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RadiantBeam · 2011-06-30, 21:53

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Originally Posted by DezoPenguin

I blame college, myself; your freshman year all but nuked your writing...

Freshman year was a mess all around.

Grades-wise, depression-wise... not a fun year, nope nope.

But I'm picking it up again. I probably will never produce a lemon, though. I have no sexual experience, and I don't like writing things I don't know at least somewhat personally. The closest I've ever gotten to sex is reading romance novels.

Rising Dragon · 2011-06-30, 21:55

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Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

But I'm picking it up again.

None of us are ever going to match Nanya ever again, though.

Nanya01 · 2011-06-30, 21:56

Hey, look, it's been 3 days since my last update, and I should be in bed now.

But, no, I'm slaving away for my readers!

So, enjoy!

BTW, this part happens at the same time as the previous 2-3 parts did.

Red 1-50

Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Red 51:

Rising Dragon · 2011-06-30, 21:57

... speak of the devil.

DezoPenguin · 2011-06-30, 21:59

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Originally Posted by Rising Dragon

None of us are ever going to match Nanya ever again, though.

...You know, the first time I read that line, I thought you (in a direct reply to RB's comment about not having had sex) were saying that none of us would ever have a sexual experience as good as one that Nanya had.

...Then on second reading I thought you meant that none of us would ever be able to write a sexually explicit fic as good as he did sometime in the past.

...Only after he posted his latest chapter did I realize that (I think!

) you mean his incredible update schedule (which I agree, I can only dream about matching such a thing!).

RadiantBeam · 2011-06-30, 22:00

Nanya's speed is incredible. God knows I could never keep up with him.

EDIT: .... God, that sounds dirty the more I think about it. Damn my mind!

Shigan · 2011-06-30, 22:00

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Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

My bad?

I was originally cranking these out at a much faster rate, but... well, then I hit the actual main Shadowverse storyline and all of the lovely dissecting of Lutecia's psyche, plus I got into college. I'm close to the end, but it's harder to get to since I made the whole series much darker than I originally intended.

*pat pat* There there, now that we know that Dezo is actually a willing soul to do it, all is forgotten.

Lemonblock. I like this word. xD

Also, how about we just combine both ideas to a awkward sexual storage closet bondage experience?

Rising Dragon · 2011-06-30, 22:00

... yeah, I was talking about his update schedule. >.>

SilentOutlaw · 2011-06-30, 22:00

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Originally Posted by Rising Dragon

... speak of the devil.

That was rather eerie.

Damn it Nanya, are you a machine or something?

RadiantBeam · 2011-06-30, 22:02

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Originally Posted by Shigan

*pat pat* There there, now that we know that Dezo is actually a willing soul to do it, all is forgotten.

Dezo could probably do it better than I could, anyway.

Speaking of which, Dezo, if you really want to do it, just PM me and I'll fill you in on the details to what leads up to the actual lemon. I've got it all planned out at this point, it's just a matter of writing it and publishing it.

Rising Dragon · 2011-06-30, 22:02

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Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

Dezo could probably do it better than I could, anyway.

Speaking of which, Dezo, if you really want to do it, just PM me and I'll fill you in on the details to what leads up to the actual lemon. I've got it all planned out at this point, it's just a matter of writing it and publishing it.

... you mean to say you've been holding out on us? D:

Tiresias · 2011-06-30, 22:02

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Originally Posted by DezoPenguin

...You know, the first time I read that line, I thought you (in a direct reply to RB's comment about not having had sex) were saying that none of us would ever have a sexual experience as good as one that Nanya had.

...Then on second reading I thought you meant that none of us would ever be able to write a sexually explicit fic as good as he did sometime in the past.

...Only after he posted his latest chapter did I realize that (I think!

) you mean his incredible update schedule (which I agree, I can only dream about matching such a thing!).

Oh thank God I thought I was the only one who read it that way!

RadiantBeam · 2011-06-30, 22:03

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Originally Posted by Rising Dragon

... you mean to say you've been holding out on us? D:

I said I planned up to the beginning of it. I don't have anything planned for how it actually happens. I've had three years to think about this and how it would happen, after all.

NTFTH · 2011-06-30, 22:07

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Originally Posted by Rising Dragon

... yeah, I was talking about his update schedule. >.>

I would kill to be able to update as fast as Nanya, I'm lucky if I manage finish a new chapter in under a week.

DezoPenguin · 2011-06-30, 22:07

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Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

Dezo could probably do it better than I could, anyway.

Speaking of which, Dezo, if you really want to do it, just PM me and I'll fill you in on the details to what leads up to the actual lemon. I've got it all planned out at this point, it's just a matter of writing it and publishing it.

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Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

I said I planned up to the beginning of it. I don't have anything planned for how it actually happens. I've had three years to think about this and how it would happen, after all.

Oh, I'd never write the lemon for that moment. On the one hand, I can't imagine where I'd begin writing sweet, shy, loving, slightly clumsy, two-virgins-feeling-their-way-through-their-long-awaited-mutual-first-time sex. And regardless if I did it well or did it badly, it would interfere with your own story and the way you set it up.

Nanya01 · 2011-06-30, 22:08

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Originally Posted by SilentOutlaw

That was rather eerie.

Damn it Nanya, are you a machine or something?

Nope. My muse is a slave driver though...

ACK! Put that whip away!

Shigan · 2011-06-30, 22:08

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Originally Posted by Rising Dragon

... you mean to say you've been holding out on us? D:

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Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

I said I planned up to the beginning of it. I don't have anything planned for how it actually happens. I've had three years to think about this and how it would happen, after all.

I still call for a crack storage closet bondage ficcie xD!

Let RB do the two-virgins-feeling-their-way-through-their-long-awaited-mutual-first-time sex however she wants to. We've been waiting for three years, another few months or so won't hurt.

RadiantBeam · 2011-06-30, 22:08

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Originally Posted by DezoPenguin

Oh, I'd never write the lemon for that moment. On the one hand, I can't imagine where I'd begin writing sweet, shy, loving, slightly clumsy, two-virgins-feeling-their-way-through-their-long-awaited-mutual-first-time sex. And regardless if I did it well or did it badly, it would interfere with your own story and the way you set it up.

Meh, mostly all I have is a lot of build-up to the actual moment, then the fade to black.

A lot of it is just generally both of them being nervous, Nanoha having a bit of an overprotective moment as Fate shoos her out of the house, and Caro being her teasing, but well-meaning self when it comes to Lutecia. The actual sex is a fade to black moment. Imagination works best for that kind of thing, IMO.

Tiresias · 2011-06-30, 22:16

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Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

Meh, mostly all I have is a lot of build-up to the actual moment, then the fade to black.

A lot of it is just generally both of them being nervous, Nanoha having a bit of an overprotective moment as Fate shoos her out of the house, and Caro being her teasing, but well-meaning self when it comes to Lutecia. The actual sex is a fade to black moment. Imagination works best for that kind of thing, IMO.

Well I guess it is a safer bet than trying to actually write that stuff only to end up with lines like "so good I could vomit" and "She's good like a skilled prostitute" (Oh, Nasu)

I still vouch for crack storage closet bondage, though

DezoPenguin · 2011-06-30, 22:17

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Originally Posted by RadiantBeam

Meh, mostly all I have is a lot of build-up to the actual moment, then the fade to black.

A lot of it is just generally both of them being nervous, Nanoha having a bit of an overprotective moment as Fate shoos her out of the house, and Caro being her teasing, but well-meaning self when it comes to Lutecia. The actual sex is a fade to black moment. Imagination works best for that kind of thing, IMO.

See, you made a perfectly good argument there for why I would never want to "fill it in."

It's a conversation I've had repeatedly with deathcurse over the pointlessness of sex scenes in romance novels. A lemon fic is there for two reasons: to "appeal to the prurient interest," as the saying goes, and to make points about the characters which are about or centered on the sexual matters. The fic you've described there is one in which an explicit depiction of the sex would add nothing to it and probably get in the way of enjoying the character moments. It's all about Vivio and Lutecia finally putting the past behind them--the long wait for Vivio to mature both physically and emotionally, and the struggle for Lutecia to face up to her own past and come to terms with who she really is, and for Vivio to accept that person. It's the climax of a loving relationship that we've seen building through three years of stories, not of a series of sexual tension that's been inevitably leading to the bedroom.

2011-06-30, 21:56	Link #32023
Nanya01 Left for TFF Author Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Frozen Hell of the North Age: 41	Hey, look, it's been 3 days since my last update, and I should be in bed now. But, no, I'm slaving away for my readers! So, enjoy! BTW, this part happens at the same time as the previous 2-3 parts did. Red 1-50 Spoiler for Blood That Flows - Red 51: Elsewhere... Reinforce frowned and shook her head. The Mazoku that had attacked her after dealing with that one major problem hadn't been too powerful, but considering the amount of evil that she had felt until just this moment, she had felt it was better to not be in contact with anyone until she felt mostly okay. "...force? Reinforce, can you hear me?" "Admiral Leti, yes, I hear you, what is it?" Reinforce replied, her mental voice was cold and dark. "Listen, Shabranigdo's not the only force on the field who's really strong, there's someone named Gaav on the field and even if our forces beat him, they'll be too worn out to deal with Shabranigdo." "What should I do about it?" "Lina's given me a plan on how to delay him. But, if it fails..." "I will likely die." Reinforce nodded, narrowing her eyes. "Very well, what is her plan?" When Leti told her the plan, Reinforce sweat-dropped. She didn't sweat-drop very often, but found that anything that she heard from the Takamachi family would often have her sweat-dropping. "That is..." "I know, but Lina said that if it works, it'll buy you some time, if it fails, get out of there." Reinforce nodded as she cut communication off and turned to look at Shabranigdo as he started to move towards Seiryuun. "...I really hope this plan works." (---) Up in the ship... Leti looked at Lina, who was glowing gold and black, as was her daughter. "Are you sure that plan will work?" "It's the best chance we have at the moment. A Mazoku is ruled by its Ego. If they think they're inferior, they will be." Lina's voice was twisted, distorted. "It won't be too much, however, for someone of Shabranigdo's level, but anything that can buy even a few minutes time for the rest of them is better than nothing." "Can they win?" "If Shabranigdo's purged his human soul, then no one on the planet can defeat him." Leti gulped and looked at the time again. For some reason, she had the feeling that this battle was going to come down to the wire. (---) Shabranigdo looked at Seiryuun and let out a yell before his aura erupted around him and rushed towards the city. As it washed over the city, he chuckled as he felt the fear and terror from the people inside. 'Such delicious emotions.' It had been far too long since he had felt them in such quantities. Chuckling, he took a step forward and grinned as he felt the land crack and fall apart under his feet. "Yes..." Opening his palm, a large beam of energy rushed out towards Seiryuun, destroying the wall and the people behind it with ease. He took a few more steps forward, before stopping in confusion. Just behind the wall was a green barrier and a young male human with blond hair and a scarred up cheek holding out a hand and glaring at him. "You will not pass." Shabranigdo chuckled before opening his mouth and firing a powerful Black magic blast at the barrier. He was slightly amused when the barrier held, despite the power he just launched at it. "Impressive defenses. Even most Mazoku don't have barriers that strong." When a green circle appeared under the boy's feet, Shabranigdo narrowed his eyes before they flashed and the circle disappeared. "Now, now, no trying to attack." Shabranigdo blinked as he felt a tremendous force of energy. Turning to look, he frowned, wondering just what could create energy that was that incredible. "Gorun... Nova?" He swore that he felt that energy over there, but the other was one he couldn't place. He turned and frowned as the boy was no longer around. Oh well, if he wasn't going to be there at first, he could die later. "Elmekia Flame!" Several voices yelled out at once, the Astral magic lashing out at him. "Pathetic." Shabranigdo growled as the energies were disrupted by his aura. "Come on, if you can't do better than that, then burn under a deluge of lava!" With a wave of his hand, the ground, trees, grass and even the water just North of Seiryuun melted and turned into lava that rolled towards the proud city. "Freeze Arrow!" The same mages called again, firing several freezing blasts of energy at the oncoming torrent. "That's not enough." Shabranigdo chuckled before blinking as a tall woman with silver hair, red eyes, and a form-fitting black body suit flew up and held up her hand, a large block of ice appearing above her head. "Atem Des Eises." The woman intoned and several ice beams lashed out, hitting the lava and instantly cooling it. "Interesting." Shabranigdo said as he stepped on the newly cooled lava. "And you are?" "Reinforce Yagami." Her eyes narrowed and she shook her head. She just hoped this crazy plan worked. "I see." Shabranigdo chuckled and held up his hand, a glowing sphere of energy forming there as it crackled with power. "I'll remember that name." "I see, so you're the boss of all Mazoku, and for all that power, you're afraid of us." Reinforce said softly and blinked as the ball of energy disappeared. "What?" Shabranigdo's voice was curious. "You send several Mazoku who are far more powerful than the rest of the drabble that we've been fighting, several on our side end up injured or dead because of it. Are you so afraid of us that you cannot fight us without us being in a state of being unable to fight back?" "You're saying that if you had time to recover, you could put up a better fight?" Shabranigdo narrowed his eyes. "Very well then. I will give you enough to heal your wounded, but I shall crush any who attack me." "Give us five minutes." Reinforce said as she looked at him. Internally, she was just glad that she used that forbidden spell a little while ago, it made it easy to put up a brave front. "Take your time, it won't matter in the end." Shabranigdo chuckled as Reinforce flew into the city. 'I can't believe that plan worked.' Reinforce thought to herself. (---) Vita frowned as she looked out at the West side of Seiryuun. She would have gone to help the others on the East side, but something had her worried about this side. Floating through the air, her eyes widened as she saw someone leaning against a rather destroyed tree. "Signum!" She yelled as she rushed down to the downed knight. "You're alive, aren't you?" She touched Signum's shoulder and ducked as Signum suddenly rolled to her feet and swung Laevantein right at where her neck was a moment ago. "It's me!" Vita grabbed Signum's arm and gasped at how easy it was for her to move Signum's arm into a less aggressive pose. "Are you..?" She looked at Signum's eyes and paled at how unfocused Signum's eyes were. When Signum suddenly fell down to her knees, slumping, Vita grabbed her and flew back to the recovery area. "Dammit, what happened?" She blinked as she heard Laevantein ping. "Who did this to her? Was it one of those super powered Mazoku that attacked?" "Ja." Vita grimaced and blinked as she felt Signum starting to go limp. "Hey! Don't you dare... Don't you dare die on me!" Vita did the only thing she could think of in that situation. She jammed an elbow into Signum's bloodied side. "GAH!" Signum's eyes snapped open and she stared at Vita. "Are you trying to kill me?" Vita let out a breath of relief as she touched down near the medical staff. "Shamal!" She called out, causing the blonde to look up from where she was healing Hayate. "Help her!" Vita was dragging Signum, who was starting to fall out of consciousness again. Sylphiel, who was near Shamal, nodded to one of the healers, who took over healing Fate, so she could grab Signum from Vita. "Leave her to me." Vita nodded, thankful as Signum was being laid down on one of the tables and healing magic started to flow into her body. Closing her eyes, she just hoped that they could deal with things quickly. __________________ My fics Due to certain things, I am not here, find me over on TFF.

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Rising Dragon Goat Herder Author Join Date: Jun 2008 Age: 36	... speak of the devil. __________________

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Rising Dragon Goat Herder Author Join Date: Jun 2008 Age: 36	... yeah, I was talking about his update schedule. >.> __________________