2012-07-21, 10:19 | Link #36763 | |
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I've also readed some of the few criticism posted on ff.net but personally i think that little bit of OOC is acceptable in order to keep things moving on. Signum was also discovering something new and was in a pretty stressful state at the moment she faced Testarossa so it's justifable what happened xD Go and keep up the good work xD
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2012-07-21, 11:38 | Link #36765 |
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Lhklan, probably no one has any idea. You also haven't provided any link to your story, so it isn't easy for anyone to take a look at it and give you feedback in that area. That said, the title and summary are something you, as the author, should be doing. Only you know where your fic is going; we don't. So we don't know what kind of title or summary would be appropriate.
Also, if no one responds to your initial post, it's considered bad form to keep reposting. If no one responds, then one just has to assume that no one has any ideas. Many times I have posted something and got no real response. That's just the way it happens. |
2012-07-21, 13:45 | Link #36767 |
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Join Date: Jun 2012
Location: Utah
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8053321/..._the_Night_Sky
Again Hayate with the tease... http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8316225/...Lyrical_Record Rather original idea of what's being used as the base here |
2012-07-21, 18:20 | Link #36769 |
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A big thanks to Rising Dragon for helping me curb some of the crazier ideas I had for this.
SSX ViVid 1-10 ViVid 11 Spoiler for Blood That Flows - ViVid 12:
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2012-07-21, 21:43 | Link #36772 | |
GregOS Offline
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Philippines
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Odin: I think They'll enjoy a BEER-GIN. *drinks a glass of 3 parts Beer and one part Gin in one go.* Ahhh..... Elane: That's not what I mean, brother... Odin: *got another glass of BEER-GIN.* Oh really? I'm not yet drunk. *Drinks the glass in one shot.* Val: Yuuno. Miyuki. Just like what Odin advised to Arisa, just take the tenchi solution. It's all win solution, in our opinion, right Odin? Odin: *Nursing his 3rd glass of BEER-GIN.* Agreed. *Drinks the glass in one shot, yet again.* Elane: You're not yet drunk, Odin? Odin: It will take at least a tanker of 3 part beer and one part gin to make me a little tipsy. Everyone: Odin: What?
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2012-07-21, 22:10 | Link #36773 | |
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And yeah, that's perhaps the first time someone in the Nanoha fandom has shipped Sette with someone. :P Anyway, uploaded Chapter 4: Suspicious Minds to ff.net. For those who wanted to start reading, but perhaps were a bit nervous over having to re-read Crisis and Red Jewel Diaries again, I've re-uploaded the first few chapters of "Through a Mirror, Darkly" with some extra exposition that reviews certain plot points. While re-reading the previous stories would be helpful, the review paragraphs should help refresh your memory about certain things. |
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2012-07-21, 23:44 | Link #36774 | |
Heads or Tails?
Join Date: Sep 2011
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Not unless you are using the japanese way of interpreting "like". |
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2012-07-22, 22:10 | Link #36777 | |
GregOS Offline
Join Date: Jan 2011
Location: Philippines
Age: 36
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Elane: Shymal and Kuma, Shamal: It's Shamal. And don't emulate Kuma. Kuma: Hey! Elane: Just kidding! I'm just screwing around, Shamal. Odin: Someone got a bishōnen and a petankko to play with. Lutecia: *Blushes.* Me: Man, Arashi. If you think your hormones is screwing you up with Vivio's Adult mode, wait till you see Einhart's Female Adult mode. Val: I quote someone from the multi-verse: A Hormone king. Me: And is Cinque still the same or taken those operations that Ginga and Subaru took while they're "growing"? Val: Beats me. Odin: Looks like someone got interested to the kids.
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2012-07-22, 22:16 | Link #36778 |
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Caro: Something wrong, Erio?
Erio: Something's missing, maybe.... Hayate: Kyrie? Erio: Yeah, something like woahhhh Commander Yagami! Hayate: *grin* I need a volunteer to accompany Kyrie (puts up a cute costume with a placard around a rope that says: "Kyrie's play doll <3" Erio: NOOOOOO!!! *gets dragged off* *Florian sisters arrive to see Erio getting dragged out of sight* Kyrie: *slowly follows Hayate* I'm going to check! XD Amitie: *sweatdrop* ......
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2012-07-24, 17:05 | Link #36779 |
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So I guess I haven't post in here since September, eh? Imagine that. At this point I'm so far behind I doubt I'll even bother going through everything, unless some one really really wants me to look at something.
Anyways, apparently there's been some questions about my work. I haven't officially cancelled any of them and the ideas are still all in my head, but here's the thing. Ever since I stopped coming to this thread, my moods have significantly improved and remained as such on a fairly consistant basis. So I'm concerned that if I do come back history will repeat itself and I'll become whiny and annoying again. No one wants that. Quite the connundrum I find myself in =/
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2012-07-24, 17:34 | Link #36780 | |
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