika due to the influence of Queen Code... who is curious about Byakushiki.

Qu.E.E.N.

"You need to be more honest with yourself, and see other girls as obstacle that needed to be taken out..."

> Cold and Emotionless
> Claimed to be emotionless and do not understand emotion
> Only the second part is correct....
> Dominatrix.... want people to call her Queen is probably the first obvious sign....
> Her dream is take over the world and be the Empress.
> Dark Messiah type
> Proud and arrogant.... with skill to back it up...
> Look down and insults others
> Able to Utilize both energy and physical weapons (Physical weapons by transforming equalizer and available material into throwing weapons)

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Spoiler for Shizuka:

"Orimura....."
"DIEDIEDIE!IchikaIchikaIchikaIchikaIchikaIchikaISM INE!!"
Shizuka
> Room mate of Yuya
> A shy girl....who had a crush on Ichika (aw.....)
>Problem: When she is in an IS suit, she flip and turn batshit crazy.
> Due to the Queen's .....erm...encouragement which somewhat involved brainwashing her into her pawn...
> Great power come with great insanity, she is a beast in the IS suit.....

========girls' side======


======Boy's side===========

Timeline is set after Sliver Gospel incident. Males arrival to ISA is triggered by Sliver Gospel Pilot kissing Ichika (yea.... it end up being an international incident ).

male lead: Imber Eltanin

Spoiler for Imber Eltanin:

Female lead and Queen code has nothing to do with Male lead (yeah.... I change that to no relation again...)

> Male lead is a wanderer who travel around the world.
> Male Lead is a troll.
> He tend to derail things with ridiculous stuff.
> He bond well with Ichika because both of them looked pathetic (for Ichika. it's in his mind anyway..... He is surrounded by girls while the Male lead isn't)
> Male lead has no support from the girls.
> He balance other Male OC as being the least cool.... (at least to the girls)
> tend to be careless.
> Due to carelessness, will end up Epic fail.
> The other non-pervert male(other than Ichika) in the all-male group but due to knowing that it will end badly....

>His machine's motif is dragon, contrast the Knight theme of IS. But don't forget: IS is more theme towards Samurai than Knight(also due to being developed by a Japanese mad scientist) and Eastern Dragon are benevolent compared to the Western....

Still following the theme of balance:
>He specialized in things which other Male OC don't. (hence Balance them out).
>Machine is all rounder
>Because he is all rounder, he get struck with roles that other characters can't perform.
>The Male lead's role in combat is the team's Medic, healing and support (again with specialize in stuff which other male OC don't) until he get replaced by somebody better
>The only unique ability his machine has is Scan.

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Example of Imber trolling everybody:
Imber: "800 years ago, Aliens descended upon earth. Upon arriving on earth. Blood corrupted them and they decided that earth is filthy and decided to cleanse it in fire.

Until one day, a legendary hero known as Saint George arrived. Wielding a Sacred sword, he defeated the powerful thirteenth Dragon, 10 and banished all dragons into different dimension. Hence this is why you can't see any dragons in the modern day! And yes, Dragons are different dimension Aliens!"

Everybody: O_O

Imber: "Can't you see I am just joking, only part of it is true!"

Ichika (think): Probably the Part about Saint George defeating a dragon.....

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Second Real Male IS pilot (No reason given for ability to pilot IS):

Spoiler for Alex:

>A male IS pilot who can pilot IS
> Timid due to the world being more favorable towards girls then guys
> Scared of girls due to being beaten up by a gang of girls who got away.
> Shorter than girls and has a baby face
> Looked and appear girly because of above reasons.
>Hilarity ensured.....(because Ichika still remember about Char Cross-dress as guy so what are the odds of another girl doing the same thing?)
> So Ichika try to get close to him to find out the truth
> Logical conclusion: both end up being BL fuel.....for the girls.

His theme is.... LOVE! His IS is fueled by emotion, the power of Hot blooded!!!!! His name is Alex because Alex can be a girl's name too....lol.

> His IS has the strongest defense, hence his role is the Tank.
> More heavy armed due to lack of skill in piloting (obviously, being the least experienced)
> Due to being heavier, his IS is the slowest IS with the lowest mobility.
>Doesn't really matter if he could take damage....

He has a male instructor who was instructed to make him manly.
>Instructor lament about the good old times where the most powerful machine on the field is a tank or Jet plane which can be taken out with a good old RPG.....

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Prototype IS User

Spoiler for Cipher version 3:

> Based on typical Male OC.
>Able to pilot IS due to Prototype has no gender restriction (being developed by both male and female)
> Can get hot-blooded when it came to perverted stuff.
>Theme of Knight: Handsome, protective, da dream guy but.....
> Nobody is perfect: he is perverted as hell.
> Suggest things which "Take the males to paradise and Imber to hell".

Prototype IS's role is Thief class (DPS dealing machine)
> Dish out damages fast
>Weakness is same as any Rouge Class for RPG: Low HP
>Weak defense but with high mobility and special ability to cover up the weakness.

All three males came in at the same time and form the unholy trinity of Tank, DPS and healer!

======Boy's side===========

[DarkJak2050]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

If someone has better/improved eyesight, does that mean flashbangs will affect them more?

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Yes they do.

So if that's right, then the IS's Hyper Sensors can be a "double-edged sword". And that could be a factor...

And agetreme, is this a whole new fic you're doing? Or is it the same one you thought of back in October or November of last year?

[Saint X]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

What's weirder than a male IS pilot? A dog piloting the IS?

Oh Hello there Shadow:

[DarkJak2050]

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