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Fireminer · 2013-09-24, 08:46

Wonderful! Expect the next chapter to be out by the end of next week!

Oh, and another idea:

"(Sob) No more...Please, nee-sama...(Sob)

"Silence!" And once again, Ichika was pushed into the land of numbness, with only his cries of pain and Chifuyu's growl of pleasure surround him..."

Basically, abbusive sister and her little "toy".

ZeroXSEED · 2013-09-24, 08:51

Man miner you have some creative mind

Join the dark side

agetreme · 2013-09-24, 08:52

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Man miner you have some creative mind

Join the dark side

Yes.... Dark side is actually quite interesting to write.

According to certain Butcher, stories don't feel real if they have happy-ever-after ending.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-09-24, 08:57

Hey, I believe the beautiful dawn after stormy night

But the DRAMA, no one can miss that

Fireminer · 2013-09-24, 08:59

Yeah, and look at what Butcher are doing with Kamen Rider: Fusing Samurai with FRUITS!

At least make it NINJA!

But now remember it, we've been cofined with our ideas. Why haven't anyone try a Mystical Fantasy, or Real-life History, Pure Romance AU, Gangs Life,...?

ZeroXSEED · 2013-09-24, 09:01

^ Actually, Fantasy/historical idea already there in the board

But we haven't been driven enough to write it, something along the lines of "Sengoku jidai" or otherwise ISO-standard Fantasyland

Pure romance: Eratas already took the cake and eat it

StratoSpear · 2013-09-24, 09:03

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@StratoSpear: I don't bash other people's OC.

But most of them are repeating the same formula (by this point of time, done to death).

I prefer stories with something "unique".

Not saying you do ^^
I just wanted to vent abit from a quick browse of the fanbase.

What formula, if I may ask?

Fireminer · 2013-09-24, 09:13

(Stolen from Kamen Rider Double)

"Makabe Hidari: private detective, cello player, bartender, information broker, author, artist, engineer and Powerdine user (A.K.A KMF). Ichika Orimura: field agent, salary hero, punching bag, harem master, guitar player and the only male IS pilot. Together, these two Joker and Ace are gonna change the world in the most unexpected way!"

And the fomular: BADASS+BROKEN PAST+NEGLECTED GIRL!

wavehawk · 2013-09-24, 09:16

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fireminer

(Stolen from Kamen Rider Double)

"Makabe Hidari: private detective, cello player, bartender, information broker, author, artist, engineer and Powerdine user (A.K.A KMF). Ichika Orimura: field agent, salary hero, punching bag, harem master, guitar player and the only male IS pilot. Together, these two Joker and Ace are gonna change the world in the most unexpected way!"

- Both very half-boiled...

agetreme · 2013-09-24, 09:17

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

^ Actually, Fantasy/historical idea already there in the board

But we haven't been driven enough to write it, something along the lines of "Sengoku jidai" or otherwise ISO-standard Fantasyland

Pure romance: Eratas already took the cake and eat it

I did mentioned a few variation

Magical Girl (IS are magic armors)
Sengoku Era (IS are mystical Swords)

Quote:

What formula, if I may ask?

Boy can pilot IS > Boy go to ISA > Girls scream > boy get personal IS for no reason other than being a guy >Boy bitch-slap some misandric girl via IS battle (note: Cecilia always lose despite of being more experienced pilot)

Not all OC fic fit the formula just most of them.

wavehawk · 2013-09-24, 09:23

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Originally Posted by agetreme

Not all OC fic fit the formula just most of them.

- (looks at OC in my IS fic)

(Sarcastic cool possibly insane assassin-girl guarding Orimura from the shadows)

...yeah. Fits the formula.

Fireminer · 2013-09-24, 09:27

@Wave: Half+Half=FULLY HARD BOILED!!!

So, could I be proud to be the first non-IS and non-Harem writer? Or the second to give Ichika a Samurai attribute? The first is FangKing2.

Been reading Asmondeus's Infinite Triana and finally decided to make the three Orimura a triplet. Now I've got a full hand: Tsu-Dandere (Chifuyu), Tst-Kuudere (Houki) and Tsu-Yandere (Madoka).

Ichika gonna need a California King Bed this time! And make it Tungsen!

StratoSpear · 2013-09-24, 09:29

Quote:

Originally Posted by agetreme

Boy can pilot IS > Boy go to ISA > Girls scream > boy get personal IS for no reason other than being a guy >Boy bitch-slap some misandric girl via IS battle (note: Cecilia always lose despite of being more experienced pilot)

Not all OC fic fit the formula just most of them.

Guess we're waaaaay off tangent from that formula. Now I would write something like that if I had the guts to, thing is when I write, I need a storyline for the OC that goes beyond "Enter ISA and start bitch-slapping together a harem"

And yes, when it comes to those stories, I noticed a trend of either Cecilia or Lingyin at the receiving end without consequences.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-09-24, 09:34

Poor Cecilia and Lingyin for being fandom jobbers.

My OCs? Two adults, msotly supporting characters who is important only during backstories.

And the first time they appear in the draft, both are mistaken for lolicon (or rather, epebophile). No harem, nothing, just two adults who act like they're half their age.

Fireminer · 2013-09-24, 09:35

Yuri, Yuri, Yuri, YURI! DEMINO?

Oh, and Wavehawk, my brother ask why you don't post a full chapter on FF, instead of making seperate snippets on Muv-Luv thread?

(And he is trying to make Beatrix as Makabe's mother...)

demino_hellsin · 2013-09-24, 09:35

It's Cecilia and Rin because they seem to have the most detached from Ichika, in a manner of speaking. They can be stupid about him but not utterly retarded as exhibited by Houki, Laura and Charlotte.

Yandere tendencies non-withstanding, the two are rather tame when it comes to their attraction to Ichika. It boarders more on lust and can therefore be swayed.

agetreme · 2013-09-24, 09:39

Quote:

Originally Posted by wavehawk

- (looks at OC in my IS fic)

(Sarcastic cool possibly insane assassin-girl guarding Orimura from the shadows)

...yeah. Fits the formula.

I didn't say that formula fit here... but it certainly fit most fanfic on fanfic.net

StratoSpear · 2013-09-24, 09:43

Thing is they're both Cadets for a reason. But when they get beaten around like ragdolls, it just doesn't show...

Like they're completely underrated in a sense. On the other hand, I would want to have my OC show some power too. In the initial projection of Inami's duel against Rin, he would actually manage to take out both the Shenlong's cannons before she eventually defeats him.

Fireminer · 2013-09-24, 09:43

Well, it's nice to have a night like this, but it's time for me to go to bed! Good night and sweet dream?

demino_hellsin · 2013-09-24, 09:52

I understand stratos but I don't think destroying the cannons is a good way to do what you want to show. I'm not sure why but I just vote against it. It feels like something anyone would think to do I guess. Though maybe how he does it would set him apart.

Those two may be cadets, but they are still young girls. they have the mentality of teenaged girls. Particularly a brat in Rin and an arrogant little girl in Cecilia. Taking advantage of those traits should be fairly simple.

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Hey, I believe the beautiful dawn after stormy night But the DRAMA, no one can miss that __________________

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	^ Actually, Fantasy/historical idea already there in the board But we haven't been driven enough to write it, something along the lines of "Sengoku jidai" or otherwise ISO-standard Fantasyland Pure romance: Eratas already took the cake and eat it __________________

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Poor Cecilia and Lingyin for being fandom jobbers. My OCs? Two adults, msotly supporting characters who is important only during backstories. And the first time they appear in the draft, both are mistaken for lolicon (or rather, epebophile). No harem, nothing, just two adults who act like they're half their age. __________________

2013-09-24, 09:43	Link #46198
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	Thing is they're both Cadets for a reason. But when they get beaten around like ragdolls, it just doesn't show... Like they're completely underrated in a sense. On the other hand, I would want to have my OC show some power too. In the initial projection of Inami's duel against Rin, he would actually manage to take out both the Shenlong's cannons before she eventually defeats him. __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2013-09-24, 08:46	Link #46181
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Wonderful! Expect the next chapter to be out by the end of next week! Oh, and another idea: "(Sob) No more...Please, nee-sama...(Sob) "Silence!" And once again, Ichika was pushed into the land of numbness, with only his cries of pain and Chifuyu's growl of pleasure surround him..." Basically, abbusive sister and her little "toy".

2013-09-24, 08:59	Link #46185
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Yeah, and look at what Butcher are doing with Kamen Rider: Fusing Samurai with FRUITS! At least make it NINJA! But now remember it, we've been cofined with our ideas. Why haven't anyone try a Mystical Fantasy, or Real-life History, Pure Romance AU, Gangs Life,...?

2013-09-24, 09:13	Link #46188
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	(Stolen from Kamen Rider Double) "Makabe Hidari: private detective, cello player, bartender, information broker, author, artist, engineer and Powerdine user (A.K.A KMF). Ichika Orimura: field agent, salary hero, punching bag, harem master, guitar player and the only male IS pilot. Together, these two Joker and Ace are gonna change the world in the most unexpected way!" And the fomular: BADASS+BROKEN PAST+NEGLECTED GIRL!

2013-09-24, 09:27	Link #46192
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	@Wave: Half+Half=FULLY HARD BOILED!!! So, could I be proud to be the first non-IS and non-Harem writer? Or the second to give Ichika a Samurai attribute? The first is FangKing2. Been reading Asmondeus's Infinite Triana and finally decided to make the three Orimura a triplet. Now I've got a full hand: Tsu-Dandere (Chifuyu), Tst-Kuudere (Houki) and Tsu-Yandere (Madoka). Ichika gonna need a California King Bed this time! And make it Tungsen!

2013-09-24, 09:35	Link #46195
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Yuri, Yuri, Yuri, YURI! DEMINO? Oh, and Wavehawk, my brother ask why you don't post a full chapter on FF, instead of making seperate snippets on Muv-Luv thread? (And he is trying to make Beatrix as Makabe's mother...)

2013-09-24, 09:35	Link #46196
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	It's Cecilia and Rin because they seem to have the most detached from Ichika, in a manner of speaking. They can be stupid about him but not utterly retarded as exhibited by Houki, Laura and Charlotte. Yandere tendencies non-withstanding, the two are rather tame when it comes to their attraction to Ichika. It boarders more on lust and can therefore be swayed.

2013-09-24, 09:43	Link #46199
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Well, it's nice to have a night like this, but it's time for me to go to bed! Good night and sweet dream?

2013-09-24, 09:52	Link #46200
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	I understand stratos but I don't think destroying the cannons is a good way to do what you want to show. I'm not sure why but I just vote against it. It feels like something anyone would think to do I guess. Though maybe how he does it would set him apart. Those two may be cadets, but they are still young girls. they have the mentality of teenaged girls. Particularly a brat in Rin and an arrogant little girl in Cecilia. Taking advantage of those traits should be fairly simple.