This is probably the first time ever in my life that I actually writing something seriously,even more serious when finishing my homework.If you can suggest me a good site to upload my fiction then please tell me about it.Since I still don't have account on one of those website that I just mention,I will post my first story in here in the spoiler of course...
Spoiler for Prologue-Queen-Reborn:
She, who has short red hair, finds herself blind-folded upon waking up. She tries to move, but couldn’t, as her arms and legs got tied together by rope. She tries to say, but there is a piece of cloth wrapped around her mouth. Then, she hears muttered voices, indicating that she is not alone here…Not only that, she hears rampage of sea waves when placing her head on the metal wall. (I’m on a boat?), she thought. She tried to touch the floor to find anything used, and she hit a jackpot. Sharp edges, prefect for cutting anything from hand to rope. While her hand still bleeds, she immediately goes to work, cutting the rope bit-by-bit, strand-by-strand. After hours of exhausting cutting, the rope snaps.
Suddenly, she hears voice outside of the metal wall.
“So, as long as I don’t break the virgin barrier, it’s alright?”
“Yaw, enjoy yourself before we sold em, virgin is more precious”
She crawls backward quickly and hides her hand behind her back that is pushing the wall, and hope for the best that the dick doesn’t choose her. Sound of twisting doorknob can be heard, as well as footsteps. Slowly, the footsteps get louder and louder as the man walk closer and closer. She can feel a hand is touching her breast.” Too small”. In a normal circumstance, she would starts beating the crap out of that person, and with her kendo swordsmanship, bone cracking is probably unavoidable, even in unarmed combat. But she let it go, (One day, ONE DAY, I will beat you until you beg for mercy!!!), she thought…Then, she hears sound of stripping clothes, she tries not to thing about it at all as the girl keep asking for help.
Unknown time later, the man finally finished…and his footsteps stopped on the doorway, “What the fuck, girl, you tried to escaped?” At first, she thought it is her that he is talking about, but it is another girl, who does the same thing as her except she didn’t hide it well enough. ”YOUJI, get a new rope, someone tried to escape!!” The man wanted to beat her, but they are planning to sell the girls as sex slaves, and who want an ugly sex slave? So, he decided to fire a shot of 45 ACP round at the wall behind the girl, scaring both her and other girls in the slave chamber. She feels some wet feeling from her butt, not because of leaking seawater, but because she just pissed herself. “Oh you peed? Girl need a new diaper, AHHAHAHAHAHAHA,” The man laughs maniacally as he walks out of the room, leaving a room full of terrified girls.
After that another guy (probably the one named Youji) get into the room to tie up the another girl, she take off the rope, the pieces of clothes that wrap around her eye and mouth, and finally, HER clothes, as she just planned the most brilliant and worst plan ever existed in human history. Since trying to escape here without some weapon would be extremely difficult, she decided to steal one instead. She waits beside the door for hours, hoping for an idiot to get in here and split his head and walnuts apart, and the patience paid off. Apparently, the Yakuza had a party of some sort, if that’s not the reason, then one could wonder why there’s a drunken man walking in the hallway. While such an easy target, she opens the door slightly, pops out her head and puts out the most innocent looking face as possible. The man walks straight in the trap and BANG, slamming metal door at a poor fellow head can cause splitting headache, literally. She then pulls the body into the chamber and took the gun, a Glock pistol. She then looks back to all the poor girls…”I will be back”, she said, in a sad tone, as she definitely can’t help them at all.
After escaping out of the chamber, she completely lost in the huge ship, and the fact that she is naked doesn’t help at all. She just run around and tries to find stairs. The random searching of exit resulted in random encounter with one of the yakuza. The yakuza however dumbfounded upon the sight of seeing a girl in nude firing bullet at him. Two bullets miss, hit the wall behind him, one bullet however, hit him between the eyes, ending his life instantly. The gunshots however alerted the entire ship. The armed yakuza are now searching for her all around the ship, while she is still trying to find the exit to get out of here. Finally, she managed to get out of the hull of the ship, but…where does she go now?
What surrounds the ship is a sea of darkness, as it’s a moonless night. She started to hear footsteps behind her, louder and louder, and the voice in her head tell her to jump off the ship, that’s the best survival chances. She then runs to the side of the ship and jump.
BANG!!!
She feels a hit from behind, then, she fells into the cold darkness. The lead bullet, punches a hole on her heart, a hole that bleeds faster and faster. She started to feel weak, cold, and begin to faint. Then…she sees a pair of eyes, glowing eyes, which she thought it was the eyes of Death himself. The Death then says…
“Queen, you alright?”
She then felt a pair of huge arms, holding her weak body, and she fell asleep…
Spoiler for Author lol comment:
So...ya...that's either the best or worst or the weirdest opening to a story about a girl met Chulthu army.
Problem?
Since English is not my mother language,tell me something if there's an error(or a lot) in the writing
2011-08-16, 06:33
