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Tenshi's Defense Squadron
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2011-10-02, 10:30 | Link #2082 |
I am no one
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I'll cut it to 20s
Well, actually it's composed of 1 strongest guy (the one challenged Ichika), 5 strong guys, and the rest is...well, cannon fodder. As soon as The trio finished the six, the rest of 14 is distracted and unable to do jack besides boasting their superior numbers. (bear in mind, those are not professional killer/ robber/ Yakuza like who Charles & Laura defeated in canon, they're just High School delinquent, not even properly armed). EDIT: I'M OUT FOR SLEEP!!
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2011-10-02, 10:42 | Link #2083 | |
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2011-10-02, 11:17 | Link #2084 |
Titans Test Team Pilot
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While progressing on Chapter 3, I suddenly had tears in my eyes writing about Inami reuniting with his female childhood friend, Tsurugi Katami in the fictional Kitasaki Prefecture.
Didn't help that I have this playing in the media player as I'm typing the chapter. :'( Spoiler:
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2011-10-02, 13:45 | Link #2087 |
VxR Productions
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Dr. P'jilner: I can give you some excellent psy-blocker technology for a low price, so are you interested in them? Take note that not even a single one of the corps you have or even on this planet have the full capability- you will earn billions if you choose to accept my deal... so you game?
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2011-10-02, 15:29 | Link #2089 |
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Hey guys, how are my OCs in Project Silverback? I mean are they suppose to be what I originally planned? Here's how I had it broke down for them.
Eric "Hot Shot" Anderson: Has a cold personality, rarely showing any emotion other than anger and somewhat of a badass tank. But caring to those who are very close to him. Eddie "Sideswipe" Garcia: He's kinda like Eric in terms of being a badass tank, but he can loosen up the tension when things get a little hairy, with Clay's help sometimes. Brian "Ratchet" Mclurg: Negative and sarcastic type. Can be a little arrogant sometimes, but he has a caring side to those who are close to him. Clayton/Clay "Scourge" Maddox: Somewhat aggressive, can be a badass sometimes, and he's really energetic/enthusiastic. I have a feeling that they're not what they're suppose to be. What do you guys think? Last edited by DarkJak2050; 2011-10-02 at 15:47. |
2011-10-02, 16:55 | Link #2090 | |
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2011-10-02, 17:54 | Link #2091 | |
I am no one
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Anyway, to make it less taboo age-wise, make Yamada 19! Blitz: "What are you blabbering about He-he-he-he...." *Crazy grin* Zero: *GASP* "OH SHI-"
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2011-10-02, 18:20 | Link #2094 | |
I am no one
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Spoiler for Sacred Twins:
This is called "Characterization Marches On" by me and Eratas, where the characters' personality undergo a changes during the plot development and run.
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2011-10-02, 18:23 | Link #2095 | |
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Side note- Figured out a name for Irish I'll still probably refer to him as Irish though, his real names embarassing. |
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2011-10-02, 18:39 | Link #2097 | |
~ Your Smile ~
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And not like Karon goes around advertising she's special when she wants to make friends does she?
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2011-10-02, 18:39 | Link #2098 | |
I am no one
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Spoiler for Characterization Marches On:
Spoiler for Character Development:
While Jak's story still just reach Chapter 2, the development of the story already started MONTHS ago, therefore, from our POV it's not really Character Development, it definitely CMO. But seriously, Yuriko?! Even Rule of Funny cannot justify it! Unless Irish' parents is drunk or smoking something MeisterBabylon's cigar. Yurio or Yurino I can accept, but the ko in the end.... unless.... writing in TIGER kanji (虎= tora, but can be read as Ko), YuriKo = Lilac Tiger, now that's badass! Doesn't stop other character from making fun of it though (Like Ichigo's names, which written in Kanji "The one that protects" instead of "Strawberry")
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