Madoka Magica - FanFiction Discussion

[silvercover]

well, that "soap opera" is sort of something that I rarely and really want to see in other medias.

you probably havent heard it from me yet, but im someone who really like to watch various levels of character interaction and development, ranging from improving to decreasing. from my title as the romance expert, well I like seeing a web of relationships of course, multiple ones, and then watch how the characters start to unfold and break around it.

most of the time its not done properly in other medias, its either too cheesy or too dramatic. or the web is too simple, that the conflict turns into something minor and somewhat easy to resolve.
I like to see a scene where multiple people desire one another, or more than one person, and see how the characters would grow and develop. whether it leads to relationship improvement or decay, I would love to see it.

not sure if I myself have the potential to get it done properly, but im sure I can avoid making it be melodramatic/overdramatic and not so cheesy/generic like most others.


of course, I could also cut that part off, since it may be too much for me. but I believe its also necessary, at the very least it will be if I really want my ship to set sail properly. the relationships needs to get cleared up and settled, which means there will be people hurt but its a necessary step for character development.

if I dont do something like it, chances are my pairing will feel fake and forced.
well, I could certainly just tone down the relationships into simpler and fewer ones, but its not quite as fun and exciting for me.

[Szadek]

I think you are right about the relationships.
The characters are one of the reasons why I love the anime so much,well also because I can identify very well with Madoka.

I'm not much of a writer myself,in fact I never wrote a fanfiction before.
That's one of the reasons why I don't want to go too crazy and stick to only 2 or 3 characters.

Speaking of,I'm not sure how to handle Sayaka.
I could use her as little more than a plot device,but I think that would be a bit disrespectful.
I will figure something out.
It's not too far far-fetched that Sayaka and Homura were friends in 1 timeline or another,right?

I'm also thinking about telling each act from a different perspective.
Act 1 for example would be from Madoka's perspective or alternatively through her diary.
She never worte a diary in the show,but I think I have that much freedom as a writer.

[silvercover]

madoka had a diary I believe, or at least some notebook where she drew those magical girl outfits. its close enough to be a diary, or just assume it was a diary.

for sayaka and homura to be friends, well, you've got the different story manga for that one. id say they're at least friendly enough that sayaka can tell homura's tense and tries to loosen her up from the tension.

[Szadek]

I forgot about the notebook,that could work.
Either way I think it's ok the to give the characters everyday traits and hobbies.

I want to read the different story anyway,but now it's also part of my research.

[SPARTAN 119]

Not sure if this is the right place to post it, but here's a draft of chapter one of my Madoka/Ore ga Doutei o Sutetara Shinu Ken ni Tsuite crossover:

"About How I Made A Contract"

Spoiler for Ore Doutei Chapter 18 spoilers:

Madoka/Ore ga Doutei Crossover

Chapter 1:


Masaki Tanaka opened the door and walked across the threshold of his small apartment. It had been about one week since Masaki had visited what he thought was another mixer held by the head of a major Tokyo publishing company he was obligated to attend, but had turned into an event that would change everything, and all because of one chance meeting.


There, he had met Kazuya Ichijou, who had been his best friend until about his junior year in high school. It was at that time that they had grown apart, when something changed in Kazuya’s personality, and his fortunes. The previously mild mannered Kazuya had through a means that confounded Masaki to this day, had become extremely popular with women.

It seemed like every few weeks, he was going off with another girl, which naturally meant he and Masaki spent less and less time together, until they went their separate ways after they graduated.

While he did not publicly admit this, Masaki was, himself, still a virgin, though he was certain that, one of these days, he’d finally find the right person for him. All in all, Kazuya’s actions did not cause him much jealously.


Today, however, Masaki heard news about another of his old friends, one Rika Yoshino, Masaki’s old high school crush. Specifically, he had heard that Rika had died, chased onto train tracks by a man who had been stalking her. As soon as Masaki heard this, he could feel the rage burn within him like a fire. Masaki had mostly gotten over his crush on Rika, but part of him had always had a soft spot for her.

Masaki knew Kazuya had known Rika in college, so he called him up today to meet him at his apartment. When Masaki asked him about Rika, he said that he had a few one-night stands in college, that she had done that with many men, and seemed like the time that kept getting into bad relationships

The Kazuya told him something that ignited a fire inside Masaki, “I wasn’t really all that surprised”. Those six words meant that he knew Rika was troubled, that he was not surprised that she had ended up working in a brothel, not surprised that she was killed by some disgruntled client.


“How could he do something like this!?”, Masaki furious thought to himself as he walked into his apartment, “Did he not realize that her promiscuity was the result of a deeper psychological issue. At the moment, she needed someone to support her, not to toss her aside like a used rubber!”

“No doubt this just encouraged that dangerous behavior in her, just fucking anyone she felt like. And no doubt this stalker thought he had a shot too, and when she didn’t respond to his advance this happened!”, Masaki fumed, “It’s all Kazuya’s fault… that son of a bitch turned her into a victim!” For the first time, a dark thought entered his mind. He saw himself bursting into Kazuya’s apartment and placing his hand around his neck, choking him until he breathed no more.

Masaki’s rage-induced internal monologue was interrupted by something that made Masaki start, his anger instantly replaced by fear. It was a voice coming from the kitchen.

The fear, however, dissipated as quickly as it came, when Masaki’s brain registered the words the voice had spoken: “You have a most unusual potential, Masaki Tanaka”, the voice said in a high-pitched but still male voice.

Overcome by curiosity, Masaki switched on the light, to reveal something unlike anything he had seen before. Standing on his kitchen counter was a small creature the size of a house cat. The creature was mostly catlike, with all-white fur save for a circular red mark on its back. But it had a fox-like tail, and two long appendages of some description on top of its head, hanging like rabbit ears… but they couldn’t be ears- the creature already had a pair of what were obviously cat-like ears.

“What the hell are you!?”, Masaki asked in a shocked voice.

“My name is Kyubey”, the creature said, “I am a messenger of magic”.

“I must be dreaming, this sounds like something out of an anime”, Masaki thought.

Immediately, Kyubey said, “You are not dreaming, nor am I any sort of hallucination.”

“You can read my mind…”, Masaki asked nervously.

“In a manner of speaking”, Kyubey replied, “But that’s not why I’m here. As I said, you have rare potential for someone of your demographic group.”

“Potential”, Masaki snickered darkly, “Sure you’ve got the right guy? And what do you mean, “messenger of magic?”

“While you may not realize it, you are exactly the kind of person I am looking for.”, Kyubey responded, “Because of this potential, I am offering you a contract which will greatly benefit both of us.


“A contract, huh?”, Masaki asked, “What does that entail?”

“I will unlock your latent powers, which you will use to fight monsters know as “witches” that prey on humans.”, Kyubey said, “In return, I shall grant you any one wish you desire.”

Masaki thought about it. He was still not sure he believed this “Kyubey”, and was not even sure that he did, indeed, actually exist. Yet, on the other hand, if this thing was telling truth… if it could grant any wish….

“As a matter of fact, Masaki, I could prevent Rika Yoshino’s death. I could even rewrite your whole life so that she never ended up dating you instead of that boyfriend in high school, preventing this whole debacle from ever happening.”, Kyubey said.

“All right then, I’ll do it”, Masaki said, still not unsure as to whether this was actually a really weird dream.”

“Very well then”, Kyubey said, as the two appendages protruding from his head moved towards Masaki’s chest.

Masaki gave a shout of pain as he felt a burning sensation in his chest. Below him, he saw a glow of silver light appear in his chest.

“What the hell is going on!?”, Masaki asked, as he saw the ball of light levitate away from his chest. Kyubey ignored him and placed the ball of light right between the appendages on his head. At once, the ball of light transformed into a gemstone, but it was unlike any gemstone he had seen before, it shone with a metallic color, although it were not so much a gemstone, but a piece of silver carved into that shape. Yet, at the same time, it was translucent like a gemstone. Masaki knew at once it could not be natural.

As suddenly as it appeared, the pain in his chest was gone. As he realized this, Masaki also realized that he was now holding the mysterious, yet enchantingly beautiful gemstone.

“That is your soul gem”, Kyubey said, “It is the source of your power, keep it near you at all times or you will lose your powers.

“How close is near?”, Masaki asked, “And what do I do when I encounter one of these ‘witches’ you told me to fight. How do I use my powers?”

“Keep the gem less than about 50 meters from you”, Kyubey said, “And when the time comes, you will know what to do. For now, simply go to sleep, and the next day, you will find yourself poised to seize your wish. No matter what happens, your wish will be granted. If you wish to speak to me, ask me at any time, I’ll be in constant telepathic communication.”

“OK…”, Masaki said, unable to think of anything else to say as he walked over to his bed and pulled back the covers. Masaki then slid into the bed and tried to fall asleep.

[Szadek]

I'm a bit stuck on my first act,but made good progress with act 2 instead.
It's still a bit bare bones right now.All the important plot points are there,but not much else.
I want to focus more on the characters
I still need to read The Different Story,but I bought vol. 1 and 2.

I'm thinking about telling the whole story from Sayaka's perspective.
In the end she would keep her memories and this time it wouldn't be such a big problem,because she doesn't need Madoka nearly as much as Homura does.
She also woudn't die the way she did ,because she learn her leason so to say.

[Szadek]

Alright,as part of my I want to develop a friendship(or at least trust) between Sayaka and Homura.
I want to talk about 2 things:the similarity between Homura and Sayaka,as well as Homura and Madoka.
Later on I also bring up,that Homura hasn't really changed at all,at heart she is still same girl she always was(or that at least my interpreation of her character).
She still just want to protect her friend and make her happy,but secondarily Homura also want to find happiness for herself if possible.

Is there anything else I should bring up?

[silvercover]

going to seriously start on that fanfiction, once im done with this chapter for my BRS fic.
so long as college doesnt get too hectic.

[silvercover]

just starting to work on the first chapter, I think I can finish it by the time this weekend rolls.

[SPARTAN 119]

Originally Posted by SPARTAN 119

Not sure if this is the right place to post it, but here's a draft of chapter one of my Madoka/Ore ga Doutei o Sutetara Shinu Ken ni Tsuite crossover:

"About How I Made A Contract"

Spoiler for Ore Doutei Chapter 18 spoilers:

Madoka/Ore ga Doutei Crossover

Chapter 1:


Masaki Tanaka opened the door and walked across the threshold of his small apartment. It had been about one week since Masaki had visited what he thought was another mixer held by the head of a major Tokyo publishing company he was obligated to attend, but had turned into an event that would change everything, and all because of one chance meeting.


There, he had met Kazuya Ichijou, who had been his best friend until about his junior year in high school. It was at that time that they had grown apart, when something changed in Kazuya’s personality, and his fortunes. The previously mild mannered Kazuya had through a means that confounded Masaki to this day, had become extremely popular with women.

It seemed like every few weeks, he was going off with another girl, which naturally meant he and Masaki spent less and less time together, until they went their separate ways after they graduated.

While he did not publicly admit this, Masaki was, himself, still a virgin, though he was certain that, one of these days, he’d finally find the right person for him. All in all, Kazuya’s actions did not cause him much jealously.


Today, however, Masaki heard news about another of his old friends, one Rika Yoshino, Masaki’s old high school crush. Specifically, he had heard that Rika had died, chased onto train tracks by a man who had been stalking her. As soon as Masaki heard this, he could feel the rage burn within him like a fire. Masaki had mostly gotten over his crush on Rika, but part of him had always had a soft spot for her.

Masaki knew Kazuya had known Rika in college, so he called him up today to meet him at his apartment. When Masaki asked him about Rika, he said that he had a few one-night stands in college, that she had done that with many men, and seemed like the time that kept getting into bad relationships

The Kazuya told him something that ignited a fire inside Masaki, “I wasn’t really all that surprised”. Those six words meant that he knew Rika was troubled, that he was not surprised that she had ended up working in a brothel, not surprised that she was killed by some disgruntled client.


“How could he do something like this!?”, Masaki furious thought to himself as he walked into his apartment, “Did he not realize that her promiscuity was the result of a deeper psychological issue. At the moment, she needed someone to support her, not to toss her aside like a used rubber!”

“No doubt this just encouraged that dangerous behavior in her, just fucking anyone she felt like. And no doubt this stalker thought he had a shot too, and when she didn’t respond to his advance this happened!”, Masaki fumed, “It’s all Kazuya’s fault… that son of a bitch turned her into a victim!” For the first time, a dark thought entered his mind. He saw himself bursting into Kazuya’s apartment and placing his hand around his neck, choking him until he breathed no more.

Masaki’s rage-induced internal monologue was interrupted by something that made Masaki start, his anger instantly replaced by fear. It was a voice coming from the kitchen.

The fear, however, dissipated as quickly as it came, when Masaki’s brain registered the words the voice had spoken: “You have a most unusual potential, Masaki Tanaka”, the voice said in a high-pitched but still male voice.

Overcome by curiosity, Masaki switched on the light, to reveal something unlike anything he had seen before. Standing on his kitchen counter was a small creature the size of a house cat. The creature was mostly catlike, with all-white fur save for a circular red mark on its back. But it had a fox-like tail, and two long appendages of some description on top of its head, hanging like rabbit ears… but they couldn’t be ears- the creature already had a pair of what were obviously cat-like ears.

“What the hell are you!?”, Masaki asked in a shocked voice.

“My name is Kyubey”, the creature said, “I am a messenger of magic”.

“I must be dreaming, this sounds like something out of an anime”, Masaki thought.

Immediately, Kyubey said, “You are not dreaming, nor am I any sort of hallucination.”

“You can read my mind…”, Masaki asked nervously.

“In a manner of speaking”, Kyubey replied, “But that’s not why I’m here. As I said, you have rare potential for someone of your demographic group.”

“Potential”, Masaki snickered darkly, “Sure you’ve got the right guy? And what do you mean, “messenger of magic?”

“While you may not realize it, you are exactly the kind of person I am looking for.”, Kyubey responded, “Because of this potential, I am offering you a contract which will greatly benefit both of us.


“A contract, huh?”, Masaki asked, “What does that entail?”

“I will unlock your latent powers, which you will use to fight monsters know as “witches” that prey on humans.”, Kyubey said, “In return, I shall grant you any one wish you desire.”

Masaki thought about it. He was still not sure he believed this “Kyubey”, and was not even sure that he did, indeed, actually exist. Yet, on the other hand, if this thing was telling truth… if it could grant any wish….

“As a matter of fact, Masaki, I could prevent Rika Yoshino’s death. I could even rewrite your whole life so that she never ended up dating you instead of that boyfriend in high school, preventing this whole debacle from ever happening.”, Kyubey said.

“All right then, I’ll do it”, Masaki said, still not unsure as to whether this was actually a really weird dream.”

“Very well then”, Kyubey said, as the two appendages protruding from his head moved towards Masaki’s chest.

Masaki gave a shout of pain as he felt a burning sensation in his chest. Below him, he saw a glow of silver light appear in his chest.

“What the hell is going on!?”, Masaki asked, as he saw the ball of light levitate away from his chest. Kyubey ignored him and placed the ball of light right between the appendages on his head. At once, the ball of light transformed into a gemstone, but it was unlike any gemstone he had seen before, it shone with a metallic color, although it were not so much a gemstone, but a piece of silver carved into that shape. Yet, at the same time, it was translucent like a gemstone. Masaki knew at once it could not be natural.

As suddenly as it appeared, the pain in his chest was gone. As he realized this, Masaki also realized that he was now holding the mysterious, yet enchantingly beautiful gemstone.

“That is your soul gem”, Kyubey said, “It is the source of your power, keep it near you at all times or you will lose your powers.

“How close is near?”, Masaki asked, “And what do I do when I encounter one of these ‘witches’ you told me to fight. How do I use my powers?”

“Keep the gem less than about 50 meters from you”, Kyubey said, “And when the time comes, you will know what to do. For now, simply go to sleep, and the next day, you will find yourself poised to seize your wish. No matter what happens, your wish will be granted. If you wish to speak to me, ask me at any time, I’ll be in constant telepathic communication.”

“OK…”, Masaki said, unable to think of anything else to say as he walked over to his bed and pulled back the covers. Masaki then slid into the bed and tried to fall asleep.

Not sure if anyone cares, but here's the second chapter of my Madoka/Ore ga Doutei o Sutetara Shinu Ken ni Tsuite crossover. Comments appreciated.

Spoiler for Saving Space, also, OreDoutei Chapter 18 spoilers:

Chapter 2:


To say that Masaki Tanaka woke up would not be entirely correct. Instead, as soon as he closed his eyes, he found himself bolt upright, with his eyes open again. Masaki looked around him, noticing that he was standing in a familiar stairwell, the one leading to the roof of his old high school.

“My school… but why would I be here… unless…”, Masaki thought, and immediately looked down at himself.

He was wearing his old school uniform, and his body appeared to be that of his 18-year old self. It seemed impossible, but, unless this was a dream, the only other possibility that he could see was the had gone back in time.

Masaki’s musings were interrupted by the sound of a female voice sobbing coming from the top of the stairs. That wasn’t all, the voice sounded familiar. Masaki immediately rushed up the first flight of stairs, then turned around to the landing, where he stood face to face with….

“Yoshino-san?”, Masaki asked, “are you alright?”

“Oh…. Tanaka-kun”, Rika Yoshino said, trying to hide her tears, “Is lunch break over already? I… I’m ok, I just… I…”. As Rika tried to finish the sentence, her voice trailed away.

In any normal situation, Masaki wouldn’t have pushed the issue. After all, he didn’t know Rika that well, but something in his head told him that do just that.

“Yoshino-san”, Masaki said, “I don’t mean to be intrusive, but have you… well, lost someone who was important to you?”

“What? Did someone… I mean… well, yes…”, Rika said.

“I’m sorry for your loss”, Masaki said, still guided by this new instinct he seemed to have gained in the few hours since he made the contract with that ‘Kyubey’, “You know, I lost someone close to me too, about a year ago, so, I know how it feels. You can talk to me about it if you want”.

“Really?”, Rika asked. Even through her tears, Masaki thought he detected a slight note of curiosity.

“It was only about a year ago”, Masaki said, “My childhood friend, this girl I had known for as long has remembered… well, she died one morning. She was on the way to school, on a crowded train platform, when she… she was pushed off right as the train pulled into the platform… the police said… said it was an accident, simply been pushed off by someone in the crowd jostling about… “

Little did Rika know, this story was a highly modified version of her own tragic future, altered into an accident to make it more realistic for a girl of Rika’s age.

“I didn’t find out until later that day”, Masaki said, “I heard about the death on the local news. I felt angry of course, that people could be so careless as to push an innocent girl to her death. But also like I should have been there… If I had, I could have been able to grab her hand or somehow save her life”.

“You… Your just like m…me then”, Rika said through sobs, “This guy… An older guy in university, he was my tutor, but we grew close…. I kind of …. I… think I liked him… He died last night… killed in a hit and run... Its just like you said… I feel like I should have been able to stop it…”

As soon as Rika finished speaking, Masaki’s new “instinct” told him to place his hand on Rika’s shoulder.

As he placed his hand on her shoulder, Masaki said, “I understand it’s difficult, but you can’t just lose yourself in grief like this. Your friend… he wouldn’t want to get caught up on what might have been. He’d want you to move on….”

Rika wiped her tears from her eyes, and said, “Th…Thank you Masaki-kun… I wish I could have gotten to know you under better circumstances. You… you’re really… “

Not finding the words to express her emotions, Rika wrapped her arms tightly around Masaki’s waist. Masaki was momentarily surprised by her actions, but did not show it. Instead, he returned Rika’s embrace, feeling her press her tear-stained into his shoulder.

After several Masaki and Rika broke apart. Rika looked up at him, her eyes still bloodshot and her face still tear-stained, though she was no longer crying.

“Thank… you, Masaki-kun”, Rika said, “I… I’ll remember what you said… “

“Don’t mention it”, Masaki said, “I couldn’t just leave you there like that when you were obviously in pain.”

After looking at him for a few seconds, Rika said, “Ex... Excuse me”, she said, “Class starts in about 15 minutes… I have to get cleaned up… I’ll talk to you again some time, Masaki-kun”. After she finished her sentence, Rika turned to walk down the stairs to the girls bathroom.

“Talk to you later, Yoshino-san”, Masaki called after her, before waiting a few minutes before descending the stairwell.


As Masaki crossed the threshold into the stairwell, he spotted a familiar furry white creature standing on top of the railing on the staircase.

“Kyubey?”, Masaki asked.

“So”, the creature said, “I take it you appreciate the results?”

“Well”, Masaki replied, “I didn’t expect you to kill that guy, and I won’t deny that I suspect you might be manipulating Rika’s behavior, but…”

“It is for the greater good?”, Kyubey asked.

“Exactly”, Masaki said, “For the greater good”.

“Then I am glad that my services have been to your satisfaction”, Kyubey said, “But tonight, it will be your turn to uphold your end of the deal. Go to the Tokyo University hospital, in the alley near the children’s wing. There, you will find a witch I want eliminated.”

“Got it, I’ll be there after school. You get me Rika, and I’ll deal with as many of these witches as you want.”, Masaki replied.

As Masaki walked back towards his classroom, he had no idea just how different his definition of “the greater good” was from Kyubey’s. If he had known, he would have realized that he should have never made that contract.

Also, kinda drawing a blank with regards to whether or not to use witches from the series to make guest appearances, and if not, designs for original witches. Also, as for Puer Magi Masaki, I was planning on arming him with a longsword and buckler, and having his outfit appear as a some sort of medieval style plate armor. Initially, he will not know about the full abilities of the buckler, which is very similar to Homura's but I was thinking of having him learn of it. Not sure whether to have him discover it on his own or actually run into Homura, who informs him of the full power of the buckler, and soon after, Masaki starts imitating her weapon-collecting methods. Any thoughts on all this?

Also, if Puer Magi seems a bit OP in the later parts of fic with both a magic weapon and a modern firearms, and time manipulation, I might remind you that he will start going more an more along Sayaka's path, having made the contract (as one of a few males to Kyubey found with a high enough "despair level") to go back in time to his highschool days and

Spoiler for OreDoutei and fanfic idea spoilers:

save the life of his unrequieted high school crush, Rika Yoshino, who died years later due to a long series of events that started with her being rendered sterile. This in turn led to her promiscuity in university, which, in Masaki's eyes set her up as a victim. Masaki makes the contract to be sent back in time and end up dating her in high school instead, only to

Spoiler for Major fanfic spoiler:

end up being the guy who impregnates Rika and leads to the botched abortion and restarting the chain of events that led to her death.

After that happens though, not sure whether I should somehow work this back into a happy ending, or just continue it onto Masaki's inevitable Sayaka-esque fate.

Once again, any constructive criticism is appreciated.

[silvercover]

also here to share my first chapter, im now starting to actually make the fic:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10564305/1/Refractions

reviews would be appreciated

[Szadek]

Originally Posted by silvercover

also here to share my first chapter, im now starting to actually make the fic:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10564305/1/Refractions

reviews would be appreciated

There isn't too much to talk about for now.
We know the setting...well kind of.
The most important part right now are the characters.
Sayaka and Kyoko are covered for now,let's see where it goes from here.

[silvercover]

I wish I could properly arrange the character tags... as I feel like im making false advertisement with the arrangement and will face an angry mob in the future.

well for starters, it might take a while, as im also working on my other fanfic.
one thing though, is that I intend, or usually do if you've seen my other fic, alternate the character perspectives. first chapter is from sayaka's view, next one will likely be homura's. also its not just those two, the others will have their point of views seen.

[silvercover]

I have updated my fic now guys, would like to hear your thoughts:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10564305/2/Refractions

[Szadek]

The story gets intriguing.I'm looking forward to the interaction between Homura and Sayaka,
Anyway,I belive Mami/Homura-san is wrong and it should either be Mami/Homura-chan or Tomoe/Akemi-san.

I think Homura cares more about the other girls then she knows.
She did more for them,then she had to.
This could be interesting later on,like Homura trys to kill Sayaka ,but can't go through with it.

[silvercover]

hmm I guess so, what I intended there was mainly just to highlight homura and mami's name... I doubt the chan part is viable though, mami doesnt seem the type to call that affectionately to someone, especially since this homura is nothing like the moemura one...

eh I'll keep it like this, its been like a month so its not that strange for mami and homura to be a bit more familiar with each other.

[silvercover]

3rd chapter up:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10564305/3/Refractions

[AuraTwilight]

I'm just here to pimp someone else's fanfiction on another forum. It's complete, and hosted on the Sufficient Velocity forums. Called "Speak of the Devil", it's a crossover with Vertigo comics. It's set Post-Rebellion Story, and Homura has a chance encounter with Lucifer himself.

And then things get complicated.

http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com...-rebellion.42/

[silvercover]

Originally Posted by AuraTwilight

I'm just here to pimp someone else's fanfiction on another forum. It's complete, and hosted on the Sufficient Velocity forums. Called "Speak of the Devil", it's a crossover with Vertigo comics. It's set Post-Rebellion Story, and Homura has a chance encounter with Lucifer himself.

And then things get complicated.

http://forums.sufficientvelocity.com...-rebellion.42/

Saw that in spacebattles as well, going to try to read it then.

[Heir of the Void]

I'm considering working on a story where humanity in general discovers the Incubators, and goes to war against them would there be any interest in this idea in general, or anyone willing to help me brainstorm for something like this?