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Yachiyo · 2012-02-15, 08:52

I'm sleepy.... I think I'll go to bed now.

Last announcement. I posted chapter 6.

I'm like an announcer, a stupid one

demino_hellsin · 2012-02-15, 08:55

Hmm I was thinking Ichika could be conditioning himself during his everyday chores and a little extra exercise. What he'd really lack is technique since he's just making it up as he goes along as well as experience from the little troubles every teen his age should be getting into

Eratas123 · 2012-02-15, 08:55

@ Senpai - This seems more like a drama or tele novella than a shonen series.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-15, 08:58

Lol, someone noted in TvTropes that chapter 11 is Dramedy (Drama-comedy)

Eratas123 · 2012-02-15, 09:03

@ Senpai - Seems to get darker as the story goes on. Speaking of which, is it all right to add dark moments if the genre of a story is Romance/Humor?

Side note - If someone adopted you and they're only a few years older than you, would you call them as mom/dad or big bro/big sis?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-15, 09:09

Well, chapter 11 to 13 is expected to be First Wham Arc anyway, gets lighter for a while, tension raised a little with personal fight between Ichika and Laura in the individual tournament. Cue Beach arc after that... and Silver Gospel. Mood Whiplash indeed

Note - It's really depend on conclusive agreement between the two

Eratas123 · 2012-02-15, 09:15

@ Senpai - I plan to end the latest chapter with foreshadowing. After harem antics, all of them agree to take their respective kid and retire for the night. Kazuma asks to stay behind for a few minutes since he says he's tired. When Ichika leaves, he takes out a cracked white bracelet from his pocket and mutters "....Legacy".

Side note - Thinkthe harem girls will feel odd being called mom?

@ Demi - So what will you update first? Cake eater or Icarus?

demino_hellsin · 2012-02-15, 09:19

I'm not even sure now... Been stuck on a concept for GN tech mobile suit @_@

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-15, 09:20

Yes, some of them will be repulsed at first, but accept it anyway.

Eratas123 · 2012-02-15, 09:22

@ Demi - GN tech?

@ Senpai - Think the foreshadowing's too heavy? I have the foreshadowing subtlety of a brick.

Side note - It might get odd if the kids refer to them as big sis rather than mom or dad.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-15, 09:25

Nah, it's better than have the reader calling asspull, chapter 12 Sacred Twins is BRIMMING with it.

Note - some anime shown the kid calling their parents with -san, again, it's really depend on the agreement.

GN Tech is technology came from Gundam 00, I use that as the basis of Fanon!ByakuShiki and later Fanon!ShiroKishi and Fanon!Silent Zephyr.

demino_hellsin · 2012-02-15, 09:25

gundam 00... I was imagining what it might be like to be an add-on to a main squad. You know, a reserve fighter? Then that popped up.

Eratas123 · 2012-02-15, 09:27

I haven't watched Gundam in a while. Destiny killed my interest for a while.

@ Senpai - Does saying "Living legacy" imply that the previous person is dead?

demino_hellsin · 2012-02-15, 09:27

legacy in general denotes the donor is dead.

Eratas123 · 2012-02-15, 09:32

Well, my brick level foreshadowing strikes again.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-15, 09:33

@ Demi

I've been busy creating a fanon world for To-Love-Ru cast set in Gundam SEED universe exactly before I wrote TLR Stratos, and confused about Rito's roles (as Kira's replacement or the usual Fanon-made faction).

Also, legacy may refer to "Walking in the same path/ continuing what's left by the former generation". Dead or not, legacy implies that the former has retired from that duty and PASSED IT to the next generation.

Eratas123 · 2012-02-15, 09:35

@'Senpai - How about something more ambiguous like "Can I keep my promise now?"?

demino_hellsin · 2012-02-15, 09:37

@zero: well yes, that's also a definition of legacy.

I'm just quite used to it being just "something I leave behind"

Also, Astra Exodus was supposed to use the monopole engine which was basically a relabelled GN drive. But if that was the case, it would have been more appropriate to call it a TD drive or a big bang engine.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-15, 09:42

@ Eras
Sure why not?

@ Demi
Or Proton Decay reactor

Spoiler for Off topic but just weird:

Eratas123 · 2012-02-15, 09:44

@ Senpai - Think it'll be easy to figure out he's a clone? He has no mother during the grouping and says he doesn't remember anything before getting to ISA.

Side note - Did you Shop that yourself?

2012-02-15, 08:52	Link #22281
Yachiyo ~`Seito Kaichō`~ Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: ~`Afterlife`~	I'm sleepy.... I think I'll go to bed now. Last announcement. I posted chapter 6. I'm like an announcer, a stupid one __________________

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - This seems more like a drama or tele novella than a shonen series. __________________

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Lol, someone noted in TvTropes that chapter 11 is Dramedy (Drama-comedy) __________________

2012-02-15, 09:03	Link #22285
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - Seems to get darker as the story goes on. Speaking of which, is it all right to add dark moments if the genre of a story is Romance/Humor? Side note - If someone adopted you and they're only a few years older than you, would you call them as mom/dad or big bro/big sis? __________________

2012-02-15, 09:09	Link #22286
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Well, chapter 11 to 13 is expected to be First Wham Arc anyway, gets lighter for a while, tension raised a little with personal fight between Ichika and Laura in the individual tournament. Cue Beach arc after that... and Silver Gospel. Mood Whiplash indeed Note - It's really depend on conclusive agreement between the two __________________

2012-02-15, 08:55	Link #22282
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Hmm I was thinking Ichika could be conditioning himself during his everyday chores and a little extra exercise. What he'd really lack is technique since he's just making it up as he goes along as well as experience from the little troubles every teen his age should be getting into

2012-02-15, 09:15	Link #22287
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - I plan to end the latest chapter with foreshadowing. After harem antics, all of them agree to take their respective kid and retire for the night. Kazuma asks to stay behind for a few minutes since he says he's tired. When Ichika leaves, he takes out a cracked white bracelet from his pocket and mutters "....Legacy". Side note - Thinkthe harem girls will feel odd being called mom? @ Demi - So what will you update first? Cake eater or Icarus? __________________

2012-02-15, 09:19	Link #22288
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	I'm not even sure now... Been stuck on a concept for GN tech mobile suit @_@

2012-02-15, 09:20	Link #22289
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Yes, some of them will be repulsed at first, but accept it anyway. __________________

2012-02-15, 09:22	Link #22290
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Demi - GN tech? @ Senpai - Think the foreshadowing's too heavy? I have the foreshadowing subtlety of a brick. Side note - It might get odd if the kids refer to them as big sis rather than mom or dad. __________________

2012-02-15, 09:25	Link #22291
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Nah, it's better than have the reader calling asspull, chapter 12 Sacred Twins is BRIMMING with it. Note - some anime shown the kid calling their parents with -san, again, it's really depend on the agreement. GN Tech is technology came from Gundam 00, I use that as the basis of Fanon!ByakuShiki and later Fanon!ShiroKishi and Fanon!Silent Zephyr. __________________

2012-02-15, 09:25	Link #22292
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	gundam 00... I was imagining what it might be like to be an add-on to a main squad. You know, a reserve fighter? Then that popped up.

2012-02-15, 09:27	Link #22293
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I haven't watched Gundam in a while. Destiny killed my interest for a while. @ Senpai - Does saying "Living legacy" imply that the previous person is dead? __________________

2012-02-15, 09:27	Link #22294
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	legacy in general denotes the donor is dead.

2012-02-15, 09:32	Link #22295
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Well, my brick level foreshadowing strikes again. __________________

2012-02-15, 09:33	Link #22296
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@ Demi I've been busy creating a fanon world for To-Love-Ru cast set in Gundam SEED universe exactly before I wrote TLR Stratos, and confused about Rito's roles (as Kira's replacement or the usual Fanon-made faction). Also, legacy may refer to "Walking in the same path/ continuing what's left by the former generation". Dead or not, legacy implies that the former has retired from that duty and PASSED IT to the next generation. __________________

2012-02-15, 09:35	Link #22297
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@'Senpai - How about something more ambiguous like "Can I keep my promise now?"? __________________

2012-02-15, 09:37	Link #22298
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	@zero: well yes, that's also a definition of legacy. I'm just quite used to it being just "something I leave behind" Also, Astra Exodus was supposed to use the monopole engine which was basically a relabelled GN drive. But if that was the case, it would have been more appropriate to call it a TD drive or a big bang engine.

2012-02-15, 09:42	Link #22299
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@ Eras Sure why not? @ Demi Or Proton Decay reactor Spoiler for Off topic but just weird: __________________

2012-02-15, 09:44	Link #22300
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - Think it'll be easy to figure out he's a clone? He has no mother during the grouping and says he doesn't remember anything before getting to ISA. Side note - Did you Shop that yourself? __________________