(L) Maou no Hajimekata

[kagato3]

Originally Posted by Ruki0089

So... Yunis will return right??

Well if you really want to know

Spoiler for major spoilers. i mean for everything in part 1.:

Yunis
Yunis is kidnapped by her family who are also heroes and killed by her brother while Aur isis trying to resuce her and being a hero she can't be raised from the dead as her soul goes directly to heaven. The last arc is him trying to get her back. As he preserves her body he needs to get her soul back he atacks a country run by a holy child prophet Mary who is cursed with unageing inmortality. She summons back the souls of some of the heros including Yunis and her family. Yunis turns on the other heroes when they get in the dungeon and in the end possess her own body. Aur ends up beating Mary by giving her what she truly wants a way to grow old and die by linking her to Marie who he cursed to grow healtly. In the end Yunis has Aur's only son who is marked as the hero of heaven a hero so strong that it is unlikely another hero would be born for 100 years. Everyone says screw that as heroes always have a trigic fate and they have to hold off an angel invasion as his fate is being rewritten. Her family also hang around the dungeon.

Spina
Yunis' death causes her to go a bit mad with fear so she ends up turning herself into a near immortal magic eating half slime and beats Aur and comes very close to sealing themselves away forever together until Lilu knocks some sence back into her. Has funniet line in the series comes from the valentine's story where she made an unstoppable shape shifting thing as she keeps trying to tell people "it's not a monster, it's chocolate" and has been banned from ever cooking again.

Lilu
Ok for this one I need to explain Aur's background. Aur was a war orphan that was taken in by a mage when he was 13. They fell in love but she was the one that was making the weapons of war that was allowing one country to star all the wars. Do to her guilt she stopped makeing weapons. The country desided to lay siege to her tower and Aur planned to give himself up claiming he was the cause to save his teacher. She forced him to kill her useing his true name to save him. Lilu was born from his teacher's soul and ended up recovering the memories of her past life. She is no longer technically bound by her contract.

Mio
ends the series as a max level beastmaster able to control armies of beast as if they were her own arms and legs. Names every one in pretty much aphabetical order. encounters usaly go "why's there a farm girl here" right before dragon or other fire breathing beast rape. Know as the demon lord of beasts one of her beasts is the FF bonus boss level strongest dragon which she buffs.

Marie
Ends up being a bad ass at 13. learns magic from Aur and Lilu, the sword from Yunis, and Mary teaches her the ways to bend the laws of reality that the angels use. Can somehow weild 4 swords (2 of them float) and still has Logan in her shadow at 13. curb stomps a legion of angels when they come for Aur's son.

Aur
Rules much of the coninent brings an end to a lot of conflict including the elven conflict, has a lot of daugters. Oh and he can use the entire dungon as a golem body.

[Ruki0089]

So... In the end yunis is return and bear his son... Good~

[haseo0408]

Originally Posted by kagato3

Well if you really want to know

Spoiler for major spoilers. i mean for everything in part 1.:

Yunis
Yunis is kidnapped by her family who are also heroes and killed by her brother while Aur isis trying to resuce her and being a hero she can't be raised from the dead as her soul goes directly to heaven. The last arc is him trying to get her back. As he preserves her body he needs to get her soul back he atacks a country run by a holy child prophet Mary who is cursed with unageing inmortality. She summons back the souls of some of the heros including Yunis and her family. Yunis turns on the other heroes when they get in the dungeon and in the end possess her own body. Aur ends up beating Mary by giving her what she truly wants a way to grow old and die by linking her to Marie who he cursed to grow healtly. In the end Yunis has Aur's only son who is marked as the hero of heaven a hero so strong that it is unlikely another hero would be born for 100 years. Everyone says screw that as heroes always have a trigic fate and they have to hold off an angel invasion as his fate is being rewritten. Her family also hang around the dungeon.

Spina
Yunis' death causes her to go a bit mad with fear so she ends up turning herself into a near immortal magic eating half slime and beats Aur and comes very close to sealing themselves away forever together until Lilu knocks some sence back into her. Has funniet line in the series comes from the valentine's story where she made an unstoppable shape shifting thing as she keeps trying to tell people "it's not a monster, it's chocolate" and has been banned from ever cooking again.

Lilu
Ok for this one I need to explain Aur's background. Aur was a war orphan that was taken in by a mage when he was 13. They fell in love but she was the one that was making the weapons of war that was allowing one country to star all the wars. Do to her guilt she stopped makeing weapons. The country desided to lay siege to her tower and Aur planned to give himself up claiming he was the cause to save his teacher. She forced him to kill her useing his true name to save him. Lilu was born from his teacher's soul and ended up recovering the memories of her past life. She is no longer technically bound by her contract.

Mio
ends the series as a max level beastmaster able to control armies of beast as if they were her own arms and legs. Names every one in pretty much aphabetical order. encounters usaly go "why's there a farm girl here" right before dragon or other fire breathing beast rape. Know as the demon lord of beasts one of her beasts is the FF bonus boss level strongest dragon which she buffs.

Marie
Ends up being a bad ass at 13. learns magic from Aur and Lilu, the sword from Yunis, and Mary teaches her the ways to bend the laws of reality that the angels use. Can somehow weild 4 swords (2 of them float) and still has Logan in her shadow at 13. curb stomps a legion of angels when they come for Aur's son.

Aur
Rules much of the coninent brings an end to a lot of conflict including the elven conflict, has a lot of daugters. Oh and he can use the entire dungon as a golem body.

Spoiler for Aur:

You know that the world is insane when the Demon Lord is a better king than any other bastard in the world, Aur might be evil but at least he does some good for the continent at the end, not bad for a man that hates humanity above all else.

[kagato3]

Originally Posted by haseo0408

Spoiler for Aur:

You know that the world is insane when the Demon Lord is a better king than any other bastard in the world, Aur might be evil but at least he does some good for the continent at the end, not bad for a man that hates humanity above all else.

Spoiler for spoiler:

Aur is pretty much neutral mostly because it is practical. It never really
gets into if he ever collects any more virgins as that was put on hold once Mio, Merry, and Spina were taken but even if he did they ended up with a much better life as the underground city that forms up on the lower level is quite nice. As a ruler he is pretty kind he mostly leaves the existing people to run the government but tends to lower taxes as he doesn't need money as well as works to prevent
famine and improve health. Cass is the only antagonist in the first part that doesn't end up on Aur'so side: mayor of the fist town is a ghost that trains adventurers and fights to protect the dungeon , YunIs wife, Allen's group wives and he even regains a bit of himself and sees them as dear companions rather than his things, yunis's family joined up after st Mary did, Elf queen wife, Saint Mary friend/wife.

[XFire]

So who's this Elf Queen I keep hearing about? Any spoilers?

[kagato3]

Originally Posted by XFire

So who's this Elf Queen I keep hearing about? Any spoilers?

Her name is Ceres. She's the blond elf pictured here http://novel18.syosetu.com/n6426w/1/ . She's mostly a side character after her 4 chapter arc, which includes the war , her and Ellen are almost always together as a unit. For reference the queen and princesses covered 2 chapters and taking over the city before Allen showed up was 4 chapters.

[OmegaWeaponZ]

I like how theres 8 bit sprites next to each character

A quick aside, how important are the dark elves (and their leader) in the later chapters. I'm still early on in the manga, and will most likely start with the LN, like I generally do.

[kagato3]

Originally Posted by OmegaWeaponZ

I like how theres 8 bit sprites next to each character

A quick aside, how important are the dark elves (and their leader) in the later chapters. I'm still early on in the manga, and will most likely start with the LN, like I generally do.

They are around but mostly teir 2 or 3 characters. Ellen gets a little more focus than the others.. They are just mostly Aur's elite foot solders and extras for romps but are out classed by Yunis , Logan, and Mio in terms of combat ablity. They show up more than the queen and her 2 daughters , Faru and Nome (the halfling thief and human? Merchant)

[Tzanna]

The wait will be tough. But the satisfaction of seeing the "bastard" die will be immense!

[kagato3]

Good luck on that waiting.

Anyway summary of part 2 of the wn. 10 year time skip ft part 1.

Spoiler for spoiler:

Ep1
Around 10 years after part 1 a new continent has been discovered to the east. Aur and his wives plan out an expedition to investigate it to make sure they don't invade and bring war to his peacefully lands. The choice of who to send is limited as Yunis is still watching her young son, Ellen, Ceres and the elves are good in combat but not too good at jugement. The adventurer trio is not strong enough to say they might not die if there is strong forces there. Logan stands out too much. Mio is real strong but too focused on beasts so would not be good for gathering info on the people. In the end Aur and Lil go.

Once on the new continent Aur use a dungeon seed to make a base but something goes a bit wrong as it seems to have linked itself to a nearby forest that has high mana and Aur and Lil are separated By the dungeon growth.

As Aur travels he realizes he's not alone and traps the person following him and finds out it is Mary. Restraint sexy time "punishment " for stowing away follow . They make their way to the dungeon core and find a baby in it Aur is able to make out it is a spiritual being. Once he has regained control of the new dungeon he has Yunis gate in Yunis and Spina and Lil finally makes her way to the core. Mary names the baby Sophie after the strongest, noble and beautiful person she knows much to Spina's annoyance .

That night since those 4 are there the reenact the events of the first day Spina and Mary came to the dungeon 10 years ago. More sexy time follows.

Ep2
Everyone wants a bath but do to the location not being on a Dragon vain like the other dungeon there isn't much magic power to dig a hot spring or support beings like imps and kolbalds to do in manually and because it linked to the forest it's bigger than expected but very close to the surface. So Aur plans on using another dungeon seed on the beach to make a water way into the dungeon . This leads to issues with using salt water which leads to purification would produce salt and there would be fish which leads to Lil wanting a kitchen to cook for Aur.

Mary and Aur go back to the beach and find the ship they came on has been ransacked they investigate a bit but don't really find anything so they plant the new DS and ride back to the dungeon in a construct made by Aur through the newly forming water way. Once they are back Lil calls them to the core where they are met by Sophie running at Mary calling out mom as she crashes into the shield Aur put up to protect Mary.

Sophie now looks to be 3 years old. As they are talking about it Sophie in the kitchen she cries out and Aur figures out that there is an intruder in the dungeon coming up the water way. Aur clones himself and heads down to confront the intruder. It turns out to be an mermaid with antler like horns. Aur is unable to understand her and prepares to fight.

Mary and Lil join in the fight and are finally able to beat her and trap her in a cell filled with water. As they are eating out side the cell the mermaid stare at the food with sparkles in her eyes and they figure out she ransacked the ship and started a fight to rob them of their food. Aur places a curse on her so she can't hurt them if they feed her they let her out and she changes her lower body to legs and digs in. They make out her name is Tatsuki. After eating Aur grabs her chest and she slaps him and hurt by the curse and rutruns back into the water way. Aur sure she will not return.

More to come

[mark1246]

Originally Posted by kagato3

Good luck on that waiting.

Anyway summary of part 2 of the wn. 10 year time skip ft part 1.

Spoiler for spoiler:

Ep1
Around 10 years after part 1 a new continent has been discovered to the east. Aur and his wives plan out an expedition to investigate it to make sure they don't invade and bring war to his peacefully lands. The choice of who to send is limited as Yunis is still watching her young son, Ellen, Ceres and the elves are good in combat but not too good at jugement. The adventurer trio is not strong enough to say they might not die if there is strong forces there. Logan stands out too much. Mio is real strong but too focused on beasts so would not be good for gathering info on the people. In the end Aur and Lil go.

Once on the new continent Aur use a dungeon seed to make a base but something goes a bit wrong as it seems to have linked itself to a nearby forest that has high mana and Aur and Lil are separated By the dungeon growth.

As Aur travels he realizes he's not alone and traps the person following him and finds out it is Mary. Restraint sexy time "punishment " for stowing away follow . They make their way to the dungeon core and find a baby in it Aur is able to make out it is a spiritual being. Once he has regained control of the new dungeon he has Yunis gate in Yunis and Spina and Lil finally makes her way to the core. Mary names the baby Sophie after the strongest, noble and beautiful person she knows much to Spina's annoyance .

That night since those 4 are there the reenact the events of the first day Spina and Mary came to the dungeon 10 years ago. More sexy time follows.

Ep2
Everyone wants a bath but do to the location not being on a Dragon vain like the other dungeon there isn't much magic power to dig a hot spring or support beings like imps and kolbalds to do in manually and because it linked to the forest it's bigger than expected but very close to the surface. So Aur plans on using another dungeon seed on the beach to make a water way into the dungeon . This leads to issues with using salt water which leads to purification would produce salt and there would be fish which leads to Lil wanting a kitchen to cook for Aur.

Mary and Aur go back to the beach and find the ship they came on has been ransacked they investigate a bit but don't really find anything so they plant the new DS and ride back to the dungeon in a construct made by Aur through the newly forming water way. Once they are back Lil calls them to the core where they are met by Sophie running at Mary calling out mom as she crashes into the shield Aur put up to protect Mary.

Sophie now looks to be 3 years old. As they are talking about it Sophie in the kitchen she cries out and Aur figures out that there is an intruder in the dungeon coming up the water way. Aur clones himself and heads down to confront the intruder. It turns out to be an mermaid with antler like horns. Aur is unable to understand her and prepares to fight.

Mary and Lil join in the fight and are finally able to beat her and trap her in a cell filled with water. As they are eating out side the cell the mermaid stare at the food with sparkles in her eyes and they figure out she ransacked the ship and started a fight to rob them of their food. Aur places a curse on her so she can't hurt them if they feed her they let her out and she changes her lower body to legs and digs in. They make out her name is Tatsuki. After eating Aur grabs her chest and she slaps him and hurt by the curse and rutruns back into the water way. Aur sure she will not return.

More to come

thanks for the past spoilers, mate. the latest raw chapter 26 came out & boy it following the spoiler you posted above. My question is how many chap/months do you think it will take to finish part 1? cause i didnt read the WN & dont know how long the plot is until they get yunis back

[kagato3]

Originally Posted by mark1246

thanks for the past spoilers, mate. the latest raw chapter 26 came out & boy it following the spoiler you posted above. My question is how many chap/months do you think it will take to finish part 1? cause i didnt read the WN & dont know how long the plot is until they get yunis back

If they keep to about 2 Web novel chapters an issue and there aren't massive changes part 1 would end in about 18 chapters. But that's if none of the side chapters are added in which seem to happen after the end of part 1 of which there are over 30.

[KPSJ]

so the Web novel is finished what is the complete story? how does everything end?

[kagato3]

Originally Posted by KPSJ

so the Web novel is finished what is the complete story? how does everything end?

Maybe, the first part ended in 2011 with a year or so of additional side stories then more were added when the wn was pcked up as a ln in 2015. Then the author added 2 more parts in 2016 to march 2017. I've only read it via MT so I loose a lot of the fine details and it hurts trying to make sense of some of the chapters so I've only got to half way through part 2

Spoiler for how it ends:

wives, babies and peace as Aur ends conflicts in his domain . He really is a tragic figure .
A war orphan taken in by the woman who made the weapons for the war who's guilt from that made her refuse to make any more resultin in their home being sieged and her forcing him to kill her his true love to save himeven though he was willing to die to save her. As a sign of how much this messed him up when he was a teacher a student confessed to him and he handed her a dagger and told her if she really loved him she would kill him.

[WyrdMonger]

^what became of said student? Did she reappear, or is she just an unimportant background character?

[kagato3]

Originally Posted by TemhotaTech

^what became of said student? Did she reappear, or is she just an unimportant background character?

She was only in the story for about a paragraph said event freaked her out.

[JWU0826]

How come there's no one posting anymore comment? The web novel haven't ended yet.

[marconii2002]

Manga chapter 17 was translated

[Lex79]

I'm happy it's picked up again. I tried looking for the official version but importing to Italy is just too expensive.

[haseo0408]

I just saw the raws for chapter 36 of the manga and the little girl Aur took in just grew up all of a sudden, am I missing something?.