Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Kirika-chan]

Originally Posted by Satashi

In all the time I have been with the military I had never once wished something would happen just so I could do something. Be it a scramble, alert, sudden training, working out, shopping for the week's food, cooking... something always had my interest. So much so that I often stayed up late to make sure I got everything done. Now, however, I found myself doing something I haven't done in I don't know how long. I was laying on the couch with ear buds in to listen to Tia's music via her mp3 type device. Arf was in her child form laying on top of me sleeping but I could tell by her tail lazily wagging and hitting my leg that she enjoyed the petting I was giving her. One hand hung off the couch and reached into a bag of chips that I had been munching on for a while now, even though I wasn't really all that hungry. Hayate was with Yuuno somewhere along with Signum and Shamal working on their secret weapon against Tri-Edge while my forwards were training with Fate outside in a barrier. Arf stretched out lightly and shifted to lay her head on my chest more, breathing steadily again almost immediately. Though all this, only one thought kept passing through my head: 'I am so bored!'

6th Mobile Division: Redemption VII
By: Satashi

~**~

Need lots and lots of support >.<

Spoiler for off topic:

new mai hime shiznat

Well, I really want to help you and give my support... But it's hard for me ^^"
So, write as you make as usual (it's not really good english this >_>) it can be only good ^^

I was never disappointed with all of your stories ^^

EDIT: Page claim in the name of Redemption! ^^

[Advent000]

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Well, got the first chapter of this new fic idea done. The title is tentative and any feedback would be great before I get to work on the next chapter

Spoiler for Angelic magic:

“Alright, I’ll see you tomorrow!”

“Mm, see you tomorrow.”

Nanoha Takamachi waved off to the brunette girl who was making her way out of the classroom at the end of the school day. Many students had already gone on their way to after school activities or back home as soon as they were dismissed. Two students were at the front of the room were on clean up duty and would probably be around for another half hour or so sweeping the floors and straightening out the desks. There were two others towards the back of the room engaged in a light conversation. One of them turned her head towards Nanoha.

“Nanoha, are you ready to go?”

“Ah, sorry Fate-chan. Let’s get going.”

The third girl giggled and brushed some stray strands of hair from her face, “Don’t rush yourself, Nanoha-chan. It’s not like we have anything too important to do.”

“Nyahaha. I know Hayate-chan, but I don’t want to keep you and Fate-chan waiting too long.”

Now with everyone accounted for, the trio made their way out of the school building and passed the gates. The sky was already starting to shift from blue to a reddish-orange as the sun began its descent. While it would have been easier to catch the bus back to their place, it wasn’t a far walk and the weather was nice and warm. It also gave them time to talk before they ended up collapsing on the couches inside their apartment and not wanting to do anything for some time.

A short hill climb later they found themselves at their intended destination. After the walk, they were too tired to take the stairs and thus opted for the elevator to take them to the fourth floor. The door slid open with a soft hiss following the sweeping of their security card on the wall panel. Inside they were greeted by the cooler, air conditioned air of their fair sized apartment with three bedrooms, two bathrooms, a kitchen, dining room, and living room. Shoes were quickly removed and bodies were soon sprawled out on the comfortable couches.

“Ahhh,” sighs Nanoha. “Good to be back in here.”

“I don’t know if I can take another one of that teacher’s lectures,” grumbled their blond companion who had her face buried in a pillow.

From the window, Hayate giggled at her two friends. It had been quite a day with lectures on top of those exams. It seemed that no matter where you went you couldn’t escape exams or school. The sun was now lower in the sky, bathing the entire city in its reddish-orange glow. Gazing out the window, Hayate couldn’t help but think of how peaceful it looked now. However, they all knew that it was only temporary. Her mind began to wander back to how they ended up here in the first place…

Several days ago aboard the Arthra…

“Nanoha-chan! Fate-chan!”

Both 14 year old girls turned around at the call of their names. Just down the corridor they could see Hayate running up to them still dressed in her school uniform.

“Ah, Hayate-chan! Did you get called to this emergency briefing, too?”

She nodded, “Yea, they brought me aboard as soon as I was able to. Though have you two heard anything about what this is about?”

Fate shakes her head, “We know just as much as you. It could be some high-class Lost Logia with the level of urgency.”

Although rare, this would not have been the first time the trio was called to duty so abruptly. Most of their missions outside of TSAB training involved the investigation and recovery of Lost Logia and Relics. Some complications arose here and there but overall the missions were fairly routine. These missions would usually involve two or three of them working together on other worlds. They figured that it was due to their prior experiences and success in dealing with hazardous Lost Logia, though their connections to the higher-ups might also be another factor.

Stepping into the briefing room, they found it to be a lot more crowded than they had expected. Several officers from the Intelligence Division were pouring over papers and numerous monitors of data. The main monitors had still images of what they presumed was the target world rotating through them. One of the Intelligence Division officers, a major according to his markings, looked up from his monitor at the newcomers.

“Ah, you’re here. We can get started then.”

It took a few moments for the room to settle down before he began, “As of 1450 hours local time we detected a massive dimensional dislocation on Non-Administered World 66. Nearby ships reported the reading to HQ and a scouting team was immediately dispatched to investigate.”

A press of a button brought up a new image on the main monitor, displaying a large city surrounded on one side by an ocean and hills on the others. It looked like a normal city had it not been for the massive black object covering a portion of it. Above the center a small sphere could be barely made out due to the white stripes circling it.

“The scout team came to conclude that this…thing is the cause of the dimensional dislocation. Sensors were unable to penetrate the black mass, but superficial readings indicated that it was several hundred meters in diameter and had a thickness of a few nanometers. Not having encountered a dislocation of this type before, the scout team maintained orbit to continue analysis. That was when they noticed the inhabitants sending out these.”

Two more images materialized on either side of the first image. This time they were taken much closer to the ground. All eyes were locked on the alien forms being displayed. Both were gigantic based on the buildings in the background and were shaped just giant, armored people. One was blue with a large red ‘eye’ set in its helm while the second was red with what appeared to be four green ‘eyes.’

The major continued, “Our readings of these constructs show that they appear to be biological in nature with heavy mechanical modifications. The equipment on the scout ship weren’t designed for such analysis so our information is very limited. However, the cameras were able to get clear shots of the markings on the arms.”

Several images popped up on top of the current images, displaying enlarged images of the constructs shoulders and lower arms. The words ‘EVA 0’ on the shoulder and ‘PROTOTYPE’ on the lower arm were clearly visible on the blue one while the red one had ‘EVA 2’ and ‘PRODUCTION’ written on it.

“These EVAs appear to have been made by the residents of this world. How, we do not know given what we know of their current technological level and the disaster 15 local years ago. What we have been able to tell is that these constructs were made with some specific purpose in mind. Usually we would not make a big fuss about it had it not been for the dimensional dislocation and what happened the following day.”

A second monitor overlapped the first to play a recording from the ship in orbit. The camera was zoomed in on the black and white sphere floating above the black mass. At first, there was nothing. Then the sphere started to quiver. Beneath it the mass began to crack, exposing a deep crimson. The camera remained focused on the sphere when something pushed its way out from inside of it, sending a spray of what appeared to be blood onto the mass below. Ripples and cracks spread from the protruding object around the entire sphere until a second object burst forth, now identifiable as hands amidst the shower of blood. Everyone in the room couldn’t tear their eyes from the monitor as the hands gripped the sides and tore the hole larger. From the steady widening tear an armored head with a single horn emerged and opened its mouth. There was no sound, but you would almost hear it crying out as it forcefully ripped its way free of the sphere. It landed on the cracked ground, covered from head to toe in crimson while the remains of the sphere landed behind it.

The trio watched the horrific display, never having seen anything so animalistic before. Hayate had to cover her mouth in shock, desperately wishing for it to end and the building nausea to leave her. When the video came to an end, they could only stare at the frozen image of that thing covered in blood with its mouth open and head tilted back as if screaming to the heavens above in triumph.

“Shortly after this, numerous helicopters and other vehicles with an organization’s marking converged on the third construct. Due to all the activity, it was difficult to acquire much information, but a white tube was ejected from its back, leading to the theory that these things are operated by one or more people riding inside.”

He took a breath before continuing, “During the…destruction of the black mass all signs of the dimensional dislocation vanished, supporting the idea that it was the cause. However, we also got other readings. When the construct was…freeing itself sensors detected unusual barrier readings coming from the sphere. Magical barrier readings. The destruction of the black mass also left the area saturated in residual magic.”

That revelation led to whispers being exchanged between the room’s occupants. The major had expected this and waited a moment before continuing.

“As a result, an official investigation has been started to determine the origin of magic being used on this world. A second ship was deployed to the world to take further readings and discovered a large amount of residual magic on the planet’s South Pole, the same location of the disaster 15 years ago. Combined with older residual magic in the city and the surrounding area as well as unusual readings coming from below the city itself it has been decided to deploy an undercover team to investigate the source of this magic. An outright intervention has been deemed to dangerous should whoever is involved with the source of the magic and potential Lost Logia have ill intent given the magic levels involved here. Therefore, lieutenants Takamachi, Harlaown, and Yagami shall be deployed to the city to investigate.”

Even though they were expecting it, the mission was still a surprise to the trio. Nanoha was the first to speak up, “But why us, sir?”

“From what intelligence we could gather the city is pretty much run by whatever organization also controls the contracts. The majority of the adults work for them in one way or another which makes sending our own people difficult due to their tight security screenings. However, their local school is more lax in security and would be easier for someone to get enrolled and pose as a student to blend in. From what records we managed to gather, there was been a constant stream of incoming and outgoing students so enrolling you in the school would not be a problem. Also, we picked up on a rumor that some people involved with those constructs attend the local school as well.”

Fate crossed her arms over her chest and leaned back, “Which would also let us check up on that rumor.”

“Precisely. Preparations are almost complete for your lodging and other items you will need to blend in. The mission file will contain information on the world as well as all of our intel on what we have managed to find on the constructs and the organization and your cover story. We will contact you once we near the world. Dismissed.”

Everyone except the Intelligence Division shuffled out of the room and into the hallway. The trio decided to head off to the mess hall to read over the mission files.

“Well,” sighs Hayate, “this is going to be interesting.”

The other two nod in agreement, reflecting on what’s to come.

Sounds very interesting, I can see a lot of fun stuff happening in the future for this fic, though I've never watched evangelion so I've no idea what just happened.

I'm looking forward to more and to seeing their reaction to the angels.

Originally Posted by Satashi

In all the time I have been with the military I had never once wished something would happen just so I could do something. Be it a scramble, alert, sudden training, working out, shopping for the week's food, cooking... something always had my interest. So much so that I often stayed up late to make sure I got everything done. Now, however, I found myself doing something I haven't done in I don't know how long. I was laying on the couch with ear buds in to listen to Tia's music via her mp3 type device. Arf was in her child form laying on top of me sleeping but I could tell by her tail lazily wagging and hitting my leg that she enjoyed the petting I was giving her. One hand hung off the couch and reached into a bag of chips that I had been munching on for a while now, even though I wasn't really all that hungry. Hayate was with Yuuno somewhere along with Signum and Shamal working on their secret weapon against Tri-Edge while my forwards were training with Fate outside in a barrier. Arf stretched out lightly and shifted to lay her head on my chest more, breathing steadily again almost immediately. Though all this, only one thought kept passing through my head: 'I am so bored!'

6th Mobile Division: Redemption VII
By: Satashi

~**~

Need lots and lots of support >.<

Spoiler for off topic:

new mai hime shiznat

I think Nanoha needs to find another way of relaxing that doesnt involve overworking her students.

Can't wait for the chapters to come out, they'le help me survive my exams.

[Satashi]

Week is completed, will be posted tonight.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Week is completed, will be posted tonight.

Sure?

Don't play with our fellings Satashi! T3T

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

What's this? Is this... pt 2 of Bodyguard!Nanoha? Why yes yes it is.

Spoiler for Bodyguard!Nanoha:

“Ow!”

“If you’d stay still it wouldn’t hurt so much.”

I glared at the man who’d been my lifelong friend. He was like a brother to me and sometimes like a mother. Right now, however, I wanted to rip his head off.

Yunno Scrya pulled the bandage tighter around my arm, chuckling lightly when I winced. “I don’t understand how you can get across town in this condition but can’t stand a little alcohol and a bandage.”

“It’s the adrenalin,” I managed to say right before I downed a handful of various pain killers.

“You’d be dead if it weren’t for me,” he sighed.

I shrugged, “Yeah.” It was the truth, I never denied it. There were dozens of times I would have died without Yuuno’s amateur doctoring skills. There were also about a hundred times I would have starved without Yuuno’s cooking skills and about a thousand times I probably would have shot myself if he hadn’t been here to talk me out of it. Besides, in my business it was nice to have at least one person you could trust fully.

When I said we were lifelong friends I meant it. He’d been through it all with me Hell, he even joined the Scaglietti organization as an accountant when I joined. To be honest I didn’t know why he did it for me. I was about as worthless as they came. And it’s not like I ever asked him to stay, but he did none the less. He deserved a better friend.

“Now that I’m sure you’re not going to die,” Yuuno stood up and straightened his glasses. “Would you like to tell me why there’s a naked woman on your couch?”

I winced. I had hoped he’d not seen her. That was silly of course because my couch was placed only feet away from my front door. When he hadn’t mentioned it I’d hoped he’d forgotten to put on his glasses. “Well… it’s a long story…”

“Nanoha.” He looked at me over his rims. His “stern” look. “I thought we agreed you wouldn’t bring anymore of ‘them’ home now that you have Vivio to look after.”

The “them” in question were the different women I used to bring home on a regular basis. The key word was used to. I hadn’t done it in months not since I took in Vivio.

Vivio was my daughter by adoption. I’d found on an assignment a while ago. She was alone and that’s all I needed to know, nothin’ else really matters. To be honest I didn’t take her in with her well being in mind, it was more to easy my soul. I’m just selfish like that. But that didn’t change the fact that we were family now, all three of us actually. Hell, Yuuno was a far better parent then I.


But I digress. I still hadn’t explained anything to Yuuno and by the way he was staring at me I could tell he wasn’t going to let me crawl away.

“You see,” I fidgeted around as I pulled on a t-shirt. “The last assignment I got was to one of the clone warehouses…” I trailed off hoping he could fill in the blanks himself.

“So… there’s a clone in the living room,” He eyed me suspiciously. I could tell his mind was still on my less then noble pastimes.

I held up my hands. “I swear it’s the truth.”

“If she is a clone why do you have her?” He crossed his arms. “I know you can’t afford one on your salary.”

“A gift from the boss.” I leaned back in my chair letting the legs lift off the floor.

“He’s never given you a gift in your life,” Yuuno had every right to be suspicious of course. It was true. The boss wasn’t big on “bonuses”. He gave only one. It was the one way trip to hell he gave you when you ticked him off.

“Well she’s spoiled goods,” I shrugged. It didn’t matter really I’d probably find someone who’d buy her. Eventually. Actually I could try to give her away and no one would want her.

“Oh lovely,” Yuuno sighed.

I slammed the chair legs down and leaned forward trying my best to look utterly sickingly cute. “Mou~ Yuuno-kun~ don’t be angry~”

“Mou?” His face broke into a smile followed by chuckling. “You haven’t said that since you were nine.”

“Just because I’m a 22 year old bodyguard doesn’t mean I can’t be cute.”

He laughed harder, “don’t let anyone else hear you like that.” I didn’t plan to.

I started to speak but was interrupted by the doorbell. …The doorbell! We both froze. We also both knew who it was and we both were trying to figure out a way to hide the girl and answer the door at the same time.

Yuuno eyed me and I eyed Yuuno.

His eyes grew wide and he shook his head, “Oh no Nanoha. You got yourself into this you get yourself out.”

“I wasn’t going to ask you to.” Yuuno didn’t believe I was capable of handling myself apparently. Of course I had been hoping he’d offer.

I stood up and left my room. He followed a few steps behind me. I rounded into the living room just as my visitor pounded again on the door. I looked from the door to the girl still on my couch. I quickly tugged the spare blanket, that I had haphazardly thrown over her, over her head, as if she were some sort of body I needed to dispose of (not that I knew about getting rid of dead bodies… really). Then, making sure to position myself so my visitor wouldn’t have a good view no matter where they stood, I opened the door.

“What were you doing Nanoha? Don’t tell me you were sleeping at this hour,” The deep gruff voice could only belong to one man, Zafira “the wolf” Yagami, my neighbor, friend, and babysitter. He was a big guy, the kind I would have expected to see hanging around the toughest joints, if I didn’t know him that is.

The truth about the guy was much more humorous. He was part of the Yagami family. The Yagami family had once been a powerful crime group, now they were just a part of the Scaglietti Organization. Jail had had the head of the family killed several years back and now its members were forced to work for him. Not that the few living members minded that much, their entire lives revolved around keeping the family’s heir alive. Of course it was hard when the girl was unaware of the… activities of her family.

The Yagami’s lived next door to me. Yuuno and I ended up being good friends with them though we had trouble figuring out what we were supposed to tell Hayate we did. She currently believed Yuuno worked as an accountant working for some big, nonillegal, company and I was a gym teacher.

Back to Zafira. The white haired, blue suited man had put me on guard when we first met, but I soon realized he was nearly as frightening as everyone thought he was. In fact he was quite soft. For example, most people in the organization believed Zafira was called “the wolf” because he was a cold, lone warrior. What they didn’t know is the name actually originated from him getting drunk at a Christmas party and letting Hayate put dog ears on him.

And of course he had a very important reason for being at my door. A reason that involved the kid on his back.

“Mama mama! Zaffy took me to the zoo!” Vivio poked her head around his shoulder. “I saw an ela…eley…ely…” she furrowed her brow adorably. “Eleyphant!” She declared this very proudly and I couldn’t help but grin.

“That’s great sweetie,” I turned from Vivio to Zafira my grin fading. “And no. Yuuno was just patching me up.”

Zafira nodded, “You should have Shamal look at that.”

I shrugged, Shamal was a doctor, both for the organization and for people outside of it. “It’s not that bad.”

“If you say so,” Zafira turned around, giving me access to my little girl, who was clinging to him like a baby koala.

I picked her up, “Thanks for the help.”

“Anytime,” he turned back around. He paused and a funny look on his face. “What’s that?”

My eyes widened. “Nothing. Nothing at all. Nothing unusual here, just me and Yuuno,” Yuuno waved.

“Nanoha…” He leaned down, looking me in the eyes. “…you didn’t bring work home did you?”

My mouth fell open; he thought I’d brought a dead body to my house? What kind of sloppy work did he think I did? “No it’s nothing like that. It’s just… you know… pillows.”

“Pillows?” He raised an eyebrow. “Quite the unique pillows.”

“Well you know Nanoha and… pillows,” Yuuno stepped forward blocking Zafira’s view further.

Zafira shook his head, “I should head home, Hayate’s cooking tonight and I’m getting hungry.”

“See you later Zafira,” I waved at his retreating figure. I shut the door with the hand not supporting Vivio and turned back to my best friend. “That was too close.”

“Too close?” Yuuno laughed. “We’re lucky he’s not the curious type. Honestly… pillows?”

I put Vivio down on the ground. “I was rushed.”

Yuuno chuckled and shook his head, his pony tail whipped around and smacking him in the face. I laughed. He turned a little red.

Even Vivio giggled, “Yuuno-papa looks silly.”

He flipped back his hair as he squatted down. He ruffled Vivio’s hair, causing her to giggle even more. I admit it was a cute scene. We were an odd family to say the least. It was going to be awkward in the coming years when we would have to explain that while Vivio has a mom and dad they’re not together and have never been together. But… we were a family that was undeniable.

This simple, quiet scene was near perfect… only to be interrupted by the sound of rustling sheets. I froze, Yuuno froze and Vivio blinked and behind us a soft sort of moan could be heard.

I turned slowly. She was starting to sit up. She was squinting, unused to the light I guessed. She moved to face me; her eyes were a gentle red, different from to color of blood I was so used to.

“I-” I started to speak but I was immediately hit by the fact she still wasn’t clothed. I looked down at Yuuno and found he was just as embarrassed as me, if not more so. He had turned his head so far away I thought it’d snap off.

She tilted her head to the side, “Who are you?” Her voice was soft, barely above a whisper.

“Nanoha. I’m Takamachi… Nanoha.”

“Nano…ha. Nanoha,” she repeated my name. She nodded. A small happy smile crept onto her face. “Nanoha! And who am I?”

What was her name? Clones tended to be given serial numbers not names. I looked around, Yuuno had left a bag of groceries on the table. Some of them had spilled out. Candy Smuckers… too hookerish, Pam Butterworth… maybe if she was my grandma. I spotted a box of uncooked pasta, Testarossa. That was a good last name. But a first name… a first name… I looked around again, a bar of soap caught my eye. “Fate! You’re Fate Testarossa.”

Part 1 for those who don't remember or missed it.

great second chapter
cannot wait for the third

Originally Posted by Satashi

In all the time I have been with the military I had never once wished something would happen just so I could do something. Be it a scramble, alert, sudden training, working out, shopping for the week's food, cooking... something always had my interest. So much so that I often stayed up late to make sure I got everything done. Now, however, I found myself doing something I haven't done in I don't know how long. I was laying on the couch with ear buds in to listen to Tia's music via her mp3 type device. Arf was in her child form laying on top of me sleeping but I could tell by her tail lazily wagging and hitting my leg that she enjoyed the petting I was giving her. One hand hung off the couch and reached into a bag of chips that I had been munching on for a while now, even though I wasn't really all that hungry. Hayate was with Yuuno somewhere along with Signum and Shamal working on their secret weapon against Tri-Edge while my forwards were training with Fate outside in a barrier. Arf stretched out lightly and shifted to lay her head on my chest more, breathing steadily again almost immediately. Though all this, only one thought kept passing through my head: 'I am so bored!'

6th Mobile Division: Redemption VII
By: Satashi

~**~

Need lots and lots of support >.<

Spoiler for off topic:

new mai hime shiznat

Oo
nice intro, cannot wait for the rest

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Satashi

And then the eraser on Vivio's mechanical pencil pops off and all the lead sticks falling into her mouth. And then a big scene as she coughs and spits them out. before long she'd be standing in the hall holding a small bucket of water thinking "Why meeeeeeeee?"

And of course Nanoha visits that day for some reason and sees her outside in the hall being punished....

And Vivio gets grounded T_T

Poor Vivio! Keroko, how could you do that to her!? T_T!!!

Stuff like that happens:

Spoiler for and then some:

“Boring boring boring boring booooooring” was the line of thought going through Vivio’s mind as she casually flipped the mechanical penclip up again with her lips. Why did math teacher have to insist on making their explanations so long anyway?

Most of the class around her was in the same state of boredom, some even half-asleep. With a sigh Vivio flipped the pencil up again.

Unfortunately this time the eraser on top of the pencil fell off, and since the tip of the pencil was currently up in the air, the top, which was where all the lead sticks are loaded, was facing downwards. And gravity being gravity, all the lead sticks of her pencil fell down into her mouth. Her eyes widened as her tongue registered the graphite taste and she immediately shoved her chair backwards and spat out the pen and everything else.

“Ew ew ew” she yelled in frustration as the taste refused to leave. It took a moment before she was calm enough to realize just where she was, and turned her head to see the entire class staring at her.

“Uhm…” she nervously said as her eyes scanned the confused, or amused faces of her classmates. To her left, her blue-haired friend Syn obviously had seen what had happened, as she was struggling to keep her lips neutral and her visible right eye was trembling in an attempt not to burst into laughter.

“Takamachi-san, are my lessons that revolting?” The teacher said with a raised eyebrow.

“I… no… I’m…” Vivio stammered, too embarrassed to get out a proper sentence.

“Then perhaps you could gather your thoughts in the hall. You seem to need a bit of time too yourself.”

“Isn’t that a bit harsh? All that happened was her pen breaking on her while holding it in her mouth.” Syn spoke up from her place.

“Then perhaps she should have been using it to copy notes instead of keeping it in her mouth. As she should have” The teacher returned.

“You sound like an evil overlord now.” Syn grumbled.

“I’ll take that as a compliment Virage-san, now I believe we have a volunteer to keep you company, Takamachi-san.”

Syn glared at their teacher. “That’s abuse of power.” She growled.

“I’m an evil overlord, remember?” the teacher returned smugly as Vivio began pulling Syn by her sleeve.

“This isn’t over yet, dark lord! Your evil reign over this classroom will end, I will return, and with greater numbers! We will overthrow you! The age of freedom will come! Your days are numbered!” The proclamations began to fade as Vivio pulled her friend out of the door, leaving behind a laughing class.

The teacher sighed. That Virage girl was almost as much trouble as she was worth. Sure she managed to keep order in the class and keep the class entertained at times, like this one, but did she have to do it in such a tiring way? Oh well, as long as the Takamachi girl kept her out of problems it would be fine. With the class more amused like this it would be easier to finish lessons.

Meanwhile in the hall, Vivio was giving her friend an embarrassed look. “Did you have to do that?” she asked.

“Hey, I’m not the only one who was bored.” Syn answered as she stuck out her tongue.

“Yes, but now you’re stuck here with me holding these buckets.” Vivio said, gesturing to the buckets they were holding.

Syn shrugged. “It was boring in there as well anyway, now we have something to do anyway.”

“Yes, but holding buckets isn’t any more ‘fun’ either.” Vivio returned.

“True, but getting there sure was.” Syn grinned.

Vivio sighed. “How do you manage to get into these situations?”

“Having an irresistible urge to backtalk teachers? Being a smartass? Trying to relieve the boredom?” Syn provided.

“…This doesn’t bother you at all, does it?”

“Eh, its just holding buckets. Knowing our teacher no official complaint is going to be made of it. And it’s only fifteen more minutes until the end of class anyway. What could possibly happen?”

Vivio was about to reply, until two voices reached her ears.

“… So nice of you to come visit your daughter, Takamachi-san.”

“Nyahaha, I’ve been busy with work lately, so I haven’t had time to come and see her at school and I wanted to know how she’s doing.”

Vivio’s eyes tripled in size. Syn blinked.

“Huh. Note to self: Murphy’s Law works just fine.”

Vivio looked around panicky for any cover before her mother could spot her. In the end, she dove behind Syn, right before her mother rounded the corner.

“Are? Syn? Did you do something to get send to the hall again?” The escort, who turned out to be Lady Schach, said in a reproving voice. Syn merely grinned in response. “How do you manage to be here so often?”

“Boredom, mostly. Konnichiwa Takamachi-san.” She said with a small bow towards Nanoha.

“Konnichiwa, Syn. How are things?”

“Just fine, thank you. We were just having a very… ‘educational’ math class, and most of us were resting our eyes contemplating all the information so generously given to us before hell broke loose.”

Vivio sighed in relief behind her friend. Lucky that Syn was a good half head taller then her. Now if only her mother wouldn’t spot her…

“And how did Vivio get there with you?” Her mother’s voice reached her ears.

Dammit Murphy!

“Ehehehe…” Vivio chuckled nervously.

“Well?” Nanoha said.

“I was… sort of bored in class… and I was chewing on my pencil and it kind off… opened in my mouth.”

…

A moment of silence.

“That’s all?” Nanoha said.

“Oh that’s not half of it.” Syn said with a grin. “As soon as she realized what was happening she did a massive spit take just in the middle of Sousou-sensei’s lecture of how important it was to remember to take the result into the further calculation. It sounded like she was disagreeing with him rather violently.”

“Syn!” Vivio protested with a beaming red head.

Nanoha sighed. “Sister Schach, I think I will take you on on that offer of tea. Maybe after we finish I can watch my daughter in class properly.”

Vivio hung her head as Nanoha and sister Schach walked on.

“…I’m dead.” She mumbled. “I’m going to get grounded for sure.”

Syn turned back to Vivio. “Grounded? With that big smile on her face as she was walking on?”

“Huh?” Vivio blinked.

“Yup. She probably did something like that herself, or knew someone who did. I wouldn’t worry about it too much. Oh hey, only two minutes remaining, lets get rid of these buckets and have lunch.”

Vivio sighed in relief as Syn took her bucket and walked to the drain. “Thanks Syn.”

“Anytime V.”

Vivio smiled. She hadn’t just thanked Syn for taking care of her bucket. Vivio knew why Syn had taunted the teacher. She knew Vivio hated being alone, so she tagged along to keep her company.

She smiled. Syn always knew what to say to make her feel better when she was feeling down.

And that’s why she loved her.

[PhoenixG]

Roflmao.... evil overlord..... XD

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Stuff like that happens:

Spoiler for and then some:

*snip*

Ha! I knew it! Teachers ARE evil overlords!!
Ah, poor, poor Vivio. Never, ever mock Murphy. He's always watching...and waiting

@Thread: So...should I continue the fic and add in some mage vs shito action?

[Ottocycle]

@Thread: All who've read Keroko's fic, a-one-and-a-two! sei~no!

Awwwwwwwwwww.

Oh by the way Keroko, I hope chapter 12's title page isn't too much for you...

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

In all the time I have been with the military I had never once wished something would happen just so I could do something. Be it a scramble, alert, sudden training, working out, shopping for the week's food, cooking... something always had my interest. So much so that I often stayed up late to make sure I got everything done. Now, however, I found myself doing something I haven't done in I don't know how long. I was laying on the couch with ear buds in to listen to Tia's music via her mp3 type device. Arf was in her child form laying on top of me sleeping but I could tell by her tail lazily wagging and hitting my leg that she enjoyed the petting I was giving her. One hand hung off the couch and reached into a bag of chips that I had been munching on for a while now, even though I wasn't really all that hungry. Hayate was with Yuuno somewhere along with Signum and Shamal working on their secret weapon against Tri-Edge while my forwards were training with Fate outside in a barrier. Arf stretched out lightly and shifted to lay her head on my chest more, breathing steadily again almost immediately. Though all this, only one thought kept passing through my head: 'I am so bored!'

6th Mobile Division: Redemption VII
By: Satashi

~**~

Need lots and lots of support >.<

O.O ... ... ... ... YES~! 6th division's back on. Don't get me wrong I loved SbtB but the 6th Division stories are my favorites. We're here to offer all the cheering and support you need.

[Sam the Onion]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Dear Momo, there are two kinds of Adult Stuff in this world, the obsene and the cute, Emerald Bell is on the side of the Cutes ^.^

Isn't that kinda tight cut? Where's the gray?

Originally Posted by Satashi

In all the time I have been with the military I had never once wished something would happen just so I could do something. Be it a scramble, alert, sudden training, working out, shopping for the week's food, cooking... something always had my interest. So much so that I often stayed up late to make sure I got everything done. Now, however, I found myself doing something I haven't done in I don't know how long. I was laying on the couch with ear buds in to listen to Tia's music via her mp3 type device. Arf was in her child form laying on top of me sleeping but I could tell by her tail lazily wagging and hitting my leg that she enjoyed the petting I was giving her. One hand hung off the couch and reached into a bag of chips that I had been munching on for a while now, even though I wasn't really all that hungry. Hayate was with Yuuno somewhere along with Signum and Shamal working on their secret weapon against Tri-Edge while my forwards were training with Fate outside in a barrier. Arf stretched out lightly and shifted to lay her head on my chest more, breathing steadily again almost immediately. Though all this, only one thought kept passing through my head: 'I am so bored!'

6th Mobile Division: Redemption VII
By: Satashi

~**~

Need lots and lots of support >.<

Wait... Haven't we had this same teaser once already? Well, a reminder is always good but now you made half of the anticipation drives here humming anxiously

Need lots and lots of support >.<

Spoiler for off topic:

new mai hime shiznat

More yuri couples by Satashi? And it's a pair I'm rooting for? Count me in

Originally Posted by Keroko

Stuff like that happens:

Spoiler for and then some:

*snip*

Originally Posted by humbug23

@Thread: All who've read Keroko's fic, a-one-and-a-two! sei~no!

Awwwwwwwwwww.

Awwwwwwwwwww.

Spoiler for 186 & 187:

”Caro you sure take good care of that egg.” Subaru peeks from behind me.

”Yes.” I watch as she crouches to see it better. It is a common sight these days her to see me holding this egg and just looking at it. People say that I should keep it warm so nowadays I carry a thick blanket with me everywhere I go. I just don't want to part from this.

”What are you going to do with it?” She asks, inspecting the egg with her eyes.

”I'll think that once I see what comes out.” It might come as a shock if it really weren't a dragon in the first place. It was Ehcil who was broken, the woman and book should still be someway intact even that they are forgotten as well.

”You still doubt my theory of it being a dragon egg? You even said that it was a dragon.” Subaru pouts childlishly. I know she's faking that look.

”Life is full of surprises.” I smile mysteriously.

”Hoo~?” She grabs her chin and eyes me curiously. ”Did something special happen on that picnic trip? You seem to act more mature.”

Really? Maybe I do. I don't really think stuff like that. I just want to enjoy these days until I am wrinkled even that I know it's just a childish dream.

What I want most is that these days wouldn't be forgotten like that battle against Ehcil. I am allowed to dream. I am a child after all.

I already know that one day we will all separate to go our own ways.

”Suspicious silence...” Subaru states, staring at me with narrow eyes.

”I was thinking.” I smile and turn to look at the egg again. ”They moved...” I stagger out words.

”Moved?” Subaru twitches from the question and looks at the egg I'm staring at. ”What did?” She turns back to me.

”The red eyes.” I explain with a hint of fear in my voice.

”Red eyes?” Subaru takes a good look at the egg before placing her hand on my forehead. ”No, it's not fever.” She pulls her hand back.

”What do you mean?” I question petrified.

”You're delurious again. The egg is all white.” Subaru nods at the egg.

White? No, those red eyes are everywhere you look at it.

"'Are you my master?"' Female voices echo in my head.

”Caro what's wrong?” Subaru asks with worry in her voice. It seems the shock transferred to my face.

”Who are you?” My palms start to sweat and I can hear my heartbeat.

"'My name is Rie. I ask of you again, are you the one who broke me?"'

____________________

The stone field continues for almost as long as you can see. Well managed trees fill up the desolate field. A man stands alone, facing one of the stones. The wind is cold and strong enough for him to think twice about placing the flowers. But he is in no rush and decides to wait until the wind is subdued. The night arrives and he still stands there holding the flowers with two hands.

”Strange,” He speaks at the stone. ”how you find the courage to tell it only when it's too late.” A laugh full of guilt fills the silent night.

”I just wanted to confirm it.” He places the flowers carefully on the green grass in front of the stone. ”But I was too late.”

A sudden wind grabs the flowers and they fly up to the starry sky. ”Well, you never liked flowers anyway.” He smirks, watching the petals dance. ”But because she loved them, you had to keep watering them. I still remember how much you protested the construction of the rose garden.” A longing smile appears on his face briefly as to wait for a comment.

”Like she promised, you two will rest together.” He turns his head slowly at the next stone. ”'Good friends save your life but best friends follow you to grave' was a saying in my home country. Not a very cheery though.” He brings his hands together and breathes warm air on them.

”I... I'm sorry.” He crouches down and lowers his head. ”Because of me, Glia died. Why did we even go hunt lost logia in the first place!?” He curses himself. ”And you died waiting for us.” Tears of regret fill his eyes and drop to the ground after moisting his nose. ”But that's not the only reason I came here.” He takes a deep breath and blows it away slowly to calm himself. ”Hehe... I get nervous even that you're not here to answer.”

”Miy... I think I-.”

”Young master stop sniveling like that and start moving. How long did you plan to make me wait?” An old man walks the road and interrupts the conversation.

”Mahagar-san can't you read the scene!?” He glares angrily at the old man.

”Hohoho~ You're 70 years early to talk back at me.” Mahagar laughs.

”Actually, I'm older than you.” Aren corrects and wipes his tears away.

”You're kid through and through.” Mahagar places his wrinked hand on the man's shoulder. ”I think she knew and felt the same, but couldn't find the courage to say it.” He comforts with knowledge.

”It's sad that the only thing that prevented us from being together in those days was our wish for the days to continue like they were.” Aren turns his back at the tombstone.

”Changes are intimidating for most people.” Mahagar squeezes the shoulder tightly. ”Let's go have a drink. I'm going to go soon as well.” He faces the gate far away and starts walking toward it.

”Geezers like you ain't going anywhere.” Aren raises from the grave and walks with the old man. ”I'm sorry Miy, Glia. Forgive me.” He stops to look at the two stones for one last time.

Spoiler for Special:

And here's the real end. Congratulations, you've just very likely finished reading about 110k words of one man's delurious ramblings in boredom. I hope you enjoyed reading as much as I enjoyed writing.

Thank you for spending time on reading this.

[Mae]

Hmm, a bit of a random question for you guys, but not one without purpose. I promise lol.

If Nanoha were an animal, or had an animal form like Yuuno... What animal would she be?

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Mae

Hmm, a bit of a random question for you guys, but not one without purpose. I promise lol.

If Nanoha were an animal, or had an animal form like Yuuno... What animal would she be?

That's...a good question

[yoshilord]

let's see she can be...

an eagle since she loves the air and strikes with accuracy from a distance

a lion since she can hunt both alone and in a pack and takes great care of the pride

a bear which is normally docile and eats easy food but when threatens (especially a mother bear's child) grows fierce and unstoppable

then of course 6th division nanoha will be a bunny

[Aaron008R]

Hmm...

According to cosplay...



Hayate = Racoon
Fate = Cat
Nanoha = Dog

It kinda fits since she's as friendly as you get...

:3 :3 :3

*runs*

[Thesinwithin]

... I can see Fate as a cat, but I don't know about Hayate as a raccoon. Do they have... special symbolism in Japan or something?

[Aaron008R]

Nah. The racoon thing came from Genya. he calls Hayate a smart little 'Tanuki' (racoon) a number of times. They even showed her with Racoon tail and ears in one of the official manga's when he was reprimanding her for being negative.

[Satashi]

Nanoha animal, huh?

Spoiler for responce:

Well, eagle sounds good, but an eagle is a bird of prey... which doesn't strike me as Nanoha.


Flying, wise, I'd consider a humming bird. Quick to move and zip around and very free. Not aggressive but still a wonder to behold because they beat their wings so fast ( like Nanoha works so hard)


Ground wise...... hmmmmm.....I'd go with a dog. Very loyal, friendly (but deadly when enraged), and the type to lead. Maybe a husky?

P.S: I got really sick tonight so my proofing of Week only got half-done. I'll have to finish it tomorrow before posting on FF.N . (It's over 13,000 words!)

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Nanoha animal, huh?

Spoiler for responce:

Well, eagle sounds good, but an eagle is a bird of prey... which doesn't strike me as Nanoha.


Flying, wise, I'd consider a humming bird. Quick to move and zip around and very free. Not aggressive but still a wonder to behold because they beat their wings so fast ( like Nanoha works so hard)


Ground wise...... hmmmmm.....I'd go with a dog. Very loyal, friendly (but deadly when enraged), and the type to lead. Maybe a husky?

P.S: I got really sick tonight so my proofing of Week only got half-done. I'll have to finish it tomorrow before posting on FF.N . (It's over 13,000 words!)

XD

[Kaix]

T_T Seems like I managed to miss quite a few pages of interesting stuff. XD

It took exactly 150 minutes to read it all, time during which in my apartment there could be heard numerous reports on loud banding and falling caused by instances of brain splatter, head explosions and the good 'ole 'fall of the chair' and dieing of laughter.
Thank you FanFiction thread!

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

Undercover Chapter Six, "The Truth is Worse"

Spoiler for Notes::

-I lost my first kiss in a very foolish way, and things like that are supposed to be very special, so I can understand why Fate was a little upset (yet happy) to lose it in that manner.

-When I thought about it, I figured that as soon as it became clear to Fate that Nanoha had feelings for her, she would completely go into denial about it. While Fate is never one to look a gift horse in the mouth, I think that she would angst a little bit about why Nanoha made a decision like that, especially because to her, Nanoha's decision seems completely out of the blue. But now that Nanoha's confessed, she's starting to realize that she never wanted anything else, and Fate is almost afraid to admit that.

-I had trouble with the characterization in the second section, for it seemed as though Nanoha would be the one to volunteer when something impossible was suggested, but Nanoha is not, by any stretch of the imagination, suicidal. I merely wanted to have a reason for Chrono to put his foot down and issue orders, plus, Fate needs to realize just how much she cares about Nanoha (beyond the obvious attraction).

-At this point, I think that it's safe to say that Fate has killed before. Nanoha, however, has not. Therefore there will be angst, lots of it.

-"From the Sick bay?" "From sick bay?" they both sounded right. D:

- I don't know if you guys know enough Japanese to get this, but my friend James and I were joking about the car jokes in Nanoha, and I was all, "Quick, get me a car joke to call the school where the zombies are!" and he said, "Shinkuru!" which is a bastardization of Shin (dead) and kuruma (which is car). So that's where the school's name came from. lol.

-The program that the Club President is using is CAD, but you don't really need to know that.

-In Episode Three of the first season, Nanoha uses a wide-area scanning spell to find a lost logia, this is a modification of that spell. The results of that scan are both numerical and imaged based. Raising Heart uses magical energy to see through high-level shielding on a molecular level so that helps to give a clear picture of both the linker core and the human soul, or psyche. The images are just basically heat readings, along with some graphs, but Nanoha knows how to read them.

-If the TSAB is like any other government agency, then they fear tyranny in all forms and will endeavor to protect against it cropping up in places they control. For a police officer (such as Fate or Nanoha) to act to restrict someone's freedom, such as sealing a lost logia without first being provoked is a form of tyranny and therefore unacceptable to the TSAB. If my poli sci classes are to be believed, anyway, but anyway, it's normal to wait until attacked before returning fire. It's considered defensive strategy.

Very good chapter. Things seem to be moving quite quick now.

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

What's this? Is this... pt 2 of Bodyguard!Nanoha? Why yes yes it is.

Spoiler for Bodyguard!Nanoha:

-cut-

Part 1 for those who don't remember or missed it.

Soaps called Fate? Where did that come from? Good to see Zafira around and the conversation at the door was just hilarious!

Originally Posted by mercurianangel

~Emerald Bell~
A Sataurial Production

Spoiler for Page 1:

Spoiler for Page 2:

Spoiler for Page 3:

Spoiler for Page 4:

Whoops...just kidding...
That's pretty much all I can post here while not breaking any rules XD
The rest can be found on my DA page, but you'll need an account there to view mature content. I believe other sources are mentioned on Satashi's Saved by the Bell Epilogue. ^_^

That was beautiful! A true work of art. The attention to details was especially catchy (like the small images at the corner of each page, gave it all a very 'complete' feeling).

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Chapter 28

Vatican Knights

markesellus is going to love this chapter

Spoiler for Union:

-cut-

The ending... yeah... just let our perverted minds work out the details, eh? XD

Spoiler for what Alphonse and Helga did:

THEY ARE JUST GOING TO HAVE A PRIVATE TEA PARTY!

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Chapter 29

Vatican Knights

Spoiler for Mad people:

-cut-

I think it's obvious where they fell... but how they will get out?

Originally Posted by Keroko

Stuff like that happens:

Spoiler for and then some:

-cut-

Awwwwwwwwwww.