2013-03-01, 09:47 | Link #40624 |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
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No clue.
In the golem, lower torso, and the core is encased in hard case to boot. The rest probably in the front-side belt or in the back plating, due to open crotch and bare chest, there's nowhere else to go.
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2013-03-01, 09:58 | Link #40625 |
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I'm thinking that the liquid computer reservoir should be with the IS core.
The large frames have 2 modes. Siege and mobility modes. Mobility will have the liquid computer fill the suit and submerge the pilot for more responsive and agile movement. Siege mode drains the liquid into the weapons packs. The suit the pilot is in compresses instead to contact the skin and the nerve receivers on the suit, it results in a half second lag, but yeah. The computer draining into the weapons is more for rule of cool so I haven't smoothed out the uses yet, but mostly it's for remote weapons. The liquid CPUs run their own electrolytes so they act as a sort of battery fluid as well. This extends to the remote weapons and actual weapons better firepower, control and on the fly fine tuning. EDIT: What's worse is that this Liquid Computer would be developed by Dunois. It just didn't sell well cuz no pilot wanted to be naked in an IS. Even if the IS suit covered them completely. Which leads to them being in a very very bad financial position. Last edited by demino_hellsin; 2013-03-01 at 11:06. |
2013-03-02, 05:50 | Link #40628 |
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If Clarissa is a super soldier/modified soldier would there be contension over who she wants to work for? especially since she's a commanding officer in one of the most highly trained partially confidential unit of Germany?
If she wanted to quit, would they let her? O.o |
2013-03-02, 08:49 | Link #40629 |
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I'm sure she's not a super soldier, modified/enhanced human perhaps, but most likely not supersoldier. Mind you, Laura is implied to be a prototype, and phased out in favor of I.S., Super Soldier is deemed a failure as I.S. pilot initially (maybe due to odd physiology) and it require training from hell for Laura to attain her current skill.
And if it's an AU, chalk it to a military lease, reassignment or something, something like "Too dangerous for her to pry" thus kicked out before she can get a big influence on the SH.
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2013-03-02, 15:38 | Link #40631 |
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Answer reserved for anyone who know the depth of military work, I'm sorry
And I realize something when evacuating from Spacebattles.com (read that right): many stories there, especially crossover, had beaten and raped to death when the readers want more techwank than it should be, halting plot progression and break the dynamic to tasteless mathammer. When I read this forum, the character Creation is the only place where techwank is done, and the rest.... not much, everything takes backseat to author appeal and choice of plot, probably explained why fic-killing (NOT an understatement) heated debate is much less often (admittedly, the horror of first 60 pages done that much damage to begin with)
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2013-03-02, 20:56 | Link #40633 |
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^ Pretty much. I've also abandoned that place because those people were too demanding. Still I don't want to remember my time there... it's just something i'll never recover from (like the first time I heard of 4chan).
And in another news, I couldn't upload the prologue last night because my notebook's battery charger died and the battery is depleted to an absolute 0%. Until i get a new one (which it'll be in a week at least), is not possible for me to start. |
2013-03-02, 21:24 | Link #40634 |
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At least they talk. The other forum I visit doesn't talk at all .
Speaking of getting things done. I still need to finish the plot bunny drop of a fate stay night fic in my head as well as a familiar of zero plot bunny. Arrrrgh. And this is assuming I've lost all motivation for a to aru plot bunny. |
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2013-03-02, 23:07 | Link #40636 | |
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Last time i counted mine, i had at least 350 .doc with a lot of weird ideas for a fanfiction (not only IS) |
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2013-03-02, 23:11 | Link #40637 |
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Recoverable archive is slightly close to 100, but most of them are densely packed anyway
Usually the likes of 1. Backstory 2. Plot summary (for the fic) 3. "Spares" (Random draft I might use later) 4. Technology base, unit description etc. 5. Pairing schemes and progression (no kidding)
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2013-03-03, 00:09 | Link #40638 |
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Well that seems pretty organized i must say. On my defense I don't have a sheet with the backstory, because the idea is solid enough on my head without change a thing. Plot summary have been always my weakness, because i don't know what to put in it. I have a special folder filled with nothing more than random drafts (about 20 .doc of 15+ pages each). Technoblabla and all those things are always a hard part, I'm not assiduous to explain why some tech work. And about pairing... oh boy, you should NEVER try to ask me... but try to imagine what i have for TxD |
2013-03-03, 00:25 | Link #40639 |
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Well, between my penchant for AU and canon defilement, there had to be a good reason why stuff happens.
The backstory sheet will be transplanted to a flashback scene, usually. For example, in Sacred Twins Tabane wasn't exactly alone in creating I.S., there's Chifuyu and two OC. To insert the OC, I can't just make it so they appear and have the readers go with it. I need to tell what happened 10 years prior and how they met. Roughly like that.
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