2018-05-04, 22:31 | Link #61 |
駄目人間
Join Date: Jul 2016
Location: France
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^The author doesn't want to make a harem, but the main heroine has really poor and slow development, while a side one has really good progress and good chemistry with MC. So yeah, kinda poor on the romance side, which is sad. (the author did say that having Nemesis as the main heroine is really important to the plot though. So the true development might come later, even though I'll still prefer another girl)
But the world building is really good, and more importantly, lots of 変人. Even if objectively this MC is better than Velt, subjectively it's impossible as long as it's not first POV. Velt thought pattern is just that much fun to read. (same for Sou, I have a blast reading his thoughts) But if you like him that much that gives me even more reasons to read this novel. (though I'm not too much in naisei) |
2018-05-04, 22:45 | Link #62 |
Confused Shark
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Atlantis
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^Yeap, 1st person POV is good especially if the MC likes to do mental Tsukkomi.
But this is even better. This is 4th person POV! I think as early as 5th chapter "Forest Preservation and History" you will get to like this. I knew it, Dendogram lacks development...
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2018-05-05, 04:25 | Link #63 | |
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2018-05-05, 08:09 | Link #65 | |
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Spain
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I found this novel some time ago, I really like this building kingdom type stories. I made a translation of the novel's description for those interested:
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2018-05-05, 08:35 | Link #66 |
Confused Shark
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Atlantis
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^Lemme quote it to the front
But ain't nobody gonna be surprised that Elves are the royalties of most countries in this world? Wasn't there a discussion before about why usually Elves being inferior than human despite their longevity and other advantages?
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2018-05-06, 02:22 | Link #70 |
ミラベル
Join Date: Apr 2014
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As expect i can't force myself to like MC's personality.
Judging from characters Introduction from latest release, I guess the relationship between MC and Lunaria won't improve in future. They won't love each other no matter what, they are not enemies and not friends. (It kinda suck for me who like Lunaria, i like her resolve and want her to get some love.) |
2018-05-06, 03:56 | Link #72 |
ミラベル
Join Date: Apr 2014
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^Already catch up with latest raw, that's why i said i like Lunaria's resolve (she sold her body to tyrant for her country)
Author said himself that he want their relationships to be that way and honestly i can't see their relationship improve anytime soon after their play "Master & sex slave" in latest chapter. |
2018-05-06, 04:03 | Link #73 |
Confused Shark
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Atlantis
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^Nnn?
It's only Lunally who doesn't love MC yet MC the sadist already "love" her But as said in Carolina's Diary, MC's real feelings are unknown to everyone Probably that's where the Japanese Soul comes to play
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2018-05-06, 04:28 | Link #74 |
ミラベル
Join Date: Apr 2014
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^I think Mc probably lose interest in her if she start to love him, the reason why MC "love" her because of she isn't yield on him and her will is strong to endure the humiliate he gave her.
MC came from a broken home, his father and mother failed as a parent, maybe his definition of love probably different from normal people. TBH sometime i thought MC treated his fiancee more like a cute pet than lover. |
2018-05-06, 05:18 | Link #75 |
Confused Shark
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Atlantis
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^That's what Lunnaly said
"You'll lose interest of me when I become obidient to you" So we will see whether MC can change as a person Or they reach a balance between love and hate This is one of great points of this novel imho In other novels, heroines fall for MC and they never doubt that feeling There's also Hachinan, where they married for political reason and just never touched the subject of feelings They didn't even confess, did they?
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2018-05-06, 05:19 | Link #76 |
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^^ I also wish for gradual improvement of the relationship. But it's not like there is no room for it. MC certainly likes rebellious girls, but it doesen't mean they have to hate him. As long as they have their own will and are willing to moderately disobey him it's OK (also better to read than cheering party).
Then again I also felt like this was a bit overdone, especially this was a bit of fast change after the prebattle scene, where MC seemed to be fairly sour about the whole thing, but still liking Lunaria and treating her increasingly better. |
2018-05-06, 09:41 | Link #78 |
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Join Date: Nov 2015
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^ One of famous middleage rulers of my country is known to be a womanizer (besides great ruler etc.), but never used his power to get a lover, always only seducing them. Why? Because where is the fun without any fight? In other words, just using authority to get lots of obedient girls is boring and you won't enjoy it long anyway.
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2018-05-06, 10:21 | Link #79 |
Confused Shark
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Atlantis
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Neither. She's a Kukkoro
Btw, in the chara intro chapter, there are 6 heroines listed Aside from the obvious 4 One is Hyupitia The scholar from Alectia Great Library and the other is Tiffany The forementioned maid So she's not a mob afterall
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choroi mc, elven clans, emperor mc, ikemen mc, romance |
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