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Kotohono · 2010-10-19, 16:19

Hmm, it's a been a while since I read anything in this style

, though both of your writings so far were interesting Sora. The Monk and poet one I understood very well, it showed the point of it very well ^^, though my brother is somewhat similar to the monk in it, so I probably get it better than most others.

Yuno · 2010-10-19, 20:38

Thank you Konakaga, I am glad that you were able to enjoy my writing. I was greatly influenced by Poe and a few other things when I was growing up. I was once called a "Poe Girl" by the teacher in that I share qualities of many of the girls in the stories. I was flattered.

Your brother is like the Monk? He must be very wise, but in an awkward sort of way. My brother is more like the poet and I am his biggest fan LOL!

Hooves · 2010-10-19, 22:35

You deserve cookies for these stories Sora

(gives cookie)

My brother is just the average type, not wise, not silly, just plain normal.. While I on the other hand...... Am a.. shy little one that is the brains of the family since my mom is a little in the silly mode, and my dad is more into engineering and constructing.. Oh I'm getting off-topic here

But I do read a few books (only read 115 in my entire life

) so thats probably why I enjoy stories so much

Yuno · 2010-10-19, 22:40

Thank you for the cookies! I shall enjoy them~

Your brother is the average joe? Haha, that is quite funny. It sounds like your family has an interesting nature, but I bet it works wonderfully. Family is always on topic here in my opinion. Considering a lot of my interests and talents were inspired by either my brother or my father. My mother is dry and logical so it is hard to be inspired save for my "Snore bore" poem I wrote about her. I shall not be posting that here though~ I promised I would retire that poem.

Kotohono · 2010-10-19, 22:54

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Originally Posted by Sora Kasugano

Thank you for the cookies! I shall enjoy them~

Your brother is the average joe? Haha, that is quite funny. It sounds like your family has an interesting nature, but I bet it works wonderfully. Family is always on topic here in my opinion. Considering a lot of my interests and talents were inspired by either my brother or my father. My mother is dry and logical so it is hard to be inspired save for my "Snore bore" poem I wrote about her. I shall not be posting that here though~ I promised I would retire that poem.

Sounds like the opposite of my family parent wise as my father is more of dry logical type and my mother is the opposite I suppose.

Yuno · 2010-10-19, 23:16

Writer's block... *head desk* I can not believe this, I heard of such things, but never thought it could hit me. I can't write a single poem not one rhyming couplet. I was going to post something today.

Thats interesting, my father is fun loving and affectionate and my mother is rational and logical lol. My brother and I carry both traits of both parents relatively equally too.

Hooves · 2010-10-19, 23:23

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Originally Posted by Sora Kasugano

Writer's block... *head desk* I can not believe this, I heard of such things, but never thought it could hit me. I can't write a single poem not one rhyming couplet. I was going to post something today.

It does happen occasionally

it only happens when a writer types/writes to much in a week, that they will eventually go blank of what they do. Its happened numerous times for my fan-fictions

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Thats interesting, my father is fun loving and affectionate and my mother is rational and logical lol. My brother and I carry both traits of both parents relatively equally too.

Sounds like a fun family

Yuno · 2010-10-19, 23:28

Gah, usually I have endless inspiration. This particular poem I am trying to write is about my past. I want to write it because it's energy I have to get out. Then I have another I wish to write to explain my feelings, but not a word sticks.

I believe I have literally headdesked...

Hooves · 2010-10-19, 23:38

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Originally Posted by Sora Kasugano

Gah, usually I have endless inspiration. This particular poem I am trying to write is about my past. I want to write it because it's energy I have to get out. Then I have another I wish to write to explain my feelings, but not a word sticks.

I believe I have literally headdesked...

Head-desking is another side-effect of writer's block

it says that it brings some sense back into your mind, but it really doesnt, it just hurts

.

Yuno · 2010-10-19, 23:40

Yes... it really does hurt *rubs brow* It is effecting my ability to chat with others as well. I guess I have a lot on my mind and a lot locked away in my heart. Oh well, hopefully I can get out the next installment of Forbidden Desire at least.

Hooves · 2010-10-19, 23:47

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sora Kasugano

Yes... it really does hurt *rubs brow* It is effecting my ability to chat with others as well. I guess I have a lot on my mind and a lot locked away in my heart. Oh well, hopefully I can get out the next installment of Forbidden Desire at least.

Dont stress yourself to much, they also say that Writer's Block can cause a massive brain-clash if the person thinks to much while affected by it.

Yuno · 2010-10-19, 23:50

A massive brain-clash? *closes the document file* What do you mean like locking down all manner of thought? I do feel something like that binding my words. That is scary for me as this is my only mode of communication.

Hooves · 2010-10-19, 23:53

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Originally Posted by Sora Kasugano

A massive brain-clash? *closes the document file* What do you mean like locking down all manner of thought? I do feel something like that binding my words. That is scary for me as this is my only mode of communication.

It clashes with the general knowledge installed in your brain, which makes you mistake meaning of words with their other perspective meaning. As well as make it very arduous when thinking of what to type, like scrambling words together to form even a sentence. But dont worry, it only happens if you stress your brain to much with things like novels/stories/fan-fictions/etc/etc. If you take it easy and do simple posting, it will be fine by tomorrow. Never know how long it takes, but it ends when you can think very clearly.

Yuno · 2010-10-19, 23:55

Hehe, thank you for your insight on this subject. Usually I am an endless fountain of writing, but I think there is a lot on my mind today. Let us not forget a jarring stomping above my head due to the thin floors/roofs of this apartment I am staying in. Tomorrow I also meet with a group of people that should help me find a house of my own. I guess my mind is stuck on that tonight. Which is a shame. I wished to write a poem that ... words... omg >.< commemorates an event that happened not long ago.

Yuno · 2010-10-21, 00:31

Spoiler for Poem Despite Writer's Block:

Chimuts · 2010-10-21, 01:04

That's a nice poem

Spoiler for Is it about...:

Yuno · 2010-10-21, 01:06

Very very close! I'm so shocked how easily you put that one together. You're too wise~

Chimuts · 2010-10-21, 01:38

I only said what comes into mind when I see it

you are much wiser, being able to write such a poem

actually there is another one I thought up of, although it may seem weird...

Spoiler for Another one...:

Contrary to the first analysis, this is the "happy" version and may seem a bit forced :x

Yuno · 2010-10-21, 01:41

While it's not correct, I wish it was this is so romantic and true to my visions! I absolutely love it. Now if only I could compress time... You were closer with the first hehe~

Chimuts · 2010-10-21, 02:05

Now I am curious to its true meaning >.< Compress time...?

2010-10-21, 00:31	Link #55
Yuno Balanced Diet Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: !ouY htiW	Spoiler for Poem Despite Writer's Block: I grip the bottle balancing my life’s end, Your tears stay my hand a pale dream. My fingers release the flask to rend, Once darkness only now a shatter of light’s gleam, Upon my face your tears became mine.

2010-10-21, 01:04	Link #56
Chimuts Call me Anego!~ Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In a room as blue as the sky, as cool as the autumn wind and as quiet as the desert	That's a nice poem Spoiler for Is it about...: A person who soon will part with his/her lover because of death, "My fingers release the flask to rend" may mean that his/her life has ended. the light may be referring to the loved one, who has brought light to his/her life which was before full of despair. Then, when he/she dies, the other one shed tears for him/her. __________________

2010-10-21, 01:38	Link #58
Chimuts Call me Anego!~ Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In a room as blue as the sky, as cool as the autumn wind and as quiet as the desert	I only said what comes into mind when I see it you are much wiser, being able to write such a poem actually there is another one I thought up of, although it may seem weird... Spoiler for Another one...: The poem may refer to a person who had an accident, and was on the brink of death. He/she was saved by a blood transfusion, given to him/her by his/her lover."I grip the bottle balancing my life's end", this refers to the transfusion bottle, which is supporting his/her life. "Your tears stay my hand a pale dream" his/her hands are pale, from the blood loss, and his/her lover held his/her hand, tears flowing down her/his face to his/her hand. "My fingers release the flask to rend" He/she released the transfusion bottle, leaving the blood to drip down. "Once darkness only now a shatter of light's gleam" He/She was in a comatose state, but finally opened his/her eyes a bit, hence a shatter of light's gleam. The darkness may also refer to his life that was full of despair, but now what he knows someone care for him there is a gleam of light in his life. "Upon my face your tears become mine" His/her lover rejoiced to see him conscious, and shed tears of joy Contrary to the first analysis, this is the "happy" version and may seem a bit forced :x __________________

2010-10-21, 02:05	Link #60
Chimuts Call me Anego!~ Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In a room as blue as the sky, as cool as the autumn wind and as quiet as the desert	Now I am curious to its true meaning >.< Compress time...? __________________

2010-10-19, 20:38	Link #42
Yuno Balanced Diet Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: !ouY htiW	Thank you Konakaga, I am glad that you were able to enjoy my writing. I was greatly influenced by Poe and a few other things when I was growing up. I was once called a "Poe Girl" by the teacher in that I share qualities of many of the girls in the stories. I was flattered. Your brother is like the Monk? He must be very wise, but in an awkward sort of way. My brother is more like the poet and I am his biggest fan LOL!

2010-10-19, 22:40	Link #44
Yuno Balanced Diet Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: !ouY htiW	Thank you for the cookies! I shall enjoy them~ Your brother is the average joe? Haha, that is quite funny. It sounds like your family has an interesting nature, but I bet it works wonderfully. Family is always on topic here in my opinion. Considering a lot of my interests and talents were inspired by either my brother or my father. My mother is dry and logical so it is hard to be inspired save for my "Snore bore" poem I wrote about her. I shall not be posting that here though~ I promised I would retire that poem.

2010-10-19, 23:16	Link #46
Yuno Balanced Diet Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: !ouY htiW	Writer's block... head desk I can not believe this, I heard of such things, but never thought it could hit me. I can't write a single poem not one rhyming couplet. I was going to post something today. Thats interesting, my father is fun loving and affectionate and my mother is rational and logical lol. My brother and I carry both traits of both parents relatively equally too.

2010-10-19, 23:28	Link #48
Yuno Balanced Diet Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: !ouY htiW	Gah, usually I have endless inspiration. This particular poem I am trying to write is about my past. I want to write it because it's energy I have to get out. Then I have another I wish to write to explain my feelings, but not a word sticks. I believe I have literally headdesked...

2010-10-19, 23:40	Link #50
Yuno Balanced Diet Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: !ouY htiW	Yes... it really does hurt rubs brow It is effecting my ability to chat with others as well. I guess I have a lot on my mind and a lot locked away in my heart. Oh well, hopefully I can get out the next installment of Forbidden Desire at least.

2010-10-19, 23:50	Link #52
Yuno Balanced Diet Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: !ouY htiW	A massive brain-clash? closes the document file What do you mean like locking down all manner of thought? I do feel something like that binding my words. That is scary for me as this is my only mode of communication.

2010-10-19, 23:55	Link #54
Yuno Balanced Diet Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: !ouY htiW	Hehe, thank you for your insight on this subject. Usually I am an endless fountain of writing, but I think there is a lot on my mind today. Let us not forget a jarring stomping above my head due to the thin floors/roofs of this apartment I am staying in. Tomorrow I also meet with a group of people that should help me find a house of my own. I guess my mind is stuck on that tonight. Which is a shame. I wished to write a poem that ... words... omg >.< commemorates an event that happened not long ago.

2010-10-21, 01:06	Link #57
Yuno Balanced Diet Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: !ouY htiW	Very very close! I'm so shocked how easily you put that one together. You're too wise~

2010-10-21, 01:41	Link #59
Yuno Balanced Diet Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: !ouY htiW	While it's not correct, I wish it was this is so romantic and true to my visions! I absolutely love it. Now if only I could compress time... You were closer with the first hehe~