Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[asaqe]

More information on Jason's Powersuit

Spoiler for Our micromissiles will blot out the sky:

"A joint testbed for the Prophet? What in the Controller's name are you thinking"

As the lifter cranes installed several parts into the IS, two box shaped missile launchers were mounted to back of the IS as two extension parts are also mounted on the IS. Empyrean didn't learn about this until he came here for work. Apparently, one of the defense contractors Kisaragi was planning a missile development project: Micromissiles they call it. By compacting the missile's payload to smaller sizes, a missile launcher can fire a devastating salvo at the enemy without acquiring full locks. Their latest project is the Karura missile launcher. The codename of the loadout was Agni and the motive system was called Rudra due to the nature of the motive parts. Kisaragi spearheaded the development of a powerful anti aircraft unit and this was the result. The prophet's frame meshed perfectly with the new weapons system. All that remains was testbedding the new weapons...

Combat Data results:

The new powersuit system upgrade was expensive to maintain to say the least. The computer system said that it will cost us about 75300 Credits and to use the entire weapons system, this thing wasn't cheap to fire I daresay but the weapon system is worth every credit. Against the dreaded "Genobee Set", the weapon proved to completely overwhelm the defense system which is known for overcoming most missile weapons due to the lock cancellation pulses emitted from the unit. Hell I think I have found a new doctrine against the IS, spam the missiles as these are protected by a small barrier system which prevents them from harmlessly destroying it.

Defense wise this unit is a complete glass cannon, I really hate the new FCS, it requires you to acquire a vertical lock. At least look on the bright side, it picks up contacts with the missile quickly. The worse part was that a direct heat caused the bloody powersuit to cook up quickly which wears and tears the barrier system and the external armor. The generator used to power this suit is not heat efficient but what you can say?

Overrall, this thing is a complete glass cannon or should I say glass missileer? It's expensive and won't get mass produced but this give me a helluva chance against what Crest is throwing in the market

[thebadboy761]

Originally Posted by Terminator98

Woot, Throne Zwei and Legend cross over with Unicorn Gundam... Another "God" class IS... This seems more fit to be used by the dragon.

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God class? do you mean it's too powerful? and who is the dragon?

[Terminator98]

Originally Posted by thebadboy761

God class? do you mean it's too powerful? and who is the dragon?

Not too powerful. It's just not the regular IS that you shoudl see on the field. It can be used as a last minute upgrade for the character when fighting the last boss, or the main bad guy can use it, but it shouldn't be used right off the bat.

The thing is, you've got 14 freakin dragoons that can multi task, plus your gundam anti-ship swords which probably hit as about the same as Yukihura-2, and a few other stuff...

If you put this in the hands of a hero and add plot power given to main characters... seems a bit overpowered (like Kira Yamato).


The Dragon is a trope given to the powerful bad guy that serves the evil mastermind in the story. Darth Vader is the Dragon to Emperor Palpatine.

[Saint X]

the mere mention of "God" in the name is already tipping the balance

go figure

[Terminator98]

well, only bad guys are allowed to be gods.
Heroes can become gods only at endgame time. :P


edit: Unless the God in question is bound by rules he has to follow to make the stuff seem not so easy.

[Asuras]

Spoiler for AIS:

Initial design for the basic frame of an AIS without weaponry or gadgets. A prologue of sorts soon to come.

[SaintessHeart]

Alright guys I'll be having my exams next week so I'll be blacking out until next Friday. I'll get my motivation to draw again after it ends.

[Terminator98]

Originally Posted by Asuras

Spoiler for AIS:

Initial design for the basic frame of an AIS without weaponry or gadgets. A prologue of sorts soon to come.

This thing somehow reminds me of Ostadarva and his NEXT from Armored Core:FA... XD

I'm currently overhauling the profiles of all my characters...
And writing up chapter 3 at the same time. I had a little change to my plan, thus why there's such a delay.

After having discovered something interesting...

Spoiler for NSFW:

Now... who'll be doing that at the ISA festival... JUST TO GET THE BOYS' ATTENTION.

[SaintessHeart]

Originally Posted by Terminator98

This thing somehow reminds me of Ostadarva and his NEXT from Armored Core:FA... XD

I'm currently overhauling the profiles of all my characters...
And writing up chapter 3 at the same time. I had a little change to my plan, thus why there's such a delay.

After having discovered something interesting...

Spoiler for NSFW:

Now... who'll be doing that at the ISA festival... JUST TO GET THE BOYS' ATTENTION.

Rachel. After Karon tricks her into a lopsided bet.

[MeisterBabylon]

Originally Posted by Terminator98

After having discovered something interesting...

Spoiler for NSFW:

Now... who'll be doing that at the ISA festival... JUST TO GET THE BOYS' ATTENTION.

I believe a certain pair from 1-2 wouldn't want to be left out.

Spoiler for DOOOuble Henshin!:

Karon held out her phone, then slipped it to her waist. With grating metal chinking together, a belt formed from the device. She flicked the item lopside as she unclipped the control yolk with her other hand. Gou glided the yolk across her phone while her other hand crossed over, like an akido exponent getting ready for her match.

"HENSHIN!"

Not to be left out, Kougami clasped a hand around her lucky coin, and chanted, "Nomobuyo, Yoshi, Hashitawa!"

The IS core reacted and flashed rays of butterfly pink, as it unsealed into a belt device around Tsubomi's waist.

"Dokeda, Gunmicha, De, Ribura!"

The girl flicked her coin into the air, and caught it with a sweep of her other arm.

"HENSHIN!"

Next character, ready to CASH IN.

[BlackSaba]

Just outta curiosity, I cant really site it but I will give credit to whomever posted it on this forum regarding the NNPT, which is closely related to the story. I say if your wanting to make anyone, look into. Its worth it =D

[Saint X]

and your point is?

[kaizerknight01]

Heck if my OC have a henshin sequence i want it to be like this

Spoiler for Henshin Masked otaku black!!!:

[Saint X]

that can be applicable, since IS' closed forms can vary far and wide.

[Terminator98]

But too many Henshin would make it not so... IS...
Unless we want Infinite Rangers to come in...

AND WE'LL HAVE AN INFINIZORD!

But no... I will keep my srsness. Chapter 3 should be done in about 12 hours.

[Saint X]

Kha's [Chastity Engines] are already an idea for such "infinizord" moments- but then they are for the enemy.

Still making twins atm

[Asuras]

Spoiler for Prologue:

ISA Head Nurse Hirano Chiyo
Patient Log 15- “Ringing Cases”

“A long, drawn out, ringing.”
“Constant whining at night.”
“It’s like, when you were young and could hear those old televisions scream.”
“A ringing.”
“It was like shell shock sounds in video games.”

Every single case this week contained the same event; a white noise of sorts that grew in loudness at night. The first incident was attributed to the projectiles whizzing by in recent IS training practices. No later than an hour after the first girl came in and left, I had already received the same accounts from another. Today, I count it up to fifteen patients. With little else to say, I had to quickly deal with them and merely told them to avoid practicing with or around projectiles.
Half of them came back, complaining of the same symptoms. According to them, they nevertheless followed my advice, yet it still persisted. The cases baffled me. Upon examination, I found no internal ear problems, and brain reception to audible stimulus was perfect. I couldn’t come to any conclusions. I studied various dorm rooms, as they were claimed to be the sites of most events pertaining to the cases. I recorded on large levels of frequencies, and turned electronics on and off.

I found nothing. It became apparent that I’d have to put in some monitoring devices during the patients sleep times to see if the same problems came about. Two audio recording devices were placed; watching the door and patient (name withheld). A visual recording device was set up to include the patient and the door. A second smaller device recorded the window and desk.

What I found was… Eerie. After retrieving the devices, I discovered a strange reoccurring pattern of audio sounds throughout the night. The video cameras showed no visible anomalies or appearances on all three wavelengths; infa-red, heat, and visible light. I looked over the audio files and tried to attribute them to similar sounds typically found in electronics or ambience. It matched none. I gave the disk to a colleague of mine, hoping for a more professional and experienced approach. She returned with another strange discovery.

The audio patterns could be attributed to a specific but complex pattern; almost like speech. She tied numbers to each sound frequency, and found them repeating, yet in drastically different ways. She looked into code-breaking schemes but could find nothing more in the sounds. They were indeed equivalent to those described by my patients; a constant, high-pitched ringing. When replayed for them, they all affirmed its similarity. In addition, the sound level seemed to be much louder for them than myself.

They were quite obviously akin to the “mosquito ringtone” so many students have heard. I looked further into these cases for several months, discovering that a much larger demographic than those who had visited me were experiencing the same thing. By that time, I had alerted several other dorm authorities, searching for any student devices that possessed the ringtone. They were removed from three students, but the cases persisted. In no way could it then be said that ringtones were at fault.

I set up more recording experiments, not just in dorms twice each week over the course of four weeks. By the third week, a second anomaly had appeared; window video devices recording an alarmingly fast object just outside the room. Even under high speed replaying capabilities, the video could only capture two frames. What was visible was a small, long object, seemingly undulating across the glass from one side to the other. That was the only time it was seen. The same audio anomalies persisted, even outside dormitories.

Two months later, I was submitted with an entire classroom of students complaining of powerful headaches and strained ears. The teacher claimed they all started thrashing for a few moments in her class in but a split second. Seven were withheld overnight due to damaged eardrums.

To my horrifying conclusion, four of the seven were legally deaf by morning. The cases seem to be getting more and more violent; yet the culprit is not even close to discovered. Various theories have been postulated; a radiation leak, IS engine malfunctions while inoperative, and atmospheric solar rays. I have many doubts any of them are correct.

In but just one school week, another malicious incident occurred. However, this one ended in death. In the very same room I had captured the strange object on the window, the rooms two occupants were found dead and mutilated. Exact condition is withheld. Since then, the ISA has undergone lockdown. Students are not allowed to leave the dormitories, and a much larger staff has been deployed to monitor hallways. Audio anomalies still continue, some complaining of an even louder decibel level in specific areas.

Even with extra hands, two more students have been found dead. One student in particular claims of constant headaches. Her room was examined and the audio level of the ring was found to be near deafening to most other students. She was removed from the premise and admitted to my ward.

I hope the problem is solved soon.

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Shivering temperatures and a skimpy suit; not exactly what one would think of as the best combination. Yet, the nippy freeze didn’t affect the young woman in the IS. Standard shields that accompanied every unit also prevented unsatisfactory temperatures from affecting the pilot. The soldiers beside her trudging in the snow however, were chilled to the bone, even with heavy, warm, Russian military uniforms. The team of eight stalked across the turf of thick sleet, knee-deep in frozen water. A blizzard of biblical proportions battered them the entire way.

What they were doing out there specifically was far from detailed. Command gave a quick order to suit up and head out; apparently another one of those silly crashes popped up. Nothing was ever found, and even if there was something there from some place unknown to us, likely the “special” guys got there first. Times like these up in Siberia were routine. A crashed plane here. Ruined train there. Occasionally these coincidental unconfirmed crashes showed up. Nothing was ever found anyways.

Yet, orders were orders, and they followed like dogs. Silly dogs. Trudging on and on, the storm never seemed to let up, let alone make way. The eight-man team chugged forward like drowning cats amidst a tropical storm. Garbled radio messages transmitted distances on occasion of their distance to the supposed site. Very rarely could the message actually be decoded amidst the wind and low signal.

Just a few minutes ago –or hours, no one could tell- a message claimed but a few tens of meters to go. Despite the short distance, no one had any sight of anything but white ground and a dark sky. In the indiscernible periods of time they continued to walk, a large structure became apparent. Like a white ghost melting into view, this large, leaning tower of Pisa stood forth. The group halted and sent out a message that they had arrived; how they were sure? It certainly wasn’t a rock, or anything manmade for that matter. Like a spiked pyre of smooth white metal, it presented itself as a monstrous object unlike anything ever seen.

If the squad could make one conclusion, it was that they weren’t alone. Sessile as it may seem, they immediately went on edge, raising weapons and checking surroundings. If it was indeed alien, it could very well be hostile as well. No message from command ever came back. The squad stood on an even thinner ledge.

Nothing sounded. Even the winter storm seemed to fall silent in the ironically heated atmosphere. Then, a rush. A shockwave like that of a bomb pounded the squad, keeling over some and winding those who were entrenched in the snow. The IS stood still.

With yells the men and women stood, shaking in terror and fear. The dark surroundings and the silence of the world were fearsome enough, and now the tower seemed to move. Its permanent residence buried in the snow quickly abandoned its calm life and rippled with life-like movement. Splinters of white elongated structures stretched and expanded, its white exoskeleton-like body forming into long spinal forms. Almost like that of a flower blooming, it unraveled and untwisted.

To the squad, it was pure horror; such an alien thing presenting itself so dramatically. With no sense of leadership and without a way to go, one of the paranoid soldiers fired. The silence was broken, and in a split second it seemed like the wind picked up again. Flashes from the barrel lit up the snow, and the creature before them shivered at the projectiles.

They did nothing. The white coverings that protected much of the beast’s true flesh was unharmed and unaffected. In the adrenaline and madness of the situation however, the man could not discern such a fact. He fired madly at the creature, harming its softer skin by simple accident. It turned and rose, sending out moans of pain and anger. Several soldiers had also released their fear, firing blindly at the beast. Though it seemed to be moved by the show of force, it did not budge from its original spot. Mags empty and the beast no longer stirring so madly, the squad calmed itself, staring frighteningly at their target.

It stood still, completely unwound and elongated. The organism was like an octopus of sorts, from what the men could barely discern in the blizzard. Its tentacles covered in white plates not unlike a centipede’s outside armor. The head, what it may be was out of sight, but from an earthen biological standpoint, they proposed its position.

Their horrors were realized when the beast swiped at the squad. In but a single slash, one tentacle batted away the IS and four soldiers. The firing began yet again, and the chaos was brutal. Men left and right rose or never stood again. Blood showed up across the ice. Human parts were dismembered and strewn about. The un-moving creature destroyed the squad, killing all but the woman and her IS.

I had risen to the sky, tired of stomping around in the snow. Its two machine guns had already been unloaded twice, yet the beast was unharmed. Small arms fire was inevitably useless. Thus, the MPIS unleashed its heavier weapons; twin shoulder rockets. The explosion that ensued mutilated the beast, tearing tentacles off and shattering its armor. With only a few rounds to spare by the end, it seemed the creature had been subdued. What appendages were still intact dropped, and it ceased to make sounds of any kind.

The pilot had barely broken a sweat, yet her entire squad was gone. She strained to hold back tears, despite the adrenaline that fueled her veins. The IS floated back to the ground and stood still for a few moments. The trip would be lonely coming back.

But the trip was to be cancelled. The woman had no time to react when several dark green tentacles shot out from the creature’s center, ensnaring the frame with ease. The machine failed to free itself, as one by one, limbs were torn from their very sockets. With the design of the machine, the pilot was saved from being damaged herself, even as it was torn to pieces. The shields failed, and a wave of sheer cold blasted her skin. She went into a short lived shock before several tentacles picked her up.

With a bloody second, she was dead, torn in two and thrown to the snow. The creature roared, shaking the ground underneath as the IS parts were seemingly ingested. Lights penetrated the snow, and the storm passed in the blink of an eye. It was as if god himself silenced the fury of nature and gave blinding light to the world below.

Quick write-up rough draft for the prologue. Bleh.

On another note; I need to know from you people. (If any) Which OC's would you like to be seen in my fanfiction? Sadly, my inefficiency can't accept every one, so only one per person, unless you have to have several. If you have no inclination in the first place, don't fret, my feelings aren't hurt in any way.

Just realize not all of them may survive.

[JamesEdwards]

Originally Posted by Asuras

Spoiler for Prologue:

-snip-

Quick write-up rough draft for the prologue. Bleh.

On another note; I need to know from you people. (If any) Which OC's would you like to be seen in my fanfiction? Sadly, my inefficiency can't accept every one, so only one per person, unless you have to have several. If you have no inclination in the first place, don't fret, my feelings aren't hurt in any way.

Just realize not all of them may survive.

Well, glad to see another face trying to do more than just talk the talk and actually walk the walk, but... I can tell you can also use a beta to iron out your rough edges. Since I'm already doing it for Terminator, I might as well do it for you too.

Googledocs is a great alternative by the way, if character limit is affecting your spacing / formatting.

And, oh what the hell, allow me to volunteer Ray Rheinhart. Your fic needs a Kamina!MANLY!GenreSavvyBro! spot of sunshine anyways. As for getting around the IS gender lockout thing, just go with the usual "mysterious" reason deal, since I don't think you wanna spend time explaining why the guy's IS is special.

He himself is already special enough, so go figure he can use an IS, right?

[Asuras]

A beta is always useful. Not a particularly good author = Needs things like that.
*Looks at title under user title* >.>

Googledocs? That means I have to create an account!
...
...
Too lazy right now. I'll do it later.

I'll try my best to enact Ray properly.

[BlackSaba]

Also just some food for thought, the NNPT (Nuclear Non-Proliferation Treaty) is basically a pact saying that the countries under it will not pass on or misuse the nuclear weapons they have attaind either through trade with allied countries, or created with their own resources. The countries allied are USA, Russia, UK, France, China, also the five permanent members of the UNSC (United Nation Security Council). In the series we have seen at least 4 or 5 if not all the countries allied with this treaty. The only ones I dont think (Or can't seem to find) are the Arabians, and the Spanish.

SO, assuming this tell-tale is true or not (Which it does seem, but I cant be the one to tell you its true) There are at least 2 more character to be added to the overall series. So what Im saying is, all those who are looking for a fresh and original creation, try an Arabic or Spanish. Also, Ireland, Finland, Bosnia, Brazil, India, and Portugal are up for grabs. =D Just some insight on the real world relation with the series for all those who want to stay as realistic as possible.

Nuclear Non-Proliferation Treaty
and
UNSC(United Nations Security Council)