Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

AAA = Top 5 percentile?

<jaw drops> Oh dear god... WHAT HAVE I DONE?

You've skyrocketed the Phantasm's HAXX rating...

<tears up> Ano... Eeto... Datte.. UGUUUUuuuuuuuUUUUUUUUUUUUuuuuuuuuuuuuuuUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU uuuuuuuuuuuuUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU~!

Aaron-onii-chan...

dame?

<sighs; hangs head>

Okay, okay, I give!

Truth is... I had started the fic with only 20 AAA mages as opponents - but I kept coming up with little battle snippets I wanted to throw in... and the numbers just kept expanding <begins to cry a la Lindy>... Mommy just wanted to write... is that so wrong?

<pauses> I'm doing it again! <bonks self on head> Bad Reiji! Stop trying to garner sympathy!

But seriously, I didn't know that little fact about Magic Ranks... if it helps, imagine the battle as two sets of twenty AAA mages.

NEW MATERIAL!!!!


Sorry for Phantasm haxx... I'll try to tone down in future.

That won't work if it's a guy doing it! Eeewww...

In any case, now that you know that AAA is only achieved by around 5% of the entire population, I guess you'll be more careful now...

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

Yet more stuff to plough through. Not that I mind, of course.

That piece of yours back there by you, Gale, was touching, I might say. Uno, sticking with the Doctor to the end, thourgh thick and thin...eh?

And, to both you and Kha, that little CinquexErio snippet shows the boy really is following in the footsteps of a certain someone.

@Reiji: Discussed before but...winning against 40 AAA+ mages? Dang there. I'm not complaining, I just find it...woah, simply.

And now, a piece:

Spoiler for Past Happenings:

Eleven years ago...

"Doctor! Doctor!"

The purple-haired, white-coated scientist, none other than Jail Scaglietti, doctor, genius, and a certified madman, who was currently craning over a control sonsole studying some work of his, turned his head towards the source of the noise. It was a man with blonde hair and eyes of gray, who, too, was dressed in white. He had a clipboard under one arm, and was running, almost breathlessly, to place himself in front of Jail.

The "Doctor" greeted him with a grin. "Ah, Enzo", he uttered. "How did I predict that you would come scurrying over here without notice..." He chuckled mildly to himself, then carried on. "I assume this is about your project?"

The out of breath figure before him, one Enzo Scudera, nodded apprehensively. "That it is, my friend", he answered, then made a gesture with his free hand. "Follow me, if you will?"

The smirk on the Doctor's face widened visibly at this. "You have something to present to me after all this time?", he asked, his voice having a barely conealed tone of excitement to it. Once again, his colleague nodded, and lifted up his clipboard, pointing at certain scribblings on the sheets it held.

"The first five models have been completed, Jail", he replied. :All is going as scheduled, and I just need..." He was about to continue, but stopped short when he realised something was amiss.

"Ah!" He spun round, facing Jail. "I will need to have your companions present for this. The Numbers, so you call them."

Scaglietti, still bearing his look of satisfaction, inquired in a part-confused yet part-understanding voice: "You want them to bear witness to your work, as well?"

"That I do, and most promptly,: was the reply Jail recieved.

It was then that he called out their names, from Uno to Cinque. Enzo noted that he had oddly missed out the fourth in the line, and wondered why, but quickly cast that thought aside.

It took mere moments before the four were present before the pair of scientists. Enzo allowed a smile to line his features. :Good, good...: he mused. :Let's go on, shall we?"

The group of six walked along a long, deserted hallway to a lone door at the far end, passing tubed on either side that contained the bodies of floating female figures. The Numbers were mostly quite during the small excursion, at least in the case of Uno, Due and Cinque. Enzo overheard Tre muttering to the Doctor, with the latter shrugging the questions off by responding in a somewhat carefree tone.

"Expressing distrust?" Enzo wondered. He pondered for a moment, then scoffed. "As expected, really...but they'll come to know me soon enough."

He halted his pacing before an automatic door, formed of some kind of odd material. As he took a step forward, it slid open, smoothly. He turned to the entourage behind him, and excalimed, proudly:

"Feast your eyes- take in what you see before you!"

The Doctor was overjoyed by what he saw- tanks ahead of him, their light illuminating the dimly lit room. Inside them, there were several male figures in a state of cryogenic sleep suspended by liquid. Some were almost completed, others partly. Nevertheless, the Doctor clapped in celebration.

"Impressive!", he shouted, his voice echoing around the laboratory. "Most impressive."

"But that's not all!", Enzo countered, and motioned to a line of five shadowed figures standing ahead of him.

Jail examined them in awe. Each of them was wearing a tuxedo. He passed the five, walking down the line, viewing them closely, noting that one of them was wearing half a mask and another wearing an eye patch over his right eye. Jail then turned to Enzo.

"Are they active?"

"Why, of course!" The figures Scaglietti was examining proved themselves to be very much alive when they turned their heads towards Enzo upon hearing him. The scientist continued by asking: "Why don't you, A...introduce yourself and the rest of your brothers?"

At once, the leading man in the line responded.

"A. First of the Letters. Acting under the orders of Father Enzo (Enzo grinned at this) and Dr. Jail Scaglietti. Willing to serve."

The introductions for the remaining four passed quickly- all chose to intorduce themselves in a different and speedier manner than that of A.

"B, ready and waiting."

"C, here."

"D, at your service."

"E, present."

Both Enzo and Jail smiled in success. An odd silence passed, only broken when Cinque put forwars a question to Scudera.

"Who...who are they?"

Enzo about-turned, slowly, a look of nothing but sheer triumph plastered on his face, and made a grand gesture towards the line of five.

"These," he replied, cheerily, "...are your brothers."

Feedback be good and all. And this is also a year before Quattro was activated, as shown in the passage.

Nice.
Can we expect sister to brother interactions next time?

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Part II!

Spoiler for The 2nd Child:

Spoiler for Juliet Scaglietti:

Name: Juliet (( Scaglietti ))
Codename: Paraphilia
Gender: Female
Age: ?? (( Appearance-wise late-teens ))
Height: 153cm
Weight: 40kg
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Dark-green

Magic Potential: Ground Combat A as of StrikerS.

The 2nd child after Zerria, Juliet was born of Due instead. Inheriting the more…chaotic nature of her blood parents, her inner personality is a lot like Jail’s, only mixed with Due’s charm and pretense. However, unlike her father and brother, the Unlimited Desire within her is much more diluted, as she seeks personal enjoyment and nothing more, not being especially ambitious on grand scales like her brother and father, but rather prefers to enjoy what’s in front of her.

“It’s fine to just have fun, isn’t it? After all, all the world’s the limit.”

Although she has various degrees of greed that range on a more human scale like pleasure, money, among other things…. Her biggest pleasure is that of mental manipulation and torture, making people feel most excited and pleasured to their peaks, only to crash down that anticipation. To that extent, she’ll get herself involved in anything so long as it allows her to feel that, be it on a personal scale, or larger ones. It all depends on her mood, ranging from toying with random males, or even watching organizations blow themselves up through various scandals and manipulation of their higher ups.

“Don’t you find it so orgasmic? Just like how people talk about getting higher, higher and higher before their point of climax, don’t you find that feeling that you’ve got something coiled around your hands, but not knowing that, they think they’re in for an utmost pleasure…and just at their peaks…you blast them up to smithereens? Gawd, just thinking makes me wet.”

Although she’s presumably older than how she looks like, having no solid memory of when she was a child, other than learned knowledge, she looks more youthful and looks to be in her mid-teens. Being left out to fend for herself at a young age, she had been living alone for years. Although she does have records of parents among other things, all of it was faked so that she could enroll herself in a learning institute at West Mid-childa, where she had been living most of her years there. Due to that, she is perpetually very independent, and likes to rely on herself to live her life, for most parts with little care for anyone else in the world. In terms of links, her arrogance and self-love is exactly the same as her father’s. However, likewise, she’s the one with the thinnest recollection to her true existence. Regardless, her life is very much rogue-like, as she seeks the worlds for pleasures of her own.

“… Is there anything out there that can keep me interested? A man so perfect I would never get bored from toying with him, or any dangerous activities so dangerous everyday be a fun…”

Presumably to have been affected by her birth condition, aside from possessing a unique breathing structure, she has a degree of magical potential as a A-rank Ground mage, though she’s never officially trained and solely winged it through occasional studies when she felt like it among other things. Even though she’s lazy, she is very smart and talented. A case of underused talent for most parts.

“ Yawn…These stuffs are so easy to wing through it’s not even funny. In fact, it’s boring.”



Her combat tactics uses a mix of stealth and unawareness, utilizing her pheromones to put the enemy off-guard while she either slices up the enemy with her claws or strings, or push the enemy to a position where they’d be killed by her drone. She is however, weak against concentrated attack forces as she had gotten herself involved in some unethical activities occasionally, and resorts to hit-and-run tactics against large numbers.

“…*licks claw*”


Influent Skill : ~Pheromone Exhume~
- Her body’s breathing mechanism works differently as the air she breathes, and the sweat she releases out is mixed with a kind of artificial aphrodiatic essence that causes men and women alike within a 5 meter radius to be aroused, and lacks mental concentration, making them weaker in a way. Direct eye to eye contact too apparently makes people lose their guard.



Inherent Equipment : ~Ripper J~
- Engineered and improved from Due’s own claw-weapons, this version is retrofitted to be comfortably fit for any size, with the weakness that it cannot materialize itself out of nowhere, but rather stored as a bracelet that was given to Juliet by Jail as a child. Attached to each end of the gloves are invisible string-cutters coated with a special metal that has anti-barrier properties like Sette’s boomerangs. Although the strings can be controlled personally, it also has a degree of magnetism effect, stick and rubber effect that can be activated so that it can stick strongly to walls and such to act like a grappler device.



Inherent Drone: ~Type-Proto Omega : July~
- The original prototype for the mass-produced stealth gadget drone that severely injured Nanoha back in the past, this particular drone was designed in mind for stealth assassination missions, and sneak attacks. It was made with no particular specialties, but for Juliet’s 9th birthday, it was upgraded using a special flexible optic-fiber muscles as its limbs to possess a far more natural insect-like movement and speed, alongside being powered by a small magical crystal that improves its stealth, speed, defense and power alongside colored in Juliet’s favorite colors. The special limbs also make it a very effective weapon in urban territories with walls and tall buildings, due to its wall-crawling and wall-jumping prowess that is made possible to the upgrades. However, due to its effective stealth abilities, it is mainly used by Juliet as a secret-resort weapon to kill the enemies that surround her from behind.

Now that the 2nd is done with...TEASERS!

Spoiler for The 3rd Child, Valkyrie?:

Yes, she's inherited her mother's fine assets indeed...

Spoiler for Zerria : The First Case:

“Based on the autopsy and the medical records… none.”

“…None?”

“Yes, there was absolutely no trace of any magic or medication that could’ve caused them to do this. Not to mention, prior to that incident, the investigation team found out that they all went to different institutions for a medical check-up, and all of them were found to be perfectly normal and healthy.”

“There was no motive, no connections, no demands, no external factors whatsoever… the only connection between the criminals was that they’ve all went to the seminar of human studies conducted by that boy, but all evidence, alibi proves that there was no way he could’ve done that.

Unless you want to imply that without magic, medication whatsoever, with only 3 hours, he could’ve made them do this… It’s impossible.”

A sound of continuous fire repeated…

Bang! Bang! Bang!

The sound of ominous fires rang through the base, as the sound emits itself from the cells.

As a group of officers ran their way through the office building into the cell-sector… they saw…one of their own, holding a conventional gun weapon that was confiscated, and kept in storage and shooting randomly to the prisoners in that cell…

The sound of quivering criminals in fear as the ghastly eyes looked for the preys he intends to shoot… only one boy, sitting at the very end of the cells, looked calm as he smiled profusely at the sight before him…

Another shot blasted…and this time, he shot himself in his head, as the blood splattered and hit the surroundings, already covered thick in blood, as the boy gave a almost unheard clap, signaling the end of the spectacle…

And as if completely satisfied, he opened his cell doors as if it was never locked, as he walked his way out slowly…

“Wait! What do you think you’re!”

“I’m already proven innocent, right? What more right is there for you to keep me there?”

Juliet - good And her Drone seems to fit into canon perfectly

Valkyrie -

Zerria - great piece, I like him already

[Liingo]

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

AAA = Top 5 percentile?

But seriously, I didn't know that little fact about Magic Ranks... if it helps, imagine the battle as two sets of twenty AAA mages.

NEW MATERIAL!!!!

Sorry for Phantasm haxx... I'll try to tone down in future.

Well it's top 5% of the mage population. I haven't seen any data that tells us how much of the population is capable of using magic, so in reality people with AAA and above are quite rare. (Although if you were to look at the thread, you'd think differently...)

It's not too bad knowing that you didn't know that bit of info! *waves flags* CHEER UP!!

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

And now, a piece:

Spoiler for Past Happenings:

Eleven years ago...

"Doctor! Doctor!"

The purple-haired, white-coated scientist, none other than Jail Scaglietti, doctor, genius, and a certified madman, who was currently craning over a control sonsole studying some work of his, turned his head towards the source of the noise. It was a man with blonde hair and eyes of gray, who, too, was dressed in white. He had a clipboard under one arm, and was running, almost breathlessly, to place himself in front of Jail.

The "Doctor" greeted him with a grin. "Ah, Enzo", he uttered. "How did I predict that you would come scurrying over here without notice..." He chuckled mildly to himself, then carried on. "I assume this is about your project?"

The out of breath figure before him, one Enzo Scudera, nodded apprehensively. "That it is, my friend", he answered, then made a gesture with his free hand. "Follow me, if you will?"

The smirk on the Doctor's face widened visibly at this. "You have something to present to me after all this time?", he asked, his voice having a barely conealed tone of excitement to it. Once again, his colleague nodded, and lifted up his clipboard, pointing at certain scribblings on the sheets it held.

"The first five models have been completed, Jail", he replied. :All is going as scheduled, and I just need..." He was about to continue, but stopped short when he realised something was amiss.

"Ah!" He spun round, facing Jail. "I will need to have your companions present for this. The Numbers, so you call them."

Scaglietti, still bearing his look of satisfaction, inquired in a part-confused yet part-understanding voice: "You want them to bear witness to your work, as well?"

"That I do, and most promptly,: was the reply Jail recieved.

It was then that he called out their names, from Uno to Cinque. Enzo noted that he had oddly missed out the fourth in the line, and wondered why, but quickly cast that thought aside.

It took mere moments before the four were present before the pair of scientists. Enzo allowed a smile to line his features. :Good, good...: he mused. :Let's go on, shall we?"

The group of six walked along a long, deserted hallway to a lone door at the far end, passing tubed on either side that contained the bodies of floating female figures. The Numbers were mostly quite during the small excursion, at least in the case of Uno, Due and Cinque. Enzo overheard Tre muttering to the Doctor, with the latter shrugging the questions off by responding in a somewhat carefree tone.

"Expressing distrust?" Enzo wondered. He pondered for a moment, then scoffed. "As expected, really...but they'll come to know me soon enough."

He halted his pacing before an automatic door, formed of some kind of odd material. As he took a step forward, it slid open, smoothly. He turned to the entourage behind him, and excalimed, proudly:

"Feast your eyes- take in what you see before you!"

The Doctor was overjoyed by what he saw- tanks ahead of him, their light illuminating the dimly lit room. Inside them, there were several male figures in a state of cryogenic sleep suspended by liquid. Some were almost completed, others partly. Nevertheless, the Doctor clapped in celebration.

"Impressive!", he shouted, his voice echoing around the laboratory. "Most impressive."

"But that's not all!", Enzo countered, and motioned to a line of five shadowed figures standing ahead of him.

Jail examined them in awe. Each of them was wearing a tuxedo. He passed the five, walking down the line, viewing them closely, noting that one of them was wearing half a mask and another wearing an eye patch over his right eye. Jail then turned to Enzo.

"Are they active?"

"Why, of course!" The figures Scaglietti was examining proved themselves to be very much alive when they turned their heads towards Enzo upon hearing him. The scientist continued by asking: "Why don't you, A...introduce yourself and the rest of your brothers?"

At once, the leading man in the line responded.

"A. First of the Letters. Acting under the orders of Father Enzo (Enzo grinned at this) and Dr. Jail Scaglietti. Willing to serve."

The introductions for the remaining four passed quickly- all chose to intorduce themselves in a different and speedier manner than that of A.

"B, ready and waiting."

"C, here."

"D, at your service."

"E, present."

Both Enzo and Jail smiled in success. An odd silence passed, only broken when Cinque put forwars a question to Scudera.

"Who...who are they?"

Enzo about-turned, slowly, a look of nothing but sheer triumph plastered on his face, and made a grand gesture towards the line of five.

"These," he replied, cheerily, "...are your brothers."

Feedback be good and all. And this is also a year before Quattro was activated, as shown in the passage.

I really like how this is turning out Hopefully canon doesn't screw things over for you.

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Part II!

Spoiler for The 2nd Child:

Spoiler for Juliet Scaglietti:

Name: Juliet (( Scaglietti ))
Codename: Paraphilia
Gender: Female
Age: ?? (( Appearance-wise late-teens ))
Height: 153cm
Weight: 40kg
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Dark-green

Magic Potential: Ground Combat A as of StrikerS.

The 2nd child after Zerria, Juliet was born of Due instead. Inheriting the more…chaotic nature of her blood parents, her inner personality is a lot like Jail’s, only mixed with Due’s charm and pretense. However, unlike her father and brother, the Unlimited Desire within her is much more diluted, as she seeks personal enjoyment and nothing more, not being especially ambitious on grand scales like her brother and father, but rather prefers to enjoy what’s in front of her.

“It’s fine to just have fun, isn’t it? After all, all the world’s the limit.”

Although she has various degrees of greed that range on a more human scale like pleasure, money, among other things…. Her biggest pleasure is that of mental manipulation and torture, making people feel most excited and pleasured to their peaks, only to crash down that anticipation. To that extent, she’ll get herself involved in anything so long as it allows her to feel that, be it on a personal scale, or larger ones. It all depends on her mood, ranging from toying with random males, or even watching organizations blow themselves up through various scandals and manipulation of their higher ups.

“Don’t you find it so orgasmic? Just like how people talk about getting higher, higher and higher before their point of climax, don’t you find that feeling that you’ve got something coiled around your hands, but not knowing that, they think they’re in for an utmost pleasure…and just at their peaks…you blast them up to smithereens? Gawd, just thinking makes me wet.”

Although she’s presumably older than how she looks like, having no solid memory of when she was a child, other than learned knowledge, she looks more youthful and looks to be in her mid-teens. Being left out to fend for herself at a young age, she had been living alone for years. Although she does have records of parents among other things, all of it was faked so that she could enroll herself in a learning institute at West Mid-childa, where she had been living most of her years there. Due to that, she is perpetually very independent, and likes to rely on herself to live her life, for most parts with little care for anyone else in the world. In terms of links, her arrogance and self-love is exactly the same as her father’s. However, likewise, she’s the one with the thinnest recollection to her true existence. Regardless, her life is very much rogue-like, as she seeks the worlds for pleasures of her own.

“… Is there anything out there that can keep me interested? A man so perfect I would never get bored from toying with him, or any dangerous activities so dangerous everyday be a fun…”

Presumably to have been affected by her birth condition, aside from possessing a unique breathing structure, she has a degree of magical potential as a A-rank Ground mage, though she’s never officially trained and solely winged it through occasional studies when she felt like it among other things. Even though she’s lazy, she is very smart and talented. A case of underused talent for most parts.

“ Yawn…These stuffs are so easy to wing through it’s not even funny. In fact, it’s boring.”



Her combat tactics uses a mix of stealth and unawareness, utilizing her pheromones to put the enemy off-guard while she either slices up the enemy with her claws or strings, or push the enemy to a position where they’d be killed by her drone. She is however, weak against concentrated attack forces as she had gotten herself involved in some unethical activities occasionally, and resorts to hit-and-run tactics against large numbers.

“…*licks claw*”


Influent Skill : ~Pheromone Exhume~
- Her body’s breathing mechanism works differently as the air she breathes, and the sweat she releases out is mixed with a kind of artificial aphrodiatic essence that causes men and women alike within a 5 meter radius to be aroused, and lacks mental concentration, making them weaker in a way. Direct eye to eye contact too apparently makes people lose their guard.



Inherent Equipment : ~Ripper J~
- Engineered and improved from Due’s own claw-weapons, this version is retrofitted to be comfortably fit for any size, with the weakness that it cannot materialize itself out of nowhere, but rather stored as a bracelet that was given to Juliet by Jail as a child. Attached to each end of the gloves are invisible string-cutters coated with a special metal that has anti-barrier properties like Sette’s boomerangs. Although the strings can be controlled personally, it also has a degree of magnetism effect, stick and rubber effect that can be activated so that it can stick strongly to walls and such to act like a grappler device.



Inherent Drone: ~Type-Proto Omega : July~
- The original prototype for the mass-produced stealth gadget drone that severely injured Nanoha back in the past, this particular drone was designed in mind for stealth assassination missions, and sneak attacks. It was made with no particular specialties, but for Juliet’s 9th birthday, it was upgraded using a special flexible optic-fiber muscles as its limbs to possess a far more natural insect-like movement and speed, alongside being powered by a small magical crystal that improves its stealth, speed, defense and power alongside colored in Juliet’s favorite colors. The special limbs also make it a very effective weapon in urban territories with walls and tall buildings, due to its wall-crawling and wall-jumping prowess that is made possible to the upgrades. However, due to its effective stealth abilities, it is mainly used by Juliet as a secret-resort weapon to kill the enemies that surround her from behind.

Now that the 2nd is done with...TEASERS!

Spoiler for The 3rd Child, Valkyrie?:

Yes, she's inherited her mother's fine assets indeed...

Spoiler for Zerria : The First Case:

“Based on the autopsy and the medical records… none.”

“…None?”

“Yes, there was absolutely no trace of any magic or medication that could’ve caused them to do this. Not to mention, prior to that incident, the investigation team found out that they all went to different institutions for a medical check-up, and all of them were found to be perfectly normal and healthy.”

“There was no motive, no connections, no demands, no external factors whatsoever… the only connection between the criminals was that they’ve all went to the seminar of human studies conducted by that boy, but all evidence, alibi proves that there was no way he could’ve done that.

Unless you want to imply that without magic, medication whatsoever, with only 3 hours, he could’ve made them do this… It’s impossible.”

A sound of continuous fire repeated…

Bang! Bang! Bang!

The sound of ominous fires rang through the base, as the sound emits itself from the cells.

As a group of officers ran their way through the office building into the cell-sector… they saw…one of their own, holding a conventional gun weapon that was confiscated, and kept in storage and shooting randomly to the prisoners in that cell…

The sound of quivering criminals in fear as the ghastly eyes looked for the preys he intends to shoot… only one boy, sitting at the very end of the cells, looked calm as he smiled profusely at the sight before him…

Another shot blasted…and this time, he shot himself in his head, as the blood splattered and hit the surroundings, already covered thick in blood, as the boy gave a almost unheard clap, signaling the end of the spectacle…

And as if completely satisfied, he opened his cell doors as if it was never locked, as he walked his way out slowly…

“Wait! What do you think you’re!”

“I’m already proven innocent, right? What more right is there for you to keep me there?”

WHOA!! That's awesome
Just a question, who's the third person. I don't recognise the source picture. SHe looks alot like the major from Ghost in the Shell but I'm pretty sure it isn't her.

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by Liingo

I don't recognise the source picture. SHe looks alot like the major from Ghost in the Shell but I'm pretty sure it isn't her.

Well, as far as I know it is (SAC version I assume)

[Nightengale]

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

That piece of yours back there by you, Gale, was touching, I might say. Uno, sticking with the Doctor to the end, thourgh thick and thin...eh?

And, to both you and Kha, that little CinquexErio snippet shows the boy really is following in the footsteps of a certain someone.

And now, a piece:

Spoiler for Past Happenings:

Eleven years ago...

"Doctor! Doctor!"

The purple-haired, white-coated scientist, none other than Jail Scaglietti, doctor, genius, and a certified madman, who was currently craning over a control sonsole studying some work of his, turned his head towards the source of the noise. It was a man with blonde hair and eyes of gray, who, too, was dressed in white. He had a clipboard under one arm, and was running, almost breathlessly, to place himself in front of Jail.

The "Doctor" greeted him with a grin. "Ah, Enzo", he uttered. "How did I predict that you would come scurrying over here without notice..." He chuckled mildly to himself, then carried on. "I assume this is about your project?"

The out of breath figure before him, one Enzo Scudera, nodded apprehensively. "That it is, my friend", he answered, then made a gesture with his free hand. "Follow me, if you will?"

The smirk on the Doctor's face widened visibly at this. "You have something to present to me after all this time?", he asked, his voice having a barely conealed tone of excitement to it. Once again, his colleague nodded, and lifted up his clipboard, pointing at certain scribblings on the sheets it held.

"The first five models have been completed, Jail", he replied. :All is going as scheduled, and I just need..." He was about to continue, but stopped short when he realised something was amiss.

"Ah!" He spun round, facing Jail. "I will need to have your companions present for this. The Numbers, so you call them."

Scaglietti, still bearing his look of satisfaction, inquired in a part-confused yet part-understanding voice: "You want them to bear witness to your work, as well?"

"That I do, and most promptly,: was the reply Jail recieved.

It was then that he called out their names, from Uno to Cinque. Enzo noted that he had oddly missed out the fourth in the line, and wondered why, but quickly cast that thought aside.

It took mere moments before the four were present before the pair of scientists. Enzo allowed a smile to line his features. :Good, good...: he mused. :Let's go on, shall we?"

The group of six walked along a long, deserted hallway to a lone door at the far end, passing tubed on either side that contained the bodies of floating female figures. The Numbers were mostly quite during the small excursion, at least in the case of Uno, Due and Cinque. Enzo overheard Tre muttering to the Doctor, with the latter shrugging the questions off by responding in a somewhat carefree tone.

"Expressing distrust?" Enzo wondered. He pondered for a moment, then scoffed. "As expected, really...but they'll come to know me soon enough."

He halted his pacing before an automatic door, formed of some kind of odd material. As he took a step forward, it slid open, smoothly. He turned to the entourage behind him, and excalimed, proudly:

"Feast your eyes- take in what you see before you!"

The Doctor was overjoyed by what he saw- tanks ahead of him, their light illuminating the dimly lit room. Inside them, there were several male figures in a state of cryogenic sleep suspended by liquid. Some were almost completed, others partly. Nevertheless, the Doctor clapped in celebration.

"Impressive!", he shouted, his voice echoing around the laboratory. "Most impressive."

"But that's not all!", Enzo countered, and motioned to a line of five shadowed figures standing ahead of him.

Jail examined them in awe. Each of them was wearing a tuxedo. He passed the five, walking down the line, viewing them closely, noting that one of them was wearing half a mask and another wearing an eye patch over his right eye. Jail then turned to Enzo.

"Are they active?"

"Why, of course!" The figures Scaglietti was examining proved themselves to be very much alive when they turned their heads towards Enzo upon hearing him. The scientist continued by asking: "Why don't you, A...introduce yourself and the rest of your brothers?"

At once, the leading man in the line responded.

"A. First of the Letters. Acting under the orders of Father Enzo (Enzo grinned at this) and Dr. Jail Scaglietti. Willing to serve."

The introductions for the remaining four passed quickly- all chose to intorduce themselves in a different and speedier manner than that of A.

"B, ready and waiting."

"C, here."

"D, at your service."

"E, present."

Both Enzo and Jail smiled in success. An odd silence passed, only broken when Cinque put forwars a question to Scudera.

"Who...who are they?"

Enzo about-turned, slowly, a look of nothing but sheer triumph plastered on his face, and made a grand gesture towards the line of five.

"These," he replied, cheerily, "...are your brothers."

Feedback be good and all. And this is also a year before Quattro was activated, as shown in the passage.

Glad you liked it. The Erio bit was a joke really, but who knows... I may pop something up again. It's not fun without some crack after all.

~~~

Very nice. Though Quattro was never stated her activation date (( just her upgrade date )), it's only a small issue. And for some reason, the way the Letters introduced themselves cracked me up. Now I'm wondering how each counterpart will interact with each own's.

And tuxedo... for some reason, it just doesn't compute that well, especially after the Number's dress-code is drilled nicely in my mind.

Originally Posted by Liingo

Just a question, who's the third person. I don't recognise the source picture. SHe looks alot like the major from Ghost in the Shell but I'm pretty sure it isn't her.

She is the Major, but it's from the Stand Alone Complex series, not the movie.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Part II!

Spoiler for The 2nd Child:

Spoiler for Juliet Scaglietti:

Name: Juliet (( Scaglietti ))
Codename: Paraphilia
Gender: Female
Age: ?? (( Appearance-wise late-teens ))
Height: 153cm
Weight: 40kg
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Dark-green

Magic Potential: Ground Combat A as of StrikerS.

The 2nd child after Zerria, Juliet was born of Due instead. Inheriting the more…chaotic nature of her blood parents, her inner personality is a lot like Jail’s, only mixed with Due’s charm and pretense. However, unlike her father and brother, the Unlimited Desire within her is much more diluted, as she seeks personal enjoyment and nothing more, not being especially ambitious on grand scales like her brother and father, but rather prefers to enjoy what’s in front of her.

“It’s fine to just have fun, isn’t it? After all, all the world’s the limit.”

Although she has various degrees of greed that range on a more human scale like pleasure, money, among other things…. Her biggest pleasure is that of mental manipulation and torture, making people feel most excited and pleasured to their peaks, only to crash down that anticipation. To that extent, she’ll get herself involved in anything so long as it allows her to feel that, be it on a personal scale, or larger ones. It all depends on her mood, ranging from toying with random males, or even watching organizations blow themselves up through various scandals and manipulation of their higher ups.

“Don’t you find it so orgasmic? Just like how people talk about getting higher, higher and higher before their point of climax, don’t you find that feeling that you’ve got something coiled around your hands, but not knowing that, they think they’re in for an utmost pleasure…and just at their peaks…you blast them up to smithereens? Gawd, just thinking makes me wet.”

Although she’s presumably older than how she looks like, having no solid memory of when she was a child, other than learned knowledge, she looks more youthful and looks to be in her mid-teens. Being left out to fend for herself at a young age, she had been living alone for years. Although she does have records of parents among other things, all of it was faked so that she could enroll herself in a learning institute at West Mid-childa, where she had been living most of her years there. Due to that, she is perpetually very independent, and likes to rely on herself to live her life, for most parts with little care for anyone else in the world. In terms of links, her arrogance and self-love is exactly the same as her father’s. However, likewise, she’s the one with the thinnest recollection to her true existence. Regardless, her life is very much rogue-like, as she seeks the worlds for pleasures of her own.

“… Is there anything out there that can keep me interested? A man so perfect I would never get bored from toying with him, or any dangerous activities so dangerous everyday be a fun…”

Presumably to have been affected by her birth condition, aside from possessing a unique breathing structure, she has a degree of magical potential as a A-rank Ground mage, though she’s never officially trained and solely winged it through occasional studies when she felt like it among other things. Even though she’s lazy, she is very smart and talented. A case of underused talent for most parts.

“ Yawn…These stuffs are so easy to wing through it’s not even funny. In fact, it’s boring.”



Her combat tactics uses a mix of stealth and unawareness, utilizing her pheromones to put the enemy off-guard while she either slices up the enemy with her claws or strings, or push the enemy to a position where they’d be killed by her drone. She is however, weak against concentrated attack forces as she had gotten herself involved in some unethical activities occasionally, and resorts to hit-and-run tactics against large numbers.

“…*licks claw*”


Influent Skill : ~Pheromone Exhume~
- Her body’s breathing mechanism works differently as the air she breathes, and the sweat she releases out is mixed with a kind of artificial aphrodiatic essence that causes men and women alike within a 5 meter radius to be aroused, and lacks mental concentration, making them weaker in a way. Direct eye to eye contact too apparently makes people lose their guard.



Inherent Equipment : ~Ripper J~
- Engineered and improved from Due’s own claw-weapons, this version is retrofitted to be comfortably fit for any size, with the weakness that it cannot materialize itself out of nowhere, but rather stored as a bracelet that was given to Juliet by Jail as a child. Attached to each end of the gloves are invisible string-cutters coated with a special metal that has anti-barrier properties like Sette’s boomerangs. Although the strings can be controlled personally, it also has a degree of magnetism effect, stick and rubber effect that can be activated so that it can stick strongly to walls and such to act like a grappler device.



Inherent Drone: ~Type-Proto Omega : July~
- The original prototype for the mass-produced stealth gadget drone that severely injured Nanoha back in the past, this particular drone was designed in mind for stealth assassination missions, and sneak attacks. It was made with no particular specialties, but for Juliet’s 9th birthday, it was upgraded using a special flexible optic-fiber muscles as its limbs to possess a far more natural insect-like movement and speed, alongside being powered by a small magical crystal that improves its stealth, speed, defense and power alongside colored in Juliet’s favorite colors. The special limbs also make it a very effective weapon in urban territories with walls and tall buildings, due to its wall-crawling and wall-jumping prowess that is made possible to the upgrades. However, due to its effective stealth abilities, it is mainly used by Juliet as a secret-resort weapon to kill the enemies that surround her from behind.

Now that the 2nd is done with...TEASERS!

Spoiler for The 3rd Child, Valkyrie?:

Yes, she's inherited her mother's fine assets indeed...

Spoiler for Zerria : The First Case:

“Based on the autopsy and the medical records… none.”

“…None?”

“Yes, there was absolutely no trace of any magic or medication that could’ve caused them to do this. Not to mention, prior to that incident, the investigation team found out that they all went to different institutions for a medical check-up, and all of them were found to be perfectly normal and healthy.”

“There was no motive, no connections, no demands, no external factors whatsoever… the only connection between the criminals was that they’ve all went to the seminar of human studies conducted by that boy, but all evidence, alibi proves that there was no way he could’ve done that.

Unless you want to imply that without magic, medication whatsoever, with only 3 hours, he could’ve made them do this… It’s impossible.”

A sound of continuous fire repeated…

Bang! Bang! Bang!

The sound of ominous fires rang through the base, as the sound emits itself from the cells.

As a group of officers ran their way through the office building into the cell-sector… they saw…one of their own, holding a conventional gun weapon that was confiscated, and kept in storage and shooting randomly to the prisoners in that cell…

The sound of quivering criminals in fear as the ghastly eyes looked for the preys he intends to shoot… only one boy, sitting at the very end of the cells, looked calm as he smiled profusely at the sight before him…

Another shot blasted…and this time, he shot himself in his head, as the blood splattered and hit the surroundings, already covered thick in blood, as the boy gave a almost unheard clap, signaling the end of the spectacle…

And as if completely satisfied, he opened his cell doors as if it was never locked, as he walked his way out slowly…

“Wait! What do you think you’re!”

“I’m already proven innocent, right? What more right is there for you to keep me there?”

Juliet = She's dangerous! And her style suits her perfectly. Another pheromone-exhumer like Tais' familiar... And that drone sure fits in Canon well.

Valkyrie = Kusanagi?!?!?

Zierra = Takes after his father well. Genius!

[Keroko]

Back from Canada and up to date! Jetlag hardly seems to affect me. Lucky!

But, ugh... Today reminded me why I hate long distance fights. I can deal with the boredom, the turbulence is fun, and on a clear day you have nice view when flying over land... But the smell of airplane 'food' is always enough to send me hurling, or at least make the flight very uncomfortable. Whoever had the bright idea to serve horid smelling meals in an enclosed cabin should be pushed out of one. Preferably on high altitude.

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

If one (or more) of them is going to stop Niddhogg from firing he may die there, by my OCs' hands or some of the good guys present. (BTW I agree that there should definitely be a role for Keroko in the whole mess with the Cradle )

I'll need to watch the episodes first before I can decide if and how Keroko will be involved in this. Gimme some time.

Originally Posted by Nightengale

A short snippet of my past. I know there's more, but that was before it was named Nightdarkness and I'm too lazy to walk down memory lane.

Spoiler for Nightdarkness:

There was this one $hit of an anime, y'know, ridiculously overrated for it's let's kill'em all, what's the whole Jesus Chri$t of Gundam $hit, oh ya Zeta was it's name. There was this one ridiculously unexplained $hit-hole in the form of Char and Haman, what's with their relationship summing up to 2 sentences, you stole my mutha freakin innocence and we could've been great together, anime God of Gundam, Char that was like..totally unexplained in the whole anime other than a manga that wasn't anime called....what wuz it, CDA? Oh yeah that was it. Nobody seems to give a freakin damn about plotholes in Zeta from the whole Amuro and Sayla had s-x-e in the novels that was said in Zeta, but sure as hell wasn't shown in Zeta and 0079 and ChamanKarn $hit, but everyone has to go ape$hit over Dullindal not announcing to teh world that lol he sent ASHes, he leaked Gundam info, he zipped his mouth over Destroy and Requiem despite subtle hints thrown throughout the anime and clear cut evidence in something that was created before GSD in the form of kill the original plz k thx bye Canard Pars and do me a grand favour before I become Chairman. Real double standardization.

And this was probably one of the tamest, made to sound like a joke more than an outburst.

this is.... completely and utterly not Nightengale.

I can see the joke in it, though. But maybe that's because you said it was meant to be. Sarcasm can be hard to use on the internet.

~~~A message has been recieved~~~

Spoiler for Nanoha timeline : Keroko aditions:

In the last year of the 42nd Millenium... There was only war...

The unthinkable had happened. The reign of the invincible Saint, the God Empress of Belka, had suddenly come to an end. The Holy Belka Imperiallum imploded, back broken from two millenia of corruption. Ordered Space was immediately thrown into chaos, and fighting between lieges of the old Belka spread like wildfire. With the Midchilda alliance and the ragtag Galactic Army the sole semblance of human order in the face of multiverse-wide xenophobic anarchy, slow and painful steps towards order began once again...

150 Years Ago

• Founding of TSAB

75 Years Ago/MC 00

• Acceptance of Magic-Tech in TSAB/Establishment of GC/Central HQ/Era of the 3 Legendary Admirals

MC~035(40 years ago)

• ( Unknown Rank )Regius Gaiz joins TSAB

MC 50 ( 25 years ago )

• Jail Scaglietti establishes the framework/base technology for man-machine hybridization/prototype for Combat Cyborg technology

MC 52 (23 years ago)

• Aurion enlists in the TSAB.

MC 55 (20 years ago)

• Aurion becomes an Ace of the Air Force (trained by Austin Abrams)

MC 56~57 (19~18 years ago)

• Aurion joins the ranks of the Enforcers in the Navy. He becomes Spectrum 3 of the Spectral Enforcers
• He also becomes well known for easily destroying the wills of those he interrogates with his own unique methods
• He gains the monickers 'Ace of the Heartless' and 'Hell's Inquisitor'

MC 58 (17 years ago)

• The Perfect Void Incident. Aurion loses his squad and his arm. He is now a partially deleted entity

MC 59 (18 years ago)

• Aurion recovers physically on Earth

MC 0060 (15 years ago)

• The Belka Holy Grail War. Tou and Kia succeed in stopping Yagami Zoken's plans for domination. The Scryas protect the last few Key Devices. Phantom Lancer escapes. The Black Army vows revenge.
• The Great Alexei Fire wipes out the last vestige of the Holy Belka Imperiallum. Kia dies. Kha gains his Libram. The Cleric is awakened to his divine destiny.
  
• Aurion attends Psychology School

MC 0061

• Glock Heckler enlisted to TSAB Class0061-Q, a secret experimental class which seeks to revive close combat magic aka forerunner of Neo Belka.
• Hiram Maxim encounters young Remington Smith and Colt Wesson

MC 59 (16 years ago)

• Neltharion lands on Earth, destroying a town that was on his landing spot. Keroko is the only survivor and suffers heavy corruption to her Linker Core.

MC 63 (12 years ago)

• Aurion graduates, but later joins the TSAB Technology Department

MC 064 ( 11 years ago )

• Quint and Genya Nakajima saves and takes in Type-0s First/Second as their children

MC 065 ( 10 years ago ) Spring- Summer

• The Mathis family meets with Scrya Clan on an expedition which unearths 21 Jewel Seeds. Father Gin Mathis is killed in transport ship accident.
• The Precia Testarossa and Jewel Seed Incident (read Keroko season 1 summary for a recollection of Keroko’s involvement)
• Kha and Tou encounter Scagletti for the first time. Kia has been revived as a Sentokijin shell. A bitter fight between lovers end in suicide. Kha awakens more of his Cleric-knight abilities.
• Glock Heckler graduates from TSAB Academy, rank Ground A+; Assigned to 108th Ground Battalion under Genya Nakajima

MC 065 Winter

• Book of Darkness Incident (read Keroko A’s summary for recollection of Keroko’s involvement)
• Kha is assigned to the 21ste, meeting Sophia.
• Artei joins the 21ste and makes an ass of himself.
  
• Aurion completely converts his prosthetic arm into Reishiki.

MC 065 (Unknown Date)

• Due/Jail Scaglietti steals the genetic data of the Saint King

???

• Quint Nakajima dies in an unknown incident

MC 065 ???

• Caro is born (( Elio unknown due to Project F status, but presumed to be born 2 months before Caro ))

MC 066 (5 months after A’s)

• Fate, Nanoha, Keroko and Hayate joins the TSAB workforce
  
• Keroko discovers she shares her sisters desire to teach, and tries to combine it with her penchant for flying.
• Raiders attack Scrya Clan; Kaylin Mathis goes rogue immediately afterwards.

MC 067 (8 years ago)

• Aurion interviews (well, kidnaps first) Hayate. He feels a few signs of his old humanity returning.
• Aurion meets the rest of the Aces and the Knights two weeks later. Hayate and the other Aces call him 'Oji-chan' for the first time.

• Reinforce Zwei is born. Hayate meets Acous/Carim, and the Ancient Belkan friendship begins.
  Aurion meets Rein Zwei. He gets a brainstorm for a new device he's developing
  
• Rumours of the revival of the black aspect mage begin to circulate.
• The Nanoha incident, due to overstressing.
• Fate fails Enforcer Test lol. Apparently due to being worried over Nanoha.
• Zest Grangaize(sp?) died? Last recorded time as a TSAB Striker Mage.
• The Bakatsu Riders, a bike gang consisting of Vice, Artei, Sagara and Tiida, is formed. Teana meets Artei for the first time.
• Artei decides to remain with the 21ste.

MC 068 (7 years ago)

• Fate fails. AGAIN. Signum is so enjoying it.
  
• Keroko passes her S rank examination, but only barely due to overdoing it. Worry over Nanoha’s health was attributed as the cause.
• Almaria is completed.
• Aurion gets annoyed with Fate's performance and gives her a motivational talk.
• Fate passes at the 3rd attempt.
• Nanoha recovers and passes S-rank examination.
• Kha swallows a Relic under the latest of Sophia's crack therapies to increase his magical powers.
  
• Aurion meets Kha and Sophia somewhere around this time, as Sophia was looking for a stand-in Device for her unruly Kaleidostick.
• Private Glock Heckler is reassigned to 79th Ground Battalion under General Hiram Maxim.
• Privates Remington Smith and Colt Wesson graduate from TSAB Academy; assigned to 79th Ground Battalion under General Hiram Maxim.

MC 069 (6 years ago)

• Fate passes S-rank examination, and discovers Elio Mondial in one of the missions.
• Tiida Lanster dies. The Bakatsu Riders mourn their loss.
  
• Keroko gets assigned to train Air Force Unit 88.
• The Imperial Belka Army's hijacking of the Lady Une, while Carim and many other Belka leaders were on board for a meeting to determine the 10 Year Plan for the Belka SAR and the Aligned Territories. The 21ste's first high profile mission. They succeed against impossible odds.
• The K.A.I. series of AI - Rey, Shinji and Asuka - created by Kaylin.
• Private Glock Heckler first encounters Necron during a drug raid on 111th NAW “Solaria”; Impartial Pariah transformation leaves him with a Necrodermis right arm.
  
• Aurion progressively defeats the female Aces one by one in a series of mock battles to fine-tune Almaria. Major hilarity involved. The Aces are understandably upset over the loss.

MC 069 May (Two months later)

• Keroko reports the 88th is ready for duty.

MC 069 September.

• The 88th is officially renamed Rogue Squadron. Keroko gets emotionaly blackmailed to asume the Commanding Officer seat. When she refuses to give up her career as an instuctor as well, her friends smack their head, muttering how the Takamachi workaholic syndrome strikes again.

MC 069~MC 072

• Elio Mondial is taken care/living in TSAB HQ.
• Kaylin uncovers the Belkan Armed Device Galatea. Circumstances force her to delete the main program; encounter forever affects Asuka at personal level.

MC 070

• During a brutal mission on the diplomatically unstable junk world of Raxus Prime, Keroko unintentionally makes a public display of her abilities. The rumour mill explodes, earning Keroko the dubious nickname ‘Deathwing’ Keroko. Keroko decides to wear the title as a badge of honour.

[/LIST] MC 071(4 years ago）

• Arf retires from front-line duty.
  MC 071 April (4 years ago, A’s epilogue)
  • Relic/Drone Incident #1 (( The case below happens 2 weeks after this ))
  MC 071 29th April
  • Mid-childa Coastal Airport Fire/Subaru and Ginga was saved by Nanoha and Fate
  MC 071 30th April
  • Hayate decides to form a special squad, which 4 years later would be RF6.
  • Aurion encourages Hayate with her decision. This is also his first contact with the drones in the field

Around MC 071

• Caro is banished? (( Unsure ))

Somewhere around MC 071~MC 072

• Caro stays in the TSAB… somewhere.
• The 2nd Belka Holy Grail War erupts suddenly, with the attack against a civilian target on the 97th. Kha's shuttle en route to Belk from TSAB HQ was destroyed. He is the sole survivor of the attack. Kha meets Fate for the first time.
• Tausend Kreuz Sakurazaki, along with its whacky AI Chibi-Sakura, is born. An era of mayhem begins.
• The War ends, and the Key Devices are reorganized. Kha and Fate officially become an item.
• Kha shoots to Belka-wide acclaim. Begins travelling all over Ordered Space to conduct mass spiritual healings and sermons. He comes to be hailed as the Messiah of New Belka, and inspires a wave of Belka evangelism that lasts till the present with no signs of abating.
• "Hell Girl/Daemon" Incident involving 79th Ground Battalion members takes place, claiming many casualties including Shinobu Nakajima. Lost Logia “Crozius Maleficus”, in possession of 12-year old Mai Enna, is defeated by Fate, and Privates Remington Smith and Colt Wesson.
• Glock Heckler assigned security guardianship of Mai Enna, followed shortly by Privates Smith and Wesson.

MC 072 February

• Fate, with Kha's blessing, decides to become Caro’s guardian.
  
• Kha trains Erio part time. While Carim encourages Kha to take Erio as his Page, Kha feels that he needs to improve before he has the right to assume such a responsibility.
• Sakura is decreed to be used as the source code for the OS of all TSAB and Church manufactured New Belka devices.

MC 072 April

• After graduation from high school, the cast moves to Mid-childa (( I think ))

MC 072 June

• Subaru and Teana joins Ground Training School. Erio and Shari looks around the compound.

MC 072 August

• Subaru and Teana, partners slowly become friends. Teana meets Ginga Nakajima the first time, and the first blatant Tsundere!Tea is clear.
• On count of good conduct, Mai Enna is transferred to custody of Hotchkiss Convent in Moldiva.

Somewhere around the same time too?

• OMG CHRONO AND AMY GETS MARRIED!!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
• Fate catches the bouquet, and both Kha and Fate don't get the cat calls directed at them...
  
• Keroko and Hayate are having trouble trying to stop laughing.

MC 072 October

• Teana and Subaru spot Keroko, who happened to be near their training grounds while instructing new recruits. We see a different side of Teana, which frightinly resembles Subaru. The outburst does not last long, though.

MC 073 May

• Upon graduation, Teana and Subaru, still paired, are assigned to Disaster Management Unit 386
• The first phase of reconstruction work at Saint Alexei Convent is finished. The first intake of Knight-sisters is accepted. Much of the younglings who survived the fire return to man the school, including Sophia.

MC 074 January~August

• The Ecclessachiary attack Allison. Kha is tasked to extract her.
• Kha is assigned Amuro Gray, Yui Hiro from the 97th, Kamahl Vidan, Domon Kaister and Yoshi Krueger to train them as Cleric-knights. He only aids them in their divine training as the have their own Meisters for standard Belka techniques at the Church.
• DaiStahlMut is completed and tested successfully.

MC 074 September

• Caro is at the Environment Protection unit…for how long, we don’t know.
  
• Kha becomes Allison's and Hiro's guardian.
• Kay defends herself against Arcean Mafia using a Jewel Seed; TSAB sentences her to a week of incarceration, considering mitigating circumstances observed by Fate T. Harlaown.

MC 074 December

• 2nd Lt. Glock Heckler assigned as security liaison to Kay Mathis.

MC 075 March

• Keroko transfers from Rogue Squadron.
• The unofficial start-up of RF6, with the RF6 HQ getting inspected and equipments/personnel starting to be moved in. Caro leaves for Mid-childa.
  
• The 21ste are hopelessly busy once again.
• Megiddo Incident, where a Limiera Expedition, along with Glock and Kay, encounter the Necrons.

Few days later.

• Sound Stage M events here.

MC 075 April

• Subaru and Teana fails B-rank examination. (( When they pass later, dunno. ))
• Sonic Grope Incident.
• With the assembly of every member as of that point, RF6 is officially launched.
  
• The 21ste missed the parade, but arrive to give their congratulations.

4 days later

• The devices of the Forwards in production, by Shari.
  
• Nanoha thinks Kha should drop by and coach the Forwards once in a while.

MC 075 13th May

• Hayate meets Carim.
• New devices completed for Forwards.
• Gadget Drones sighted. Forward’s first mission. START.
• First Mission. First Victory. Jail is watching happily everyone except Teana and Rein.

Several days later

• Hayate request assistance and cooperation from Genya’s 108th division in relates to investigation and stuff.
• Forwards get individual training for combat roles.
  
• Kha and Sophia finds time to help out. Artei and Vice meet up for the first time in years.

Several days later

• RF6 goes to Earth for a mission. The 21ste is in Japan investigating illegal Belkanite mining on Mount Fuji.
• Teana and Subaru learn that contrary to the belief that super mages come from testtubes (Fate) or have sad emo past with no parents (Kha, Hayate, Keroko), Nanoha is perfectly normal lol.
• Erio gets lucky. VERY lucky. So does Kha, when he returns to the Hallaoun residence.
• The Riot 6 return to Midchilda. The 21ste meet another Imperial Belka operation head on, and bring the house down.
  
• Artherion’s ‘Lancer Mode’ is finished. Keroko approaches Kha for tutoring.

Several days later

• Hotel Augusta Incident.
• Something was stolen…now that I think about, what WAS THAT THING?
• Yuunoha is not dead.

Several days later lol

• The 21ste return to Midchilda.
• Subaru and Teana goes on intensive training.
• But White Devil >>>>>>>>> Intensive Training.
• Night falls. Teana get Sigslapped.
• They learn the truth behind Season 1, A’s and THE INCIDENT. I can understand the latter, but isn’t the former 2 top secret?
  
• Kha shares his thoughts and openly contradicts Nanoha, because it was a gray area. Nanoha vows to not let the Forwards head into a situation where they need to make such a choice. However, we know that Destiny always intends otherwise.

Several days later lol

• Bonding taimu. Caro and Elio reveals their past history. Subaru thought of telling her cyborg secret, but Teana stops her.

1 week later.

• Rogue Squadron make first official encounter with the Necron and suffer heavy casualties.
• Trouble brews on a distant planet. The 21ste goes to investigate, and they discover that the Necrons are back.
• Keroko buries the Rogues who have fallen in the fight against the Necrons.Kha attends.
• Glock recalled to GC. Kay follows after a visit from Artei.
• Mai Enna, assisted by PFC’s Smith and Wesson pass application for enlistment to TSAB.
  
• Aurion meets the Forwards for the first time in his surprise visit to RF6.

Another week later.

• The 21ste, along with several OCs, head out for the deadliest mission since AlternateS 1.
  
• RIOT 6 HOLIDAY TAIMU!
  
• Vivio spoils Elio and Caro’s perfect date mission.
• Hayate moves out with Chrono Limiter Breaker.
  
• Kha stumbles into an equally surprised C'Tan, the Wanderer. The combined force of the OCs catching up with Kha, and the activation of Schneiderform, sends Wanderer running to Meggido. Sophia suffers a nervous breakdown, even though it is well within the 5 minute limit. She recovers moments later. Kha traces summoning spell.
• Forward + Ginga moves.
• Garyuu and Agito appears.
• Regius gets huh? SS in Ground Forces? And wtfbbq at it being THAT CRIMINAL.
• Numbers appear and escape.
• Relic is secured thanks to Teana/Caro. Vita fails.
  
• The OC army chases Wanderer to Meggido. CDD engaged, a desperate battle erupts all over the planet. DaiStahlMut is fielded for the first time.
• Chibi-Sakura shows what she's made of.
• Chell & Cheaven >>>> Wanderer

Next day

• Prophecy talk. Fate and Nanoha FINALLY knows RF6 was actually formed. Yeah…you’re a good friend, Hayate…hiding it from your best friends for so long…
• The wounded 21ste return to Midchilda to a quiet version of a heroes' welcome.
• The Aces practically chain Kha to his bunk once again to force him to slow down and recuperate. Kha gets lucky again.
• The late General Hiram Maxim buried with full military honors.
• Kha laments that, especially after attending the Rogues and speaking the eulogy for the funeral of the entire Regional Guard platoon that he led, he's gone back to burying comrades. Fate doesn't get the full picture of what's going on, but sternly reminds Kha that it's not his fault.

Several days later lol

• Kay returns to field work, accompanied by Glock.
  
• The Carim Confrontation. The 21ste become assigned to assist Riot 6.
• Fate becomes Vivio’s god-mother. NF-fans rejoice at their saint for creating Nanoha-mama and Fate-mama. and Keroko refuses to be left out But they miss the fact that Vivio calls Kha "Da-da".
  
• Kha and Fate's legendary duel.
• Artei contacts John Smith for information regarding the Numbers.
• Cadet Mai Enna receives special recommendations for 3-week training course under Instructor Austin Abrams

Several days later

• Kha and Vivio goes jogging. And many more KhaVivio bonding to be released in Leryk.
• The 21ste intercept Numbers on the way to meet Due. They are surprised at Kha's speed and protection strength, as well as being able to use spells that they thought only the other mages had. The Druggies/Oswald (pending Erio) step in and lets the Numbers get away. Rivalries for Kha's Counterattack set up.
• The Fate/Caro/Elio family weakness, emotional bonds moment with advices from Arf and Lindy that SHOULD HAD BEEN ANIMATED. Because FCE >>>>> NFV.
• RF6 learns that Agito is Unison Device.

MC 075 2nd September

• The 21ste leave for the alien Overtechnology ruins. Kha pulls a stunt on Fate; Their relationship is no longer a secret to the Forwards. Leryk ends, I-n's begins.

MC 075 5th September

• Ginga and Mariel joins RF6 temporarily.
  
• Tyrfing is completed. But it couldn't be used properly due to some technical reasons

MC 075 11th September

• Nanoha, Vita and Forwards go to the GC HQ first.

MC 075 12th September

• The Jail Scaglietti Terrorist Attack at the Public Presentation.
• Jail is victorious.
• Vivio and Ginga are kidnapped.
• Various injuries on both parties, but the winner is clear.
  
• The 21ste is recalled. They spend much effort and succeed to liberate several bases under attack of the Gadgets, Druggies. They realize that Scagletti may be more dangerous than the IBA that they've been fighting.
• Oswald makes his appearance. The 21ste catch up with what has happened. After learning that Vivio has been kidnapped, Kha goes SILENT-EMO.
  

MC 075 13th September

• Genya reveals his past with Subaru/Ginga/Quint along with information of Combat Cyborgs.
• Hayate and Auris exchange words.
• Athra is taken to be RF6’s mobile base for the time being. Likewise, with Yzak Base in pieces, the Seraph become the 21ste's and the Regional Guard's operational HQ
  
• Wishing his family good luck, Kha grudgingly answers the call to lead the Regional Guard. He is joined by Alaeith again. In time, he would come to learn that
  Alaeith was a Guardian of his Libram, and that there are 4 more Guardians out there.

MC 075 15th September

• With the TSAB in chaos, and the Ground Forces bases falling one after another, Kha decides that he can no longer wait for orders and ask for permission to go all out. Carim grants it.
• Kha's Counterattack officially begins. The Regional Guard, though a cheap and simple force, demonstrates what just what a difference FAITH and COURAGE can make!

MC 075 19th September

• RF6 is back, now 200% more mobile.
• Alto takes over Vice’s heli-pilot job.
• Mach Calibur starts to show why she’s the MAIN CHARACTER’S A.I and designs her own upgrade for Subaru, 250% more heavy and 140% more magic consumption… MACH CALIBUR RIESE!?!?!?
• Jail’s hideout is discovered thanks to Acous’s dogs.
• Cradle is reborn.
• The Cradle’s threat is ascertained to be dangerous, and a fleet of XV class ships from the Navy are deployed as reinforcements.
• RF6 is divided into 3 parties, the Cradle Attack Force, the Jail Attacker, and the Central Attack Force.
• Limiter ALL RELEASE.
• TSAB High Council is assassinated by Due.

Keroko aditions done in Dark Red. Kinda empty... I still need to fuly watch the last three episodes to fill in a couple of blanks. [Arnold]I'll be back.[/Arnold]

[Saint X]

I'm totally bored and hungry... so before i eat and continue, might as well dish this h4xxwork out...

Spoiler for The Key Devices (50% Complete):

Ranged Devices

Spoiler for Kyla: Vulcan, The Resolute Gun:

Device Image:

Spoiler for Core Jacket (Model Optional):

Gunner Form (Basic):


Assaulter Form (Advanced):


Maiden Form (Limit Unlocked):

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Natural Skill: Bullet Time: The capability to slow down the target/s perception of time, which in reality is the Device user overclocking to launch multiple attacks from all angles- under this skill Kyla can do three Chain Rocket attacks in the same time it takes to fire one in normal time.

Spoiler for Rurika: Ballista, The Bow of Salient Cause/Intent:

Device Image:

Spoiler for Core Jacket (Models Optional):

Spoiler for Raine (AlternateS I: Previous Owner- he now carries these jackets with his new device Galvira):

- Archer Form:


- Adventurer Form:

Spoiler for Rurika: (AlternateS II: Current Owner):

- Ranger Form:


- Harrier Form:

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Natural Skill: Never Miss: Even if your dodge is insane, you will be hit- period. Let's hope your shield holds or you can block well.

Melee Devices

Spoiler for Yuuno: Spadona, The Shielding/Goddess'/God Prince's Sword:

Device Image:

Spoiler for Core Jacket (Model Optional):

Berserker Form:

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Natural Skill: Ignore Shield: The capability of ignoring 95% of all known shield types, from phyisical to Type-C APF.

Spoiler for Aranth: Phalanx, The Phantom Lance:

Device Image:

Spoiler for Core Jacket:

AlternateS I: Lancer Form:


AlternateS II: Knight Form:

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Natural Skill: Critical Hit: The Capability to hit critical parts of the enemy or hit with critical damage each time

Spoiler for Arisa: Gladius, The Knight's Blade:

Device Image:


Core Jacket: Unknown

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Natural Skill: Never Hit: No matter how accurate you are, attacks will never hit

Spoiler for Suzuka: Scutum, The Unfazing Shield:

Device Image:


Core Jacket: Unknown

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Natural Skill: Perfect Block: Assessment still ongoing...

Force Devices:

Spoiler for Nonaha: Gospel, The Staff of Beginnings and Ends:

Device Image:


Core Jacket: Unknown

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Natural Skill: Unknown... but it was tied to the word 'change'

Spoiler for Ashton: Praesulus, The Directive Wand:

Device Image:
Summonable Kinetic Spear and Darts attached:

Spoiler for Core Jacket (Models Optional):

Spoiler for Illicida (Alternates I: Previous Owner):

- Magus Form:


- Summoner Form:

Spoiler for Ashton (AlternateS II: Current Owner):

- Intiate Form (Basic):


- Adept Form (Expert):


- Expert Form (Elite):


- Master Form (Master):

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Natural Skill: Law Breaker: One word - HAXX

Spoiler for Unknown: Byblos, The Book of Knowledge:

Device Image:
Combat Form:

Spoiler for Core Jacket (Models Optional):

- Male User:


- Female User:

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Natural Skill: All seeing: Still being assessed...

+--- Current Agent Actions ---+
By Saint X

- Added formal images from a game site
- Added Skill icons to the the currently Known Devices- execpt Praesulus- which i'm still working on...
- Some devices still lack CJ images and skills, as well as why that device was created that way and their collective notes...

Still working on this- do not close

+--- Current Agent Actions ---+

[Erio]

FOUR pages of backlog?! I should be happy but... You people... you had to start the interesting discussions just when I go sleep, huh?!?!

Why do you do this to me... *sniffs* *goes cry in a corner with Caro, Lutecia, Cinque, Sein, Wendi and...*

...

W-what?

*runs*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

You better believe it... Kha's the most referenced character in this thread since forever

Well, I'll go with what An Hero said sometime ago, Kha is really useful, as someone has to be a hero... And since I dont have plans to create a pure-good guy... might as well use him, ne?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Fate's no question... anyone will feel incestous if you have Fate as a sister...

*Zeus Zamber'd*

I completely understand how you feel, Lowe.

*wipes drool*

*notices Kha in Schneiderform*

*runs*

Originally Posted by Kha

Hayate's actually a lot lower in New Belka Chronicles. The ones up there are, in order, Fate, Carym, Sophia, and Sakura Zaki . After that Caren Ortencia Garcia and Hayate fight for the 5th spot. Gwendolyn would have to start below, along with her sisters.

As with a typical harem game, Kha's actions and his responses to the other girl's actions will affect the ranking.

You make it sound like a race!!

And I dont know why you people think that Kha doesnt want a harem... Kha explicitly said that he built Kha to be a harem game main character!! THIS IS UNFORGIVABLE!! DOWN WITH KHA!!!

"Got rid of Kha's personal importance"?

"Totally free to try and kill him"?

What did I just sign Kha up for when he became Gwen's oni-chan???

You signed yourself up for some very, very bad stuff... and not just for An Hero's OutcastS...

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

Yeah, you've suggested to use little Allison and I'll probably go along with it, so face it - Kha's become just a nuisance in the eyes of the Great Daemon Lords

And as such they'll certainly try to kill him if he messes with their plans.

And Gwen's going to be of interest () at least for one of them, so if Kha's also connected here it's going to be messy.

So you're really going make use of that idea... I hope Kha accepts, then...this is going to be interesting!

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Jail: Cinque, you've got a new mission. Quite...different, this time?
Cinque: Different?
Jail: Normally, I"d leave it to Due, but looks like the target's...a little...young this time. Here are the details. *passes her a file*
Cinque: Hmm...mission target...Erio Mondial... mission objective... *face turns red* EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!??!!??!?! ??!?

A-A-A-APPROVEDDDD!!



MoAr Please!

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~Update Time~

Haven't revisited Alternate MC in a while, so here's a short piece.

Spoiler for Alternate MC 075 : GB:

~Alternate MC 075 : Goodbye, Halcyon Nights~

Last night, a small scale magical-destruction emittance was noted by the Ground Central Headquarters. Riot Force 6 was deployed, and we they saw was a scene of tragedy.

A continuous hallway that seemed endless, with broken glasses and bodies scattered all around, drones broken and destroyed, their pieces all over, just as along the pathways, with each step, traces of death and destruction reflected as lifeless golden eyes of several humanoid cyborgs looked back at us as we continued walking...

It was like the last thing they saw was a ghost.

A ghost of vengeance.

It was faces we could recall. The ones whom we had fought on several occasions, from the let-go, it seemed they were named after numbers... they were enemies of the Bureau, but even then... the scene that laid out before us invoked nothing but disgust in our hearts. The bodies, both human and machine, torn apart without remorse, disregarding every principal of our beliefs that we were taught of as soldiers...

Hikki, how far will you go before you are satisfied?

Do you seriously believe this is what Nanoha wanted?

As we reached the end, what we saw...was the ultimatum of everything.

As the body of the man we were after, lied there cold, unfazed, stoic... dead.

However, there was something missing...

The first of the Combat Cyborgs...Number One, presumably...Uno.

~~~

Later that night, amidst the skyscrapers of Mid-childa... under the moons that cover the skies above, a shadow of 2 stood and they looked beyond the infinite horizons of the night, of the countless lights across the capital of Cranagan.

"Wonderful."

A male voice, slightly rough with a demeaning tone, played.

"Humans should let go of everything that binds them to this pitiful world."

A smirk, which eludes his eyes, golden under the watchful sky, his hair purple...

"Freedom is what makes the world more beautiful, unshackled, without limits, to be of unlimited desire."

A auspicious white overcoat, along with a fine business suit, unfitting of the rough winds hitting the skies...

"That is what makes me who I am today."

Jail Scaglietti.

"Isn't that right, Uno?"

"Yes, Doctor."

And standing beside him, she who had been by his side for as long as each of them could remember... his first, his most trusted, his most precious...Uno.

"How are your injuries?" Jail asked, monotonous, but there was a tone of actual concern, especially after she shielded him from that person's attack...

"I'll live, Doctor."

Jail smiled, as satisfied, returned his thoughts to a different line, as he recalls the lifeless clone of himself he placed there upon his escape... the fact that nothing came about on the TSAB's archives, proves that they had indeed been fooled by it... at a great cost of his own creations.

"The Bureau should be fooled by that... I'll leave the rest of the problems to them. Even for them, they should know that what that person did was an act of treason... Besides, the High Council is probably angered."

As he spoke the last tone of his parents with a mocking tone, his face turned slightly melancholic, as he continued speaking, this time lower...

"Next, I suppose...I can only hope that Kha doesn't act too recklessly. Even if he does not acknowledge me... it doesn't change our ties. Do guide him if he's lost, Uno."

"I understand, Doctor."

With those last words, he took another look at the sky above him, dark and the lights below him... as he gave a final sigh...

"Alright then...Uno.

Officially on paper, I am already dead. Besides, I don't that much time left in this world.

When I'm really dead, I have one last favor to ask of you...

My hair, for Due.

My blood, for Tre.

My fingers, for Quattro.

My left eye, for Cinque.

My lungs, for Sein.

My right hand, for Sette.

A right kidney for Otto.

My left hand, for Nove.

My right eye, for Deici.

My left leg, for Wendi.

My left kidney for Deed.

And everything else, my heart, my brain, my soul, my body...is yours.

If they are to be revived instead, be it by Kha, or my successors... remove their memories of me. They need not know of a father who treats them like mere creations anyway."

Uno did not reply, her face stoic, calm as ever, even as he speaks of his impending death like it's seconds away...

"Until then..."

Jail let out his hand, and he held them before Uno.

"Will you stay by my side?"

Uno only smiled, as she took his hand...

"Of course, Jail-sama."

Jail too, could only smile in return. A warm smile, unbefitting of him, but it was true...

"Let us go then..."

~~~

"To our final journey."

As Doctor's words resonated, I could only bear the pain, as for first time in my life... I lied to him.

I am sorry...Doctor.

I will not let you die.

Even if it means being hated, being disowned, being disregarded, being thrown away by you...

I will not let you die.

That is my wish.

A little OOC, but this Scag is different after all. Not the EBIL Scag who toys with Kha.

Numbers' power up?!

And I cant help but notice what Cinque is getting... his left eye... left eye... left.....

Does it...happen to have... a red bird-shaped sigil...? ABSOLUTELY APPROVED!!!!

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

A siscon? He's got serious intentions. Maube he's in need of a successor

W-What are you guys trying to do with my pure, honest, fair, yet DAMN HAWT girl??!?!?!?

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Anyway, a snippet for my next timeskip! :3

Spoiler for snippet:

“Well, I guess we should thank you, Aurion-san.”

“Hm?”

Her hands clasped behind her, Nanoha stepped in front of me and smiled sweetly, “You saved the Universe, right?”

“Don’t give me too much credit.” I shrugged and looked away, “I just did it before anyone else could. Just some timing involved.”

“But still, it was you who did. Maybe it was only you who could.”
“Without you, we wouldn’t have this universe we are in now.” Fate gestured at the others, “And we wouldn’t have been able to meet each other in the first place.”

I rolled my eyes, “Here we go with your idealism again. You’re still really just a bunch of kids.”

“Aurion-san…”

“Fine. Maybe I did. Maybe I was the only one capable of doing so. But no matter how I look at it, I’m not really happy that I did that.”

“Sempai? What are you-”

“You four. Do you think it’s that simple?” I cast an incredulous gaze at them, “A person, and a seemingly normal one at that, gaining incredibly unique powers due to a strange source, and proceeding to save the universe with an amazing attack.” I snorted in derision, “If only things were that simple.”

“But… That’s what happened, right?”

“Oh yes. That’s what happened, and much more. The four of you, just where the hell do you think I cast that spell?!”

“Ah… On a planet?”

“Exactly. On a planet still inhabited by countless people.”

“!!!!!”

“Hah. So, do you see now? Yes, I destroyed the Perfect Void. But I murdered millions innocent lives; and caused billions of others to suffer and die later due to their planet ecosystem being rendered uninhabitable by my attack."

The four of them now stared at me with aghast and horrified looks.

I ran a hand through my hair, “That’s life for you. It’s easy to call me a hero. But if it was just me, I see myself as a mass murderer.”

“N-no way…”

I paused for a bit and lightened my tone, “Sorry. But that’s the truth. The reason why I seem to have a bit of pull in the TSAB politics is because they’re protecting me. In the records, the end result was said to have been caused by some freak implosion of the Lost Logia. I was an unexpected asset that did the dirty work for them.” I closed my eyes and sighed, “Seeing as even the ships weapons weren’t working, the TSAB is considered clean from sacrificing a large number of people and was able to avoid the trouble of explaining Genocide to the rest of Ordered Space. In my case, I was hardly noticed by anybody else, and the other civilian witnesses got killed in my attack. I was only able to survive because somebody from GDI managed to pull me off before the eventual collapse of time-space. In the end, we were avoided shitloads of paperwork and excessively pointing fingers; but that doesn’t let me feel any better about it…” Walking over to a tree, I leaned my back against it and looked upwards, “I had a policy of minimize the innocent casualties by efficiently eliminating threats… But… In the end, I ended up being the one to murder… to delete the people I have sworn myself to protect.” I let out a solemn chuckle, “Ironic, huh? The protector eventually becomes the death of everyone…”

Suddenly, I felt someone grab my arm and shake it, “But-BUT!” I opened my eyes to see Keroko staring at me with desperation in her eyes, “It was just unintentional, right?! You didn’t intend to kill them, right?!”

“Keroko…” My gaze lost intensity as I laid a comforting hand on her head, “I’m sorry… But I attacked knowing full well the repercussions of such an action. I… deemed it as an inevitable sacrifice to-”

“NO!” Nanoha stomped beside her sister and glared at me, “That can’t be true! You’re just joking like when you said your soul was lost, right?!”

“Nanoha…”

“Please tell me it’s not true!”

Even Fate stepped up, “The Aurion-san I know wouldn’t do such a thing! Y-you would have thought of something else!”

“Fate…” I smirked half-heartedly, “And to think the three of you were thanking me for saving the universe… Why do you insist on my innocence, by the way? I’ve long accepted that fact, but I wouldn’t really want to forget it, either.”

“………”

“Ah well, sorry if I had to bug you with my old-man ramblings… But I guess it also felt better that I was able to tell someone about it…”

“Sempai…”

“Well! Anything you have to say? Have I successfully ruined my image for the four of you?”

“………”

“Let’s just say I’m teaching you… Never judge a book even if you’ve read it once, for there will almost always be some significant meaning behind certain facts shown in it… And on a slightly different note, you shouldn’t try to over-idealize a person that you respect to the extent of denying their mistakes… I am the same person, the Aurion Dauer that you’ve always known. But I just felt compelled to show you one of the several facets of what I am. I can be several things. A murderer is one of them.”

Kha breathed a loud sigh, with his face in a solemn frown, “I understand… But Sempai, at least tell us this, you didn't feel good about the decision, right?”

I closed my eyes, "Well of course not. And I guess that's at least one extremely minor redeeming factor... Bu-URK!"

Opening my eyes due to intense pain, I discovered Nanoha and Fate stomping one of my feet each and Keroko's fist buried into my stomach.

"If that's the case, then there was no need to worry..."
"Regardless of the past, you are still the Aurion-san that we know and respect..."
"Yes. You're still the complete stranger that barged into our lives out of nowhere, but caused us to come out as better people all the same."

Kha laughed at the girls' antics, "In any case, Sempai. You were just testing us, right? By how much we trust you? That’s because, you’re never a person to act like that."

That easily? Giving a pained smile, I replied "A part of it. And like I said, I just felt compelled to tell you four... But-" I looked at the three immobile girls, "this attack is really uncalled for."

The girls all giggled and backed of to allow me to shake my feet and massage my stomach.

“We will never hold your past against you, Oji-chan,” Nanoha said while smiling brightly, “Besides, if it’s one lesson I’ve learned, the best way to judge a person is by seeing how he or she is in the present. The past is only secondary. You thought us that at one point as well. And now, I see you, a person whom the five of us can look up to and go for if we need advice. A wily person that never seems to run out of tricks.”

“You’re still a good person. By telling us this, I think this is also a way of you showing us a part of your soul. This means that you really trust us. And still, you did save the Universe.”

“And just as you trust us, we also trust you with our lives.”

“There you have it, Sempai. Knowing you, you definitely know what we were going to answer this way in the first place.”

“Hehe. Knowing and having the truth shoved into your face are different things, Kha.” a smile curled up my lips, “And watching your dramatic antics is both amusing and gratifying.”

This time, three fists collided with my stomach.

~~~~~~

……… Hehehe… A little out of my character, but I’m just trying to enjoy being human again after all. Though I definitely knew the four of you would answer that way, it still feels good to hear those words from you. Thanks…

Almost every large victory is never a clean win. If you think it's just some sort of superhero story, your wrong...

"But I murdered millions innocent lives; and caused billions of others to suffer and die later due to their planet ecosystem being rendered uninhabitable by my attack."

If this is not h4xx... I DONT KNOW WHAT IS!!



BTW, Fate made my eyes bleed... I humbly request Orange being used instead.

Originally Posted by Liingo

Nobody else thinks that what they just did is pushing the haxx boundry?

Well, I didnt want to be a h4xx regulator, so I didnt say anything, but I do agree with you. There are also other things where Arcas goes well over the top, in my opinion, but that's another story... and I'm not one to tell someone how to create their characters anyway.

Originally Posted by Satty

New OC and antagonist, I think he'll be sorta h4xx'ed

Spoiler for Sion:

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Name: Sion
Nickname: Dark Lord of Pain (unoffcial)
Gender: Male
Age: last seen: about 14 years old, based on guesses. Probably 23-24 at this time
Birthday: *unknown*
Homeworld:*unknown*
Occupation/Rank:N/A
Unit:N/A
Mage Rank: Possibly SS- to SS
Magic Type: Ustio
Magic Circle Color: Sea Green
Favored Element: None, has some elemental spells, though
Height: Around 5'8 when last seen
Weight: About 130-146 pounds
Hair: Long, flowing black hair
Eye Color: Dark Gray
Build: Athletic and surprisingly flexible.
Device: Unknown Dual Device
Status: At large

Background:
He appeared, with Nil, on MC 0064, with the assassination of a Lieutenant General in the Ground Forces. He was apparently Nil's partner, and the louder of the two, although they talked quietly and not that much. Mages who went up against him were found cut up into pieces, and those that were lucky to surive were considered dead anyway, since their wounds would be mortal. He was usually someone who watched for any reinforcements while Nil actually performed the assassinations. He was with Nil at the time of the ambush by the mage strike team on MC 0067. They had the advantage at first, with he and Nil killing some mages in the process. During the battle, Nil instructed Sion to retreat, which he did begrudgingly. Nanoha Takamachi and Fate Haralown pursued him and cornered him into a clearing, but Sion bested them, almost killing them in the process before leaving. He escaped, while his partner, Nil, was captured. Some say the blast that ended the battle came in the direction of Sion. To date, he has never appeared again, but rumors persist of someone looking like him with a number of Gadget Drones at his side.

Personality:
He was someone that thought of the run-of-the-mill mage as only a maggot that shouldn't be bothered, although he had to fight a lot of them. Battling against more powerful mages, he would give them respect, sometimes even giving them a quick death. He taunted people in a quiet way, and was always someone who was sure of his abilites. He respected Nil, calling him a brother. In fact, they were a great team together than alone. He also liked both causing pain and getting some, causing him to be named "The Dark Lord of Pain". He usually liked to mess around with people, killing them slowly.

Device:
His Device's name is unkown, but it is assumed to be a Dual Device. Unlike Nil's, it only has two forms; two large, serrated hunting knives that he holds reversed, possibly the main system, and throwing knives, possibly the secondary system, that he uses with frighting accuracy. He also has clawed boots that form with his Device. Some say that that is the secondary system, but that is unlikely, since no mention of Dual Devices using both the main and secondary systems together at the same time, nor has it been seen. It is also said that Nil's own Device could possibly work in the same way as Sion's, since he did use two blades most of them time when he was seen.

Fighting Style:
His fighing style is unique. He can dodge things that normal reflexes can't, such as a fast-moving shot, and he dodges them like it was a flamenco dance of sorts. He can also attack while dodging, leaving groups with the chance of getting decimated while not even laying a scratch on him. He also likes to ambush people one at a time, to both think out their ranks and to unerve them.

Barrier Jacket:
His Barrier Jacket is that he has no coverings on his upper body, except for some straps, pants that look like they are mechanical, carrying pouches and his Device, and his clawed boots. His whole left arm, to the shoulder, is covered by what looks to be green coat arm and green gloves, held by straps, carrying throwing knives in a set. His right hand is covered by another green glove, but there is a black and white form-fitting thing ending at the elbow. He also carries dog tags; one saying SPII-001, and another that hasn't been identified.

Spells:

Movement:
Mach Move: Mach Move: Contrary to the name, the user does NOT go at supersonic speeds. It is a variation of Sonic Move where the user goes at extremely high speeds, so fast that the normal eye cannot track the user at all; all they see is a blur . The effect also lasts longer, but is even more draining than Sonic Move. Sion rarely uses this; he does so only in times of escape or if there is an opponent that needs to be beaten by speed.

Machsprung (Mach Jump): Sion can jump to great heights using this spell. He can also use this as a pre-emptive strike.

Offensive:
Slicing Tempest: Sion twirls around fast, slicing everyone that gets in his way. Uses 1 cartridge.

Kreuzscheibe (Cross Slice): He moves side-to-side, slashing everyone in his path. This is a short-range spell from observations.

Boomer Knives: Sion throws the knives when still in its supposed main state; they go around in an arc, circling, to cut anybody from mid-range.

Kappeschrägstrich (Cap Slash): Sion jumps up and makes a slash to the neck, even being able to decapitate people.

Lighting Swipes: Using the clawed boots, Sion not only swipes his opponent, he can also shock them. Uses 2 cartridges.

Blitzblatt (Lighting Blade): Sion can also charge the hunting knives with electricity, shocking and slashing his way through. Uses 2 cartridges.

Wind Shadow: Sion uses the wind to slice through opponents. The winds appears as knives like his, following the real knife itself. Uses 1 cartridge.

Speeder Throw: Sion can throw his Device's throwing knives very fast, and in the blink of an eye, can already hit a target.

Schatten Throw (Shadow Throw): He seems to throw one knife, but Sion hides another one in the blind spot of the first one for a surprise.

Slowing Throw: Sion targets limbs and throws the knives there. He can select one knife, and can fully disable the limb where it is stuck temporarily. Uses 2 cartridges.

Throw Detonate: He can throw one of his knives to a target, then detonate it. Uses 2 cartridges.

Distorting Throw: He can blind and deafen people for a short time usig the throwing knives, allwoing him time to escape.

Feuerthrow (Fire Throw): He puts a throwing knife on fire, buring the target as well as piercing it. Uses 1 cartridge.

Scattering Ice: Making ice copies of his throwing knives, Sion throws them to hit an area, often throwing a lot of them to cover for him. Uses 3 cartridges.

Schneiden von Aufregung (Slicing Flurry): He targets one enemy, and slices them fast and furiously, ensuring their death. Uses 3 cartrdges.

Thousand Cuts: Aptly named, Sion throws a multitiude of knives straight at a target, cutting them so fast that together, the knives create mortal wounds. Uses 4 cartrdges.

Defensive:
Variable Shield: Same as Nil's.

Stahlsperre (Steel Barrier): Sion creates a barrer made out of his own throwing knives that is surprsingly hard to breach. Uses 2 cartridges.

Binds:
Schattenbindung (Shadow Bind): Sion has the ability to bind targets with shadows. Sion's is special in that he can use the bind on a target, wrap, and "stick" a bind to his knives.

Notes:
-He has also been seen with the ability to shrug and even recover from wounds that would be mortal to a normal person. Case in point; a mage team stabbed Sion fully, through the body while another one sliced his throat. Sion just chuckled, his wounds not bleeding, and killed all of them. Another point is that he got shot once through the head. He fell down, but got up after that, laughing quietly to himself and killed the guy who shot him. It is unknown how he can manage something like this.

-Due to the rumors about him being seen with Gadget Drones, it is possible that he can be allied with Jail Scagletti, although the link between them is unknown.

Interesting. And his regeneration is

BTW, did you get my PM?


More comments later... this one was one hell of a backlog.

[Aaron008R]

@Keroko: Nice additions to the timeline. BTW, Teana has an idol complex towards Keroko-chan?!?!

Saint X: How the hell do you beat Arisa?!

Originally Posted by Erio

"But I murdered millions innocent lives; and caused billions of others to suffer and die later due to their planet ecosystem being rendered uninhabitable by my attack."

If this is not h4xx... I DONT KNOW WHAT IS!!



BTW, Fate made my eyes bleed... I humbly request Orange being used instead.

What? No comments on the interactions?
In any case, you've forgotten about the Perfect Void. It's rather big. And getting hit by Regression Impulse Breaker only triggered a deletion duality that effectively erased a large chunk of the world's area and atmosphere. Aurion attacked the Perfect Void and PV went *woosh*. Still, you can consider it his fault. And in any case, I won't deny that RIBreaker is already one of most transcendently destructive HAXX in the OC thread.() But it's not like he can do it anymore. (Yes. He most likely CANNOT do it anymore due to it's insane requirements. And even if a situation arises, he'll most likely die.)

I'll use orange in the later version.

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by Saint X

I'm totally bored and hungry... so before i eat and continue, might as well dish this h4xxwork out...

Spoiler for The Key Devices (50% Complete):

Ranged Devices

Spoiler for Kyla: Vulcan, The Resolute Gun:

Device Image:

Spoiler for Core Jacket (Model Optional):

Gunner Form (Basic):


Assaulter Form (Advanced):


Maiden Form (Limit Unlocked):

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Natural Skill: Bullet Time: The capability to slow down the target/s perception of time, which in reality is the Device user overclocking to launch multiple attacks from all angles- under this skill Kyla can do three Chain Rocket attacks in the same time it takes to fire one in normal time.

Spoiler for Rurika: Ballista, The Bow of Salient Cause/Intent:

Device Image:

Spoiler for Core Jacket (Models Optional):

Spoiler for Raine (AlternateS I: Previous Owner- he now carries these jackets with his new device Galvira):

- Archer Form:


- Adventurer Form:

Spoiler for Rurika: (AlternateS II: Current Owner):

- Ranger Form:


- Harrier Form:

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Natural Skill: Never Miss: Even if your dodge is insane, you will be hit- period. Let's hope your shield holds or you can block well.

Melee Devices

Spoiler for Yuuno: Spadona, The Shielding/Goddess'/God Prince's Sword:

Device Image:

Spoiler for Core Jacket (Model Optional):

Berserker Form:

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Natural Skill: Ignore Shield: The capability of ignoring 95% of all known shield types, from phyisical to Type-C APF.

Spoiler for Aranth: Phalanx, The Phantom Lance:

Device Image:

Spoiler for Core Jacket:

AlternateS I: Lancer Form:


AlternateS II: Knight Form:

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Natural Skill: Critical Hit: The Capability to hit critical parts of the enemy or hit with critical damage each time

Spoiler for Arisa: Gladius, The Knight's Blade:

Device Image:


Core Jacket: Unknown

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Natural Skill: Never Hit: No matter how accurate you are, attacks will never hit

Spoiler for Suzuka: Scutum, The Unfazing Shield:

Device Image:


Core Jacket: Unknown

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Natural Skill: Perfect Block: Assessment still ongoing...

Force Devices:

Spoiler for Nonaha: Gospel, The Staff of Beginnings and Ends:

Device Image:


Core Jacket: Unknown

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Natural Skill: Unknown... but it was tied to the word 'change'

Spoiler for Ashton: Praesulus, The Directive Wand:

Device Image:
Summonable Kinetic Spear and Darts attached:

Spoiler for Core Jacket (Models Optional):

Spoiler for Illicida (Alternates I: Previous Owner):

- Magus Form:


- Summoner Form:

Spoiler for Ashton (AlternateS II: Current Owner):

- Intiate Form (Basic):


- Adept Form (Expert):


- Expert Form (Elite):


- Master Form (Master):

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Natural Skill: Law Breaker: One word - HAXX

Spoiler for Unknown: Byblos, The Book of Knowledge:

Device Image:
Combat Form:

Spoiler for Core Jacket (Models Optional):

- Male User:


- Female User:

Spoiler for Skill Set:

Natural Skill: All seeing: Still being assessed...

+--- Current Agent Actions ---+
By Saint X

- Added formal images from a game site
- Added Skill icons to the the currently Known Devices- execpt Praesulus- which i'm still working on...
- Some devices still lack CJ images and skills, as well as why that device was created that way and their collective notes...

Still working on this- do not close

+--- Current Agent Actions ---+

Nice pictures, is this RF Online?

Originally Posted by Erio

So you're really going make use of that idea... I hope Kha accepts, then...this is going to be interesting!

He probably doesn't know the details though

W-What are you guys trying to do with my pure, honest, fair, yet DAMN HAWT girl??!?!?!?

And if there's a possibility for both Daemonic status and Relic's powers to be inherited that'd be simply like a dream for a Daemon Lord

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

@Keroko: Nice additions to the timeline. BTW, Teana has an idol complex towards Keroko-chan?!?!

A hidden one, mostly because of her Tsundere additude. I figured, Teana aims to fly the sky as an Air mage, and Keroko comands one of the most elite Air Squadrons in service, in other words, Keroko is among the pinacle of Air mages. Frankly, I was surprised that Teana did not admire Nanoha like Subaru did.

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Saint X: How the hell do you beat Arisa?!

You use something that affects the target without the need for it being hit. Most of the OCs don't have such spells though, but for example Daemon Lords have plenty

I also think that SaintX mentioned earlier that those abilities can't be active all the time, so you can use some illusions etc. to distract the opponent until it's possible to hit again.

[Saint X]

@An Hero

[Gameshow]You win final ownership of AT! after we eliminate the previous owner.[/Gameshow]

"At least everyone gets to take home something..."

- Yes, I have a life, but when i'm not doing anything, i play...
- it's the only game so far where the tech designs are great- to me...
- BORED
- so sue me

[Gameshow]You're CORRECT!!![/Gameshow]

As long as you can decrease the HP bar... but not in a way that looks like an directed attack, so a rain of lightning bolts or a meteor storm is still dodgeable- but it it's a degrading field, then she can be damaged... poison gas in the battle area is an example

and yes, if it's on, their stamina will only last a few minutes...

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by Saint X

@An Hero

[Gameshow]You win final ownership of AT! after we eliminate the previous owner.[/Gameshow]

"At least everyone gets to take home something..."

- Yes, I have a life, but when i'm not doing anything, i play...
- it's the only game so far where the tech designs are great- to me...
- BORED
- so sue me

[Gameshow]You're CORRECT!!![/Gameshow]

*Hopes that nobody remembers of its powers and calls the h4xx busters*

Now to get to said owner Did we specify him at all?

- - -

I tried RF Online for a couple of days but none of my friends played it. The graphic is surely nice though.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

Between 1 and 2: Kluize steps aside with Kha asking him at least not to interfere if he's not going to help. Then it'd rather be Kha going after the Daemon Lord for the reasons of (a) saving Allison and (b) hopes that the Legion will be weakened without its leader, as it's clearly overwhelming the defenders right now.

Then Step 2 happens.

Step 3: you may as well throw Kor Fuzion in here OCs' efforts make the Daemon bring his true existence inside his avatar granting him his full powers but also making him actually killable (this one can be killed for good, I have another candidate for the place of the 1st Archduke); the ultimate spell for him could be (raw name "Apocalypse from the Sky") the one instantly igniting the planet's atmosphere; Kluize jumps in etc.

It all looks good. And making Kha and Fate fits because both of them are Allison's "parents" after all.

Start it off with a Twin Zamber Strike, then Kor Fuzion, open it up to Lvl 4, Big Sword finish.

Though I'd be a bit more comfortable if Stahlpreios, or R-Gun and R-Sword are there to back them up. The Daemon Lord is one fat customer, and the Yami to Hikari no Tenshi (the product of Fate and Kha's Fuzion) is only human sized.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Good 'ol UBW scenario? Approved!

It's time we closed the chapter on the Kluize h4xx episode... He will be missed... Will he?

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

Yet more stuff to plough through. Not that I mind, of course.

That piece of yours back there by you, Gale, was touching, I might say. Uno, sticking with the Doctor to the end, thourgh thick and thin...eh?

And, to both you and Kha, that little CinquexErio snippet shows the boy really is following in the footsteps of a certain someone.

@Reiji: Discussed before but...winning against 40 AAA+ mages? Dang there. I'm not complaining, I just find it...woah, simply.

And now, a piece:

Spoiler for Past Happenings:

Eleven years ago...

"Doctor! Doctor!"

The purple-haired, white-coated scientist, none other than Jail Scaglietti, doctor, genius, and a certified madman, who was currently craning over a control sonsole studying some work of his, turned his head towards the source of the noise. It was a man with blonde hair and eyes of gray, who, too, was dressed in white. He had a clipboard under one arm, and was running, almost breathlessly, to place himself in front of Jail.

The "Doctor" greeted him with a grin. "Ah, Enzo", he uttered. "How did I predict that you would come scurrying over here without notice..." He chuckled mildly to himself, then carried on. "I assume this is about your project?"

The out of breath figure before him, one Enzo Scudera, nodded apprehensively. "That it is, my friend", he answered, then made a gesture with his free hand. "Follow me, if you will?"

The smirk on the Doctor's face widened visibly at this. "You have something to present to me after all this time?", he asked, his voice having a barely conealed tone of excitement to it. Once again, his colleague nodded, and lifted up his clipboard, pointing at certain scribblings on the sheets it held.

"The first five models have been completed, Jail", he replied. :All is going as scheduled, and I just need..." He was about to continue, but stopped short when he realised something was amiss.

"Ah!" He spun round, facing Jail. "I will need to have your companions present for this. The Numbers, so you call them."

Scaglietti, still bearing his look of satisfaction, inquired in a part-confused yet part-understanding voice: "You want them to bear witness to your work, as well?"

"That I do, and most promptly,: was the reply Jail recieved.

It was then that he called out their names, from Uno to Cinque. Enzo noted that he had oddly missed out the fourth in the line, and wondered why, but quickly cast that thought aside.

It took mere moments before the four were present before the pair of scientists. Enzo allowed a smile to line his features. :Good, good...: he mused. :Let's go on, shall we?"

The group of six walked along a long, deserted hallway to a lone door at the far end, passing tubed on either side that contained the bodies of floating female figures. The Numbers were mostly quite during the small excursion, at least in the case of Uno, Due and Cinque. Enzo overheard Tre muttering to the Doctor, with the latter shrugging the questions off by responding in a somewhat carefree tone.

"Expressing distrust?" Enzo wondered. He pondered for a moment, then scoffed. "As expected, really...but they'll come to know me soon enough."

He halted his pacing before an automatic door, formed of some kind of odd material. As he took a step forward, it slid open, smoothly. He turned to the entourage behind him, and excalimed, proudly:

"Feast your eyes- take in what you see before you!"

The Doctor was overjoyed by what he saw- tanks ahead of him, their light illuminating the dimly lit room. Inside them, there were several male figures in a state of cryogenic sleep suspended by liquid. Some were almost completed, others partly. Nevertheless, the Doctor clapped in celebration.

"Impressive!", he shouted, his voice echoing around the laboratory. "Most impressive."

"But that's not all!", Enzo countered, and motioned to a line of five shadowed figures standing ahead of him.

Jail examined them in awe. Each of them was wearing a tuxedo. He passed the five, walking down the line, viewing them closely, noting that one of them was wearing half a mask and another wearing an eye patch over his right eye. Jail then turned to Enzo.

"Are they active?"

"Why, of course!" The figures Scaglietti was examining proved themselves to be very much alive when they turned their heads towards Enzo upon hearing him. The scientist continued by asking: "Why don't you, A...introduce yourself and the rest of your brothers?"

At once, the leading man in the line responded.

"A. First of the Letters. Acting under the orders of Father Enzo (Enzo grinned at this) and Dr. Jail Scaglietti. Willing to serve."

The introductions for the remaining four passed quickly- all chose to intorduce themselves in a different and speedier manner than that of A.

"B, ready and waiting."

"C, here."

"D, at your service."

"E, present."

Both Enzo and Jail smiled in success. An odd silence passed, only broken when Cinque put forwars a question to Scudera.

"Who...who are they?"

Enzo about-turned, slowly, a look of nothing but sheer triumph plastered on his face, and made a grand gesture towards the line of five.

"These," he replied, cheerily, "...are your brothers."

Feedback be good and all. And this is also a year before Quattro was activated, as shown in the passage.

And so they meet...

I wonder what Cinque's reaction's gonna be. :3

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Part II!

Spoiler for The 2nd Child:

Spoiler for Juliet Scaglietti:

Name: Juliet (( Scaglietti ))
Codename: Paraphilia
Gender: Female
Age: ?? (( Appearance-wise late-teens ))
Height: 153cm
Weight: 40kg
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Dark-green

Magic Potential: Ground Combat A as of StrikerS.

The 2nd child after Zerria, Juliet was born of Due instead. Inheriting the more…chaotic nature of her blood parents, her inner personality is a lot like Jail’s, only mixed with Due’s charm and pretense. However, unlike her father and brother, the Unlimited Desire within her is much more diluted, as she seeks personal enjoyment and nothing more, not being especially ambitious on grand scales like her brother and father, but rather prefers to enjoy what’s in front of her.

“It’s fine to just have fun, isn’t it? After all, all the world’s the limit.”

Although she has various degrees of greed that range on a more human scale like pleasure, money, among other things…. Her biggest pleasure is that of mental manipulation and torture, making people feel most excited and pleasured to their peaks, only to crash down that anticipation. To that extent, she’ll get herself involved in anything so long as it allows her to feel that, be it on a personal scale, or larger ones. It all depends on her mood, ranging from toying with random males, or even watching organizations blow themselves up through various scandals and manipulation of their higher ups.

“Don’t you find it so orgasmic? Just like how people talk about getting higher, higher and higher before their point of climax, don’t you find that feeling that you’ve got something coiled around your hands, but not knowing that, they think they’re in for an utmost pleasure…and just at their peaks…you blast them up to smithereens? Gawd, just thinking makes me wet.”

Although she’s presumably older than how she looks like, having no solid memory of when she was a child, other than learned knowledge, she looks more youthful and looks to be in her mid-teens. Being left out to fend for herself at a young age, she had been living alone for years. Although she does have records of parents among other things, all of it was faked so that she could enroll herself in a learning institute at West Mid-childa, where she had been living most of her years there. Due to that, she is perpetually very independent, and likes to rely on herself to live her life, for most parts with little care for anyone else in the world. In terms of links, her arrogance and self-love is exactly the same as her father’s. However, likewise, she’s the one with the thinnest recollection to her true existence. Regardless, her life is very much rogue-like, as she seeks the worlds for pleasures of her own.

“… Is there anything out there that can keep me interested? A man so perfect I would never get bored from toying with him, or any dangerous activities so dangerous everyday be a fun…”

Presumably to have been affected by her birth condition, aside from possessing a unique breathing structure, she has a degree of magical potential as a A-rank Ground mage, though she’s never officially trained and solely winged it through occasional studies when she felt like it among other things. Even though she’s lazy, she is very smart and talented. A case of underused talent for most parts.

“ Yawn…These stuffs are so easy to wing through it’s not even funny. In fact, it’s boring.”



Her combat tactics uses a mix of stealth and unawareness, utilizing her pheromones to put the enemy off-guard while she either slices up the enemy with her claws or strings, or push the enemy to a position where they’d be killed by her drone. She is however, weak against concentrated attack forces as she had gotten herself involved in some unethical activities occasionally, and resorts to hit-and-run tactics against large numbers.

“…*licks claw*”


Influent Skill : ~Pheromone Exhume~
- Her body’s breathing mechanism works differently as the air she breathes, and the sweat she releases out is mixed with a kind of artificial aphrodiatic essence that causes men and women alike within a 5 meter radius to be aroused, and lacks mental concentration, making them weaker in a way. Direct eye to eye contact too apparently makes people lose their guard.



Inherent Equipment : ~Ripper J~
- Engineered and improved from Due’s own claw-weapons, this version is retrofitted to be comfortably fit for any size, with the weakness that it cannot materialize itself out of nowhere, but rather stored as a bracelet that was given to Juliet by Jail as a child. Attached to each end of the gloves are invisible string-cutters coated with a special metal that has anti-barrier properties like Sette’s boomerangs. Although the strings can be controlled personally, it also has a degree of magnetism effect, stick and rubber effect that can be activated so that it can stick strongly to walls and such to act like a grappler device.



Inherent Drone: ~Type-Proto Omega : July~
- The original prototype for the mass-produced stealth gadget drone that severely injured Nanoha back in the past, this particular drone was designed in mind for stealth assassination missions, and sneak attacks. It was made with no particular specialties, but for Juliet’s 9th birthday, it was upgraded using a special flexible optic-fiber muscles as its limbs to possess a far more natural insect-like movement and speed, alongside being powered by a small magical crystal that improves its stealth, speed, defense and power alongside colored in Juliet’s favorite colors. The special limbs also make it a very effective weapon in urban territories with walls and tall buildings, due to its wall-crawling and wall-jumping prowess that is made possible to the upgrades. However, due to its effective stealth abilities, it is mainly used by Juliet as a secret-resort weapon to kill the enemies that surround her from behind.

Now that the 2nd is done with...TEASERS!

Spoiler for The 3rd Child, Valkyrie?:

Yes, she's inherited her mother's fine assets indeed...

Spoiler for Zerria : The First Case:

“Based on the autopsy and the medical records… none.”

“…None?”

“Yes, there was absolutely no trace of any magic or medication that could’ve caused them to do this. Not to mention, prior to that incident, the investigation team found out that they all went to different institutions for a medical check-up, and all of them were found to be perfectly normal and healthy.”

“There was no motive, no connections, no demands, no external factors whatsoever… the only connection between the criminals was that they’ve all went to the seminar of human studies conducted by that boy, but all evidence, alibi proves that there was no way he could’ve done that.

Unless you want to imply that without magic, medication whatsoever, with only 3 hours, he could’ve made them do this… It’s impossible.”

A sound of continuous fire repeated…

Bang! Bang! Bang!

The sound of ominous fires rang through the base, as the sound emits itself from the cells.

As a group of officers ran their way through the office building into the cell-sector… they saw…one of their own, holding a conventional gun weapon that was confiscated, and kept in storage and shooting randomly to the prisoners in that cell…

The sound of quivering criminals in fear as the ghastly eyes looked for the preys he intends to shoot… only one boy, sitting at the very end of the cells, looked calm as he smiled profusely at the sight before him…

Another shot blasted…and this time, he shot himself in his head, as the blood splattered and hit the surroundings, already covered thick in blood, as the boy gave a almost unheard clap, signaling the end of the spectacle…

And as if completely satisfied, he opened his cell doors as if it was never locked, as he walked his way out slowly…

“Wait! What do you think you’re!”

“I’m already proven innocent, right? What more right is there for you to keep me there?”

Juliet is exactly as I imagine. In fact, exactly as Juliet Nao the Reluctant Retributor.

JulietS FTW!

But having Kusanagi for Tre is...

But then again, most fitting of a Sentokijin. Good thing I had no plans for Kusanagi, and even if I did it would've been the movie.

Still, we'd then have JulietS and ValkyrieS... Better to share the lourve much?

Last but not least, that looked like Gea**!!!

Originally Posted by Erio

FOUR pages of backlog?! I should be happy but... You people... you had to start the interesting discussions just when I go sleep, huh?!?!

Why do you do this to me... *sniffs* *goes cry in a corner with Caro, Lutecia, Cinque, Sein, Wendi and...*

...

W-what?

*runs*

Well you seem to be having fun...

Originally Posted by Erio

Well, I'll go with what An Hero said sometime ago, Kha is really useful, as someone has to be a hero... And since I dont have plans to create a pure-good guy... might as well use him, ne?

Ah-hahaha... The "Hero of Justice" lessons have made an impact...

Originally Posted by Erio

I completely understand how you feel, Lowe.

*wipes drool*

*notices Kha in Schneiderform*

*runs*

REQUIEM BREAKHAAA!!!

Originally Posted by Erio

You make it sound like a race!!

And I dont know why you people think that Kha doesnt want a harem... Kha explicitly said that he built Kha to be a harem game main character!! THIS IS UNFORGIVABLE!! DOWN WITH KHA!!!

As in, a reluctant hero trapped in a harem game... His gentlemanliness to all women is quite a big draw, and remember the words of the Great Skane: "Belka is Physical Enhancement through Magic."

Taken together, it shows that women can't resist a good man who plays hard to get, which is quite true yeah?

(trampled by morality mob)

Originally Posted by Erio

You signed yourself up for some very, very bad stuff... and not just for An Hero's OutcastS...

Kha: Someone's going to have to take out the trash. Might as well be me.

And I did not sign "myself" up for it.

Originally Posted by Erio

So you're really going make use of that idea... I hope Kha accepts, then...this is going to be interesting!

I dunno what the heck is going on, but I trust you guys. APPROVED!

Kha:

Originally Posted by Erio

W-What are you guys trying to do with my pure, honest, fair, yet DAMN HAWT girl??!?!?!?

From what I gather, it reminds me of those alien movies involving impregnation.

Originally Posted by Erio

BTW, did you get my PM?

Where's my PM you promised btw?

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Saint X: How the hell do you beat Arisa?!

In WoW terms, kite her. For example, shoot run shoot run jump-shoot run some more. Belka are at a disadvantage here; Artei's gonna have to use Kaze no Kise, Kaempfer with Nether Blast + Nether Wrath, Kha with Leutendes Licht in Jaegerform. Allison is hopeless against Burning Arisa.

But Sophia, with her ranged specialization, experience, summons and Aspect of the Archer, will pwn Arisa.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

What? No comments on the interactions?
In any case, you've forgotten about the Perfect Void. It's rather big. And getting hit by Regression Impulse Breaker only triggered a deletion duality that effectively erased a large chunk of the world's area and atmosphere. Aurion attacked the Perfect Void and PV went *woosh*. Still, you can consider it his fault. And in any case, I won't deny that RIBreaker is already one of most transcendently destructive HAXX in the OC thread.() But it's not like he can do it anymore. (Yes. He most likely CANNOT do it anymore due to it's insane requirements. And even if a situation arises, he'll most likely die.)

I'll use orange in the later version.

Infinity Cylinder disguised to the non-discerning eye is H4xx, but at least we do get to see some side effect there... At least Aurion did not get turned into some fading shadow of himself... Did he?



@Saint X: WHAT THE HECK DID YOU JUST DO; GIVE A FREE HAND-OUT?!

This insanity must be checked! But Kluize is dead! Curses! I shall have to--

*radio static*

[Dream_Traveller]

@Aaron: Yes, that you can expect. Since what is currently happening in the fic is in the past, the first "interaction", as it is, will mainly be through combat testing. For now, it's outlining the past of how the Letters came to be, and what they did before the Numbers first showed themselves to Nanoha and co. It'll be C vs. Tre, E vs. Cinque, and later on I vs. Nove, G vs. Sette and Tre, and possibly K vs. Uendi. I'm not sure I'll have that many, but the first two are definite. I'm not exactly sure how A will be tested against Uno or B against Due, or D against Quattro, if at all.

I also have pairings in mind, too...

@Gale: Yes, some of the Letters are a tad less...formal, shall I say, when it comes to introducing themselves than A. There's still the reaction of the Numbers to deal with upon recieving the news that they have brothers, too.

@Liingo: I can only hope. The canon events so far seem to be going in my favour. The only real problem is the Cradle business, but I'll find a way to sort that out.

I might post another little snippet later, but I'm a bit of a rush right now. I might find time, though.

EDIT: @Gale again: Aw, c'mon, show some respect for the tux.

[Erio]

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

Yet more stuff to plough through. Not that I mind, of course.

That piece of yours back there by you, Gale, was touching, I might say. Uno, sticking with the Doctor to the end, thourgh thick and thin...eh?

And, to both you and Kha, that little CinquexErio snippet shows the boy really is following in the footsteps of a certain someone.

@Reiji: Discussed before but...winning against 40 AAA+ mages? Dang there. I'm not complaining, I just find it...woah, simply.

And now, a piece:

Spoiler for Past Happenings:

Eleven years ago...

"Doctor! Doctor!"

The purple-haired, white-coated scientist, none other than Jail Scaglietti, doctor, genius, and a certified madman, who was currently craning over a control sonsole studying some work of his, turned his head towards the source of the noise. It was a man with blonde hair and eyes of gray, who, too, was dressed in white. He had a clipboard under one arm, and was running, almost breathlessly, to place himself in front of Jail.

The "Doctor" greeted him with a grin. "Ah, Enzo", he uttered. "How did I predict that you would come scurrying over here without notice..." He chuckled mildly to himself, then carried on. "I assume this is about your project?"

The out of breath figure before him, one Enzo Scudera, nodded apprehensively. "That it is, my friend", he answered, then made a gesture with his free hand. "Follow me, if you will?"

The smirk on the Doctor's face widened visibly at this. "You have something to present to me after all this time?", he asked, his voice having a barely conealed tone of excitement to it. Once again, his colleague nodded, and lifted up his clipboard, pointing at certain scribblings on the sheets it held.

"The first five models have been completed, Jail", he replied. :All is going as scheduled, and I just need..." He was about to continue, but stopped short when he realised something was amiss.

"Ah!" He spun round, facing Jail. "I will need to have your companions present for this. The Numbers, so you call them."

Scaglietti, still bearing his look of satisfaction, inquired in a part-confused yet part-understanding voice: "You want them to bear witness to your work, as well?"

"That I do, and most promptly,: was the reply Jail recieved.

It was then that he called out their names, from Uno to Cinque. Enzo noted that he had oddly missed out the fourth in the line, and wondered why, but quickly cast that thought aside.

It took mere moments before the four were present before the pair of scientists. Enzo allowed a smile to line his features. :Good, good...: he mused. :Let's go on, shall we?"

The group of six walked along a long, deserted hallway to a lone door at the far end, passing tubed on either side that contained the bodies of floating female figures. The Numbers were mostly quite during the small excursion, at least in the case of Uno, Due and Cinque. Enzo overheard Tre muttering to the Doctor, with the latter shrugging the questions off by responding in a somewhat carefree tone.

"Expressing distrust?" Enzo wondered. He pondered for a moment, then scoffed. "As expected, really...but they'll come to know me soon enough."

He halted his pacing before an automatic door, formed of some kind of odd material. As he took a step forward, it slid open, smoothly. He turned to the entourage behind him, and excalimed, proudly:

"Feast your eyes- take in what you see before you!"

The Doctor was overjoyed by what he saw- tanks ahead of him, their light illuminating the dimly lit room. Inside them, there were several male figures in a state of cryogenic sleep suspended by liquid. Some were almost completed, others partly. Nevertheless, the Doctor clapped in celebration.

"Impressive!", he shouted, his voice echoing around the laboratory. "Most impressive."

"But that's not all!", Enzo countered, and motioned to a line of five shadowed figures standing ahead of him.

Jail examined them in awe. Each of them was wearing a tuxedo. He passed the five, walking down the line, viewing them closely, noting that one of them was wearing half a mask and another wearing an eye patch over his right eye. Jail then turned to Enzo.

"Are they active?"

"Why, of course!" The figures Scaglietti was examining proved themselves to be very much alive when they turned their heads towards Enzo upon hearing him. The scientist continued by asking: "Why don't you, A...introduce yourself and the rest of your brothers?"

At once, the leading man in the line responded.

"A. First of the Letters. Acting under the orders of Father Enzo (Enzo grinned at this) and Dr. Jail Scaglietti. Willing to serve."

The introductions for the remaining four passed quickly- all chose to intorduce themselves in a different and speedier manner than that of A.

"B, ready and waiting."

"C, here."

"D, at your service."

"E, present."

Both Enzo and Jail smiled in success. An odd silence passed, only broken when Cinque put forwars a question to Scudera.

"Who...who are they?"

Enzo about-turned, slowly, a look of nothing but sheer triumph plastered on his face, and made a grand gesture towards the line of five.

"These," he replied, cheerily, "...are your brothers."

Feedback be good and all. And this is also a year before Quattro was activated, as shown in the passage.

Looking good, I wonder if you have their first assignments planned.

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Part II!

Spoiler for The 2nd Child:

Spoiler for Juliet Scaglietti:

Name: Juliet (( Scaglietti ))
Codename: Paraphilia
Gender: Female
Age: ?? (( Appearance-wise late-teens ))
Height: 153cm
Weight: 40kg
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Dark-green

Magic Potential: Ground Combat A as of StrikerS.

The 2nd child after Zerria, Juliet was born of Due instead. Inheriting the more…chaotic nature of her blood parents, her inner personality is a lot like Jail’s, only mixed with Due’s charm and pretense. However, unlike her father and brother, the Unlimited Desire within her is much more diluted, as she seeks personal enjoyment and nothing more, not being especially ambitious on grand scales like her brother and father, but rather prefers to enjoy what’s in front of her.

“It’s fine to just have fun, isn’t it? After all, all the world’s the limit.”

Although she has various degrees of greed that range on a more human scale like pleasure, money, among other things…. Her biggest pleasure is that of mental manipulation and torture, making people feel most excited and pleasured to their peaks, only to crash down that anticipation. To that extent, she’ll get herself involved in anything so long as it allows her to feel that, be it on a personal scale, or larger ones. It all depends on her mood, ranging from toying with random males, or even watching organizations blow themselves up through various scandals and manipulation of their higher ups.

“Don’t you find it so orgasmic? Just like how people talk about getting higher, higher and higher before their point of climax, don’t you find that feeling that you’ve got something coiled around your hands, but not knowing that, they think they’re in for an utmost pleasure…and just at their peaks…you blast them up to smithereens? Gawd, just thinking makes me wet.”

Although she’s presumably older than how she looks like, having no solid memory of when she was a child, other than learned knowledge, she looks more youthful and looks to be in her mid-teens. Being left out to fend for herself at a young age, she had been living alone for years. Although she does have records of parents among other things, all of it was faked so that she could enroll herself in a learning institute at West Mid-childa, where she had been living most of her years there. Due to that, she is perpetually very independent, and likes to rely on herself to live her life, for most parts with little care for anyone else in the world. In terms of links, her arrogance and self-love is exactly the same as her father’s. However, likewise, she’s the one with the thinnest recollection to her true existence. Regardless, her life is very much rogue-like, as she seeks the worlds for pleasures of her own.

“… Is there anything out there that can keep me interested? A man so perfect I would never get bored from toying with him, or any dangerous activities so dangerous everyday be a fun…”

Presumably to have been affected by her birth condition, aside from possessing a unique breathing structure, she has a degree of magical potential as a A-rank Ground mage, though she’s never officially trained and solely winged it through occasional studies when she felt like it among other things. Even though she’s lazy, she is very smart and talented. A case of underused talent for most parts.

“ Yawn…These stuffs are so easy to wing through it’s not even funny. In fact, it’s boring.”



Her combat tactics uses a mix of stealth and unawareness, utilizing her pheromones to put the enemy off-guard while she either slices up the enemy with her claws or strings, or push the enemy to a position where they’d be killed by her drone. She is however, weak against concentrated attack forces as she had gotten herself involved in some unethical activities occasionally, and resorts to hit-and-run tactics against large numbers.

“…*licks claw*”


Influent Skill : ~Pheromone Exhume~
- Her body’s breathing mechanism works differently as the air she breathes, and the sweat she releases out is mixed with a kind of artificial aphrodiatic essence that causes men and women alike within a 5 meter radius to be aroused, and lacks mental concentration, making them weaker in a way. Direct eye to eye contact too apparently makes people lose their guard.



Inherent Equipment : ~Ripper J~
- Engineered and improved from Due’s own claw-weapons, this version is retrofitted to be comfortably fit for any size, with the weakness that it cannot materialize itself out of nowhere, but rather stored as a bracelet that was given to Juliet by Jail as a child. Attached to each end of the gloves are invisible string-cutters coated with a special metal that has anti-barrier properties like Sette’s boomerangs. Although the strings can be controlled personally, it also has a degree of magnetism effect, stick and rubber effect that can be activated so that it can stick strongly to walls and such to act like a grappler device.



Inherent Drone: ~Type-Proto Omega : July~
- The original prototype for the mass-produced stealth gadget drone that severely injured Nanoha back in the past, this particular drone was designed in mind for stealth assassination missions, and sneak attacks. It was made with no particular specialties, but for Juliet’s 9th birthday, it was upgraded using a special flexible optic-fiber muscles as its limbs to possess a far more natural insect-like movement and speed, alongside being powered by a small magical crystal that improves its stealth, speed, defense and power alongside colored in Juliet’s favorite colors. The special limbs also make it a very effective weapon in urban territories with walls and tall buildings, due to its wall-crawling and wall-jumping prowess that is made possible to the upgrades. However, due to its effective stealth abilities, it is mainly used by Juliet as a secret-resort weapon to kill the enemies that surround her from behind.

Now that the 2nd is done with...TEASERS!

Spoiler for The 3rd Child, Valkyrie?:

Yes, she's inherited her mother's fine assets indeed...

Spoiler for Zerria : The First Case:

“Based on the autopsy and the medical records… none.”

“…None?”

“Yes, there was absolutely no trace of any magic or medication that could’ve caused them to do this. Not to mention, prior to that incident, the investigation team found out that they all went to different institutions for a medical check-up, and all of them were found to be perfectly normal and healthy.”

“There was no motive, no connections, no demands, no external factors whatsoever… the only connection between the criminals was that they’ve all went to the seminar of human studies conducted by that boy, but all evidence, alibi proves that there was no way he could’ve done that.

Unless you want to imply that without magic, medication whatsoever, with only 3 hours, he could’ve made them do this… It’s impossible.”

A sound of continuous fire repeated…

Bang! Bang! Bang!

The sound of ominous fires rang through the base, as the sound emits itself from the cells.

As a group of officers ran their way through the office building into the cell-sector… they saw…one of their own, holding a conventional gun weapon that was confiscated, and kept in storage and shooting randomly to the prisoners in that cell…

The sound of quivering criminals in fear as the ghastly eyes looked for the preys he intends to shoot… only one boy, sitting at the very end of the cells, looked calm as he smiled profusely at the sight before him…

Another shot blasted…and this time, he shot himself in his head, as the blood splattered and hit the surroundings, already covered thick in blood, as the boy gave a almost unheard clap, signaling the end of the spectacle…

And as if completely satisfied, he opened his cell doors as if it was never locked, as he walked his way out slowly…

“Wait! What do you think you’re!”

“I’m already proven innocent, right? What more right is there for you to keep me there?”

lol at second quote... and then.... “…*licks claw*” double LOL!

BTW, is it OK if the description of her Influent Skill made me go... ?



Perfect implementation, makes a lot of sense and fits all the personalities of Jail, Due, AND Nao herself.

As for Valkyrie's pic: Couldnt have picked a better character model!

And Zerria... The OCverse is going to get scary if Jail dies...

Originally Posted by Keroko

Back from Canada and up to date! Jetlag hardly seems to affect me. Lucky!

But, ugh... Today reminded me why I hate long distance fights. I can deal with the boredom, the turbulence is fun, and on a clear day you have nice view when flying over land... But the smell of airplane 'food' is always enough to send me hurling, or at least make the flight very uncomfortable. Whoever had the bright idea to serve horid smelling meals in an enclosed cabin should be pushed out of one. Preferably on high altitude.

lol at this.

I'll need to watch the episodes first before I can decide if and how Keroko will be involved in this. Gimme some time.

Well, in my point of view, Keroko-chan just has to be the main character in these OC events, and Kha coming close in second place. Filling the rolls of Nanoha and Fate, maybe?

Keroko aditions done in Dark Red. Kinda empty... I still need to fuly watch the last three episodes to fill in a couple of blanks. [Arnold]I'll be back.[/Arnold]

Lets try to coordinate events before adding them to the timeline. (I mean for the last few episodes.)

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

@Keroko: Nice additions to the timeline. BTW, Teana has an idol complex towards Keroko-chan?!?!

Now that you mention it... I just couldnt help but imagine some Keroko x Teana lavulavu scenes...

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[Aaron]NO!! THIS IS NOT HOW I REALLY AM!!!!![/Aaron]

What? No comments on the interactions?
In any case, you've forgotten about the Perfect Void. It's rather big. And getting hit by Regression Impulse Breaker only triggered a deletion duality that effectively erased a large chunk of the world's area and atmosphere. Aurion attacked the Perfect Void and PV went *woosh*. Still, you can consider it his fault. And in any case, I won't deny that RIBreaker is already one of most transcendently destructive HAXX in the OC thread.() But it's not like he can do it anymore. (Yes. He most likely CANNOT do it anymore due to it's insane requirements. And even if a situation arises, he'll most likely die.)

I'll use orange in the later version.

lol Dont worry, I was joking.

And now that I notice, I didnt comment about that... my apologies. I must have been distracted at that point (I'm at work, after all ). However, I forgot to mention anything because I believe the interactions were very natural, and at least I did not think they were OOC. The part that did surprise me was the fact that Aurion killed that many people at the same time of deleting the Lost Logia. I wasnt expecting that, and thus I commented about it.

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

He probably doesn't know the details though

And if there's a possibility for both Daemonic status and Relic's powers to be inherited that'd be simply like a dream for a Daemon Lord

Yeah, he doesnt know yet... I just finished tackling the backlog and now I'll send him a PM about it.

And yeah, I thought you'd think that way back when I mentioned what her Relic was.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Keroko

A hidden one, mostly because of here Tsundere style additude. I figured, Teana aims to fly the sky as an Air mage, and Keroko comands one of the most elite Air Squadrons in service, in other words, Keroko is among the pinacle of Air mages. Frankly, I was surprised that Teana did not admire Nanoha like Subaru did.

Ah... Now I see!

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

You use something that affects the target without the need for it being hit. Most of the OCs don't have such spells though, but for example Daemon Lords have plenty

I also think that SaintX mentioned earlier that those abilities can't be active all the time, so you can use some illusions etc. to distract the opponent until it's possible to hit again.

Originally Posted by Saint X

@An Hero

[Gameshow]You win final ownership of AT! after we eliminate the previous owner.[/Gameshow]

"At least everyone gets to take home something..."

- Yes, I have a life, but when i'm not doing anything, i play...
- it's the only game so far where the tech designs are great- to me...
- BORED
- so sue me

[Gameshow]You're CORRECT!!![/Gameshow]

As long as you can decrease the HP bar... but not in a way that looks like an directed attack, so a rain of lightning bolts or a meteor storm is still dodgeable- but it it's a degrading field, then she can be damaged... poison gas in the battle area is an example

and yes, if it's on, their stamina will only last a few minutes...

Oh... I guess it's fair after all.

Originally Posted by Kha

In WoW terms, kite her. For example, shoot run shoot run jump-shoot run some more. Belka are at a disadvantage here; Artei's gonna have to use Kaze no Kise, Kaempfer with Nether Blast + Nether Wrath, Kha with Leutendes Licht in Jaegerform. Allison is hopeless against Burning Arisa.

But Sophia, with her ranged specialization, experience, summons and Aspect of the Archer, will pwn Arisa.

Ah... Ok...

Infinity Cylinder disguised to the non-discerning eye is H4xx, but at least we do get to see some side effect there... At least Aurion did not get turned into some fading shadow of himself... Did he?

You nailed it. I'll explain later. It's a complicated and grueling personal hell for several years...

Originally Posted by Dream_Traveller

@Aaron: Yes, that you can expect. Since what is currently happening in the fic is in the past, the first "interaction", as it is, will mainly be through combat testing. For now, it's outlining the past of how the Letters came to be, and what they did before the Numbers first showed themselves to Nanoha and co. It'll be C vs. Tre, E vs. Cinque, and later on I vs. Nove, G vs. Sette and Tre, and possibly K vs. Uendi. I'm not sure I'll have that many, but the first two are definite. I'm not exactly sure how A will be tested against Uno or B against Due, or D against Quattro, if at all.

Very well then. The Tre vs. C and Cinque vs. E should be really interesting. And yes, pairings, please.

Originally Posted by Erio

Now that you mention it... I just couldnt help but imagine some Keroko x Teana lavulavu scenes...

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[Aaron]NO!! THIS IS NOT HOW I REALLY AM!!!!![/Aaron]

What the...

lol Dont worry, I was joking.

And now that I notice, I didnt comment about that... my apologies. I must have been distracted at that point (I'm at work, after all ). However, I forgot to mention anything because I believe the interactions were very natural, and at least I did not think they were OOC. The part that did surprise me was the fact that Aurion killed that many people at the same time of deleting the Lost Logia. I wasnt expecting that, and thus I commented about it.

Thanks. Just a touch of realism. The way it sounded before was so ideally efficient but that's clearly not the case...

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by Kha

It all looks good. And making Kha and Fate fits because both of them are Allison's "parents" after all.

Start it off with a Twin Zamber Strike, then Kor Fuzion, open it up to Lvl 4, Big Sword finish.

Though I'd be a bit more comfortable if Stahlpreios, or R-Gun and R-Sword are there to back them up. The Daemon Lord is one fat customer, and the Yami to Hikari no Tenshi (the product of Fate and Kha's Fuzion) is only human sized.

Heh, figures you've guessed that you'll be fighting the one from the 1520 years ago teaser?

"Only human sized"? You shall not forget: "Strength isn't the size of your body. It's the power in your heart! That's ... effort and guts!!!"

It's time we closed the chapter on the Kluize h4xx episode... He will be missed... Will he?

We'll try to make his last moments memorable

This insanity must be checked! But Kluize is dead! Curses! I shall have to--

*radio static*

Master Plan successful - Kluize threat neutralized, proceeding with the operation, nothing will stop us now, MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!