2011-02-25, 21:41 | Link #481 |
Tenshi's Defense Squadron
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After watching Kodomo no Jikan and (some romance H-ovas), I wonder if someone can rewrite a little bit of IS plot like how if Ichika was the world champion and works in IS academy as a teacher (so a little bit older than the cast) and the harem are his students. xD
It's also possible for Houki and Rin to still remain his osana najimis if the age gap is not too wide and if you want to include Chifuyu as a possessive imouto (wow, role reversal) is good. At least...(hopefully) you won't get a dense protagonist if he is older and more mature than the cast. xD Actually, I might get somewhere with this!
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2011-02-26, 00:06 | Link #482 | |||||
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- UK, France and China are confirmed to have personal IS reps. - Russia and US both have reps; Russia having hired a Japanese girl (light novel) and the US being the student with the personal IS in Class 1-3 mentioned in the 2nd/3rd episode of the anime. It is highly likely they would become part of Ichika's harem. That means all of the permanent members of the UNSC have been represented in the Ichika Harem. Following that pattern, that leaves just 4 other countries with nukes: Israel, India, Pakistan, and North Korea. I've already argued that the author conveniently replaced India and Pakistan with Germany and Japan (now part of the Ichika Harem), and it can be argued that Phantom Task represents the Kim Dynasty (which is waiting to be added into the harem per light novel). Therefore, I decided to represent Israel with my own country (which shares so many parallels with Israel it ain't funny), Singapore. To break the pattern so far, I made Karon an imouto-type character who has a non-sexual relationship with Ichika, his "little sister not related by blood". This is part of the character building done under my main fic, [IS: Shooting Star]. The hilarious other parallel is that there are enough girls (current and potential) for Ichika to star in Amagami SS; again I parodied that with my romance-centric side story, [Infinite Stratos: SS]. You should notice that both titles [IS: Shooting Star] and [Infinite Stratos: SS] are plays on each other. ~~~New Intelligence Data Updated~~~ Well... Shit. The Alaska Treaty dictates that any technology developed for IS must be shared with the rest of the world. It was a thinly disguised method of ensuring that Japan could not pull another White Knight on them, but at the same time it screws with what the other nations can do with the technology. The Treaty allows entities to keep their technology secret until the first field test, and allows all research and testing to be done on neutral territory, which is the ISA, without having to reveal such details. Mass-production still requires a complete audit of the technology however. All that bull renders all our parading of super prototypes null and void, not to mention blows a big hole in my Yggdrastratos core energy collection system being a guarded recipe. There's the other problem that the Merlion even in her current state is still too powerful for the arena, considering how quickly Laura went down. However, the VT system showed that IS can remodel themselves, which gives me the avenue to better conceal the Shooting Star IS when they are flying their covert missions. I'll be reworking Karon's profile this weekend to take into account the newly discovered restrictions as well as her new looks. For the current Merlion will become the covert face of the unit. I'd have to redo the Yggdra system and desociate them from IS as well, so this 3.5G schtick would just mean late 3rd Gen IS model rather than some lolscience power supply that uses a person's brain and willpower as energy.
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2011-02-26, 00:27 | Link #483 |
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Eh, I expect everyone to have their own interpretation of a charismatic, balls to the wall, hammy elder brother figure.
As a rule of thumb, he's basically a genre savvy Kamina, who succeeds most of the time and pumps the melodrama into everything he sees, including affairs as mundane as going to the bathroom. To him, there is apparently some value of character or plot development in everything. Now, from a more objective standpoint, Ray's true talent can said to be that whatever he sets his mind to, he accomplishes not because of luck alone, but through extensive preparation and information gathering. When you already get to the burning bridge, it's too late for plans that's why you have to plan ahead, so when the crisis hits, all you have to do punch it with all your strength and press forward. Yeah? Do I expect him to die? Hell yes, but not before making it to the Final Five and passing on his will to someone else, and only then going out in a blaze of glory against ridiculous odds. Cue Badass Creed: "Molōn labe!" ~ "Come and take them!" attributed to King Leonidas I of Sparta, for obvious reasons. Would I be surprised he survives? Very. "So, I am the last man on Earth? ...Gosh, I can't wait to see who's the last WOMAN on Earth!"
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2011-02-26, 01:07 | Link #484 |
Dictadere~!
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With the simple name of "Kamina" in my mind, I had the utmost intention to kill him in a fiery death of agonizingly ridiculous baddassery.
But not before taking out at least 3 A-AIS in one swipe. I'll take your description to heart. Anyone else?
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2011-02-26, 04:35 | Link #485 | ||
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2011-02-26, 04:53 | Link #486 |
Archangelic Demon Vampire
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Would you want to include my own Stoic half psycho boy Hikari Alex?
He might be fitting as he's in a dark organization that likes to put its nose everywhere something fishy happens... You might need to put some references to Lyn though, as the reason why he can drive that IS of his is largely linked to her. Aliens ftw! Chapter 3 is STILL in the works, although around 75% complete. World Of Tanks has been making me busy again...
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2011-02-26, 06:21 | Link #487 |
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I'd throw my OCs in, but as I said earlier, Shooting Star would only be ready for aliens at the end of Infinite Stratos, after they've gotten all their plots done and mid season upgrades broken into.
That's about... 3 years from canon present. They can be used now anyway, Sherry, Marina, Hokusui, Three and Karon, just that they won't be as awesomesauce as later. EDIT: Quick patch to Karon's profile, now that I found an image fitting of her. And yes, the Orimura Imouto is strong with this one.
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2011-02-26, 09:26 | Link #488 |
Black Man
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Im digging your theory bro. Im going to be doing some digging see what I can find out more about relations to to the real world with this story. It seems to me like there could be more flawless character development and presentation (Given that Laura in a mere 4 episodes, Hated Ichika, Got mad at Chifuyu, Fought and got her ass beat, Then claimed him her "wife" or "bride" what have you. With a kissu kissu. ~chu~....)
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2011-02-27, 06:42 | Link #492 | |||
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~~~New Intelligence Data Updated~~~ Karon has been completely overhauled. Most of the character building bits are the same, with a bit more info about Kha-nyan's catty habits. Her photo has changed to fit the Orimura little sister role better. (I also discovered that the profile already specifies her having short hair, but somehow I shopped a pic with long hair. Oops. ) As the short hair resulted from a particularly nasty fight later in the story, so any fanart drawn with her with long hair is still accurate. As promised earlier, I reworked the sneaky mass production technology so as not to clash with the Alaska Treaty (and included a jibe at the water issue. ) The IS design on the other hand has been completely redone, and the result is a simple suit can fits Karon's bill better. It allows me to have both the beamspam cake and eat the kungfu cake. Btw, if you notice any "Imouto Imouto" (I used Find and Replace function) please let me know. So that means Termie you're going to need to reevaluate the I-Type Vandam Imouto.
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2011-02-27, 10:43 | Link #493 |
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...surprisingly the only story i feel like writing involves IS at a peripheral level.
You have an IS on an overwater solo flight. It goes down. Who are you going to call? These people, that's who. "Emergency scramble! IS down!" "Artemis Two Zero and Helios Eight Five, scrambling."
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2011-02-27, 13:50 | Link #494 | ||
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Oh well, maybe the girl in the picture just isn't Karon.
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2011-02-27, 14:11 | Link #495 | |
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oh wait, that's not it. :P Coming up with the last member of Alex's harem... been working more on revisions than on finishing that damn chapter. XD edit: Also coming up with a throughout explanation of how the Plasma projector works, leaving the tech-savy people less dissapointed...
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2011-02-27, 14:29 | Link #496 | |
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Actually it was more that her hair color didn't matched and I failed to read that she actually still has gray colored hair. The new picture threw me off balance.
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2011-02-27, 17:24 | Link #497 |
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The grey colored hair was because of my limited shopping ability. I wanted to turn it black from the start, but I failed to do successfully...
You could always shade the original color black? Sorry... Btw, I'm missing the anime reference here... What shuttle accident?
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2011-02-27, 17:54 | Link #498 |
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Yeah I could do that without problems.. but it pains me to change my pictures. Call it "artist's pride".
Actually I wanted to write "car accident" but I thought I stay a little Sci-Fi... I'm not 100% sure but I think Terminator was making a KimiNozo reference.
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2011-02-27, 18:13 | Link #499 |
Archangelic Demon Vampire
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@Kyral: Yep.
Ok.. I've decided that I'd change Sophia's unit so that it's more unique and not an amalgation of Haruka's and Sarah's units... Also, Alex's newest Harem entry is coming up soon, should post em when I wake up (plus complete exlpanation about the plasma stuff and how it works. Should also get a sneak shot of the OD-EXIS-02 Samael.)
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