Foreigner no Ayamachi

[wuhugm]

Original Title : フォーリナーの過ち <The Wrongdoings of The Foreigner>
Author : Goinkyo-sama
Artist : Zucchini
Status : 152 WN chapters
Length : 1 Million Japanese Characters

Webnovel : Nocturne

Spoiler for Illustrations:

NSFW : tfDH9Hg

Spoiler for Synopsis:

On the christmas eve, Satoru and his 7 year old sister Arisu were celebrating it in a nice restaurant they normally never go to. After the death of their parents, Arisu was sent to an orphanage and Satoru dropped out of highschool to earn their living. That christmas was a rare time they could meet. But as they about to enjoy their orders, Satoru disappeared in a blink of an eye. Leaving behind a crying Arisu and her Teddy Bear christmas present.

In another world Satoru opened his eyes. Apparently he was being summoned by someone who's trying a summoning magic they just learned. That person was an Undead King Leia, who lived secludedly within the deepest Labyrinth in that world for more than 200 years. Satoru was angry because she summoned him for fun and can't return him to his world. On top of that, when he's trying to leave she tricked him to be enslaved by magic. Fortunately the magic backlashed against her and she became the slave instead. Being wronged twice making him so angry that he raped her right then and there.

Later they found out that the enslavement magic failed because the process of that magic is to bind 1/4 of the target's soul(mana capacity) to the caster's soul. In other words, the caster's soul must have the capacity to contain that portion. But in this case, Satoru's soul is so large and her soul got bound instead.

Together with his new "companion", Satoru departed to the outside world searching for Yaath, Leia's teacher who taught her the foundation of summoning magic, to figure out a way to reverse the process and return to his beloved sister.

Spoiler for FAQ:

1. Is the MC OP?
TUUUUEEEEEEEE

2. Is this a harem?
Yupi

3. Is there snusnu in this novel?
Nocturne it is

This has a high level of details for something in nocturne
Complicated units of currency and time
Also one of the rare novels using Imperial System rather than Metric System lol~

[nero12]

When I first read the title, I was 100% sure that this'll be a story about how a foreigner girl came to japan, did something stupid/wrong, and was tricked into becoming a sex slave.

Close enough. I got the rape part correct.



EDIT: Saw the poll. Fck da police!
I'm a patriot. Really? Big Boss will be coming for you!!

[cabman11]

Sttaaaaaaapp

[Yoburi]

WoW That was fuck up summon maybe the most fuck up ever that bich just did for the lols and the MC sister is alone in the real world! Not only that the bich even try to turn him into a slave sorry but rape won't cut she desarve death.

But still the tone of this novel makes no sense who cares about H-stuff when your little sister is crying on C-eve and there is also a sense of urgency.

I got the feeling in this novel we are supose to hate all harem members bet Yaath is also a horrible person.

[jmcu17]

Yeah, does he and his sister ever reunite?

[Rasty]

Poor undead king-chan (this sounds strange). Did he not get the idea yet to summon his sister to the another world instead? Has it interesting plot, or is it 98% just I went to place X and raped there a girl, then I fought Y and raped a girl, then did some cooking, and raped a girl...

[KuruluciaFalFairia]

yeah because of the sense of urgency i assuming that the plot is moving fast?
we know that his goal is to go back to his world asap so i'll probably slightly annoyed if he's sidetracked everywhere lol
it's bad to leave your little sister crying you know

[Kaito Yamakage]

MC goes around kicking everones ass with isekai cheets while looking for a way home, this series was pretty good until the last volume or so, then the author started stretching the events out.

The last 60 chapters or so have all taken place in the exact same location over 2-3 days with no developments at all.

[Yoburi]

Originally Posted by KuruluciaFalFairia

yeah because of the sense of urgency i assuming that the plot is moving fast?
we know that his goal is to go back to his world asap so i'll probably slightly annoyed if he's sidetracked everywhere lol
it's bad to leave your little sister crying you know

Thats what i thinking but this novel is huge with 7 volumes so i sure he must have many sidetracks just raping that girl is already a waste of time.

This kinda plot twist must be solve fast even if takes a year for him to return the autor can't write him fucking like a pig for no reason while his sister is alone... this novel just doen't work unless he adminstrade his time.

[Kaito Yamakage]

Spoiler for Series of Events Heavy Spoilers:

He enslaves the girl who summoned him, goes down the mountain and kicks the ass of the head Wyvern living there, then makes her into his steed to fly around.

They go to a city and gather info, he ends up getting pickpocketed, leading to a series of events where he kicks the ass of the thieves guild head, and unwillingly takes the girl who pickpocketed him as a slave (she literally suicided trying to follow him and was half dead)

They then go to one of the bigger capitals where the mage school exists (on the way his Wyvern learns to turn into a big breasted hot chick BTW), and the mage school picks up on his overwhelming power and starts gathering info on him.

The MC gets tired of dealing with the mage school so goes to the first labrinyth where his clue to get home might be and starts punching holes through the ground to clear 100 floors in like 3 days.

The head mage of the mage school is a total douchebag who is jealous of MCs power and starts saying he is the demon king, gathering up assassins and shit.

After MC clears first labrinyth he immediately goes to world tree/elf village the second one where he might find a hint.

He kills off a demon race who had been occupying that labrinyth for 300 years and demanding elf sacrifices helping the elves out. (Not to save them but primarily for his own goal of looking for a way home, he doesn't a give a shit about the elves)

During that period he got to know a half-elf girl who is ostrasized by the village and looks exactly like his little sister(a bit older), and her mother looks like his dead mother.

The events from the mage school dudes end up raping/killing off the mother and the MC goes berserk and nukes everything in like 20km, then the author spends like 60 chapters writing every little detail for while they're still sitting in the middle of ground zero there building up to MC vs the mage school/holy sword clan he's enlisted.

MC is still going solid with trying to get back and his sister was in an orphanage like place prior to him going to isekai, he just picked her up and paid money for it. So she isn't suddenly wandering the streets at least, he still is in a rush to get back.

[praxis]

^
question

Spoiler for question:

damn the mother is dead. no oyakodon.
what about the half elf girl? the one who looks like MC sister.

[Kaito Yamakage]

Spoiler for :

When he goes berserk he literally blows up everything, including all his slaves. It immediately kills off the enemy, though he hurts his harem and the half-elf is near dead. Her soul is badly damaged, beyond just healing her body, so he has to have sex with her to heal her soul.

He basically closes his eyes and lets the first girl lead him as he takes the half-elf girls virginity while she's dead/unconcious and her body is cold. This barely saves her.

Though after that seeing what he did to a girl who looks like his little sister he basically goes into panic again and loses conciousness for several days. The half-elf girl ends up forcing the MC to have sex with her again/her becoming his slave, though he feels really guilty about it and can barely keep it hard.

In the end the MC at least bargains that she change her appearance a bit soon.

Edit:

Spoiler for :

Also, the mother was faithful to her dead husband and commited suicide before she was raped (they raped her souless body and used it as hostage when the MC went berserk) So unlikely he would have had sex with her either way.

[El Rue]

Another one? Starting to wonder if you pick this things up simply on a whim, via wheel of fortune, several lists in a hat or something.

Originally Posted by Yoburi

WoW That was fuck up summon maybe the most fuck up ever

That's cute. I guess you've never read 二度目の勇者は復讐の道を嗤い歩む.

[Rasty]

Originally Posted by El Rue

Another one? Starting to wonder if you pick this things up simply on a whim, via wheel of fortune, several lists in a hat or something.

That's cute. I guess you've never read 二度目の勇者は復讐の道を嗤い歩む.

Well if he meant it as a greatly flawed summoning than he was so-so right. Not only the summoner was inexperienced and all, but she even got her enslaving spell rebounced and she got raped... But yeah, even for this meaning Nidome no Yuusha is worse, she still ended up quite good.

Btw. in what sense another one?

[jaydreadzz]

for those who read till latest chapters

how many Harem does he have? give some summary and details about them

[cabman11]

Originally Posted by Rasty

Well if he meant it as a greatly flawed summoning than he was so-so right. Not only the summoner was inexperienced and all, but she even got her enslaving spell rebounced and she got raped... But yeah, even for this meaning Nidome no Yuusha is worse, she still ended up quite good.

Btw. in what sense another one?

Kuro no maou.
That one was straight up summoned. Into torture and human experimentation

[Rasty]

Originally Posted by cabman11

Kuro no maou.
That one was straight up summoned. Into torture and human experimentation

Ah this sense.
But you know, lately this kind of start is kind of frequent. More than half of the recent summoning novels start with "bad" summoning (attempted brainwashing, enslaving, blackmail or even as bad as Nidome no Yuusha is). Or rather, if you are summoning some strong, but otherwise completely unknown person from another world and there is available enslaving magic it is just common sense to use it (if there is not a reason for it to be impossible, like it would get reissted because of his power or such). I would deffinitely use it too.

[wuhugm]

@Kaito

It seems you've read what I've read in nocturne... always

Omee, ore no stalker ka?

[Kaito Yamakage]

Originally Posted by wuhugm

@Kaito

It seems you've read what I've read in nocturne... always

Omee, ore no stalker ka?

I've read all of syosetu. Including things being written and posted right now.


@Jay he has five members, the undead who summons him, the brown beauty thief who stalks him, the big breasted Wyvern who they fly around on, a 1000 year old android sex doll, and then the half-elf girl who looks like his younger sister.

[praxis]

^
all the harem is his rape victim?