Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Aaah very sweet Satashi-sama. Lovely as always.
I'm thinking of typing up a oneshot before I leave today... On what? Well thats a secret!

Woot Woot! go for it!

and thanks ^^ that came to me while munching a steak sub lol

edit: P.S, thanks for the page claim

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Satashi

@ghazghkull:Syn...syn... don't know what's going on, why Vivio needs bed for Syn... so I stopped reading after the name came up a few times. >.<

LOL That's because Syn is one of Keroko's OC. Since he had gone through the trouble of even creating Syn, in which the relation between Syn and Vivio is like Nanoha and Fate, although I don't know if Syn is synonymous to Nanoha or Fate.

You'll have to ask Keroko on that one

Originally Posted by Satashi

Taking a small break from Vivio, I present to you....

Tia/Subaru!

Spoiler for Tia/Subaru:

Tia's POV

It was something I never thought of, something that I had always taken for granted. She was next to me since the day we met, always an annoyance, always too loud, always making me angry. So why was it now that I felt so alone? Why did I miss her? Why did I long for that annoying laugh to wake me up each morning?

Fate told me it was natural to miss someone you care about... but this was something else. I missed more than just my friend... I missed her. I wanted her to laugh, I wanted her to smile, I wanted her to say my name. How do you handle it, Fate? How do you get by each day without Nanoha next to you? You love her don't you? So why am I oing crazy right now while you are so calm?

A special feeling? Is that it? How can you expect me to understand? You may have that connection with her, but I don't have it with mine. Hell , why would I even want it? there's no reason for it. There's no need for it. There's no...

Why do I miss you?

A screen appeared in front of me as I laid on my bed, the name of the caller scrolling across it with a Yes/No accept button beneath it. My breath caught, my eyes widened. She called me? But the charges to make calls so far across the galxy are...

I hit the accept button.

"Tia." Subaru's voice and picture came to me.

"You idiot, you can't afford things like this!" I scolded her. "What do you want?"

She simply smiled. "I wanted to see you."

My heart skipped a beat. "Just for that...?"

"Mm! Just for that." Subaru was happy. "I only have two mintues to talk but... I hope you're doing okay."

"...Yeah." I reached up and touched the transpartent display on the air and held my hand there. To my surprise the blue haired girl did the same, almost as if they were touching. "Are you well?"

"Mm." The timer blinked on the screen. "I miss you." She does? "When you're back from your mission... please come look me up?"

"Yes," I promised before I knew it. "We'll get ice cream."

She laughed. "Okay!" the last seconds were ticking by. "Take care, Tia."

"Take care... Subaru."

She smiled at me one last time and the screen flashed off. My head sank back down into the pillow and after a few moments I closed my eyes. I hated bittersweet feelings. Damn you, Subaru.

I pulled the covers up to my shoulders and humphed. She better have time for a movie after ice cream.

Cute ^^ That's all I can say ^^

[krisslanza]

Synonymous big word
But I recall Keroko mentioning that really Syn and Vivio's relationship is like Nanoha's and Fate's. That is you can view them as just two very close friends or yuri lovers.

[Master Kosa]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Taking a small break from Vivio, I present to you....

Spoiler for Tia/Subaru!:

Tia's POV

It was something I never thought of, something that I had always taken for granted. She was next to me since the day we met, always an annoyance, always too loud, always making me angry. So why was it now that I felt so alone? Why did I miss her? Why did I long for that annoying laugh to wake me up each morning?

Fate told me it was natural to miss someone you care about... but this was something else. I missed more than just my friend... I missed her. I wanted her to laugh, I wanted her to smile, I wanted her to say my name. How do you handle it, Fate? How do you get by each day without Nanoha next to you? You love her don't you? So why am I oing crazy right now while you are so calm?

A special feeling? Is that it? How can you expect me to understand? You may have that connection with her, but I don't have it with mine. Hell , why would I even want it? there's no reason for it. There's no need for it. There's no...

Why do I miss you?

A screen appeared in front of me as I laid on my bed, the name of the caller scrolling across it with a Yes/No accept button beneath it. My breath caught, my eyes widened. She called me? But the charges to make calls so far across the galxy are...

I hit the accept button.

"Tia." Subaru's voice and picture came to me.

"You idiot, you can't afford things like this!" I scolded her. "What do you want?"

She simply smiled. "I wanted to see you."

My heart skipped a beat. "Just for that...?"

"Mm! Just for that." Subaru was happy. "I only have two mintues to talk but... I hope you're doing okay."

"...Yeah." I reached up and touched the transpartent display on the air and held my hand there. To my surprise the blue haired girl did the same, almost as if they were touching. "Are you well?"

"Mm." The timer blinked on the screen. "I miss you." She does? "When you're back from your mission... please come look me up?"

"Yes," I promised before I knew it. "We'll get ice cream."

She laughed. "Okay!" the last seconds were ticking by. "Take care, Tia."

"Take care... Subaru."

She smiled at me one last time and the screen flashed off. My head sank back down into the pillow and after a few moments I closed my eyes. I hated bittersweet feelings. Damn you, Subaru.

I pulled the covers up to my shoulders and humphed. She better have time for a movie after ice cream.

Nice, especially when there is not so many tia/subaru stories. /Somehow Tia (based on mainly fics I've read) reminds me the same archetype as Natsuki.

-> Vivio - parents day - well I'm really sorry for her, Fate mama is really evil. I'm glad that this cannot happend in our country.

@ someone who said that Finnish is 5th world's most difficult language - It picked my interest so I dare to ask how about Czech?

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by KoSSa

Nice, especially when there is not so many tia/subaru stories. /Somehow Tia (based on mainly fics I've read) reminds me the same archetype as Natsuki.

Natsuki? From what series? Natsuki Kuga/Kruger from the Mai-Hime/Otome series?

[Kagerou]

@Ghaz: I read it... I just don't have a solid opinion cause I hate kids >.<

Originally Posted by Satashi

Fate: Californiiiiiiaaaaaaaaa! Here we coooooomeeeeeee!

Spoiler for THE OC THEME SONG!:

THE OC THEME SONG!


We post on the run
writing in the sun
Striving to be #1
Outer Cadia here we come
Nanoha is where we started from

Enforcers grab your guns
Our backlog weighs a ton
typing down the 101
Outer Cadia here we come
Nanoha is where we started from

Outer Cadia!
Here we come!

On the forums
Typing Blue cheesium
Even mods can't stop us now
Outer Cadia here we come
Nanoha is where we started from
Typing on the keyboard
Typing over the roar
Gotta post this before I go
Outer Cadia here we come
Nanoha is where we started from

Outer Cadia!
Here we come!

^^ Glad you liked

*facepalm* Okay, I lol'd a little bit. I'm guessing you came up with that on the spot.

Now all I see is Nana Mizuki Fate singing that.

Originally Posted by Satashi

@ghazghkull:Syn...syn... don't know what's going on, why Vivio needs bed for Syn... so I stopped reading after the name came up a few times. >.<

Jedi Mind Trick: The power of the OC compels you to try again.

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Isn't Syn that OC Keroko made I believe? In a simple term if Vivio were Nanoha, Syn is Fate. That kind of relationship.

I think.

Yep. Pretty much.

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

LOL That's because Syn is one of Keroko's OC. Since he had gone through the trouble of even creating Syn, in which the relation between Syn and Vivio is like Nanoha and Fate, although I don't know if Syn is synonymous to Nanoha or Fate.

You'll have to ask Keroko on that one

Right on both accounts. Over in Outer Cadia, I've been using Syn quite a lot for just that purpose .

[Junkedcat]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Taking a small break from Vivio, I present to you....

Tia/Subaru!

Spoiler for Tia POV:

Tia's POV

It was something I never thought of, something that I had always taken for granted. She was next to me since the day we met, always an annoyance, always too loud, always making me angry. So why was it now that I felt so alone? Why did I miss her? Why did I long for that annoying laugh to wake me up each morning?

Fate told me it was natural to miss someone you care about... but this was something else. I missed more than just my friend... I missed her. I wanted her to laugh, I wanted her to smile, I wanted her to say my name. How do you handle it, Fate? How do you get by each day without Nanoha next to you? You love her don't you? So why am I oing crazy right now while you are so calm?

A special feeling? Is that it? How can you expect me to understand? You may have that connection with her, but I don't have it with mine. Hell , why would I even want it? there's no reason for it. There's no need for it. There's no...

Why do I miss you?

A screen appeared in front of me as I laid on my bed, the name of the caller scrolling across it with a Yes/No accept button beneath it. My breath caught, my eyes widened. She called me? But the charges to make calls so far across the galxy are...

I hit the accept button.

"Tia." Subaru's voice and picture came to me.

"You idiot, you can't afford things like this!" I scolded her. "What do you want?"

She simply smiled. "I wanted to see you."

My heart skipped a beat. "Just for that...?"

"Mm! Just for that." Subaru was happy. "I only have two mintues to talk but... I hope you're doing okay."

"...Yeah." I reached up and touched the transpartent display on the air and held my hand there. To my surprise the blue haired girl did the same, almost as if they were touching. "Are you well?"

"Mm." The timer blinked on the screen. "I miss you." She does? "When you're back from your mission... please come look me up?"

"Yes," I promised before I knew it. "We'll get ice cream."

She laughed. "Okay!" the last seconds were ticking by. "Take care, Tia."

"Take care... Subaru."

She smiled at me one last time and the screen flashed off. My head sank back down into the pillow and after a few moments I closed my eyes. I hated bittersweet feelings. Damn you, Subaru.

I pulled the covers up to my shoulders and humphed. She better have time for a movie after ice cream.

Small break is happily accepted .

*teasing voice* Tia's got feelings....

Long distance relationships (of any kind) sap the crap out of people. Maybe Tia ought to take some pointers from Fate on how to get by when your separated from someone. Though somehow I expect she might regret it if Fate starts elaborating of Nanoha's "bunny" tendencies.

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

Long distance relationships (of any kind) sap the crap out of people. Maybe Tia ought to take some pointers from Fate on how to get by when your separated from someone. Though somehow I expect she might regret it if Fate starts elaborating of Nanoha's "bunny" tendencies.

LOL! "Bunny tendencies." I love it! LOL XD

[Junkedcat]

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

LOL! "Bunny tendencies." I love it! LOL XD

I can see Nanoha sitting at home waiting for Fate to arrive with a leg shaking up and down. When she does arrive the poor girl can't even get a foot in the door without being tackled and being dragged off for who knows what to make up for the time they were apart.

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

I can see Nanoha sitting at home waiting for Fate to arrive with a leg shaking up and down. When she does arrive the poor girl can't even get a foot in the door without being tackled and being dragged off for who knows what to make up for the time they were apart.

that's the Nanoha we all love so much

@satashi
nice short

[Satashi]

Bunny tendacies.....

Spoiler for NSFW:

Fate smiled happily at the video feed of Nanoha in front of her. "So," she trailed off happily after almost two hours of talking.

"So," Nanoha repeated, leaning forward slightly. "Take off your shirt."

"Wha-what!? What is this so suddenly?"

"Fate-chaaaan~"

"....Mou." Fate undid her buttons slowly, removing her shirt.

"Bra too."

"but-" The pleading blue eyes made her melt. "Okay..." The black fabric was laid on the bed. Nanoha grinned and leaned back, undoing her skirt. "Are you planning on...?"

"Yup," Nanoha grinned. "Telephone sex. Get your toys."

"..." Fate looked to the side for a few moments before grinning. "Get yours too , be right back!"

Spoiler for NSFW text about completed lemon:

Anyway, speaking of... I finished Love Ties last night. I'm going to get an accoutn on mediaminer when I get home from work and link to there. Siunce it's lemon, PMs get links.

Name: Love Ties
Length: Not sure, I'm at work lol. It's about 5,000 words.
Rating: MA. Yes, that's right: MA. Which means it's not my normal one. Although not like that one I did for a request, I'm happy with this one. It's graphic, has a few words in it, and shows a side of the girls that no one ever sees. It also shows love and trust, and if you get past the hot steamy action of it, you'll see just how much they really care for each other.

This story is a little hard core, but I did it for a reason. I tried to make it hot and heavy without making it sound like a 13 year old male in puberty wrote it. MY point of this story isn't a plot, but rather that love-scenes ( no matter how kinky) CAN and SHOULD be written properly. Although I prefer my general implied love-making to this detailed action, I still think it's a good read. PM and I'll link later today ^.^

Special thanks to Angel for the inspiration to write this
Get your mind out of the gutter, perv.

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Bunny tendacies.....

Spoiler for NSFW:

Fate smiled happily at the video feed of Nanoha in front of her. "So," she trailed off happily after almost two hours of talking.

"So," Nanoha repeated, leaning forward slightly. "Take off your shirt."

"Wha-what!? What is this so suddenly?"

"Fate-chaaaan~"

"....Mou." Fate undid her buttons slowly, removing her shirt.

"Bra too."

"but-" The pleading blue eyes made her melt. "Okay..." The black fabric was laid on the bed. Nanoha grinned and leaned back, undoing her skirt. "Are you planning on...?"

"Yup," Nanoha grinned. "Telephone sex. Get your toys."

"..." Fate looked to the side for a few moments before grinning. "Get yours too , be right back!"

Spoiler for NSFW text about completed lemon:

Anyway, speaking of... I finished Love Ties last night. I'm going to get an accoutn on mediaminer when I get home from work and link to there. Siunce it's lemon, PMs get links.

Name: Love Ties
Length: Not sure, I'm at work lol. It's about 5,000 words.
Rating: MA. Yes, that's right: MA. Which means it's not my normal one. Although not like that one I did for a request, I'm happy with this one. It's graphic, has a few words in it, and shows a side of the girls that no one ever sees. It also shows love and trust, and if you get past the hot steamy action of it, you'll see just how much they really care for each other.

This story is a little hard core, but I did it for a reason. I tried to make it hot and heavy without making it sound like a 13 year old male in puberty wrote it. MY point of this story isn't a plot, but rather that love-scenes ( no matter how kinky) CAN and SHOULD be written properly. Although I prefer my general implied love-making to this detailed action, I still think it's a good read. PM and I'll link later today ^.^

Special thanks to Angel for the inspiration to write this
Get your mind out of the gutter, perv.

*Drools in anticipation* I await to see what magic you have pulled out of your hat :3

[Krinen]

Originally Posted by ghazghkull

*Drools in anticipation* I await to see what magic you have pulled out of your hat :3

And "Hat Magic" is the best kind, too! Looking forward to it.

[mercurianangel]

Originally Posted by KoSSa

Nice, especially when there is not so many tia/subaru stories. /Somehow Tia (based on mainly fics I've read) reminds me the same archetype as Natsuki.

Spoiler for that's cause:

[Kha]

Originally Posted by mercurianangel

Spoiler for that's cause:

Actually...

Spoiler for Heehee...:

...Outer Cadians will know the significance of this.

*RUNS*

[Krinen]

Originally Posted by Kha

Actually...

Spoiler for Heehee...:

...Outer Cadians will know the significance of this.

*RUNS*

*preps to set off on an epic journey to scour Outer Cadia for the meaning of this.

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Kha

Actually...

Spoiler for Heehee...:

...Outer Cadians will know the significance of this.

*RUNS*

Fate Stay/Night is really good

but I never thought something like that
*confused*

[Wild Goose]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Bunny tendacies.....

Spoiler for NSFW:

Fate smiled happily at the video feed of Nanoha in front of her. "So," she trailed off happily after almost two hours of talking.

"So," Nanoha repeated, leaning forward slightly. "Take off your shirt."

"Wha-what!? What is this so suddenly?"

"Fate-chaaaan~"

"....Mou." Fate undid her buttons slowly, removing her shirt.

"Bra too."

"but-" The pleading blue eyes made her melt. "Okay..." The black fabric was laid on the bed. Nanoha grinned and leaned back, undoing her skirt. "Are you planning on...?"

"Yup," Nanoha grinned. "Telephone sex. Get your toys."

"..." Fate looked to the side for a few moments before grinning. "Get yours too , be right back!"

Spoiler for NSFW text about completed lemon:

Anyway, speaking of... I finished Love Ties last night. I'm going to get an accoutn on mediaminer when I get home from work and link to there. Siunce it's lemon, PMs get links.

Name: Love Ties
Length: Not sure, I'm at work lol. It's about 5,000 words.
Rating: MA. Yes, that's right: MA. Which means it's not my normal one. Although not like that one I did for a request, I'm happy with this one. It's graphic, has a few words in it, and shows a side of the girls that no one ever sees. It also shows love and trust, and if you get past the hot steamy action of it, you'll see just how much they really care for each other.

This story is a little hard core, but I did it for a reason. I tried to make it hot and heavy without making it sound like a 13 year old male in puberty wrote it. MY point of this story isn't a plot, but rather that love-scenes ( no matter how kinky) CAN and SHOULD be written properly. Although I prefer my general implied love-making to this detailed action, I still think it's a good read. PM and I'll link later today ^.^

Special thanks to Angel for the inspiration to write this
Get your mind out of the gutter, perv.

Lol, phonesex. This'll be interesting.

Hmmm... perhaps I should start posting the Prelude to Alpha shorts here, since they're intended as backstory to MSLN Alpha...

[Kagerou]

Originally Posted by Gillian

Fate Stay/Night is really good

but I never thought something like that
*confused*

Don't think about it too hard. Your head will explode.

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Kha

Actually...

Spoiler for Heehee...:

...Outer Cadians will know the significance of this.

*RUNS*

Yes, typical Kha

I'm gonna quote Aaron here:

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

KHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!

King of Crack and Bluecheesium all right

And....

In what timeline does that happen?