Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[StratoSpear]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Watch episode 7, your faith will be restored

If episode 8 screw it up thought I'll drop it indefinitely

I'd reply in the same thread but my rant is diving into fanfic zone.

But yeah, thing is I'm growing tired of how poor Ichika constantly gets thrown under the blade. This gets the spotlight during Athena's final arc where the White Elf comes in.

Supposedly the projection is for White Elf go Celestial Being's route, intervening in every IS-vs-IS battles by attacking both parties. At one point the White Elf would also invade ISA airspace to diffuse the Class League, during which Elf comes to realise how the CCs have the tendency to attack Ichika with IS weapons/partial deployment. Something the Elf is greatly displeased with.

[Fireminer]

Well, like Laura would say this: "My Wife has to train himself into a better pilot (spouse), and so as his Husban, I was granted with the duty of asisst him. IN EVERY POSSIBLE WAY!"

Noticing the different between her and Houki? They both have standard of what Ichika should be, but while Laura's was born from the half-assed knowledge of Clarissa, Houki's terms is creating from a long string of dream, memories, tradition,...

[ZeroXSEED]

@ Stratos
Lolz

Sounds fun, but careful with the execution

@ Miner
Teenagers

When you're at tat age you will understand, though CC are way too much exaggerated for most people's taste.

[Fireminer]

A little fun:

"Umm... Ichika-kun..."

"Yes?"

"Could you... Please go out with me this Sunday?"

"Hmm... Sure! When could I pick you up?"

"Is 9'o clock okay?..."

"Done! Oh, I've some errand to do. Bye!"

(Finally, my dream has become reality!... But why am I feeling chill?)

"Fufufu... Well done, little sister! However, I won't let Ichika-kun slip into your hands!" Said an evil-smiling Tatenashi while slipping a glass of Absinthe. She must admit it, it's good. Wonder what would happen if Kanzashi get a taste of this...

Really, the idea of a drunken Kanzashi piloting Uchigane Nishiki scares me.

[StratoSpear]

Originally Posted by Fireminer

Well, like Laura would say this: "My Wife has to train himself into a better pilot (spouse), and so as his Husban, I was granted with the duty of asisst him. IN EVERY POSSIBLE WAY!"

Noticing the different between her and Houki? They both have standard of what Ichika should be, but while Laura's was born from the half-assed knowledge of Clarissa, Houki's terms is creating from a long string of dream, memories, tradition,...

The "violence against Ichika" thing adds fuel, giving Elf another reason to suppress IS confrontations. Elf even attacks Ichika during Class League (and whoever his opponent is at that time)

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

@ Stratos
Lolz

Sounds fun, but careful with the execution

What do I look out for?

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by StratoSpear

What do I look out for?

God mode sue

Villains would be less risky though

[StratoSpear]

Elf is a villian, in a sense. Even Athena's cast, especially the ISA student OCs go up against Elf at some point.

[ZeroXSEED]

Good good

Strong villain gave better challenge after all

[Tempest35]

Spoiler for [New Fic] Energy Transfer - Pt III:

"Still tense as ever, Chifuyu-nee," his voice teased her ears, causing her to tilt her head away from him.

"I wonder who I have to thank for that," she murmured, her head resting on her arms as she lay on her stomach. Ichika had already begun, thumping his hands up and down her back, creating a dull yet pleasant sensation in her body.
"You kids don't know the pain of being adults yet - be grateful."

"I am," he chuckled, moving his hands over across her shoulders, driving his knuckles into the taunt muscles of her back. "I know this is only a small way to repay you for it."

"Hmmm," she all but purred as he finished drumming her back and began to slowly work on her shoulders. The feel of his fingers expertly digging into her unresistant flesh was an experience quite unlike any other. And the best part about it - there was no chance of this massage being interrupted by brats with overactive imaginations.

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~*~ Will add more to the 2nd draft ~*~
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Feeling both invigorated by his massage and alcohol, the elder Orimura joined her brother in front of the TV with several cans of her beer. As it was, even she was feeling a bit flushed as she had her head resting against Ichika's shoulder, his arm around her waist. It was a very comfortable feeling, she decided, taking a long drink before passing it to her brother, who had already gotten over the fact that they had shared several 'indirect kisses' between them.

For Ichika, the scent and sensation of Chifuyu's body pressed firmly against his was causing all sorts of chaos inside his young teenage mind. While there was a camp that declared that the incredibly hot woman pressed against him was his one and only big sister, the opposition declared that despite being his big sister, Chifuyu was one incredibly hot woman. He had found that these two warring opinions had only grown in intensity in recent months. With her being gone so often, he didn't have to deal with this sort of thing at all. Such was the fortune of the only man 'blessed' to pilot an IS.

"Hnn, what's wrong Ichika? Is the show boring?" Chifuyu tilted her head in a uncharacteristically cute manner, her wild unbound hair still damp from her shower.

"N-no, it's fine. I was just thinking about stuff," he partially confessed.

"Oh? Mind sharing with Oneechan," she drew her knees closer to her chest. "Although I can probably guess what you were thinking about." Her cat-like smirk set the warning bells off in his head in earnest, primed and honed to perfection by a certain Student Council president. While Chifuyu didn't tease nearly as much as Tatenashi-sempai, the strongest reigning IS pilot was different in that she didn't have to tease. Such was the power of an adult oneesan.

"...a-and just wh-what would I be thinking about, Chifuyu-nee?" He mentally winced, even as he recognized the light playing in his big sister's eyes. He had screwed himself with his stuttering and she was not one to let opportunities slip away.

"I bet you were thinking of how nice it is to be pressed up against your dear big sister like this, weren't you," she whispered in a husky voice, her warm breath falling on his neck. Barely suppressing a shudder, he struggled to swallow enough saliva to dampen his dry throat. But she was unrelenting. Pressing her finger against his cheek, she poked it a few times to amuse herself. "Then again, who wouldn't be?" She leaned against against him even more. "Right Ichika?"

"Wh-what? I-I wouldn't know," he tried to turn away but she seized his head in her hand, forcing him to look at her.

"You do look at me, right Ichika?" It sounded more like a statement rather than a question - one that spoke of a trap of epic proportions. No one would in the neighborhood would think twice if he was to scream...
"I know how you were looking at me when we played volleyball at the beach... You were eating me up with your eyes. Your big sister, who's erotic swimsuit you got to pick out yourself." Her lips thinned into a slight smirk.

"I told you to get the white one," he tried to resist, his answer came in a gasp as he felt her knee bump against his thigh. "I...told you that the guys would stare..."

"And yet, you were the only one," she pressed her attack. Her expression changed as soon as he turned his face away from her guiltily. You do have good fashion sense though, and... maybe...


She swooped down upon him with all the grace and strength of one toted as being the 'World's Strongest. She, called 'Brunhilde', unveiled her trump card in her battle of wills against her own sibling, one that she just happened to overhear from a certain French girl. She skillfully manuvered herself so that she was facing Ichika on her knees, arms draped over his neck in a loose, familiar manner. Her lips came agonizingly close to his ear, and his breath hitched as he felt her exhale slowly. "Ichika no ecchi~"

Ichika crumpled as if struck by Yukihira, all defenses negated by those three words. "Tha-that's unfair, Chifuyu-nee!"

Chifuyu fell back laughing in what Ichika thought was a thoroughly evil manner, the sudden movement spilled a few drops of beer onto the floor. "Oh my god, your face...! I can't believe that worked! You're such a virgin." With that, she finished up the last of the beer, still chuckling at him.

~*~ End of Part III (For Now) ~*~

Ugh, this turned out FAR longer than I had originally planned. I wanted to write out the scene of both of them with their heads pressed together and feeling all the warm fuzzies that one feels when embraced by family.

"Now releasing 'Otouto' Core Bypass. Core Energy Transfer Protocol - Engaged."

"B-baka...!"

I might have to do a separate fic just for that! Or I'll input it into Mirrorverse...

Real reason: My brain broke in contemplating Chifuyu saying 'Ichika no Ecchi' and I couldn't progress any further in the story...

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by Tempest35

Spoiler for [New Fic] Energy Transfer - Pt III:

"Still tense as ever, Chifuyu-nee," his voice teased her ears, causing her to tilt her head away from him.

"I wonder who I have to thank for that," she murmured, her head resting on her arms as she lay on her stomach. Ichika had already begun, thumping his hands up and down her back, creating a dull yet pleasant sensation in her body.
"You kids don't know the pain of being adults yet - be grateful."

"I am," he chuckled, moving his hands over across her shoulders, driving his knuckles into the taunt muscles of her back. "I know this is only a small way to repay you for it."

"Hmmm," she all but purred as he finished drumming her back and began to slowly work on her shoulders. The feel of his fingers expertly digging into her unresistant flesh was an experience quite unlike any other. And the best part about it - there was no chance of this massage being interrupted by brats with overactive imaginations.

//// \\\\\
~*~ Will add more to the 2nd draft ~*~
\\\\ /////

Feeling both invigorated by his massage and alcohol, the elder Orimura joined her brother in front of the TV with several cans of her beer. As it was, even she was feeling a bit flushed as she had her head resting against Ichika's shoulder, his arm around her waist. It was a very comfortable feeling, she decided, taking a long drink before passing it to her brother, who had already gotten over the fact that they had shared several 'indirect kisses' between them.

For Ichika, the scent and sensation of Chifuyu's body pressed firmly against his was causing all sorts of chaos inside his young teenage mind. While there was a camp that declared that the incredibly hot woman pressed against him was his one and only big sister, the opposition declared that despite being his big sister, Chifuyu was one incredibly hot woman. He had found that these two warring opinions had only grown in intensity in recent months. With her being gone so often, he didn't have to deal with this sort of thing at all. Such was the fortune of the only man 'blessed' to pilot an IS.

"Hnn, what's wrong Ichika? Is the show boring?" Chifuyu tilted her head in a uncharacteristically cute manner, her wild unbound hair still damp from her shower.

"N-no, it's fine. I was just thinking about stuff," he partially confessed.

"Oh? Mind sharing with Oneechan," she drew her knees closer to her chest. "Although I can probably guess what you were thinking about." Her cat-like smirk set the warning bells off in his head in earnest, primed and honed to perfection by a certain Student Council president. While Chifuyu didn't tease nearly as much as Tatenashi-sempai, the strongest reigning IS pilot was different in that she didn't have to tease. Such was the power of an adult oneesan.

"...a-and just wh-what would I be thinking about, Chifuyu-nee?" He mentally winced, even as he recognized the light playing in his big sister's eyes. He had screwed himself with his stuttering and she was not one to let opportunities slip away.

"I bet you were thinking of how nice it is to be pressed up against your dear big sister like this, weren't you," she whispered in a husky voice, her warm breath falling on his neck. Barely suppressing a shudder, he struggled to swallow enough saliva to dampen his dry throat. But she was unrelenting. Pressing her finger against his cheek, she poked it a few times to amuse herself. "Then again, who wouldn't be?" She leaned against against him even more. "Right Ichika?"

"Wh-what? I-I wouldn't know," he tried to turn away but she seized his head in her hand, forcing him to look at her.

"You do look at me, right Ichika?" It sounded more like a statement rather than a question - one that spoke of a trap of epic proportions. No one would in the neighborhood would think twice if he was to scream...
"I know how you were looking at me when we played volleyball at the beach... You were eating me up with your eyes. Your big sister, who's erotic swimsuit you got to pick out yourself." Her lips thinned into a slight smirk.

"I told you to get the white one," he tried to resist, his answer came in a gasp as he felt her knee bump against his thigh. "I...told you that the guys would stare..."

"And yet, you were the only one," she pressed her attack. Her expression changed as soon as he turned his face away from her guiltily. You do have good fashion sense though, and... maybe...


She swooped down upon him with all the grace and strength of one toted as being the 'World's Strongest. She, called 'Brunhilde', unveiled her trump card in her battle of wills against her own sibling, one that she just happened to overhear from a certain French girl. She skillfully manuvered herself so that she was facing Ichika on her knees, arms draped over his neck in a loose, familiar manner. Her lips came agonizingly close to his ear, and his breath hitched as he felt her exhale slowly. "Ichika no ecchi~"

Ichika crumpled as if struck by Yukihira, all defenses negated by those three words. "Tha-that's unfair, Chifuyu-nee!"

Chifuyu fell back laughing in what Ichika thought was a thoroughly evil manner, the sudden movement spilled a few drops of beer onto the floor. "Oh my god, your face...! I can't believe that worked! You're such a virgin." With that, she finished up the last of the beer, still chuckling at him.

~*~ End of Part III (For Now) ~*~

Ugh, this turned out FAR longer than I had originally planned. I wanted to write out the scene of both of them with their heads pressed together and feeling all the warm fuzzies that one feels when embraced by family.

"Now releasing 'Otouto' Core Bypass. Core Energy Transfer Protocol - Engaged."

"B-baka...!"

I might have to do a separate fic just for that! Or I'll input it into Mirrorverse...

Real reason: My brain broke in contemplating Chifuyu saying 'Ichika no Ecchi' and I couldn't progress any further in the story...

Ah, Tempest you never disappoint. As for Chifuyu saying, "Ichika no ecchi." i would find it a bit terrifying. xD.

[ZeroXSEED]

More Gunpla spur of the moment

"You're fighting again"

"...I'm sorry, there's no excuse"

"There's always excuses. What it is this time?"

"...they bullied Lingyin again"

"..."

"Like I said, no excuse. It's just the usual stuff"

"To be honest, I should train that girl instead"

"You gotta be joking!"

"Then what are you going to do? Do you want to let her hate her own self for always depending on you like that? Do you want to continue to fight for her sake?"

"That's... I"

"...ever since you're little, you care about people around you than your own good. What I ask is, for once, think what do you want to do, what you should do... for yourself"

"But that's selfish"

"Of course, it's not human not to be selfish. Humans are both individual and social creatures, idiot. You need to remember that"

"Gunpla battle again?"

"Yeah, that damn Imai challenged me again"

"Wha-you mean you'll go with a newly built model... just like that?"

"They got my Mobius, I can't let them have that"

"But... why go for such a length?"

"Values of a gunpla is decided by the effort, time and money spent on it, and I don't have much on the latter. So I can say it's value is close to immaterial"

[Fireminer]

Tempest, you did it again! And Zero, a bit off with that.

Hey, how about this for Ichika and Kanzashiki:

http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/in..._certain_pilot

[demino_hellsin]

An overdone idea but mixing it with metal gear and a bit of an odd take instead.

On the year of the Second Mondo Grosso, Orimura Ichika was kidnapped. He died in the incident when his sister, the reigning champion Orimura Chifuyu went to save him in her IS the Kurezakura. Unable to apprehend the perpetrators and exact her revenge, Chifuyu was forced to serve her favor to the german government and forfeit her rights as an IS pilot.

A year has passed. Orimura Chifuyu is still recovering from the loss of her only family. She is notified that someone is snooping around ISA. What she finds nearly breaks her down when she sees the scarred face of her little brother on the intruder. She calls out to him but his only reply is: "Orimura Ichika, is that my name?".

[Fireminer]

Didn't Zero has already did that with his "Clone Quest" on SpaceBattle?

Also, having another idea with Kamen Rider Black. Just make Ichika as Black Sun, while Madoka as Shadow Moon.

[demino_hellsin]

Only he isn't a clone He's Ichika with amnesia. Which may as well be not Ichika entirely.

[Fireminer]

Better idea: Combine it with my "Deception Madoka". Basically Madoka create a fault memory for him.

[ZeroXSEED]

CBG-001.5I 1.5 Gundam Kai
Builder: Ichika Orimura
Fighter: Ichika Orimura
Base Frame: CB-001.5 1.5 Gundam
Head Height: 23.3 meters

A hastily built and operated, modified 1.5 Gundam. While it's outer appearance remains almost unchanged, it's main modification stemming from the fact that it possess three GN Drives, using the provided slot in each arm.

However, during it's debut battle, it's high performance became detrimental due to the fact that it's frame and joints hasn't been reinforced properly. 1.5 Gundam Kai's parts are falling apart shortly after obliterating it's enemies.

CBG-001.5E1 Mugen 1.5 Gundam Type E
Builder: Dan Gotanda/Ichika Orimura
Fighter: Ichika Orimura
Base frame: CB-001.5 1.5 Gundam
Head Height: 23.3 meter

Shortly after rebuilt properly, 1.5 Gundam Kai receive slight alteration on it's frame. Both the joint and frame construction has been strengthened, the shoulder has been replaced with 00 Gundam's, adding two more drives for better power distribution and agility.

Mugen 1.5 use GN Drive tau instead of standard GN Drive, and is armed with a pair of Grandslam anti-ship sword at the cost of original wing binders.

[Fireminer]

And?

Less than impressive. My turn!

Name: GNB-001REIV Exia Gundam Repair 4

Builder: Ichika Orimura, Madoka Orimura

Base Model: GNY-001F2 Gundam Astrea, GN-001REIII

Height: Unknown

Weight: Unknown

Power Source: GN Drive, Large GN Condenser.

Populsion: GN Thruster Penta Points type.

Weapon: 2 GN Sword, mounted on the arms. 2 GN Carbine, stored in the hip. 4 GN Beam Saber, stored under the arm (similar to Nu Gundam). 2 GN Dagger, mounted in the foot. 2 GN Blaster (Optional), mounted on shoulder. CIWS.

System: Optical Camoflouge, GN Reflector (Generate from a cloak similar to Exia Repair 2), TRANS-AM system.

Description

"Madoka, don't you think that this is a bit overdone?"

"Nonsense, Onii-chan! Your style is dual-weilding like Houki, right?"

"But what about that cloak? Couldn't we use a normal GN Field?"

"Energy-saving, more durable,... And beside, it looks cool on you!"

"Tch... A bit off-balance with all these thing..."

"That is why we have Penta-points Propulision, Onii-chan. Normally, Astrea and Exia only have three, but we have 5 now!"

"... Finally, who made this, Madoka? You never have much interest in Gunpla."

"Well... I might peek in a bit into Tabane-nee's blueprint for Houki's machine..."

[Rokumonsen]

^don't you think it's a little bit overpowered? It's like you've almost combined all available weapons in CB's arsenal.

BTW, it's Trans-Am not Trans-Arm.

[ZeroXSEED]

....you know, what, I will overlook the fact that this is deliberately made as minmaxed design instead of super souped up wankfest. You want to one up? Go to gundam thread.

Whatever.

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The story began with Ichika watching Dan lost in the final of Regional championship by Houki. Being the brother of legendary Chifuyu Orimura, most gunpla otaku would expect him to be an awesome, diehard gunpla fan too.

The catch is not quite. Ichika is high level fighter, but that's because whenever Ichika got into trouble, Ichika is forced into a spartan session of gunpla fighting by Chifuyu. Ichika isn't even a die hard fan of Gundam, only casual viewer.

Apparently, Houki beat Dan with unknowingly hax custom unit, she threw a hissy fit after realizing that her unit has been 'rigged' and decide to quit. This of course caused a mayhem about who will represent kanto region for the international matches.

The story revert back to 1-2 month prior.

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I've made a barely readable draft and might post it tonight, but whether it's today or tomorrow, I can't guarantee