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Lumine Passio
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2013-11-10, 07:21 | Link #48242 | |
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2013-11-10, 09:29 | Link #48245 | |
Fear the Spear
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Okay, another sample piece of my IS/KR idea.
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2013-11-10, 10:19 | Link #48248 |
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After thinking about it, I realized that the Infinite Stratos world is actually a ripe world for a Neo-feudal Sci-fi epic, along the lines of the world of Mechwarrior. Imagine, that a few decades or even a century after the invention of IS, the world is plunged into some kind of nuclear war, or equivalent apocalyptic scenario. As a result of the chaos and breakdown of Civilization throughout the world, in the aftermath, surviving IS pilots and surviving Cores forms a warrior aristocracy of sorts.
There seems to be a few kinks in this scenario though. For one, presuming IS Cores eventually wear out, and presuming that they are destructible by means of Nuclear weapons (or other wise), the number of IS Cores available in a post-apocalyptic world will steadily shrink. Secondly, if IS pilots tend not to pass down their IS compatibility to their children, then, we would not get the model of a European hereditary Aristocracy, but rather, the model of a Mameluk Nobility of the Later Medieval- Early Modern Middle East. On the other hand, if indeed, the fact that siblings with IS compatibility suggests that the daughters of IS pilots would also be compatible with IS, and cores are sufficiently durable to last millenniums, it's very likely that in a potential Post-apocalyptic Infinite Stratos scenario, IS Cores would tend to be passed down family lines whose founders already owned, or managed to secure IS Cores immediately after, during or before such an apocalypse. Families with excess IS cores may well scour the populations under their jurisdiction for compatible retainers and clients, though the risk is that such Cores may fall out of said families Control. I would imagine that eventually, unless these Retainers are sterilized to prevent other family lines from emerging, we may well get a multi-tiered nobility system, where the the power of an Aristocrat is dependent on how advanced her core is. It is possible that under such a system, combat would tend to be rather ritualized, and deliberately intended to prevent the destruction of an IS Core. It frightens me that a Harem Scenario may well still be easily conceivable in such a setting. Imagine an Aristocratic boy, whom, like Ichika, was found to be compatible with an IS Core, at about the time where civilization recovered to the point that new, though crude and primitive, compared to the most advanced IS Cores started to be made - and as a result places the entire Post Apocalyptic status quo under strain, as post-apocalyptic states begin to embark on an arms race, while conservatives attempt to resist the recruitment of IS compatible commoners to fill the numbers up. That boy may well have no shortage of suitors, even more so than Ichika. |
2013-11-10, 18:28 | Link #48250 |
L'anticipation du pouvoir
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Sarashiki's Champion
The tale of a man who may save or destroy the world. The chronicle of a man who lost his family and found a new. The story of the strongest man who existed! Sarashiki Ichika! I was in front of her grave, wearing the tuxedo Sarashiki-san gave me. The ceremony ended and everybody left, left me alone. All these people tried to talk with me, but I just ignored them, so they left as the coward they were. They didn't understand that I disliked them, who came with their pity and their false tears. Not one of them really knew my sister or even tried to know and understand her. They didn't understand why I didn't cry. Why did I need to cry? Why did I need to show them my sadness? Why did they need to be sure I loved my sister? I can't understand these adults that were waiting to hear my tears and my screams. Why Tabane-san and Houki or even obaa-chan couldn't come? Only people that came were I and people that had maybe known Chifuyu-nee. Why did people I trust weren't here? I didn't see them since 2 days, since nee-sama's... death. After I talked with Sarashiki-san, I came back to my home. During 2 days, I didn't come to school. My school called sometimes but I didn't respond. I was too tired. This home was filled with memories of her and each noise I heard, I thought it was her. I thought it was only a horrib;le nightmare and that I just awoke. But... the nightmare wouldn't end, so I went to her room. To be sure... of what, I didn't know. I rested in her bed all the night while my whole body was shivering. The second night, I didn't sleep, I searched info about Sarashiki Tatenashi. I used the whole night and there are informations on him I still didn't know. I read some infos very interesting, like he was the head of his clan, the Sarashiki Clan. He was very well known to be the hardest man to beat in business. Also, his clan was very well known to be the clan who provides weapons and the best tacticians to the government. He was himself known as a excellent tactician and he went in Afghanistan, some years ago. I slowly approached the grave and put a bunch of flowers on it. These flowers were white orchids, the flower she loved the most. Loved... I already started to talk of her in the past, however it was just 2 days she died. 'Why are my thoughts always returning to her and her death?' I asked silently. Someone approached me and put his hand on my right shoulder. "I will go now, Ichika-kun. What is your answer?" I raised my head to see that man. The man who said that he will be my new family and the only person that had the decency to not come here with tears in his eyes, as he knew my Nee-sama. He didn't go unnoticed in a group of Japanese, with his blue hair, his red eyes and his tall body. But I don't think that annoyed him, after all, Sarashiki Tatenashi was loving how everybody pays attention to him. The most important thing about this man is that he was an old friend of my family... I didn't know if I must be happy or unhappy that he came here and offered me to go with him in his world. The world Nee-sama tried to keep me away from. When I think of what Nee-san tried to do... It's no important for the moment. She died and it was my turn to take a decision. I sighed, my decision was already took his, and the man behind knew that. "Where are we go?" I asked after one moment of silence. He smiled then turned towards the exit of the cemetery. "You'll see..." He said. After this mysterious sentence, he started to walk forwards without waiting for me. Really, this man... Whatever. I returned to her grave and reread it. Rest In Peace: Orimura Chifuyu February 28, 2001- October 18, 2017 The first tears I cried since a very long time started to flow. "Nee-sama... I won't forget you and what you said." I whispered.
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2013-11-10, 18:33 | Link #48251 |
Tenshi's Defense Squadron
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Are you the author for that fic? I liked it pretty much. Although, like what I suggested on ff.net, you should put more family dynamics on HOW Ichika helped to shape the Sarashiki sisters.
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2013-11-10, 19:01 | Link #48252 | |
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2013-11-11, 06:07 | Link #48257 | |
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Please don`t remind me the Martial Law, my grandfather described it as hell. PM(Marcos) killed many of his political opponents and one of their deaths caused the EDSA I.
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2013-11-11, 08:34 | Link #48259 |
Fear the Spear
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Another piece of my xover idea.
As Takeshi walks along the hallway for his first class, he can't help but feel pressure, even if he already had some experience in teaching. Well, a class of delinquents is different compared to a class full of young girls. As he stopped at the front of the entrance, he heard Chifuyu saying something to the students inside the classroom. "Okay, listen up. You have a new Physics teacher." Chifuyu announced. "What?" "A new teacher in this school?" As Class 1-A started to become noisy, because of excitement and curiosity, the aforementioned new teacher made his entrance. "Enough chatter. Show some respect." Chifuyu commanded, which the class fearfully abided. "My name is Takeshi Hongo. And I'm going to be your new Physics teacher for this semester. I hope we could get along." he introduced himself. A moment of silence followed. Then... "Kyaaaaah!" "Another male!" "It's a teacher this time!" The whole class goes into a euphoria.
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2013-11-11, 08:37 | Link #48260 |
Lumine Passio
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"AH-CHOOO!... So cold!..."
"My my, Ichika-kun. How did you've got a cold?" "Chifuyu-nee... made me... run 10 laps around the school... with Byakkushiki on my back... AH-CHOO!!!" "Dear... But don't worry, because your Onee-chan is here! Wait me for a minute!" (1 Minute latter) "Ta-da!" "Tate... Tatenashi-san, what are you wearing?!" "Isn't it obvious? This is my "nurse" outfit! Or... Maybe Ichika-kun prefers something more... Revealing..." "Bu... But..." "Now, now. It's time for your pill! Say "Ah"!" "... Could I refuse it?" "Of course not!" ... And that's how Ichika Orimura made a vow of never to get sick again. ... Finally, my mood has return! Betaing Akisa's work sure has a good influenced! I must compliment her plot line, still, too many flaws in the way of word. |
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