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Chaos2Frozen · 2011-05-27, 18:45

A question for the gun experts; How much difference is a 9mm to a .45 pistol? I mean stuff like recoil, is the kick of a 45 that much bigger? In what case would one be preferred?

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Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Hmm...so...I got my hands on volume 1 of Hidan no Aria AA, and provided some new information (and characters) for the HnAverse.

So...we'll probably be using it, right?

*runs off with secret files*

Err if you want I guess...

MeisterBabylon · 2011-05-27, 18:46

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Originally Posted by SaintessHeart

Name: Alicia Capone
Nationality: American-Italian
Age: 17
Butei Rank: A
Ancestor: Al Capone
Department: CVR
Bloodline Ability: Murderous Intent - Precision Kill
Weapon: Colt S.A.A mod .45 ACP, M37 Western Custom (Ithaca M37 crossed with a lever-action system), jeweled switchblade (belonging to her ancestor), silver-plated Tommy Gun (kept in school locker), BAR mod 7.62
Friends: Ayari/Kanari, Karla, Meikyo

Originally from the US, Alicia was an ordinary student from a Chicago middle school, where she got into a brush with the law by seriously injuring a group of local teens for trying to hit on her. As a result, her parents packed her up and sent her to Japan, enrolling her in the local Butei Academy in hopes of reining her behaviour in. However, that didn't change her personality, but her grades are above average and thus she was streamed into the Civetta class.

When Meikyo was streamed into CVR, she was unable to walk. As a result of her previous transgressions, she was often picked on by the students from other classes, no matter how the Civetta girls try to protect and help her. To make matters worse, NK has despatched agents to take her out. On one occasion, a couple of agents tried to take her out while she is out for her medical checkup, but failed and thus held hostages. Hitomi then appeared and shot them out with her revolver. After that incident, they both became fast friends and she was assigned as a "protector" to the now more-vulnerable Meikyo.

Alicia is an extremely charming girl, however, her yangire personality makes her a figure of fear for her enemies. On another occasion, the car of the Tokyo mayor, who seeks to close down the Butei Academy as "it is a school of breeding violence", parked outside the school, while the mayor criticised the school for taking in Meikyo while passing by the class. Alicia then took her Thompson during lunch break and destroyed his car, which is parked near the school entrance, sparking an uproar in school. Though the nothing happened as EU and a number of prominent politicians (who hated the mayor) intervened, she was given a month of detention after school, which Meikyo visits her every day.

Alicia and Meikyo, despite being foreigners, developed a fledgling interest in the otaku culture of Japan. Alicia's dislike of the Tokyo mayor stemmed from the latter's constant censorship of "harmful material", thus making it hard for both of them to pursue her interests. Subsequently, she took an interest in airsoft weapons, and tried to get Reisen to modify an airsoft M1918 BAR into a real weapon, but was turned down as she did not have enough cash. She then vandalised his yacht with spray paint, and as revenge, Reisen fired teargas grenades into her dorm on a daily basis until Meikyo begged both sides to stop, partly because she living in the same room as Alicia too. Hence, Reisen modified the gun for her, and she agreed to pay him in instalments.

Are you sure this brusque lady is in the right department?

Marcus H. · 2011-05-27, 19:19

Èlise: Ugh, my imagination is crafting a beautiful woman who speaks like "Give me the money or he gets it, see? Nyeh~ Bleah~"

MeisterBabylon · 2011-05-27, 19:39

In other news, the author took my Tsubame Gaeshi chan away from me. You can't have 2 descendents of Sasaki Kojirou at once can you?! T_T

*orz in the corner with the affected vampire-ninja*

Sheba · 2011-05-27, 19:54

The next "My OCs and others' OCs" batch.

Fiorenza Diotallevi

Spoiler:

She finds Kirsten very moé.
Fio treats Preston as equal when it comes to libido.
She is very friendly with Amélie, perhaps a little too much in the eyes of many, enough for Ayari's yuri goggles.
She is a good friend to Sanae and would regularly try to show the girl in her own special way.
She likes to call Jin her fellow pervert, even tho Jin says it is accidental.
She is okay with Svetlana.
She likes to talk with Naoko about anything, everything and nothing.
She wants to drag Erin into her bed. And that's enough to disgust Erin.
She enjoys the menacing glares from Minato's Angels when she does something as innocent as adjusting his necktie. Perhaps she does that for trolling purposes.
She and Saito had various talks about girls.
She have traumatized Ryoushi since he have walked in while she have been getting out of the shower. He have managed to escape but the next day he have found her wearing nothing but an apron in his room.
She have been called Dirty Old Man in Girl's Clothes by Fuyumi.
She have compared Ada to a peerless flower she would like to take.
Her relationship with Siesta are tense to say the least.
Fiorenza wonder why Elise tries to avoid her.
Fiorenza is in good terms with Mara, as long as alcohol is involved.
She finds Adrian a little plain.
Charlotte is someone she enjoys competing with.
Claus is too serious for her tastes.
Fiorenza's upbringing made it so she can enjoy things that go BOOM with Mary.
Fiorenza mentally pictures Kou as the stereotypical otaku, as far as the appearance goes. How wrong she is.
Fio thinks that Coach is a little uptight, she just will never say it.
She loves D-Boy's personality.
Fiorenza teases Jonathan about his relationship with Michelle.
As a result, she teases Michelle just to see that "funny tsundere act".
She trades yuri with Ayari.
And she trades yaoi Kanari. She thinks that the twins should do some twincest some day.
In Fio's opinion, Ivan is a funny Logi fellow to compete with.
She knows Rachel is kinda scared of her, but won't give up the idea of a skinship with her.
She is regularly scolded by Doc for getting reckless in her driving.
She have openly claimed that she want to take Aila to her bed. (to which people felt weirded out).

Sanae Noriaki

Spoiler:

Sanae likes to have baths with Kirsten especially when Kirsty helps her to do her odango hair.
She thinks that Preston's flirting act is moronic.
She likes Amélie above anything else, the French girl being a big sister figure to her.
While she is in good terms with Fiorenza as far as Amdo to Logi's relationship goes, she would have liked it if Fiorenza did not try to pull her "skinship" regularly on her. Moreover Sanae gets more jealous when Fio does that to Amélie.
She sees Jin as a predator and danger to women.
Sanae acts as a professional toward Svetlana when it comes to maintenance. Otherwise their bonding don't go any further trying to teach each other swear words in their mother language.
Sanae don't feel anything negative toward Naoko. They would play some games against other over their DS.
She thinks Erin is cool but a little full of herself, also she don't like that tension between Erin and Amélie. She is responsible for one incident with Erin, where Jin eventally "saved" the bespectacled girl.
Her relationship with Minato is formal.
She thinks Saito is not as cool as Amélie
She have tried to befriend Ryoushi to see what he is made of. But no luck so far.
She have provided Fuyumi with some explosive devices. Her relationship don't go further than that.
She kinda likes Ada.
She calls Siesta an emogoth. It tells a lot about her relationship with Siesta.
She likes Elise, not to the same extent as Amélie.
She got sick when she have gotten into a drinking competition with Mara. She will never try it again.
She only knows Adrian from afar.
she seeks to pit Charlotte against Fio and another Logi in a race.
Claus kinda scares her. Well enough to get her calling him the T800.
She shares with Mary an interest for explosives, just not for the same reasons.
Whhile Sanae have never meet Kou in real life. They have done so over the internet. They regularly trolled each other, killed each other in online games and Kou resorted to petty hacking.
She tries to avoid Coach as much as possible. And will only follow his classes because Amélie ordered her.
She compared D-Boy to the sergeant from Full Metal Jacket.
She have only Jonathan met once and that was when he accidentally walked in while she was getting dressed up. From now on, she cowers behind her comrades when they meet.
She thinks Michelle is nice.
Sanae calls Ayari Kagami
As a result she calls Kanari Tsukasa. Other than that, there is not much between Sanae and the twins.
Ivan is that other Logi that she want to pit against Fio and Charlotte.
She feels kinda sorry for Rachel who is Target Locked in Fio's HUD.
She have not meet Doc very much.
She have had a close call with Aila who almost caught her in one of her "trolling acts" (read Erin part)

Jin Yamazaki

Spoiler:

Jin thinks Kirsten's berserker rage is a waste of an otherwise adorable personality. He have gone as far as calling it a budding yandere.
He don't buy Preston's claim to be a gentleman pervert.
In his opinion, Amélie is trying too hard to play the aristocrat part of her. To him, Amélie should behave a little more like a normal teenager fantasizing about Brad Pitt or whoever actor girls fantasize about.
He would like to tell Fiorenza to lay off the sugar.
Sanae's little miss snarker act is more cute to Jin than anything else.
He is amused by Svetlana when she is acting like a hunter, otherwise she is a good buddy to him.
Jin and Naoko's relationship is... Normal.
He likes to tease Erin just to see that tsundere act of hers. Especially after that "little incident".
When it comes to Minato, his favorite part is "the mini harem dynamics" than anything else. He put it as "Who need to play harem games when you have Minato, his two buddies and the three girls? So many possibilities!"
He respect Saito for his "unique doctrine".
He calls Ryoushi "that guy who is like Simon in that Drill robot anime".
He have enjoyed Fuyumi's "corruption".
Ada is kinda his type of lady. He just keep his hands off her before he don't feel the need to add his brand of spice into Minato's band's already spicy dynamics.
Out of amusement, he calls Siesta that gypsie fortuneteller.
He knows Elise is kinda upset at him after one of the questionable uses of his wind powers over her during a mission.
Mara is one of the few girls on which he never have done the skirt flipping shenanigans. It's just that she is such a jolly fellow drinker that he just respects her too much for that. She calls her the most entertaining feature of Netherlands since Kung-Fu Football.
Not in bad terms with Adrian, he even calls him "One of the few modern gentlemen", and admit his nice clothing taste. Sober, not too fancy.
Charlotte is a funny girl to Jin.
Claus is boring to Jin
He says about Mary, "She is like the lost child of Alice In Wonderland's Alice and Michael Bay."
Too few people have meet Kou. Jin is no exception.
He likes the way Coach "break people to rebuild them better". He is aware that Coach can do him too.
He compares D-Boy's "loudness" to a hurricane, and hurricanes makes things more entertaining for Jin.
He have worked one or two missions with Jonathan, as a result, Jin respects that no non-sense attitude of his.
He knows why Michelle acts a little cold toward him.
Jin finds Ayari amusing, like that rebellious kitty trying claw the master's hand. Nothing more.
Kanari's scream over her flipped skirt is music to Jin's ears.
He is curious of Ivan's taste in music, so he would not mind a ride in Ivan's car once in a while.
Rachel is one of those girls upset by his skirt flipping tendencies.
Jin is on neutral terms with Doc.
Aila is one of the few people who called him out on his act toward girls. This may have been the one time he have shown embarassment.

Tempy · 2011-05-27, 20:08

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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

In other news, the author took my Tsubame Gaeshi chan away from me. You can't have 2 descendents of Sasaki Kojirou at once can you?! T_T

*orz in the corner with the affected vampire-ninja*

I actually find this rule to be absurd. Genetics doesn't work that way. Perhaps the particular set of genes isn't always inherited, but many people can and do claim ancestry to a particular person in history. For example, the possible descendants of Genghis Khan are 1 in 200.

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Unless an ancestor line has only had one child for every generation, you're going to see a spread of genetic material. Hell, I could be descended from Genghis Khan, since my family's bloodline was from that region.

That said, I am not keen on seeing abuse of bloodlines / ancestors. You don't need to be descendant of Abdul Alhazred, Faust, or Rasputin to be unique.

MeisterBabylon · 2011-05-27, 20:36

Of course, genetics don't work that way, but for purposes of character composition in a story, "The One" rule applies. In this case, her unique point was naming every move Tsubame Gaeshi, even actions that don't even remotely resemble a triple slash. Being Sasaki's descendent gives her access to that trait, and the Monohoshizao. Having a canon character who is that, AND has a unique sword, ruins the setup.

But I've already gotten around that; Blanche d'Arquien calls everything Tsubame Gaeshi, except does not know how to use the true Tsubame Gaeshi, and has no Monohoshizao. As a vampire-ninja, I forgot that her ultimate playstyle is that of a bard.

So the voluptious vampire-ninja, weaboo, occult expert, Countess d'Arquien and her trusty lefty bass-axe. No further conflicts.

I'm only lacking red armor here...

Tempy · 2011-05-27, 21:47

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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Of course, genetics don't work that way, but for purposes of character composition in a story, "The One" rule applies. In this case, her unique point was naming every move Tsubame Gaeshi, even actions that don't even remotely resemble a triple slash. Being Sasaki's descendent gives her access to that trait, and the Monohoshizao. Having a canon character who is that, AND has a unique sword, ruins the setup.

But I've already gotten around that; Blanche d'Arquien calls everything Tsubame Gaeshi, except does not know how to use the true Tsubame Gaeshi, and has no Monohoshizao. As a vampire-ninja, I forgot that her ultimate playstyle is that of a bard.

So the voluptious vampire-ninja, weaboo, occult expert, Countess d'Arquien and her trusty lefty bass-axe. No further conflicts.

I'm only lacking red armor here...

Or, you could, you know, be creative and make an actual Original Character rather than ports and combinations of existing characters from other anime.

MeisterBabylon · 2011-05-27, 22:50

Come on let me have my post rug-from-under-feet wallowing in peace and I'll get back to serious OCing after that.

SaintessHeart · 2011-05-28, 00:15

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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Are you sure this brusque lady is in the right department?

Al Capone, like most crime bosses, are able to command their followers because of their charisma. Those who are immune to their charm, suddenly gain a whole lot of enemies.

So, yeah.

It gives us a new enemy to deal with anyway, namely the Tokyo mayor who is actually working for international organised crime and abusing his position. What nobody knows is that he actually rigged votes through multiple underground elements to stay in power.

Ayari/Kanari have indirect blood-ties to organised crime anyway, while Reisen used to work for them. The mayor could make a great ultimate boss.

Reisen : You could pawn that switchblade of yours to me as payment.
Alicia : NO! It is my family heirloom!
Reisen : Think about it! If you do that, I'll modify any weapon you want! Heck, I'll even throw in top-grade accessories for free!
Alicia : How much is that blade worth anyway?
Reisen : It is worth USD$5,000,000 in your ancestor's time. Add in inflation, the breaking of the Bretton Woods, revaluation of currency.......
Alicia : *jaw drops*

FlameSparkZ · 2011-05-28, 04:04

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Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Err if you want I guess...

It's not a matter of wanting or not...just sharing what I know (and some might already know), and also because of the Amica system.

So, I'll keep it in spoiler tags...

Spoiler for Hidan no Aria AA:

Spoiler for Synopsis:

Spoiler for Characters:

Spoiler for Amica System:

Well, that's what I was able to figure out of the raws

tsunade666 · 2011-05-28, 04:59

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Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

It's not a matter of wanting or not...just sharing what I know (and some might already know), and also because of the Amica system.

So, I'll keep it in spoiler tags...

Spoiler for Amica System:

Well, that's what I was able to figure out of the raws

Well for Amica system it can be from both girls or both boys or a girl and boy pair up because

Spoiler:

FlameSparkZ · 2011-05-28, 05:14

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Originally Posted by tsunade666

Well for Amica system it can be from both girls or both boys or a girl and boy pair up because

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I see...I should really go read the novel

kct · 2011-05-28, 05:50

Living life on the fast lane.

Spoiler for portrait:

Name: Yukio Yamakawa @ Derek Yamakawa
Age: 16 (turning 17 this year)
Gender: Male
Date of Birth: TBA
Nationality: Japan
Class: 2nd Year
Division: Logi (Informa as elective)
Butei Rank: B (Potentially A, but held back due to machinery of choice)
Ancestry: Saigō Takamori
Equipment: UZI pistol, throwing knives, katana

Other Info:

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Background:

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Coming from the home of liberty, Yukio is a Japanese born to parents with mixed ethnicity. His parents work as expatriates in the United States, meant that he spent most of his life being raised in one of the cities. While his childhood is nothing loud to begin with, having experience the hoo-haa that is called motor racing and the subsequent exposure brought out an interest in motor racing within him. Getting a something with a large engine has always been something ingrained with him because of their massive cult status in the United States, and that resulted in a rather outrageous V8-powered Impala sent his way because somehow it needed the power to move the massive weight of the large car around.

Of course, that also placed him in the other side of the law with the constant wild burnouts and other shenanigans he and his band of hoons constantly perform in quiet neighbourhoods. Still, the authorities took notice of his "potential" to be a rather useful asset to the local police force, probably because besides the wild bouts of playing with traffic laws, Yukio has had time spent in local race tracks with the very same car, which came off as an irony of sorts. Siding up with the law enforcement is a good idea when having the car crushed under anti-hoon laws AND time being re-educated seems like the other available choice, and he decided to take that up since free track time is supposed to be one of the "privileges" he was given so that he can continue driving.

The program would see him being sent to Japan, supposedly because the folks felt that there's a need for him to learn the finer points of cornering. Still it wasn't so bad of a deal, considering that Yukio thinks of Japan as some "Mecca of car culture" besides the United States and parts of Europe. They expected him to go wild, and...go wild he did.

In addition to his madness behind the steering wheel of a car, Yukio is quite aware of his ancestry, tracing to one of the major figures in the beginning of the Meiji era...one that is both respected and vilified in history. Because of this, he took up lessons in fighting the Japanese way, especially those that involves using a Japanese weapon, like kendo. He considers all that as a way for him to remember his Japanese roots without forgetting them.

It was not immediately known why he took up Informa as an elective, although recently Yukio has shown himself to be quite good at looking up information and using them.

Personality:

Spoiler:

Abilities and Skills:

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Facts:

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Icy.Tear · 2011-05-28, 06:19

Fuuma and Kinji are amica? Where does it say that?

tsunade666 · 2011-05-28, 08:16

I read it in the LN thread. Isn't that the case? I can't read the vol 1 so I'm not sure.

Sheba · 2011-05-28, 09:38

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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

But I've already gotten around that; Blanche d'Arquien calls everything Tsubame Gaeshi, except does not know how to use the true Tsubame Gaeshi, and has no Monohoshizao. As a vampire-ninja, I forgot that her ultimate playstyle is that of a bard.

So the voluptious vampire-ninja, weaboo, occult expert, Countess d'Arquien and her trusty lefty bass-axe. No further conflicts.

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I think you are trying way too hard to cram as much fetishes or moé points into one single character as possible to make them "perky", to the point they feels "forced". Moreover some of your characters will soon get called out on being ports of characters from existing series (Erio from Denpa Onna anyone?).

If you have looked a the Aria cast so far, it's actually one of the more conservatives around, where the most outlandish element is a vampire.

Spoiler:

And in the batch of OCs we have right here and now, Mara is the more outlandish and yet reasonably stays rather conservative. The keywords being conservative and reasonable. Sometimes, take a step back, look at the bigger picture and ask yourself if you have gone overboard or not.

PS: I can't help but notice that this whole "conservative" mindset eventually dictated my choice of pictures for OCs.

PPS: And last night have raped my mind with three more OC ideas, including an old guy working as weaponsmith master in Amdo, likely a friend for Coach and D-Boy, a forensic girl as the local shrinking violet and a muslim girl Butei who actually might be one of the less conservative of my bunch. I need to meditate more on them.

PPPS: I dig that Sakaki Kojiro's descendant in the Aria manga. Rich girl + long dark hair + pantyhose + stalker tendencies, that is win.

Icy.Tear · 2011-05-28, 09:52

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Originally Posted by tsunade666

I read it in the LN thread. Isn't that the case? I can't read the vol 1 so I'm not sure.

Aria hires Fuuma to find out about Akari's technique: Tobiugachi, translates roughly to Kite Pierce, a ninja technique used to extract the opponent's eyeballs or organs.

SaintessHeart · 2011-05-28, 12:08

More swapping :

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Originally Posted by SaintessHeart

Name: Karla Bidan
Nationality: German-Korean
Age: 24
Butei Rank: Maintenance Engineer E-2
Ancestor: Gerhard Barkhorn
Department: Logi
Bloodline Ability: Pilot any aircraft or robot by instinct. Horrendous with land vehicles.
Weapons: Baton, Glock 26
Friends: Ayari/Kanari's parents - One of the only few who knew about Ayari/Kanari's true background, Reisen

Background : A former student from the German Butei Academy, she was almost granted a scholarship into the Luftwaffe but it was retracted when she was convicted for dangerous driving during her driving test, running the car through a lamppost and almost severing the car into half. Nonetheless, she was the school's top aircraft pilot and graduated from the academy with honors, therefore the school attached her to the Japanese Butei Academy. The academy was skeptical of her skills, so she was assigned as a second-level engineer.

Initially innocent, she was thrust into the underworld and conspiracies after the Unamichi twins were suddenly deposited on her doorstep with a letter simply bearing the words "Take care of them. Please." in familiar handwriting, and 10 million euros deposited into her bank account. She had been the unofficial guardian of the twins for four years since she arrived in Japan.

And a bad guy :

Name: Kintaro Izahara
Nationality: Japanese
Age: 80
Bloodline Ability: Mock Talk - able to make even the wrongest things sound right
Weapons: None
Friends: Unknown

Background : The mayor of Tokyo, Izahara is known to be a caustic speaker, however he still gets to keep his seat in the Diet, though there are rumours that he was placed there to protect the interests of certain people.

Despite making enemies with the powerful EU and a couple of Yakuza syndicates, Izahara stays relatively safe. It is said that the Japanese Internal Security Agency echelon keeps him there to draw out spies from EU working within the ranks of the Japanese government, as well as to purge any undesirable interests to Japan's sovereignty. However, unbeknownst to them, Izahara also works with certain countries around the world, turning a blind eye to drug-trafficking, racketeering and prostitution on the grounds of Tokyo. Despite the long reaching arm of the police and Butei, the appearance of North Korean agents, Golden Triangle drug dealers and other interest groups speaks lengths about the mayor possibly having a hand in it. As EU is currently tied up in the hotspots around the world, and the Butei Academy refusing to risk students doing these missions*, there are no incriminating evidence.

However, with the arrival of highly determined first-years, a foreign pilot with ties to one of Izahara's indirect victims, and a highly resourceful "fugitive" seeking vengeance from the Izahara for unknown reasons, his days are slowly numbered.

* - Known as -/X and 0/A missions, namely deniable data-gathering and forcible apprehension (a.k.a kidnapping) cum high-risk rescues respectively. To date, only two graduates within Tokyo Butei Academy have conducted these missions, and both died shortly after, with one girl from CVR repeatedly raped by her captors before escaping and dying from exhaustion, and an Assault top male student suffering multiple bullet wounds before bleeding to death during extraction, unconscious captive in hand.

According to a few psychics at SSR, as well as Amdo students who have interacted with Reisen for spare parts, there are some possible hints that Reisen had conducted multiple 0/A missions and couple of gruesome -/X which involves retrieving heads of dead people for memory engram studies, due to his mysterious but vast knowledge of how Buteis operate and how EU functions. However, since he spent 3-4 years doing deniable operations around the world, firstly for the Metro government, then for many interest groups around the world, it is hard to extract useful information from his potpourri memories even through psychic mind-reading of the SSR.

Sheba · 2011-05-28, 12:13

I'd suggest you to tweak your villain a bit. The mayor himself is... a bit too much in my opinion. Perhaps a mere politician seeking the top seat, or a corporate may do. You can even keep the yakuza connection.

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Sheba RUN, YOU FOOLS! Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Formerly Iwakawa base and Chaldea. Now Teyvat, the Astral Express & the Outpost Age: 44	The next "My OCs and others' OCs" batch. Fiorenza Diotallevi Spoiler: She finds Kirsten very moé. Fio treats Preston as equal when it comes to libido. She is very friendly with Amélie, perhaps a little too much in the eyes of many, enough for Ayari's yuri goggles. She is a good friend to Sanae and would regularly try to show the girl in her own special way. She likes to call Jin her fellow pervert, even tho Jin says it is accidental. She is okay with Svetlana. She likes to talk with Naoko about anything, everything and nothing. She wants to drag Erin into her bed. And that's enough to disgust Erin. She enjoys the menacing glares from Minato's Angels when she does something as innocent as adjusting his necktie. Perhaps she does that for trolling purposes. She and Saito had various talks about girls. She have traumatized Ryoushi since he have walked in while she have been getting out of the shower. He have managed to escape but the next day he have found her wearing nothing but an apron in his room. She have been called Dirty Old Man in Girl's Clothes by Fuyumi. She have compared Ada to a peerless flower she would like to take. Her relationship with Siesta are tense to say the least. Fiorenza wonder why Elise tries to avoid her. Fiorenza is in good terms with Mara, as long as alcohol is involved. She finds Adrian a little plain. Charlotte is someone she enjoys competing with. Claus is too serious for her tastes. Fiorenza's upbringing made it so she can enjoy things that go BOOM with Mary. Fiorenza mentally pictures Kou as the stereotypical otaku, as far as the appearance goes. How wrong she is. Fio thinks that Coach is a little uptight, she just will never say it. She loves D-Boy's personality. Fiorenza teases Jonathan about his relationship with Michelle. As a result, she teases Michelle just to see that "funny tsundere act". She trades yuri with Ayari. And she trades yaoi Kanari. She thinks that the twins should do some twincest some day. In Fio's opinion, Ivan is a funny Logi fellow to compete with. She knows Rachel is kinda scared of her, but won't give up the idea of a skinship with her. She is regularly scolded by Doc for getting reckless in her driving. She have openly claimed that she want to take Aila to her bed. (to which people felt weirded out). Sanae Noriaki Spoiler: Sanae likes to have baths with Kirsten especially when Kirsty helps her to do her odango hair. She thinks that Preston's flirting act is moronic. She likes Amélie above anything else, the French girl being a big sister figure to her. While she is in good terms with Fiorenza as far as Amdo to Logi's relationship goes, she would have liked it if Fiorenza did not try to pull her "skinship" regularly on her. Moreover Sanae gets more jealous when Fio does that to Amélie. She sees Jin as a predator and danger to women. Sanae acts as a professional toward Svetlana when it comes to maintenance. Otherwise their bonding don't go any further trying to teach each other swear words in their mother language. Sanae don't feel anything negative toward Naoko. They would play some games against other over their DS. She thinks Erin is cool but a little full of herself, also she don't like that tension between Erin and Amélie. She is responsible for one incident with Erin, where Jin eventally "saved" the bespectacled girl. Her relationship with Minato is formal. She thinks Saito is not as cool as Amélie She have tried to befriend Ryoushi to see what he is made of. But no luck so far. She have provided Fuyumi with some explosive devices. Her relationship don't go further than that. She kinda likes Ada. She calls Siesta an emogoth. It tells a lot about her relationship with Siesta. She likes Elise, not to the same extent as Amélie. She got sick when she have gotten into a drinking competition with Mara. She will never try it again. She only knows Adrian from afar. she seeks to pit Charlotte against Fio and another Logi in a race. Claus kinda scares her. Well enough to get her calling him the T800. She shares with Mary an interest for explosives, just not for the same reasons. Whhile Sanae have never meet Kou in real life. They have done so over the internet. They regularly trolled each other, killed each other in online games and Kou resorted to petty hacking. She tries to avoid Coach as much as possible. And will only follow his classes because Amélie ordered her. She compared D-Boy to the sergeant from Full Metal Jacket. She have only Jonathan met once and that was when he accidentally walked in while she was getting dressed up. From now on, she cowers behind her comrades when they meet. She thinks Michelle is nice. Sanae calls Ayari Kagami As a result she calls Kanari Tsukasa. Other than that, there is not much between Sanae and the twins. Ivan is that other Logi that she want to pit against Fio and Charlotte. She feels kinda sorry for Rachel who is Target Locked in Fio's HUD. She have not meet Doc very much. She have had a close call with Aila who almost caught her in one of her "trolling acts" (read Erin part) Jin Yamazaki Spoiler: Jin thinks Kirsten's berserker rage is a waste of an otherwise adorable personality. He have gone as far as calling it a budding yandere. He don't buy Preston's claim to be a gentleman pervert. In his opinion, Amélie is trying too hard to play the aristocrat part of her. To him, Amélie should behave a little more like a normal teenager fantasizing about Brad Pitt or whoever actor girls fantasize about. He would like to tell Fiorenza to lay off the sugar. Sanae's little miss snarker act is more cute to Jin than anything else. He is amused by Svetlana when she is acting like a hunter, otherwise she is a good buddy to him. Jin and Naoko's relationship is... Normal. He likes to tease Erin just to see that tsundere act of hers. Especially after that "little incident". When it comes to Minato, his favorite part is "the mini harem dynamics" than anything else. He put it as "Who need to play harem games when you have Minato, his two buddies and the three girls? So many possibilities!" He respect Saito for his "unique doctrine". He calls Ryoushi "that guy who is like Simon in that Drill robot anime". He have enjoyed Fuyumi's "corruption". Ada is kinda his type of lady. He just keep his hands off her before he don't feel the need to add his brand of spice into Minato's band's already spicy dynamics. Out of amusement, he calls Siesta that gypsie fortuneteller. He knows Elise is kinda upset at him after one of the questionable uses of his wind powers over her during a mission. Mara is one of the few girls on which he never have done the skirt flipping shenanigans. It's just that she is such a jolly fellow drinker that he just respects her too much for that. She calls her the most entertaining feature of Netherlands since Kung-Fu Football. Not in bad terms with Adrian, he even calls him "One of the few modern gentlemen", and admit his nice clothing taste. Sober, not too fancy. Charlotte is a funny girl to Jin. Claus is boring to Jin He says about Mary, "She is like the lost child of Alice In Wonderland's Alice and Michael Bay." Too few people have meet Kou. Jin is no exception. He likes the way Coach "break people to rebuild them better". He is aware that Coach can do him too. He compares D-Boy's "loudness" to a hurricane, and hurricanes makes things more entertaining for Jin. He have worked one or two missions with Jonathan, as a result, Jin respects that no non-sense attitude of his. He knows why Michelle acts a little cold toward him. Jin finds Ayari amusing, like that rebellious kitty trying claw the master's hand. Nothing more. Kanari's scream over her flipped skirt is music to Jin's ears. He is curious of Ivan's taste in music, so he would not mind a ride in Ivan's car once in a while. Rachel is one of those girls upset by his skirt flipping tendencies. Jin is on neutral terms with Doc. Aila is one of the few people who called him out on his act toward girls. This may have been the one time he have shown embarassment. Last edited by Sheba; 2011-05-31 at 17:05. Reason: Added Aila

2011-05-27, 20:36	Link #267
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	Of course, genetics don't work that way, but for purposes of character composition in a story, "The One" rule applies. In this case, her unique point was naming every move Tsubame Gaeshi, even actions that don't even remotely resemble a triple slash. Being Sasaki's descendent gives her access to that trait, and the Monohoshizao. Having a canon character who is that, AND has a unique sword, ruins the setup. But I've already gotten around that; Blanche d'Arquien calls everything Tsubame Gaeshi, except does not know how to use the true Tsubame Gaeshi, and has no Monohoshizao. As a vampire-ninja, I forgot that her ultimate playstyle is that of a bard. So the voluptious vampire-ninja, weaboo, occult expert, Countess d'Arquien and her trusty lefty bass-axe. No further conflicts. I'm only lacking red armor here... __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2011-05-27, 22:50	Link #269
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	Come on let me have my post rug-from-under-feet wallowing in peace and I'll get back to serious OCing after that. __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2011-05-28, 05:50	Link #274
kct Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the office, staring at my secretary shipgirl Age: 37	Living life on the fast lane. Spoiler for portrait: Name: Yukio Yamakawa @ Derek Yamakawa Age: 16 (turning 17 this year) Gender: Male Date of Birth: TBA Nationality: Japan Class: 2nd Year Division: Logi (Informa as elective) Butei Rank: B (Potentially A, but held back due to machinery of choice) Ancestry: Saigō Takamori Equipment: UZI pistol, throwing knives, katana Other Info: Spoiler: Height: 183cm Weight: 75kg Build: Athletic, slightly muscular Vitals: N/A Eyes: Dark brown Hair: Black Hair Style: Short Facial Features: Typical of Japanese males C.V.: Tomokazu Seki Background: Spoiler: Coming from the home of liberty, Yukio is a Japanese born to parents with mixed ethnicity. His parents work as expatriates in the United States, meant that he spent most of his life being raised in one of the cities. While his childhood is nothing loud to begin with, having experience the hoo-haa that is called motor racing and the subsequent exposure brought out an interest in motor racing within him. Getting a something with a large engine has always been something ingrained with him because of their massive cult status in the United States, and that resulted in a rather outrageous V8-powered Impala sent his way because somehow it needed the power to move the massive weight of the large car around. Of course, that also placed him in the other side of the law with the constant wild burnouts and other shenanigans he and his band of hoons constantly perform in quiet neighbourhoods. Still, the authorities took notice of his "potential" to be a rather useful asset to the local police force, probably because besides the wild bouts of playing with traffic laws, Yukio has had time spent in local race tracks with the very same car, which came off as an irony of sorts. Siding up with the law enforcement is a good idea when having the car crushed under anti-hoon laws AND time being re-educated seems like the other available choice, and he decided to take that up since free track time is supposed to be one of the "privileges" he was given so that he can continue driving. The program would see him being sent to Japan, supposedly because the folks felt that there's a need for him to learn the finer points of cornering. Still it wasn't so bad of a deal, considering that Yukio thinks of Japan as some "Mecca of car culture" besides the United States and parts of Europe. They expected him to go wild, and...go wild he did. In addition to his madness behind the steering wheel of a car, Yukio is quite aware of his ancestry, tracing to one of the major figures in the beginning of the Meiji era...one that is both respected and vilified in history. Because of this, he took up lessons in fighting the Japanese way, especially those that involves using a Japanese weapon, like kendo. He considers all that as a way for him to remember his Japanese roots without forgetting them. It was not immediately known why he took up Informa as an elective, although recently Yukio has shown himself to be quite good at looking up information and using them. Personality: Spoiler: An easy-going guy, like many other budding racers that lie within Logi, Yukio is one that isn’t afraid of making challenges, or being challenged, when it comes to breaking the speed limit at the ground level. It was those stop-light challenges that often got him into the hot soup with the authorities, although sometimes his level of dedication to the art of motor racing borders on “insanity”. Although he presented an image of a reckless driver, he's surprisingly precise handler behind the wheel, due to his experience from race courses. He’s also rather keen on making a fool out of females because “it is supposedly fun watching them getting really flustered”. However, he’s the type that is very selective of his victims, often picking those that he thinks deserving the attention. Abilities and Skills: Spoiler: Behind the wheel, Yukio would tune his driving style based on the situation in hand, be it either using the “slow is smooth, smooth is fast” mantra adopted by racers, or perform wild bouts of drifting/oversteering if he is the one being chased. Unlike some of the others, Yukio isn’t afraid of making jumps or wheel-hopping his way through, although he claims that he is no “Ayrton Senna behind the wheel of a Civic”. Adopted driving techniques used by professional racers due to his track experience. His slightly “unconventional” upbringing means that Yukio uses a measure of street smarts to bring the advantage to himself, relying on a combination of street fighting skills and martial arts that he have learned. Prefers to use drive-bys to gun people down if needed, although he can make short work with the throwing knives for the times where there is a need to really hurt someone without making too much noise. The katana is reserved for those times when the opponent wields a sword. Facts: Spoiler: * Speaks English with a clear-cut American slang due to his time spent in the Unites States. However, he speaks Japanese well, considering that he converses with his family in the said language on a daily basis. * Dabbles with anything that involves the “gangsta” culture, like “Boyz n the Hood”, and music by rappers like Dr. Dre and Snoop Dogg. Also watches mainstream American shows like CSI and House on a regular basis. * Drives a Holden Commodore SS, although he would often use other vehicles, such as a Mitsubishi Pajero SUV for transportation. In addition to this, he is also capable of flying helicopters (he prefers Hueys) and driving boats. He chooses not to bring the 1996 Chevrolet Impala SS over because of its apparent value, although he owns and rides a modified Suzuki GSX-R 1000 literbike as transportation. * Often calls Fiorenza Diotallevi "big sista", considering both of them pretty much came off the same program to “retrain” former hoons and street racers into useful assets. Yes, he thinks she’s hot too. * Considers himself by far and by large to be a "car culture" guy, not set to any particular style or location. Said to have many links in the street racing world. * Spends his free time on track days to finetune his handling of the car, although there are rumours that he also took to the mountain passes on a regular basis to improve his chances against nimbler cars with an entirely another car that is specifically used for non-Butei work. * Despite being thought of as one of the speed-mad Logi idiots, his delinquent-esque appearance garnered him some fangirls. * Currently works part-time at a company specializing with modification of cars for various purposes, be it circuit, rally or drifting. * He would often modify bikes for Butei students, often working with some of the Logi folks (including Mutou) to come up with the most insane café racer or streetfighter. * Shares the same opinion with Yves Brunet regarding “The Last Samurai”, and thinks that “A Few Good Men” is a better watch. Last edited by kct; 2011-06-12 at 07:46.

2011-05-28, 06:19	Link #275
Icy.Tear 二人は独自の世界を展開 Join Date: Apr 2011	Fuuma and Kinji are amica? Where does it say that?

2011-05-28, 08:16	Link #276
tsunade666 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: In my room	I read it in the LN thread. Isn't that the case? I can't read the vol 1 so I'm not sure. __________________ To A certain Lonely Hero

2011-05-28, 12:13	Link #280
Sheba RUN, YOU FOOLS! Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Formerly Iwakawa base and Chaldea. Now Teyvat, the Astral Express & the Outpost Age: 44	I'd suggest you to tweak your villain a bit. The mayor himself is... a bit too much in my opinion. Perhaps a mere politician seeking the top seat, or a corporate may do. You can even keep the yakuza connection.