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ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-11, 12:35

I was conflicted about that really.

By Volume 6, he is on par with most I.S. cadet rep, this despite total time spent in training is roughly 6 months. As frame of reference: Laura has 3.5 years experience, Kanzashi, Cecilia and Charles is 2.5 years, and Rin is 1.5 year.

His advancement doesn't go unnoticed by individuals and organizations alike, Phantom Task included. (especially that by this point, he already beat 3 next-gen Image Interface Weapon)

Problem is, if he drafted as a Representative, what country he will represent of? As Japan's rep, that'll cause a lot of drama with kanzashi, more than I wanted, but I can't think of any other country either.

Eratas123 · 2012-03-11, 12:37

As I said, Kanzashi's a rep candidate. She wouldn't get pissed at Ichika if he becomes the cadet since that doesn't affect her at all. Sure, it impacts her handed of being the cast herself, but she doesn't seem to care about that and more on catching up to her Sis.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-11, 12:41

Makes sense.

Eratas123 · 2012-03-11, 12:47

On a side note, does it seem like she fell way too fast for him to you?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-11, 12:50

Haven't read V6 and V7, as I tell you, just small part of them.

Should I made her a true friend instead of another (hopeless) harem member, would fans went haywire?

Eratas123 · 2012-03-11, 12:54

Not really, most fans don't even seem to know she exists:/ Then again, I'm making Irish have a childish crush on her, so I'm not the best to talk. To be honest, she does sound like a good "best friend" character.

agetreme · 2012-03-11, 12:54

*sigh*

No idea at the moment.....

Emotion wanks is kind of difficult unless going outside IS.....no.... It must go outside IS.
edit: From outside to inside IS competition
Moar Edit: so far the only anime I got with such Concept is Cardfighter Vanguard.... the only threat the enemy opposed is being the winner of a trading card game.

It need breaking the mold....of having a male character as a lead....which is very hard because I had nothing to work on.....everybody go for (edit: Military) male lead path.....

Female Lead path is really boring... unless I K-on-ed it...but I really hate K-on.

Character need to be in same class with Ichika... otherwise it reduce Canon character's appearance.....

Really need to rework on my brain....

May be I should take notes from my Shakugan no Shana fanfic idea...... topic which has not being touch on.....things which the main lead has easy.....

which is military porn-crap.....

I hate the transformer movie.... so NO.

other than that is mostly Tabane bashing.....Her selfishness....but point moot if her appearance is minimal (because she is still in hiding) in the story.

*sigh*

Final Edit: I just observed and I think I had an answer....

Just a theory:
Because the world revolved around Ichika.... He is in the center of the IS universe.....

If you notice other Fanfic, other Authors are basically making their at the center of their universe....

by giving their characters a presence bigger or equal to Ichika.....

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-11, 13:06

@ Age

Spoiler:

If you have problem, just strap name, personality and backstory to one of these girls, nobody will complain.

Take it easy, no need to argue about what you want to write. If you ask someone for opinion, you can use the opinion/critic or not, no need to rush.

EDIT: yes, basically what I do with Charles (by butchering her character and turn her into a guy). Though other people do it with OC instead.

@ Eras
Boy howdy. Then it's decided. :3

Eratas123 · 2012-03-11, 13:10

@'Senpai - If the place takes place in Odaiba, then why are there festivals and Yukata's?

Side note - You think people would get pissed if I end Future Kazuma's arc with him staying in the present and not getting killed off? I need more teen male characters.

@ Treme - I'm watching back to the future to get ideas

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-11, 13:33

Ehh? I thought The festival is held inside I.S.A.?

Kazuma stay here? I dunno, I'm more keen about in universe problem, but considering Kazuma already met his many counterpart.... then there should be no problem.

Eratas123 · 2012-03-11, 13:37

The Festival at V4 and OVA. Don't you remember?

As Tabane explains it, they're technically different people since they're not in their own timeline. Other than that, do you have any suggestions for another male teen? I'm trying to make an Id, ego, and superego trio.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-11, 13:39

I don't watch OVA and apparently only read chapter1 and 4 of V4....

All in all, Kazuma is the only one I'm familiar with, and might be superego compared to other kids.

Eratas123 · 2012-03-11, 13:42

Uh....didn't you post on the OVA topic about the festival?

Saito's (Kanzashi's) is actually the SuperEgo. Kazuma's just as dysfunctional as the rest and an Emotionless boy (Later on) to boot. Future Kazuma's is like Irish on rage meds.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-11, 13:46

Ehhhh????

Well, then, as I said I'm not too familiar with the kids.

Eratas123 · 2012-03-11, 13:49

Anyway, why would there be a shrine in the by city? Are festivals like that commonplace?

I have a feeling most of my readers will leave if I add more than one teen male character, CC, OC, or whatever.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-11, 13:50

OH SHI-I was messing up with chronology again.

Yes, every city in Japan always have a shrine or two.

I wonder about that, the readers seems to like the kids.

Eratas123 · 2012-03-11, 13:53

It's mostly just filler and Houki shiptease. Still, FI's a humor/romance story, so I'mmgoijg to have to add it along with Onsen, Carnival, Beach, etc etc.

You going to include it? Madoka in a Kimono

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-11, 14:02

That reminds me... I lacked the time to develop the relationship between characters, what with Madoka pushed BITs upward so Houki and Ichika can kiss. Wat.

Yes, Madoka in kimono, who instead of going commando... is using a boxer, denying a crotch shot during strenuous activities.

Eratas123 · 2012-03-11, 14:04

Uh....people don't go commando when they wear kimono's. Guy's wear a version of Kimono, and they still wear underwear.

Anyway, the Festival scene you cooked up sounds fun. What activities are you talking about?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-03-11, 14:14

Well, some people are genre savvy about how impractical panty-less kimono is (though ultra-traditionalist ALWAYS going commando anyway), but chances that panty shot could happen sometimes. Justified, those people are girls...

Maybe the usual, games, traditional tennis (this one was what Madoka fear of).

2012-03-11, 12:35	Link #25421
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	I was conflicted about that really. By Volume 6, he is on par with most I.S. cadet rep, this despite total time spent in training is roughly 6 months. As frame of reference: Laura has 3.5 years experience, Kanzashi, Cecilia and Charles is 2.5 years, and Rin is 1.5 year. His advancement doesn't go unnoticed by individuals and organizations alike, Phantom Task included. (especially that by this point, he already beat 3 next-gen Image Interface Weapon) Problem is, if he drafted as a Representative, what country he will represent of? As Japan's rep, that'll cause a lot of drama with kanzashi, more than I wanted, but I can't think of any other country either. __________________

2012-03-11, 12:37	Link #25422
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	As I said, Kanzashi's a rep candidate. She wouldn't get pissed at Ichika if he becomes the cadet since that doesn't affect her at all. Sure, it impacts her handed of being the cast herself, but she doesn't seem to care about that and more on catching up to her Sis. __________________

2012-03-11, 12:41	Link #25423
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Makes sense. __________________

2012-03-11, 12:47	Link #25424
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	On a side note, does it seem like she fell way too fast for him to you? __________________

2012-03-11, 12:50	Link #25425
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Haven't read V6 and V7, as I tell you, just small part of them. Should I made her a true friend instead of another (hopeless) harem member, would fans went haywire? __________________

2012-03-11, 12:54	Link #25426
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Not really, most fans don't even seem to know she exists:/ Then again, I'm making Irish have a childish crush on her, so I'm not the best to talk. To be honest, she does sound like a good "best friend" character. __________________

2012-03-11, 12:54	Link #25427
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	sigh No idea at the moment..... Emotion wanks is kind of difficult unless going outside IS.....no.... It must go outside IS. edit: From outside to inside IS competition Moar Edit: so far the only anime I got with such Concept is Cardfighter Vanguard.... the only threat the enemy opposed is being the winner of a trading card game. It need breaking the mold....of having a male character as a lead....which is very hard because I had nothing to work on.....everybody go for (edit: Military) male lead path..... Female Lead path is really boring... unless I K-on-ed it...but I really hate K-on. Character need to be in same class with Ichika... otherwise it reduce Canon character's appearance..... Really need to rework on my brain.... May be I should take notes from my Shakugan no Shana fanfic idea...... topic which has not being touch on.....things which the main lead has easy..... which is military porn-crap..... I hate the transformer movie.... so NO. other than that is mostly Tabane bashing.....Her selfishness....but point moot if her appearance is minimal (because she is still in hiding) in the story. sigh Final Edit: I just observed and I think I had an answer.... Just a theory: Because the world revolved around Ichika.... He is in the center of the IS universe..... If you notice other Fanfic, other Authors are basically making their at the center of their universe.... by giving their characters a presence bigger or equal to Ichika..... __________________ Ara Han Last edited by agetreme; 2012-03-11 at 13:04.

2012-03-11, 13:06	Link #25428
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@ Age Spoiler: If you have problem, just strap name, personality and backstory to one of these girls, nobody will complain. Take it easy, no need to argue about what you want to write. If you ask someone for opinion, you can use the opinion/critic or not, no need to rush. EDIT: yes, basically what I do with Charles (by butchering her character and turn her into a guy). Though other people do it with OC instead. @ Eras Boy howdy. Then it's decided. :3 __________________

2012-03-11, 13:10	Link #25429
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@'Senpai - If the place takes place in Odaiba, then why are there festivals and Yukata's? Side note - You think people would get pissed if I end Future Kazuma's arc with him staying in the present and not getting killed off? I need more teen male characters. @ Treme - I'm watching back to the future to get ideas __________________

2012-03-11, 13:33	Link #25430
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Ehh? I thought The festival is held inside I.S.A.? Kazuma stay here? I dunno, I'm more keen about in universe problem, but considering Kazuma already met his many counterpart.... then there should be no problem. __________________

2012-03-11, 13:37	Link #25431
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	The Festival at V4 and OVA. Don't you remember? As Tabane explains it, they're technically different people since they're not in their own timeline. Other than that, do you have any suggestions for another male teen? I'm trying to make an Id, ego, and superego trio. __________________

2012-03-11, 13:39	Link #25432
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	I don't watch OVA and apparently only read chapter1 and 4 of V4.... All in all, Kazuma is the only one I'm familiar with, and might be superego compared to other kids. __________________

2012-03-11, 13:42	Link #25433
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Uh....didn't you post on the OVA topic about the festival? Saito's (Kanzashi's) is actually the SuperEgo. Kazuma's just as dysfunctional as the rest and an Emotionless boy (Later on) to boot. Future Kazuma's is like Irish on rage meds. __________________

2012-03-11, 13:46	Link #25434
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Ehhhh???? Well, then, as I said I'm not too familiar with the kids. __________________

2012-03-11, 13:49	Link #25435
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Anyway, why would there be a shrine in the by city? Are festivals like that commonplace? I have a feeling most of my readers will leave if I add more than one teen male character, CC, OC, or whatever. __________________

2012-03-11, 13:50	Link #25436
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	OH SHI-I was messing up with chronology again. Yes, every city in Japan always have a shrine or two. I wonder about that, the readers seems to like the kids. __________________

2012-03-11, 13:53	Link #25437
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	It's mostly just filler and Houki shiptease. Still, FI's a humor/romance story, so I'mmgoijg to have to add it along with Onsen, Carnival, Beach, etc etc. You going to include it? Madoka in a Kimono __________________

2012-03-11, 14:02	Link #25438
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	That reminds me... I lacked the time to develop the relationship between characters, what with Madoka pushed BITs upward so Houki and Ichika can kiss. Wat. Yes, Madoka in kimono, who instead of going commando... is using a boxer, denying a crotch shot during strenuous activities. __________________

2012-03-11, 14:04	Link #25439
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Uh....people don't go commando when they wear kimono's. Guy's wear a version of Kimono, and they still wear underwear. Anyway, the Festival scene you cooked up sounds fun. What activities are you talking about? __________________

2012-03-11, 14:14	Link #25440
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Well, some people are genre savvy about how impractical panty-less kimono is (though ultra-traditionalist ALWAYS going commando anyway), but chances that panty shot could happen sometimes. Justified, those people are girls... Maybe the usual, games, traditional tennis (this one was what Madoka fear of). __________________